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* AuthorTract: Although the story was meant as a FixFic, it falls into entire pages of the author reminiscent his personal beliefs and views.
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** An arc word Emerson lives by, when commenting on just how messy the world can be to certain individuals.
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** An arc word ArcWord Emerson lives by, when commenting on just how messy the world can be to certain individuals.
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* MindScrew: Chapter 17 has the author appearing in the story [[BreakingTheFourthWall to explain to the viewers]] as part of his author's notes.
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* TheStationsOfTheCanon: The story has a strict adherence to canon events despite the differences. The author appears almost too afraid to step beyond the canon event lines, thus in order to maintain thematic consistency the author seems almost forced to create sub-scenarios and alter minor details within established events. However, this seems no longer the case as of the Flame Dragon arc, where changes, both subtle and overt, start driving the story in a different direction.
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* CommonTongue: Mentioned as "Lingua Franca".
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* CommonTongue: CommonTongue:
** Mentioned as "Lingua Franca".
** Mentioned as "Lingua Franca".
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* FateWorseThanDeath: An arc word Emerson lives by, when commenting on just how messy the world can be to certain individuals.
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* FateWorseThanDeath: FateWorseThanDeath:
** An arc word Emerson lives by, when commenting on just how messy the world can be to certain individuals.
** An arc word Emerson lives by, when commenting on just how messy the world can be to certain individuals.
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* GratuitousJapanese: As the main point of view is American, the story's main language perspective is English, thus there are times the Japanese personnel switch from English into Japanese.
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* GratuitousJapanese: GratuitousJapanese:
** As the main point of view is American, the story's main language perspective is English, thus there are times the Japanese personnel switch from English into Japanese.
** As the main point of view is American, the story's main language perspective is English, thus there are times the Japanese personnel switch from English into Japanese.
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-->'''Masterson:''' God damn the Marines work fast...and are Jews apparently.
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-->'''Emerson:''' Self tying shoes. That's a thing. [...] Our standard issue jackets have multipurpose climate control. [...]
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* ArtisticLicenseMilitary: The American expedition team, made up of a Marine Expeditionary Unit, really has no business having Army Rangers tote around with them. In terms of forces, it would make more sense if MARSOC came along as they are a Marine special operation force. The author [[HandWave handwaves]] this by saying that the Rangers were already engaged with the Empire during the Ginza Incident. This alongside the fact the root of the Rangers from Colonial America could be tapped into by the Rangers in the Special Region.
** Fixed in ''FanFic/HereWeGoAgain'', where Emerson and friends [[CrossOver accompany the 3rd MEU]] as MARSOC Raiders.
** Fixed in ''FanFic/HereWeGoAgain'', where Emerson and friends [[CrossOver accompany the 3rd MEU]] as MARSOC Raiders.
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* ArtisticLicenseMilitary: The American expedition team, made up of a Marine Expeditionary Unit, really has no business having Army Rangers tote around with them. In terms of forces, it would make more sense if MARSOC came along as they are a Marine special operation force. The author [[HandWave handwaves]] this by saying that the Rangers were already engaged with the Empire during the Ginza Incident. This alongside the fact the root of the Rangers from Colonial America could be tapped into by the Rangers in the Special Region.
**Region. Fixed in ''FanFic/HereWeGoAgain'', where Emerson and friends [[CrossOver accompany the 3rd MEU]] as MARSOC Raiders.
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* ShaggyDogStory:
** Earth gets the blunt of it. Just about every crisis has gotten worse. The United States has yet again intervene in the Middle East. Puerto Rico's economy has gotten so bad that it became an actual state in the Union to recoup it's debt. New York City faced race riots and martial law in 2019. The US and China got into a Space Race, leading to the US creating and using KillSat, which in turn has the US hit by economic sanctions. Russia is in turmoil with Putin's passing and China is in precariously similar situation. Most of the Middle East is buried under sandstorms. Iran has gone off the deep end and was invaded for its nuclear weapons test. Afghanistan is yet again in civil war. The Ukrainian Civil War ends with Loyalist Victory. Korea is united under the South after a short and brutal war involving China, preceded by an avian influenza epidemic that affected East Asia and is now currently dealing with a refugee crisis. The Drug Wars further escalates economic and environmental destruction in Latin America, the worst hit is a now collapsing Mexico. Further migration into the EU in response to the growing Sahara Desert. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And Scotland seceded from the UK]] in protest and the victim of alienation by London's political actions.
** The hunt for the Flame Dragon in the Dark Elves' territory. [[spoiler:It already started going wrong the team's first contact with the rest of Yao's tribe, who ambush the team for being an unknown, leading to their deaths when the team retaliate in self-defense, not knowing who they were until the shooting has stopped. When they finally get into the Dragon's lair, they find the dragon dead, and upon closer examination, it was damage sustained during its first encounter with [=RCT3=] that did it in shortly after it landed, as the creature had been dead for MONTHS.]]
** Earth gets the blunt of it. Just about every crisis has gotten worse. The United States has yet again intervene in the Middle East. Puerto Rico's economy has gotten so bad that it became an actual state in the Union to recoup it's debt. New York City faced race riots and martial law in 2019. The US and China got into a Space Race, leading to the US creating and using KillSat, which in turn has the US hit by economic sanctions. Russia is in turmoil with Putin's passing and China is in precariously similar situation. Most of the Middle East is buried under sandstorms. Iran has gone off the deep end and was invaded for its nuclear weapons test. Afghanistan is yet again in civil war. The Ukrainian Civil War ends with Loyalist Victory. Korea is united under the South after a short and brutal war involving China, preceded by an avian influenza epidemic that affected East Asia and is now currently dealing with a refugee crisis. The Drug Wars further escalates economic and environmental destruction in Latin America, the worst hit is a now collapsing Mexico. Further migration into the EU in response to the growing Sahara Desert. [[ArsonMurderAndJaywalking And Scotland seceded from the UK]] in protest and the victim of alienation by London's political actions.
** The hunt for the Flame Dragon in the Dark Elves' territory. [[spoiler:It already started going wrong the team's first contact with the rest of Yao's tribe, who ambush the team for being an unknown, leading to their deaths when the team retaliate in self-defense, not knowing who they were until the shooting has stopped. When they finally get into the Dragon's lair, they find the dragon dead, and upon closer examination, it was damage sustained during its first encounter with [=RCT3=] that did it in shortly after it landed, as the creature had been dead for MONTHS.]]
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* AdaptationalBadass: Third Recon Team as a whole.
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** To BackToTheFuturePartII when Emerson lists out some of their technological achievements in 2028.
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** To BackToTheFuturePartII ''Film/BackToTheFuturePartII'' when Emerson lists out some of their technological achievements in 2028.
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* WhamEpisode: Section 2-10.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11466174/1/Manifest-Destiny Manifest Destiny]]'' by [=BlueWay=], is a AlternateUniverse / FixFic of the web novel, ''[[Literature/{{Gate}} Gate - Thus the JSDF Fought There]]''.
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On December 9th, 2019, the fic underwent a reboot titled ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13448445/1/Manifest-Destiny-An-Empire-of-Dirt Manifest Destiny: An Empire of Dirt]]'', and the original version was subsequently deleted shortly after.
