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The story, as well as an assortment of supplementary material can be found at the Hyuuga, The Eldest Son [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]]

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The story, as well as an assortment of supplementary material can also be found at the Hyuuga, The Eldest Son [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]]
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** Driven by [[Itachi's statement that only the strongest kunoichi could garner Sasuke's interest]] Sakura becomes strong enough [[spoiler:to nearly defeat Sasuke in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]

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** Driven by [[Itachi's [[spoiler:Itachi's statement that only the strongest kunoichi could garner Sasuke's interest]] Sakura becomes strong enough [[spoiler:to nearly defeat Sasuke in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
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** Sakura is strong enough [[spoiler:to nearly defeat Sasuke in the preliminaries held after the second round of the Chunin Exams.]]

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** Driven by [[Itachi's statement that only the strongest kunoichi could garner Sasuke's interest]] Sakura is becomes strong enough [[spoiler:to nearly defeat Sasuke in the preliminaries held after the second round Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
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* LoveAtFirstSight: Naruto becomes infatuated with Hinata after seeing her once during a festival when he's six.
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* FestivalEpisode: The prologue of the story takes place during a festival day and is titled ''Matsuri'' aka festival.
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* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it has a very different incarnation) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]

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* {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it has a very only exists different incarnation) incarnation from it's canon counterpart) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]
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* OhCrap: This is Hiruzen's reaction after [[spoiler:giving Naruto a chakra control locked scroll full of sealing techniques and telling him he's only allowed one prank per new seal he learns.]]
** [[spoiler:Hinata's]] reaction to being told [[spoiler:she's]] standing in the middle of Naruto's first blood seal [[spoiler:during their fight in the Chunin Exams Finals.]]
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* ChekhovsSkill: In Chapter 3, while Naruto is attempting to learn a chakra control exercise that involves sticking a small stone to one's hand by applying chakra to it, he overloads the technique and launches the pebble from his hand at high velocity. Come chapter 28, Naruto uses this trick during his fight with [[spoiler:Neji]] to gain the time needed to summon some Shadow Clones.
** Several of Naruto's seals, like the Randomizer Seal and a Storage Seal that safely stores living beings, make their appearance earlier in the story or during the (Pranking) Training Session Interludes before they're seen in a combat situation.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: When he first learns about the Uzumaki Clan, Naruto assumes that his ''father'' was the Uzumaki in the relationship and that he got his blond hair from his ''mother''.


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* TitleDrop: If there's a scene from Naruto's point of view, the words "Princess of Konoha" are very likely to appear at some point during it.
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Set in an [[AlternateUniverse Alternate Universe]] where the Hyuuga Clan is exponentially more influential in Konoha than it is in canon, the story is kicked off when a six year old Naruto spots Hinata, whom he immediately dubs the "Princess of Konoha" exiting the Hyuuga Clan compound with a large portion of the clan during a festival and decides that he's going to be her ''best friend''. Four years later he meets and has a conversation with a ten year old Hinata after being sent to the Hokage's office because of one of his pranks. What at first appears to be an innocuous conversation becomes the ignition point for Naruto's ambition to master his dead clan's fūinjutsu techniques.

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Set in an [[AlternateUniverse Alternate Universe]] where the Hyuuga Clan is exponentially more influential in Konoha than it is in canon, the story is kicked off when a six year old Naruto spots Hinata, whom he almost immediately dubs the "Princess of Konoha" Konoha", exiting the Hyuuga Clan compound with a large portion of the clan during a festival and decides that he's going to be her ''best friend''. Four years later he meets and has a conversation with a ten year old Hinata after being sent to the Hokage's office because of one of his pranks. What at first appears to be an innocuous conversation becomes the ignition point for Naruto's ambition to master his dead clan's fūinjutsu techniques.
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Set in an [[AlternateUniverse Alternate Universe]] where the Hyuuga Clan is exponentially more influential in Konoha than it is in canon, the story is kicked off when a six year old Naruto meets and has a conversation with a six year old Hinata after being sent to the Hokage's office because of one of his pranks. What at first appears to be an innocuous conversation becomes the ignition point for Naruto's ambition to both master his dead clan's fūinjutsu techniques as well as be acknowledged by all of Konoha as the Princess of Konoha's aka Hinata's ''best friend''.

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Set in an [[AlternateUniverse Alternate Universe]] where the Hyuuga Clan is exponentially more influential in Konoha than it is in canon, the story is kicked off when a six year old Naruto spots Hinata, whom he immediately dubs the "Princess of Konoha" exiting the Hyuuga Clan compound with a large portion of the clan during a festival and decides that he's going to be her ''best friend''. Four years later he meets and has a conversation with a six ten year old Hinata after being sent to the Hokage's office because of one of his pranks. What at first appears to be an innocuous conversation becomes the ignition point for Naruto's ambition to both master his dead clan's fūinjutsu techniques as well as be acknowledged by all of Konoha as the Princess of Konoha's aka Hinata's ''best friend''.
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*** Naruto's stealth, infiltration and pursuit evasion skills are good enough that he's successfully pulled a prank on the ''Hyuuga operated'' Military Police Towers. ''Twice''.

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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. [[spoiler: This changes after Kakashi makes a point of demonstrating ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling Naruto's combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission.]]

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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. [[spoiler: This changes after Kakashi makes a point of demonstrating ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling Naruto's combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission.]]Mission. After that, Naruto begins to rapidly improve to the point that he defeats [[spoiler:Neji during the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams.]]
** Due to the Branch House of the Hyuuga Clan not existing in it's canon incarnation in this fic, Neji is equal to or possibly ''stronger'' than his canon counterpart's Chunin Exam Finals strength by the time the Second Round Preliminaries occur.
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** [[spoiler:Haku]] survives the [[spoiler: Wave Mission]] due to Naruto sealing him away in a scroll before he could [[SenselessSacrifice sacrifice his life]] for [[spoiler:Zabuza.]]
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* IgnoredEpiphany: [[spoiler: After being defeated by Naruto,]] Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that Naruto's first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]
* Jerkass: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it has a very different incarnation) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]

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* IgnoredEpiphany: [[spoiler: After being defeated by Naruto,]] Naruto in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams,]] Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that Naruto's first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]
* Jerkass: {{Jerkass}}: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it has a very different incarnation) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]
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* IgnoredEpiphany: [[spoiler: After being defeated by Naruto,]] Neji quickly regresses back into his fate complex upon learning that Naruto's first opponent in the Chunin Exam Finals will be [[spoiler:Hinata]]
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* Jerkass: Even though the Caged Bird Seal doesn't appear to be a thing in this fic's universe (or at the very least it has a very different incarnation) and his father is still alive, Neji still manages to be a fate obsessed asshat. [[spoiler:He attempts to ''kill'' Naruto during their fight in the Second Round Preliminaries of the Chunin Exams, because he views the familiarity with which Naruto treats Hinata as an direct offense against the Hyuuga Clan.]]

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* AntiClimax: The end of Naruto's fight with [[spoiler:Hinata]] during the final round of the Chunin Exams counts as such. [[spoiler: Both fighters are rendered incapable of fighting, Naruto because he's had the crap beaten out of him, and Hinata because she's been rendered completely unresponsive and unmoving by a combination of Naruto's seals. Naruto is declared the winner because while Hinata is technically still in near perfect fighting condition, Naruto is the only one who can still move, regardless of his inability to do more than wiggle a finger.]]



** The Uchiha Massacre never takes place in this universe.

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** The Uchiha Massacre never takes place in this universe.universe.
* UnderdogsNeverLose: [[spoiler:Much like his canon counterpart, Naruto]] seems to make a habit of playing this straight.
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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. [[spoiler: This changes after Kakashi makes a point of showing him ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling his combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission.]]

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** [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. [[spoiler: This changes after Kakashi makes a point of showing him demonstrating ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling his Naruto's combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission.]]
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** [[ZigZaggingTrope Zig-Zagged]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. [[spoiler: This changes after Kakashi makes a point of showing him ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling his combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission.]]

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** [[ZigZaggingTrope Zig-Zagged]] [[SubvertedTrope Subverted]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. [[spoiler: This changes after Kakashi makes a point of showing him ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling his combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission.]]
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** [[ZigZaggingTrope Zig-Zagged]] by Naruto, in that his incredible skill with fuinjutsu is undermined by his complete disinterest in improving his utterly ''atrocious'' taijutsu. [[spoiler: This changes after Kakashi makes a point of showing him ''exactly'' how much that attitude is crippling his combat effectiveness during the Wave Mission.]]
** Sakura is strong enough [[spoiler:to nearly defeat Sasuke in the preliminaries held after the second round of the Chunin Exams.]]
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* Adaptational Badass: Several notable characters are noticeably more skilled than their canon counterparts, most notable of which is Hinata, who is far and away considered the strongest of the Konoha 12. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that this serves as one of the major plot points in the fanfic.

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* Adaptational Badass: AdaptationalBadass: Several notable characters are noticeably more skilled than their canon counterparts, most notable of which is Hinata, who is far and away considered the strongest of the Konoha 12. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that this serves as one of the major plot points in the fanfic.
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* Adaptational Badass: Several notable characters are noticeably more skilled than their canon counterparts, most notable of which is Hinata, who is far and away considered the strongest of the Konoha 12. [[JustifiedTrope Justified]] in that this serves as one of the major plot points in the fanfic.

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10394295/1/Princess-of-Konoha Princess of Konoha]]'' is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' AU fanfic cocreated by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205969/BloodRed13 BloodRed13]](story posted here) and his twin [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1147701/Kage-James Kage James]].

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10394295/1/Princess-of-Konoha Princess of Konoha]]'' is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' AU fanfic cocreated posted by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205969/BloodRed13 BloodRed13]](story posted here) BloodRed13]] and cowritten by his twin brother [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1147701/Kage-James Kage James]].



* AlternateUniverse: There are several noticeable differences between canon and this fanfic.
** The Hyuuga Clan is far more prominent and powerful than they were in canon, being described as Konoha's most powerful clan even with the Uchiha Clan still alive.
*** They also run the Military Police instead of the Uchiha Clan
** The Uchiha Massacre never takes place in the Hyuuga, the Eldest Son universe.

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* AlternateUniverse: There are several noticeable differences between canon and this fanfic.
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fanfic, the most notable being that the Hyuuga Clan is far more prominent and powerful than they were in canon, being described as Konoha's most powerful clan even with the Uchiha Clan still alive.
*** ** They also run the Military Police instead of the Uchiha Clan
** The Uchiha Massacre never takes place in the Hyuuga, the Eldest Son this universe.
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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 13, 2015 it sits at 39 Chapters and approximately 354,000 words.

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The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 13, 9th, 2015 it sits at 39 Chapters and approximately 354,000 words.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Hizashi never dies because the Kumo kidnappers never make it past the Hyuuga Compound's perimeter.

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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Hizashi never dies because the Kumo kidnappers never make it past into the Hyuuga Compound's perimeter.Compound before being detained.
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*AlternateUniverse: There are several noticeable differences between canon and this fanfic.
** The Hyuuga Clan is far more prominent and powerful than they were in canon, being described as Konoha's most powerful clan even with the Uchiha Clan still alive.
*** They also run the Military Police instead of the Uchiha Clan
** The Uchiha Massacre never takes place in the Hyuuga, the Eldest Son universe.
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*SparedByTheAdaptation: Hizashi never dies because the Kumo kidnappers never make it past the Hyuuga Compound's perimeter.
** The Uchiha Massacre never takes place in this universe.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10394295/1/Princess-of-Konoha Princess of Konoha]]'' is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' AU fanfic cocreated by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205969/BloodRed13 BloodRed13]] and his twin [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1147701/Kage-James Kage James]].

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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10394295/1/Princess-of-Konoha Princess of Konoha]]'' is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' AU fanfic cocreated by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205969/BloodRed13 BloodRed13]] BloodRed13]](story posted here) and his twin [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1147701/Kage-James Kage James]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10394295/1/Princess-of-Konoha Princess of Konoha]]'' is a ''Manga/{{Naruto}}'' AU fanfic cocreated by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1205969/BloodRed13 BloodRed13]] and his twin [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/1147701/Kage-James Kage James]].

The summary on [=FanFiction=].net is as follows, "AU fanfic: She was the most striking beauty he'd ever seen. Strong, cold, and standoffish. But she'd acknowledged his existence. And he wanted her to do it again…"

Set in an [[AlternateUniverse Alternate Universe]] where the Hyuuga Clan is exponentially more influential in Konoha than it is in canon, the story is kicked off when a six year old Naruto meets and has a conversation with a six year old Hinata after being sent to the Hokage's office because of one of his pranks. What at first appears to be an innocuous conversation becomes the ignition point for Naruto's ambition to both master his dead clan's fūinjutsu techniques as well as be acknowledged by all of Konoha as the Princess of Konoha's aka Hinata's ''best friend''.

The story is the first of a planned trilogy under the name of Hyuuga, The Eldest Son. It is updated regularly on Mondays and as of February 13, 2015 it sits at 39 Chapters and approximately 354,000 words.

The story, as well as an assortment of supplementary material can be found at the Hyuuga, The Eldest Son [[http://hyuugatheeldestson.tumblr.com/ Tumblr]]
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