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** Same goes to Mondo, he attack Chihiro in blind rage after the later unknowningly pushes his BerserkButton.
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** Same goes to Mondo, he attack attacks Chihiro in blind rage after the later unknowningly unknowingly pushes his BerserkButton.
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** Subverted with Byakuya, despite his InsufferableGenius [[JerkassHasAPoint behaviour]] being the same as in the game, the lack of deaths makes him appear more insensitive than he really is.
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** Subverted with Byakuya, despite his InsufferableGenius [[JerkassHasAPoint behaviour]] behavior]] being the same as in the game, the lack of deaths makes him appear more insensitive than he really is.
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** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]] His secret is that [[spoiler:he's been financially helping outcasted members of his family]].
** The story downplay some of Celeste’s NoSympathy moments, having most of them aimed at the culprits of their respective trials.
* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoid using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect of Chihiro]] since they didn't know at the time how Chihiro identified herself.
** The story downplay some of Celeste’s NoSympathy moments, having most of them aimed at the culprits of their respective trials.
* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoid using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect of Chihiro]] since they didn't know at the time how Chihiro identified herself.
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** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]] His secret is that [[spoiler:he's been financially helping outcasted outcaste members of his family]].
** The storydownplay downplays some of Celeste’s NoSympathy moments, having most of them aimed at the culprits of their respective trials.
trials. She’s still a massive bitch however.
* AllLovingHero: Even more so than in the game. Makoto isn’t the HopeBringer for nothing.
* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyoneavoid avoids using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect of Chihiro]] since they didn't know at the time how Chihiro identified herself.herself.
* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this.
* BerserkButton: Celeste [[TranquilFury boils internally]] after her real name got reveal in front of everyone. Thankfully for her, nobody noticed it.
** The story
* AllLovingHero: Even more so than in the game. Makoto isn’t the HopeBringer for nothing.
* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone
* BecomingTheMask: [[InvertedTrope Inverted]]. Mukuro starts to act less and less like Junko after she’s saved from Monokuma’s death trap. The rest of the students take notice of this.
* BerserkButton: Celeste [[TranquilFury boils internally]] after her real name got reveal in front of everyone. Thankfully for her, nobody noticed it.
* CaptainOblivious: Ishimaru in chapter 3 is completely unaware that his attempts at controlling the group is only [[NiceJobBreakingItHero bringing more tension]] to the students. He’s also unaware that his classmates are lying to him just to get some breathers. You can’t really blame him, considering the [[SanitySlippage delusional state]] that he is in.
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* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer, lastly he purposely left some mistakes in the crime scene in order for Makoto to pick it up and test his intelligence. He successfully expose Genocide Jill to the group]].
* FixFic: A fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patches up a few minor plotholes and headscratchers from the game.
* FixFic: A fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patches up a few minor plotholes and headscratchers from the game.
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*ADayInTheLimelight: Due to its EveryoneLives nature. Every surviving that died in the game get quite a lot of focus.
* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer,lastly lastly, he purposely left some mistakes in the crime scene in order for Makoto to pick it up and test his intelligence. He successfully expose exposes Genocide Jill to the group]].
* FixFic: A fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patches up a few minorplotholes plot holes and headscratchers from the game.
* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer,
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** Makoto save ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allowed her to saved both, Leon’s and Sayaka’s life.
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* FriendOrIdolDecision: Kyouko is in a difficult place where her instinctive suspicions makes her doubting her allies despite numerous times they had proven themselves sincere.
* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches it's logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.
* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing crucial information, but she see it as a justified NecessaryEvil.
* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches it's logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.
* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing crucial information, but she see it as a justified NecessaryEvil.
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* FriendOrIdolDecision: Kyouko is in a difficult place where her instinctive suspicions makes make her doubting doubt her allies despite numerous times they had proven themselves sincere.
* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reachesit's its logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.
* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing crucial information, but shesee sees it as a justified NecessaryEvil.
* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches
* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing crucial information, but she
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being a Alternative Retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, there are secrets that are reveal much early, like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising as her sister and Junko being the true mastermind.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being a Alternative Retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, there are the fic doesn’t bother to hide secrets that are reveal much early, like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising as her sister and Junko being the true mastermind.
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* MythologyGag: On the second trial, Monokuma called Genocide Jill "the scissor cutty-cutty bitch", a reference to another fic writen by ''hunterofcomedy'', ''Fanfic/TheUltimateHope''.
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* MythologyGag: The title of the story is named after the opening song of Danganronpa: The Animation.
** On the second trial, Monokuma called Genocide Jill "the scissor cutty-cutty bitch", a reference to another ficwriten written by ''hunterofcomedy'', ''Fanfic/TheUltimateHope''.
** On the second trial, Monokuma called Genocide Jill "the scissor cutty-cutty bitch", a reference to another fic
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** Mondo breaks down once he realize he nearly killed Chihiro and cries again once he’s caught in the second trial.
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** Mondo breaks down once he realize realizes he nearly killed Chihiro and cries again once he’s caught in the second trial.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon becomes incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon becomes incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to must deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* LateSpoilerArrival: Despite being a Alternative Retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, there are secrets that are reveal much early, like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising as her sister and Junko being the true mastermind.
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* LateSpoilerArrival: LateArrivalSpoiler: Despite being a Alternative Retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, there are secrets that are reveal much early, like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising as her sister and Junko being the true mastermind.
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Also, [[IThoughItMean do not confuse]] this fic with a song from a [[Music/JustinBieber certain’s singer]].
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Also, [[IThoughItMean [[IThoughtItMeant do not confuse]] this fic with a song from a [[Music/JustinBieber certain’s singer]].
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The story assumed you have already played the first game, so beware of spoilers.
Also, [[IThoughItMean do not confuse]] this fic with a song from a [[Music/JustinBieber certain’s singer]].
Also, [[IThoughItMean do not confuse]] this fic with a song from a [[Music/JustinBieber certain’s singer]].
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* LateSpoilerArrival: Despite being a Alternative Retelling of the first game, the author assumes you’re already familiar with the original story. As such, there are secrets that are reveal much early, like Chihiro’s gender, Celeste’s real name, Mukuro disguising as her sister and Junko being the true mastermind.
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** Subverted with Byakuya, despite his ProperlyParanoid [[JerkassHasAPoint jerkass behaviour]] being the same as in the game, the lack of deaths makes him appear more insensitive than he really is.
* AdaptationalHeroism: Downplayed with both Byakuya and Celeste.
** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: Downplayed with both Byakuya and Celeste.
** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]]
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** Subverted with Byakuya, despite his ProperlyParanoid InsufferableGenius [[JerkassHasAPoint jerkass behaviour]] being the same as in the game, the lack of deaths makes him appear more insensitive than he really is.
* AdaptationalHeroism: Downplayed withboth Byakuya both, [[InsufferableGenius Byakuya]] and Celeste.[[ManipulativeBitch Celeste]].
** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]]]] His secret is that [[spoiler:he's been financially helping outcasted members of his family]].
** The story downplay some of Celeste’s NoSympathy moments, having most of them aimed at the culprits of their respective trials.
* AdaptationalHeroism: Downplayed with
** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.
** The story downplay some of Celeste’s NoSympathy moments, having most of them aimed at the culprits of their respective trials.
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* FixFic: One fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patches up a few minor plotholes and headscratchers from the game.
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* FixFic: One A fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patches up a few minor plotholes and headscratchers from the game.
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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, he ends up embracing his feminine side and cause him to become a {{Transgender}}.
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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, he stop suffering from it. He ends up embracing his feminine side and cause causes him to become a {{Transgender}}.
** In chapter 3 is where the story diverge greatly from the game due to multiple different circunstances, [[spoiler:from having everyone’s secret revealed, Ishimaru becoming a KnightTemplar, the reveal of a 16th student much earlier and the possibility of the Mastermind being a student]].
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* HumiliationConga: Both Leon and Sayaka are disparaged numerous times because they are confirmed attempted murderer, intentional or not. Sayaka also got her secret revealed in front of the others which, despite anonymously referred, is so damningly pointing at her that everyone now knows she once sabotaged her potential rival by siccing her fans on said rival and [[ColdBloodedTorture pouring acid down her throat]].
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* HumiliationConga: Both Leon and Sayaka are disparaged numerous times because they are confirmed attempted murderer, intentional or not. Sayaka also got her secret revealed in front of the others which, despite anonymously referred, is so damningly pointing at her that everyone now knows she once sabotaged [[spoiler:sabotaged her potential rival by siccing her fans on said rival and [[ColdBloodedTorture pouring acid down her throat]].throat]]]].
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Averted. Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, it is noted that she would have died had Leon [[ForWantOfANail not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find her and give her first aid]]. The injury cripple her for several days.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Averted. Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, it is noted that she would have died had Leon [[ForWantOfANail not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find her and give her first aid]]. The injury cripple [[YouCanBarelyStand cripple]] her for several days.
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* ShoutOut: In chapter 3, Mukuro uses a [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] as a decoy to disctract Mondo long enough to sneak pass him, she couldn’d believe it actually worked.
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* ShoutOut: In chapter 3, Mukuro uses a [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] as a decoy to disctract Mondo long enough to sneak pass him, she couldn’d couldn’t believe it actually worked.
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** Sayaka weep upon discovering that she nearly killed the entire group by trying to commit a murder.
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* WhatTheHellHero: Nobody is okay with Ishimaru’s self-righteous attitute in chapter 3, [[spoiler:and everyone was outrage when he started to reveal everyones secrets in a delusional attempt to bring everyone together]].
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* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer, lastly he purposely left some mistakes in the crime scene in order for Makoto to pick it up and test his intelligence and he is successful in exposing Genocide Jill to the group]].
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* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer, lastly he purposely left some mistakes in the crime scene in order for Makoto to pick it up and test his intelligence and he is successful in exposing intelligence. He successfully expose Genocide Jill to the group]].
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* ForWantOfANail: The story heavily relies on this, to the point that the farther you go into the story, the more different it becomes from the original game.
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* ForWantOfANail: The story heavily relies on this, to the point that the farther you go into the story, the more different it becomes from the original game.
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* WhatAPieceOfJunk: The laptop where Alter-Ego is installed looks like a old computer, but as noted by Chihiro it’s actually more powerful than even her own high-end computer back at her home.
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** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s bleeding, unknownly to him it does help save her life.
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** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s bleeding, unknownly unknowningly to him it does help save her life.
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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, unlike the game, he ends up embracing his feminine side and cause him to become a {{Transgender}}.
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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, unlike the game, he ends up embracing his feminine side and cause him to become a {{Transgender}}.
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* RunningGag: Leon's attempts at eating a sandwich are constantly ruined. The story even have a tag lampshading it, ‘’[[FunnyMoments Sandwich Denial]]’’.
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* RunningGag: Leon's attempts at eating a sandwich are constantly ruined. The story even have a tag lampshading it, ‘’[[FunnyMoments ''[[FunnyMoments Sandwich Denial]]’’.Denial]]''.
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** Same goes to Mondo, he attack Chihiro in blind rage after the later unknownly pushes his BerserkButton.
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** Same goes to Mondo, he attack Chihiro in blind rage after the later unknownly unknowningly pushes his BerserkButton.
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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for nor being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, unlike the game, he ends up embracing his feminine side and cause him to become a {{Transgender}}.
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** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for nor not being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, unlike the game, he ends up embracing his feminine side and cause him to become a {{Transgender}}.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Despite being the Ultimate Moral Compass, Taka is a [[GoodIsNotNice lot meaner]] than in the actual game.
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* AccidentalMurder: Sayaka's murder scene is borrowed directly from the manga, Leon accidentally stabbed her while trying to disarm her.
** Same goes to Mondo, he attack Chihiro in blind rage after the later unknownly pushes his BerserkButton.
* AdaptationalJerkass:Despite being Ishimaru becomes a self-righteous jerkass after the Ultimate Moral Compass, Taka is a [[GoodIsNotNice lot meaner]] than second trial, unlike the dormant EmptyShell that he becomes in the actual game.
** Same goes to Mondo, he attack Chihiro in blind rage after the later unknownly pushes his BerserkButton.
* AdaptationalJerkass:
* AdaptationalHeroism: Downplayed with both Byakuya and Celeste.
** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]]
* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoid using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect of Chihiro]] since they didn't know at the time how Chihiro identified herself.
** Byakuya is still the same InsufferableGenius as he is in the game, but most of his jerkass moments have [[JerkassHasAPoint good reasoning behind it]]. Him altering the crime scene in chapter 2 [[spoiler:was actually a gambit to expose Toko identity as Genocide Jack/Jill and to test Makoto’s intelligence.]]
* AmbiguousGender: Played with. After the students [[UnsettlingGenderReveal discovered Chihiro is actually male]] during the second trial, everyone avoid using gender-specific pronoun [[HeartwarmingMoments out of respect of Chihiro]] since they didn't know at the time how Chihiro identified herself.
* FailureGambit: Byakuya actions in chapter 2 turns out to be this. [[spoiler:He discovers early on that Toko is the infamous serial killer, Genocide Jack. He alters the crime scene to make it look like Genocide Jack made it and bring Makoto to the library to the library to study about the killer, lastly he purposely left some mistakes in the crime scene in order for Makoto to pick it up and test his intelligence and he is successful in exposing Genocide Jill to the group]].
* ForWantOfANail: The story heavily relies on this, to the point that the farther you go into the story, the more different it becomes from the original game.
** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s bleeding, unknownly to him it does help save her life.
** Makoto save ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allowed her to saved both, Leon’s and Sayaka’s life.
** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for nor being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, unlike the game, he ends up embracing his feminine side and cause him to become a {{Transgender}}.
** Had Mondo hit Chihiro any harder, he would’ve kill her.
** Leon makes use of towels in an attempt to stop Sayaka’s bleeding, unknownly to him it does help save her life.
** Makoto save ‘Junko’ from Monokuma’s trap. This allowed her to saved both, Leon’s and Sayaka’s life.
** This also applies to background story, Chihiro was bullied at young age for nor being masculine enough and started cross-dressing to put an end to it, unlike the game, he ends up embracing his feminine side and cause him to become a {{Transgender}}.
** Had Mondo hit Chihiro any harder, he would’ve kill her.
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* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing information, but she see it as a NecessaryEvil, considering the situation they're in it's justified.
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* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing crucial information, but she see it as a NecessaryEvil, considering the situation they're in it's justified.justified NecessaryEvil.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon [[ForWantOfANail not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find her and give her first aid]].
** Subverted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's in a coma from Oowada's head wound]].
** Subverted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's in a coma from Oowada's head wound]].
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Averted. Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon [[ForWantOfANail not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find her and give her first aid]].
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* RunningGag: Leon's attempts at eating a sandwich are constantly ruined.
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* RunningGag: Leon's attempts at eating a sandwich are constantly ruined. The story even have a tag lampshading it, ‘’[[FunnyMoments Sandwich Denial]]’’.
** Several characters suffers from sleep deprivation for different reasons.
** Several characters suffers from sleep deprivation for different reasons.
* ShoutOut: In chapter 3, Mukuro uses a [[VideoGame/MetalGear cardboard box]] as a decoy to disctract Mondo long enough to sneak pass him, she couldn’d believe it actually worked.
** On the same chapter, Monokuma [[VillainHasAPoint correctly points out]] that unless people like Byakuya believe in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic friendship is magic]], Kiyotaka’s plan to unite the group will just not work.
** On the same chapter, Monokuma [[VillainHasAPoint correctly points out]] that unless people like Byakuya believe in [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic friendship is magic]], Kiyotaka’s plan to unite the group will just not work.
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* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being biologically male.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Kiyotaka becomes a self-righteous jerk after the second trial as a result of Mondo "betrayal".
* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being biologicallymale.male, unlike in the game where Chihiro identified himself as male. Interesting enough, Chihiro is sexually attracted to girls.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is becomes incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story. \n
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* HiddenDepths: Kyoko really doesn't like manipulating others and withdrawing information, but she see it as a NecessaryEvil, considering the situation they're in it's justified.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: As much of an asshole Byakuya can be, [[spoiler:he's been secretly giving money to outcasted members of his family]], not that he would ever admit it.
* HiddenHeartOfGold: As much of an asshole Byakuya can be, [[spoiler:he's been secretly giving money to outcasted members of his family]], not that he would ever admit it.
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** Mondo becomes very remorseful over attacking Chihiro and failing to keep his promise.
* MythologyGag: On the second trial, Monokuma called Genocide Jill "the scissor cutty-cutty bitch", a reference to another fic writen by ''hunterofcomedy'', ''Fanfic/TheUltimateHope''.
* MythologyGag: On the second trial, Monokuma called Genocide Jill "the scissor cutty-cutty bitch", a reference to another fic writen by ''hunterofcomedy'', ''Fanfic/TheUltimateHope''.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time show prone to violence he can be. It reaches it's logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.
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* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time show showing how prone to violence he can be. It reaches it's logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.
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* CareerEndingInjury: Mukuro, still in her 'Junko' disguise, use the injury in her hand to point out that her modeling career is over in order to [[YouAreNotAlone support]] a depressed Sayaka.
* HairTriggerTemper: Mondo Owada's FatalFlaw. Not only is his EstablishingCharacterMoment, chapter 2 spent a good amount of time show prone to violence he can be. It reaches it's logical conclusion when Mondo [[spoiler:nearly]] killed Chihiro in a blind rage.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find her and give her first aid.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon [[ForWantOfANail not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro not find her and give her first aid.aid]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* CringeComedy: Some of the lighter, funny moments in the fic make use of this.
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** Subverted with Byakuya, despite his PorperlyParanoid [[JerkassHasAPoint jerkass behaviour]] being the same as in the game, the lack of deaths makes him appear more insensitive than he really is.
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** Subverted with Byakuya, despite his PorperlyParanoid ProperlyParanoid [[JerkassHasAPoint jerkass behaviour]] being the same as in the game, the lack of deaths makes him appear more insensitive than he really is.
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** Subverted with Byakuya, despite his PorperlyParanoid [[JerkassHasAPoint jerkass behaviour]] being the same as in the game, the lack of deaths makes him appear more insensitive than he really is.
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* FixFic: One fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patches up a few minior plotholes and headscratches from the game.
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* FixFic: One fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patches up a few minior minor plotholes and headscratches headscratchers from the game.
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* FixFic: One fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patch up a few minior plotholes and headscratches from the game.
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* FixFic: One fic where EveryoneLives, but it also patch patches up a few minior plotholes and headscratches from the game.
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* LighterAndSofter: Only because everyone survive, otherwise it retains the same dark theme of the game.
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* LighterAndSofter: Only because everyone survive, survives, otherwise it retains the same dark theme of the game.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Both Leon and Sayaka are horrified over their attempted murdered on each other.
* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon didn't used towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro didn't found her and gave her first aid.
* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon didn't used towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro didn't found her and gave her first aid.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Both Leon and Sayaka are horrified over their attempted murdered on murders of each other.
* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leondidn't used not use towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro didn't found not find her and gave give her first aid.
* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon
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* SwitchingPOV: While the story is mostly tell from Mukuro's P.O.V., all characters have their share in the spotlight.
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* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being a biological male.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was save at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was save saved at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* FixFic: One where everyone lives, but it also patch up and explains a few miniors plotholes and headscratches from the game.
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* FixFic: One fic where everyone lives, EveryoneLives, but it also patch up and explains a few miniors minior plotholes and headscratches from the game.
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* LastMinuteReprieve: After Mukuro gave first aid to a dying Sayaka, she then run to the court just in time to stop Leon from being executed.
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* TheParagon: Beside Makoto, Mukuro in her "Junko" disguise is seen as this by the others because she's unyielding toward the mastermind's threats to her, becoming a protective figure toward the others because of her unexpected skills and her cheerful encouragements.
* TheParagon: Beside Makoto, Mukuro in her "Junko" disguise is seen as this by the others because she's unyielding toward the mastermind's threats to her, becoming a protective figure toward the others because of her unexpected skills and her cheerful encouragements.
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* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved Mukuro from Spear of Gungnir not because his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, Mukuro betrays Junko but not immediately reveals herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, etc.
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* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved Mukuro from Spear of Gungnir not because his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, Mukuro betrays Junko but not immediately reveals herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, etc.etc.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was save at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Leon is incredible terrified of Monokuma after he was save at the last second from his execution. Too bad for him, he has to deal with the bear for the rest of the story.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Despite being the Ultimate Moral Compass, Taka is a [[GoodIsNotNice lot meanier]] than in the actual game.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Despite being the Ultimate Moral Compass, Taka is a [[GoodIsNotNice lot meanier]] meaner]] than in the actual game.
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* SwitchingPOV: While the story is mostly tell from Mukuro's P.O.V., all characters have their share in the spotlight.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon didn't used towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro didn't find her and gave her first aid.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died had Leon didn't used towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro didn't find found her and gave her first aid.
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* AdaptationalJerkass: Despite being the Ultimate Moral Compass, Taka is a [[GoodIsNotNice lot meanier]] than in the actual game.
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* ContinuityLockOut: Despite being a WhatIf fic from the first game, the author still expect you to have completed the game before reading the story in order to undestand it better.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Both Leon and Sayaka are horrified over their attempted murdered on each other.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died if Mukuro and the other students didn't give her first aid.
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died if Mukuro and the other students had Leon didn't give used towels as improvised bandages and had Mukuro didn't find her and gave her first aid.
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* ContinuityLockOut: Despite being a WhatIf fic from the first game, the author still expect you to have completed the game before reading the story in order to undestand it better.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Kiyotaka post-second trial has such an overbearing self-righteousness, Byakuya agrees to scheme with other students behind his back just to get some breathers.
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* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Kiyotaka Ishimaru post-second trial has such an overbearing self-righteousness, Byakuya agrees to scheme with other students behind his back just to get some breathers.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: Ishimaru post-second trial is a self-righteous jerk, but he gets this a lot. No matter how bad the culprits feel about it, they ''did'' try to commit murder and Ishimaru's unwillingness to sweep that under the rug like everyone else is not hard to sympathize with.
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* PetTheDog: Even at his worst, Ishimaru tries his best to be nice to Alter Ego and is ashamed whenever he makes 'her' feel bad.
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* RunningGag: Leon's attempts at eating a sandwich are constantly ruined.
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* BloodKnight: Mukuro feels that she perhaps enjoys being put into a combat situation and protecting others using her skills a bit ''too'' much.
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* BloodKnight: Mukuro feels that she perhaps enjoys being put into a combat situation and protecting others using her skills a bit ''too'' much. The implication slightly horrifies her because it would make her NotSoDifferent with her sister.
* ForegoneConclusion: The fic starts with InMediasRes, where it's chronologically around the sixth trial, showing that all students are surviving their murder attempts or executions and have since made peace with each other's faults that they immediately trust Mukuro despite she's being revealed as TheMole.
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Kiyotaka post-second trial has such an overbearing self-righteousness, Byakuya agrees to scheme with other students behind his back just to get some breathers.
* FriendOrIdolDecision: Kyouko is in a difficult place where her instinctive suspicions makes her doubting her allies despite numerous times they had proven themselves sincere.
* HumiliationConga: Both Leon and Sayaka are disparaged numerous times because they are confirmed attempted murderer, intentional or not. Sayaka also got her secret revealed in front of the others which, despite anonymously referred, is so damningly pointing at her that everyone now knows she once sabotaged her potential rival by siccing her fans on said rival and [[ColdBloodedTorture pouring acid down her throat]].
* ManlyTears: Leon cries not because he would not be executed, but because Sayaka survives.
* ForegoneConclusion: The fic starts with InMediasRes, where it's chronologically around the sixth trial, showing that all students are surviving their murder attempts or executions and have since made peace with each other's faults that they immediately trust Mukuro despite she's being revealed as TheMole.
* TheFriendNobodyLikes: Kiyotaka post-second trial has such an overbearing self-righteousness, Byakuya agrees to scheme with other students behind his back just to get some breathers.
* FriendOrIdolDecision: Kyouko is in a difficult place where her instinctive suspicions makes her doubting her allies despite numerous times they had proven themselves sincere.
* HumiliationConga: Both Leon and Sayaka are disparaged numerous times because they are confirmed attempted murderer, intentional or not. Sayaka also got her secret revealed in front of the others which, despite anonymously referred, is so damningly pointing at her that everyone now knows she once sabotaged her potential rival by siccing her fans on said rival and [[ColdBloodedTorture pouring acid down her throat]].
* ManlyTears: Leon cries not because he would not be executed, but because Sayaka survives.
* TheParagon: Beside Makoto, Mukuro in her "Junko" disguise is seen as this by the others because she's unyielding toward the mastermind's threats to her, becoming a protective figure toward the others because of her unexpected skills and her cheerful encouragements.
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* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being a biological male.
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* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being a biological male.male.
* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved Mukuro from Spear of Gungnir not because his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, Mukuro betrays Junko but not immediately reveals herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, etc.
* WhatIf: Notable in that the fic takes many cues from another WhatIf scenario of the canon, ''Danganronpa IF''; Makoto saved Mukuro from Spear of Gungnir not because his memory returning from being zapped by the fake escape switch but because his natural kindness alarms him of Monokuma's trap, Mukuro betrays Junko but not immediately reveals herself as the Ultimate Soldier because of the circumstances, EverybodyLives but not by brute-forcing the Monokuma army, etc.
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The author also has the fic on Fanfiction.Net, which can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11227053/1/Never-Say-Never here].
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The author also has the fic on Fanfiction.Net, which can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11227053/1/Never-Say-Never here].
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* BloodKnight: Mukuro feels that she perhaps enjoys being put into a combat situation and protecting others using her skills a bit ''too'' much.
* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Mukuro decides to go against Junko after her sister attempts to kill her, despite promising Mukuro that she would instead be dropped through a trap door and survive. Mukuro also believes her continued act as "Junko" and attempts to keep everyone alive is her penance for playing along to Junko's desires.
* MistreatmentInducedBetrayal: Mukuro decides to go against Junko after her sister attempts to kill her, despite promising Mukuro that she would instead be dropped through a trap door and survive. Mukuro also believes her continued act as "Junko" and attempts to keep everyone alive is her penance for playing along to Junko's desires.
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** Subverted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's in a coma from Mondo's head wound]].
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** Subverted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's in a coma from Mondo's Oowada's head wound]].wound]].
* SanitySlippage: Ishimaru does not take Oowada's [[spoiler: attempted]] murder of Chihiro and his lying to him that well, nor does he appreciate the other students taking his attempts at keeping everyone together for granted. It's more or less what changes him into his "Kiyondo" persona.
* TearsOfRemorse: Mukuro cries over Sayaka's "corpse", believing they were both abandoned for their sins.
* SanitySlippage: Ishimaru does not take Oowada's [[spoiler: attempted]] murder of Chihiro and his lying to him that well, nor does he appreciate the other students taking his attempts at keeping everyone together for granted. It's more or less what changes him into his "Kiyondo" persona.
* TearsOfRemorse: Mukuro cries over Sayaka's "corpse", believing they were both abandoned for their sins.
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[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/3898111/chapters/8719840 Never Say Never]] is a ''Franchise/DanganRonpa'' fic by [[http://archiveofourown.org/users/hunterofcomedy/pseuds/hunterofcomedy hunterofcomedy]]. In it the events of the first game seem to proceed as usual, however Mukuro Ikusaba begins having doubts about her sister's plan. Things truly change however when Naegi saves Mukuro when she's disguised as Junko, and Sayaka does not die from her stab wound...
The author also has the fic on Fanfiction.Net, which can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11227053/1/Never-Say-Never here].
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* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died if Mukuro and the other students didn't give her first aid.
** Subverted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's in a coma from Mondo's head wound]].
* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being a biological male.
The author also has the fic on Fanfiction.Net, which can be found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11227053/1/Never-Say-Never here].
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!!This fic has examples of:
* OnlyAFleshWound: Sayaka manages to survive her stab wound despite bleeding out for hours on end, but it is noted that she would have died if Mukuro and the other students didn't give her first aid.
** Subverted with [[spoiler: Chihiro. She's in a coma from Mondo's head wound]].
* {{Transgender}}: Chihiro identifies herself as a female despite being a biological male.