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* {{Revision}}: The chapters on [=FF.net=] have been revised, which is most noticable with the first few chapters which had many parts rewritten to make the narrative flow better without changing too much of the content. One notable change is Azure's dialogue in chapter 3, where her failed attempt to use Bubble was changed to Bubblebeam in the revised version, due to the moveset changes of Black 2 and White 2.
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* {{Revision}}: The earlier chapters went through some revisions when they were posted on [=FF.net=] have been revised, which is most noticable FF.net, and the Serebii versions of those chapter were later updated with the first few chapters which had many parts rewritten to make the narrative flow better without changing too much of the content. revised versions as well. One notable change between the original and revised versions is that Chapter 3 had Azure's dialogue in chapter 3, where her failed attempt to use Bubble was attack changed from Bubble to Bubblebeam in the revised version, Bubble Beam due to the moveset changes of introduced in Pokémon Black 2 and White 2.
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* {{Seers}}: Stella the town oracle and her daughter Bow.
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* {{Seers}}: Stella Stella, being a Gothitelle and the town oracle and her town's current oracle, can see into the future. Her daughter Bow.Bow also has this ability, despite still being a Gothorita.
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* [[BigBrotherWorship Big Sister Worship]]: Sera seems to admire her oldest sister Amethyst the most out of her five older siblings.
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* CoolBigSis: Sera considers her oldest sister Amethyst to be this. Her other older sister Sirena also decides to become one of these in Chapter 17.
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** A lot suggests that the main villain is no ordinary Sigilyph, with his unusual powers and the way he talks about Cassandra (one of the previous town oracles) as if he had known her. [[spoiler: Turns out the Sigilyph is possessed by an evil spirit named Erebos.]]
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** In Chapter 32, Hercules saves Blitz and Bow from [[spoiler: [[BigBad Erebos]].]]
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* ActionPrologue: The first scene of the story is the main villain chasing a Pokémon in a gray cloak during a thunderstorm.
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* ThrowItIn: Kala the Abra was originally just going to be the character who teleported the other characters where they needed to go, but was chosen to be the one who would [[spoiler: teach Elina to communicate through telepathy]] when the author realized just how perfect Kala would be for the part.
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** A few locations that are mentioned in early parts of the story have been visited by the main characters later.
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* TwoGirlsAndAGuy / TwoGuysAndAGirl: Most of the recurring rescue teams seem to consist of three members, and usually consist of either two male members and one female, or two female and one male. Mirage's team fits the former trope, and Sting's team fits the latter. Sera's rescue team also fit the latter, until Azure joined their team in Chapter 20.
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* AscendedExtra:
** Kala the Abra, who at first is only a character who works at the rescue team HQ and teleports rescue teams to far away mystery dungeons, but she got a bigger role [[spoiler: when she also became Elina's mentor in how to use telepathy.]]
** Hercules the Heracross is an example of a character who had this happen to him ''before'' his debut chapter was written, as the writer originally only intended for him to be a minor character who rarely appeared at all, but at some point after she'd written the first few chapters, she came up with the idea of making him Blitz's mentor and [[TheConfidant the one Blitz trusted with his secret]], and thus Hercules became a major supporting character.
** Kala the Abra, who at first is only a character who works at the rescue team HQ and teleports rescue teams to far away mystery dungeons, but she got a bigger role [[spoiler: when she also became Elina's mentor in how to use telepathy.]]
** Hercules the Heracross is an example of a character who had this happen to him ''before'' his debut chapter was written, as the writer originally only intended for him to be a minor character who rarely appeared at all, but at some point after she'd written the first few chapters, she came up with the idea of making him Blitz's mentor and [[TheConfidant the one Blitz trusted with his secret]], and thus Hercules became a major supporting character.
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* NoodleIncident: [[spoiler: Whatever it was that went wrong during the Luxray pride's hunting trip that led to Blitz's father leaving the pride.]]
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* DisappearedDad: [[spoiler: Blitz's father abandoned the Luxray pride has was the leader of after something went horribly wrong during a hunting trip which he blamed himself for, leaving his family behind as well in the process.]]
** Azure and Bow's fathers are also no where in sight, although the absense of the former is explained as him travelling a lot due to his job.
** Azure and Bow's fathers are also no where in sight, although the absense of the former is explained as him travelling a lot due to his job.
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** Megara uses her Flame Burst attack to signal to Sera and Sting's rescue teams that Mirage's team had found the entrance to the Sand-Veiled Sanctuary in Chapter 14. [[spoiler: Chapter 25 has a CallBack to this scene when Blitz suggests that Frederick do something similar with his Dragon Rage attack.]]
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* MundaneUtility: Blitz tends to use his Ice and Fire Fang attack for purposes other than battling.
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** Blitz doesn't like using his Fire and Ice Fang attacks, but doesn't tell his teammates why. [[spoiler: Chapter 22 reveals Blitz's backstory, and shows exactly why Blitz doesn't like using those attacks in battle. The same chapter also fully explains a few other things that were alluded to in conversations between Blitz and Hercules.]]
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** Blitz doesn't like using his Fire and Ice Fang attacks, attacks in battle, but doesn't tell his teammates why. [[spoiler: Chapter 22 reveals Blitz's backstory, and shows exactly why Blitz doesn't like using those attacks in battle. The same chapter also fully explains a few other things that were alluded to in conversations between Blitz and Hercules.]]
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** Blitz doesn't like using his Fire and Ice Fang attacks, but doesn't tell his teammates why. [[spoiler: Chapter 22 reveals Blitz's backstory, and shows exactly why Blitz doesn't like using those attacks in battle. The same chapter also fully explains a few other things that were alluded to in conversations between Blitz and Hercules.]]
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''Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Reflecting Balance'' is a PokemonMysteryDungeon fanfic by {{@/DarkerShining}}.
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''Pokémon Mystery Dungeon: Reflecting Balance'' is a PokemonMysteryDungeon VideoGame/PokemonMysteryDungeon fanfic by {{@/DarkerShining}}.
@/DarkerShining.
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* OriginsEpisode: Chapter 22 reveals Blitz's backstory.
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* TemptingFate: When nearly at the end of the mystery dungeon in the Sand-Veiled Sanctuary, Sera wonders what could possibly go wrong when they had gotten this far. Only a few moments later, [[spoiler: she and Chiaki end up walking right into a Monster House.]]
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* TemptingFate: When nearly at the end of the mystery dungeon in the Sand-Veiled Sanctuary, Sera wonders out loud what could possibly go wrong when they had gotten this far. Only a few moments later, [[spoiler: she and Chiaki end up walking right into a Monster House.]]
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* ArmorPiercingQuestion: [[spoiler: It's unclear if Hercules intended to do this while trying to get Sera to stop asking him about Blitz in Chapter 21, but it certainly makes her stop and think.]]
-->[[spoiler: '''Hercules:''' "Besides, you haven't really shown much interest in Blitz's background or asked him about any of this before, have you?"]]
-->[[spoiler: '''Hercules:''' "Besides, you haven't really shown much interest in Blitz's background or asked him about any of this before, have you?"]]
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* ChekhovsGunman: Blitz's younger sister Lita is mentioned twice in conversations between Blitz and Hercules, before she eventually appears in Chapter 21.
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* PolarOppositeTwins: Princess Blithe and Prince Somber, the Frillish twins that appear in Chapter 19 and 20. Blithe is optimistic and full of energy, while Somber is pessimistic and doesn't seem to get particularly excited about anything.
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* {{Revision}}: The chapters on [=FF.net=] have been revised, which is most noticable with the first few chapters which had many parts rewritten to make the narrative flow better without changing too much of the content. One notable change is Azure's dialogue in chapter 3, where her failed attempt to use Bubble was changed to Bubblebeam in the revised version, due to the moveset changes of Black 2 and White 2.
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* BrickJoke: In chapter 12, the main characters try asking some Spinarak for directions upon arriving in Nectar Woods, but the Spinarak are too busy working on their spider web, and mention that they are competing with a similar group of Joltik over who can make the best looking spider webs. Later in the chapter, the Butterfree outlaw is trying to get away, only to get stuck in a spider web made by a group of Joltik.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Mirage and Sting's rescue teams come to the rescue when the main characters end up wandering into a Monster House in Chapter 14.
** The main characters end up in a Monster House again in Chapter 19, and this time they are saved by [[spoiler: Azure, who recently evolved into a Marill.]]
** The main characters end up in a Monster House again in Chapter 19, and this time they are saved by [[spoiler: Azure, who recently evolved into a Marill.]]
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* RuleOfThree: There are three elemental monkey tribes in Harmony Forest, and when Sera, Blitz and Chiaki explore the forest in chapter 9 and 10 they run into groups of three Pansage, three Pansear and three Panpour at three different points.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are a lot of small details alluding to future events or other things that will become important later on.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: There are a lot of small details alluding to future events or other things that will become important later on.
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* CoolBigSis: Sera considers her oldest sister Amethyst to be this.
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* CoolBigSis: Sera considers her oldest sister Amethyst to be this. Her other older sister Sirena also decides to become one of these in Chapter 17.
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* OhCrap: Blitz's reaction in chapter 14 when he realizes that Sera and Chiaki [[spoiler: have just walked right into a Monster House.]]
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* OhCrap: Blitz's reaction in chapter Chapter 14 when he realizes that Sera and Chiaki [[spoiler: have just walked right into a Monster House.]]
