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* GirlsAreReallyScaredOfHorrorMovies: Gwen gets suckered into watching ''Film/EvilDead2'' on New Year's Eve. Less cliché when one realizes why this movie in particularly terrifies Gwen: A girl chants a magic spell out of a magic book and accidentally summons demons. Unbeknownst to Ben, [[CuteWitch Gwen]] has had nightmares of this situation happening to her.
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* [[spoiler:ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies]]: [[spoiler: Why Ben takes off the Omnitrix after his last battle with Vilgax.]]

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* [[spoiler:ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies]]: ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies: [[spoiler: Why Ben takes off the Omnitrix after his last battle with Vilgax.]]



* [[spoiler: MySecretPregnancy]]: [[spoiler: As a surprise, Gwen was going to find out she would be a big sister when she returned from her summer vacation. Unfortunately, it wasn't the surprise everyone was hoping for...]]

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* [[spoiler: MySecretPregnancy]]: MySecretPregnancy: [[spoiler: As a surprise, Gwen was going to find out she would be a big sister when she returned from her summer vacation. Unfortunately, it wasn't the surprise everyone was hoping for...]]
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* CharmPoint: Gwen assures Ben that she didn't fall in love with him because he had the Omnitrix. And vice versa, Ben assures Gwen that he didn't love her just because she could cast a couple of spells.
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* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters: Delves deep into the parts of the kids lives that canon only hinted at, including their schools and karate class. Also shows in the chapters, which are all told from different POV's. So far we've gotten Ben, Gwen, Max, Lili, Carl, Marci, and Michelle.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Charmcaster calls the LM-universe's version of Old/Sir George father in chapter 34. Prime-Canon!Charmcaster's father was Spellbinder, and was killed by Addwaitya, and they have no established relationship to George. [[spoiler: Furthermore, it's implied that George is Bezel's unnamed Knight from "The Sorceress and the Knight". Prime-Canon!George had no relation to Prime!Bezel. Nor was he a magic user, with Ascalon being Azmuth's previous "greatest invention" prior to the Omnitrix. Further muddling things, Charmcaster looks nothing like how Boudica is described to look like in that story, but spells that disguise someone' true apperance have appeared in it. And of course it's also possible, Charmcaster's a distant descendant of Boudica's, or that she's lying.]]

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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Charmcaster calls the LM-universe's version of Old/Sir George father in chapter 34. Prime-Canon!Charmcaster's father was Spellbinder, and was killed by Addwaitya, and they have no established relationship to George. [[spoiler: Furthermore, it's implied that George is Bezel's unnamed Knight from "The Sorceress and the Knight". Prime-Canon!George had no relation to Prime!Bezel. Nor was he a magic user, with Ascalon being Azmuth's previous "greatest invention" prior to the Omnitrix.Omnitrix, although how he became immortal was never covered. If true LM George would be much older than his canon self who was born in the late Roman Empire. Further muddling things, Charmcaster looks nothing like how Boudica is described to look like in that story, but spells that disguise someone' true apperance have appeared in it. And of course it's also possible, Charmcaster's a distant descendant of Boudica's, or that she's lying.]]
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[[folder: Sidestories]]Side Stories]]
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* ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight: Averted. The kids keep coming back because Deke is the only one in town who didn't call the cops when an eight-foot-tall alien with red skin and four arms tried to get a late night snack.

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* ThingsThatGoBumpInTheNight: Averted. The This is the reason why kids keep coming back because Deke is the only one to Mr. Smoothies. Everyone else in town who didn't call panicked and called the cops when an eight-foot-tall alien with red skin and four arms tried to get a late night snack.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13777993/1/Little-Moment-For-Fear-Of-Little-Men For Fear of Little Men]] After a lifetime of disappointment and failure Azmuth has turned his back the galaxy, content to let destiny him pass by in his hidden laboratory. If only destiny and the man who walks in it would return the favor...

[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13939426/1/Little-Moment-In-the-Face-of-Extinction In The Face of Extinction]] July 27th, 1952. The day the world learns that it's not alone in the universe. As aliens land in Washington DC with offers of peace and brotherhood, Jim "Merlin" Huxby, the leader of the Plumbers, must decide if the price is something that humanity can afford.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13777993/1/Little-Moment-For-Fear-Of-Little-Men For Fear of Little Men]] After a lifetime of disappointment and failure Azmuth has turned his back the galaxy, content to let destiny him pass by in his hidden laboratory. If only destiny and the man who walks in it would return the favor...

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13939426/1/Little-Moment-In-the-Face-of-Extinction In The Face of Extinction]] July 27th, 1952. The 1952, the day the world learns that it's not alone in the universe. As aliens land in Washington DC with offers of peace and brotherhood, Jim "Merlin" Huxby, the leader of the Plumbers, must decide if the price is something that humanity can afford.



[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13704530/1/Little-Moment-Whiskey-Tango-Foxtrot Whiskey Tango Foxtrot]] A marine's life takes them from From the Halls of Montezuma to the shores of Tripoli, but will any of that be enough after aliens start attacking nuclear missile bases? Or to survive being assigned to Max Tennyson and his team of Plumbers?

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13704530/1/Little-Moment-Whiskey-Tango-Foxtrot Whiskey Tango Foxtrot]] A marine's Marine's life takes them from From the Halls of Montezuma to the shores of Tripoli, but will any of that be enough after aliens start attacking nuclear missile bases? Or to survive being assigned to Max Tennyson and his team of Plumbers?
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13939426/1/Little-Moment-In-the-Face-of-Extinction In The Face of Extinction]] July 27th, 1952. The day the world learns that it's not alone in the universe. As aliens land in Washington DC with offers of peace and brotherhood, Jim "Merlin" Huxby, the leader of the Plumbers, must decide if they are asking for more than humanity can pay.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13939426/1/Little-Moment-In-the-Face-of-Extinction In The Face of Extinction]] July 27th, 1952. The day the world learns that it's not alone in the universe. As aliens land in Washington DC with offers of peace and brotherhood, Jim "Merlin" Huxby, the leader of the Plumbers, must decide if they are asking for more than the price is something that humanity can pay.afford.



[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13704530/1/Little-Moment-Whiskey-Tango-Foxtrot Whiskey Tango Foxtrot]] In 1979, a Rookie Plumber is assigned to Whiskey Team under the command of Colonel Max Tennyson. With [=UFOs=] on the loose and nuclear missiles going missing, it's up to them to follow the trail and put down the threat. Wherever it leads them. It's time to see if a Marine has what it takes to keep up.

[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13386146/1/Little-Moment-They-Mostly-Come-Out-At-Night They Mostly Come Out at Night]] The nice thing about working the graveyard shift in Bellwood, Deke Jameson thought, was that basically nobody bothered him. It was boring. He liked boring. Except tonight, it wasn't. Tonight, a huge red alien with four arms in a white striped T-Shirt walked up to buy a smoothie. Tonight, his life changed.

And an AU: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13310384/1/Courting-Disaster Courting Disaster]] where in a different reality, Ben and Gwen aren't separated and sent to different schools, their mothers don't ruin things, and things are generally better all around. Except for all of the adults who are around the two and slowly begin to realize that there's no stopping the chain reaction going on. They're Ben and Gwen, and the world can just deal with it.


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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13704530/1/Little-Moment-Whiskey-Tango-Foxtrot Whiskey Tango Foxtrot]] In 1979, a Rookie Plumber is A marine's life takes them from From the Halls of Montezuma to the shores of Tripoli, but will any of that be enough after aliens start attacking nuclear missile bases? Or to survive being assigned to Whiskey Team under the command of Colonel Max Tennyson. With [=UFOs=] on the loose Tennyson and nuclear missiles going missing, it's up to them to follow the trail and put down the threat. Wherever it leads them. It's time to see if a Marine has what it takes to keep up.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13386146/1/Little-Moment-They-Mostly-Come-Out-At-Night They Mostly Come Out at Night]] The nice thing best part about working for Mr. Smoothies was that nothing happened. That's doubly true for the graveyard shift in Bellwood, Deke Jameson thought, was that basically nobody bothered him. It was boring. He liked boring. Except until it isn't. Until tonight, it wasn't. Tonight, when a huge red alien with four arms in a white striped T-Shirt walked walks up wanting a drink. Some days it just doesn't pay to buy a smoothie. Tonight, his life changed.

get out of bed.

And an AU: [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13310384/1/Courting-Disaster Courting Disaster]] where in So many things depend on a different reality, single moment. In one world Ben and Gwen aren't are separated when they're four and sent to different schools, their mothers don't ruin things, and things are generally better all around. Except for all of the adults who are around the two and slowly begin to realize schools. In another, they aren't. In this world, that there's no stopping the one change starts a chain reaction going on. They're that can't be stopped. In this world, they're Ben and Gwen, Gwen and the world everyone else can just deal with it.deal.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13322592/1/Little-Moment-The-Sorceress-And-The-Knight The Sorceress and the Knight]] Before Ben 10, before the Plumbers, before history itself, the Earth was guarded by Knights from a city called Atlantis. This is the story of the last of that noble line who was sworn to the only daughter of the Mage King, Bezel, and how they changed the world...

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13322592/1/Little-Moment-The-Sorceress-And-The-Knight The Sorceress and the Knight]] Before Ben 10, before the Plumbers, before history itself, the Earth was guarded by Knights from a city called Atlantis. This is the story of the last of that noble line line, a man who was sworn to the only daughter of the Mage King, Bezel, and how they changed the world...



[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13777993/1/Little-Moment-For-Fear-Of-Little-Men For Fear of Little Men]] A century before the events of the Original Series, a slightly younger but still ancient Azmuth remains sequestered in his hidden laboratory and works on his Index and a device to access it. The arrival of a Traveler will change his destiny - and the destiny of the entire galaxy.

[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13939426/1/Little-Moment-In-the-Face-of-Extinction In The Face of Extinction]] In the late summer of 1952, the world changed forever when aliens came down from the skies and landed in Washington D.C. Jim "Merlin" Huxby, the leader of the Plumbers, struggles to respond to the offers of peace - especially given the price of membership. But he's used to making hard decisions.

[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13311220/1/ Rumble in the Jungle]] Max Tennyson has one last mission to fly over the skies of Vietnam before he heads to Houston for his shot at the moon, and what happens will change his life forever.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13777993/1/Little-Moment-For-Fear-Of-Little-Men For Fear of Little Men]] A century before the events After a lifetime of the Original Series, a slightly younger but still ancient disappointment and failure Azmuth remains sequestered has turned his back the galaxy, content to let destiny him pass by in his hidden laboratory and works on his Index and a device to access it. The arrival of a Traveler will change his laboratory. If only destiny - and the destiny of man who walks in it would return the entire galaxy.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13939426/1/Little-Moment-In-the-Face-of-Extinction In The Face of Extinction]] In the late summer of 1952, July 27th, 1952. The day the world changed forever when learns that it's not alone in the universe. As aliens came down from the skies and landed land in Washington D.C. DC with offers of peace and brotherhood, Jim "Merlin" Huxby, the leader of the Plumbers, struggles to respond to the offers of peace - especially given the price of membership. But he's used to making hard decisions.must decide if they are asking for more than humanity can pay.

[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13311220/1/ Rumble in the Jungle]] NASA's newest astronaut, Max Tennyson Tennyson, only has one last more mission to fly over in the skies of over Vietnam before he heads to Houston for can take his shot at the moon, and one small step, but what happens next will change his life forever.take him so much further than the moon.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13322592/1/Little-Moment-The-Sorceress-And-The-Knight The Sorceress and the Knight]] A long time ago, when Magic was everywhere, there was a land called Atlantis that protected the Earth, ruled by a Mage King who had many sons, and only one daughter. Her name was Bezel. And she would change the world.

[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13372178/1/Warlord-Ascending Warlord Ascending]] On the world of Chimeral, the Chimera Sui Generis cried out for help when the Incursean Empire conquered their world, and none came. But the Chimerans still fought for their freedom, and one was a boy who built things. The Incurseans, and then the galaxy would call him Vilgax.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13322592/1/Little-Moment-The-Sorceress-And-The-Knight The Sorceress and the Knight]] A long time ago, when Magic Before Ben 10, before the Plumbers, before history itself, the Earth was everywhere, there was guarded by Knights from a land city called Atlantis Atlantis. This is the story of the last of that protected noble line who was sworn to the Earth, ruled by a only daughter of the Mage King who had many sons, King, Bezel, and only one daughter. Her name was Bezel. And she would change how they changed the world.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13372178/1/Warlord-Ascending Warlord Ascending]] On A conquered world, a put down people, and the world of Chimeral, boy who would save them all. Some would call him a hero, most a monster, but by the Chimera Sui Generis cried out for help when time he drives the Incursean Empire conquered their world, and none came. But back to the Chimerans still fought for their freedom, and one was a boy who built things. The Incurseans, and then stars all will know the galaxy would call him Vilgax.
name Vilgax.
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* AmbigiousSituation: In Chapter 1 Ben has a dream from what's implied to be Charmcaster's point-of-view, who's attacked by a yeti, while searching for something connected to the SleepingKing in the Himalayas. It's unclear why he'd have a vision like this, when did this vision take place (since Charmcaster had already located George, at the same time Vilgax attacked Phoenix), or what she's looking for.

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* AmbigiousSituation: AmbiguousSituation: In Chapter 1 Ben has a dream from what's implied to be Charmcaster's point-of-view, who's attacked by a yeti, while searching for something connected to the SleepingKing KingInTheMountain, in the Himalayas. It's unclear why he'd have a vision like this, when did this vision take place (since Charmcaster had already located George, at the same time Vilgax attacked Phoenix), or what she's looking for.



** Chapter 1 ends with an omake about Colonel Hallam handing over a DNAlien spy captured at his base, to the Plumbers. It goes wrong, with the DNAlien and one Plumber ending-up dead, another in critical condition, and two more lightly injured. Also the DNAlien in question was one of Hallam's men, before being taken over.

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** Chapter 1 ends with an omake about Colonel Hallam handing over a DNAlien [=DNAlien=] spy captured at his base, to the Plumbers. It goes wrong, with the DNAlien [=DNAlien=] and one Plumber ending-up dead, another in critical condition, and two more lightly injured. Also the DNAlien [=DNAlien=] in question was one of Hallam's men, before being taken over.



** Ben and Gwen settle for watching ''Film/IndinaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom'' in Chapter 1.
** The DNAlien's escape attempt is reminiscent of the opening scene of ''Film/JurrasicPark''.

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** Ben and Gwen settle for watching ''Film/IndinaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom'' ''Film/IndianaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom'' in Chapter 1.
** The DNAlien's [=DNAlien=]'s escape attempt is reminiscent of the opening scene of ''Film/JurrasicPark''.''Film/JurassicPark''.

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* AmbigiousSituation: In Chapter 1 Ben has a dream from what's implied to be Charmcaster's point-of-view, who's attacked by a yeti, while searching for something connected to the SleepingKing in the Himalayas. It's unclear why he'd have a vision like this, when did this vision take place (since Charmcaster had already located George, at the same time Vilgax attacked Phoenix), or what she's looking for.
* DarkerAndEdgier:
** Ben's trauma after Phoenix is much more pronounced, than in ''Classic''.
*** Ben has a panic attack, after seeing the news about an anti-aliens protest, in the wake of the destruction Vilgax caused.
*** In Chapter 1 of ''Classic'' Ben half-joking starts asking questions only the real Gwen could answer, after Gwen's OutOfCharacter confession, that she doesn't want to go school, since then they won't be able spend as much time together. In ''Rebooted'' Ben genuinely takes it as an OutOfCharacterAlert, and freaks out, thinking that the real Gwen's been gone since Phoenix.
** Chapter 1 ends with an omake about Colonel Hallam handing over a DNAlien spy captured at his base, to the Plumbers. It goes wrong, with the DNAlien and one Plumber ending-up dead, another in critical condition, and two more lightly injured. Also the DNAlien in question was one of Hallam's men, before being taken over.
* ICanExplain: Ben and Gwen appear to have been caught kissing late at night by Frank, and they try to use the videogame they played as an alibi. It turns-out Frank didn't saw anything, thought they were just roughhousing, and came down to order them in bed.
* MythologyGag: Paul, Ben and Gwen's classmate from karate is very minor character in LMR, but it's mentioned in Chapter 1, that he visited Ben during in the aftermath of Phoenix, and they talked about music. This is likely a reference to delmartian's non-canon [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13639019/1/Little-Moments-AU-Side-Stories Little Moments AU - Side Stories]], written with the permission and encourement of the original authors, where Paul takes up a BigBrotherMentor role for Ben, including becoming a guitar-practise buddy.
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** Ben and Gwen settle for watching ''Film/IndinaJonesAndTheTempleOfDoom'' in Chapter 1.
** The DNAlien's escape attempt is reminiscent of the opening scene of ''Film/JurrasicPark''.
* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: After Ben suggests that he should transfer to Gwen's school, he claims, that he's not doing it for her, but because he cares about his education.

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The story is currently being rebooted with expanded content. You can find the new version at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13276637/1/Little-Moments-Rebooted Little Moments Rebooted]]

But you can still find the classic version [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/ here]]

The sequel, Breaking Point will also be rebooted, but until then you can find the classic version [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8588746/1/Breaking-Point here]].

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The story is currently being rebooted with expanded content. You can find the new version at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13276637/1/Little-Moments-Rebooted Little Moments Rebooted]]

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Rebooted]] or the classic version [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8440324/1/ here]]

The sequel, Breaking Point will has also be been rebooted, but until then and you can find the new version at [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13968943/1/Breaking-Point-Rebooted Breaking Point Rebooted]] or the classic version [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8588746/1/Breaking-Point here]].


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* DoomedByCanon: As a PrequelInTheLostAge for the LM-verse, "Stone in the River" has established the war between Atlantis and Logos, and it's catasthrophic consequnces to the world, making the DownerEnding below along with the failure of the attempt to SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong by Parrin and the other Coven members using Bezel's Charms, inevitable.


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* SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong: In the penultimate chapter, Parrin (Bezel's apprentice) explains, that he and several defectors from both sides of the war formed a Coven, and are attempting to create a TimeTravel spell utilising Bezel's charms, to prevent the War from ever happening. They fail because as established by "Stone in the River", it was impossible from the start, the blow-back made things even worse.
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* EntertaininglyWrong: In Chapter 34 Lili takes a look at a picture Ben, Gwen and Michelle took at a photo-booth, in which Ben is sporting a LuminescentBlush, while Michelle's rolling her eyes, after Gwen pushed her in the middle. Lili assumes Ben is crushing on Michelle, and Gwen is playing [[TheMatchmaker matchmaker]] for them, when it's actually Michelle who's trying to match Ben and Gwen.
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* AntiMagic: Danel's crew and later the Logosian army employ smoke grenades containing some sort of gaseous drug, that temporarily inhibits the mana use of those who inhale it.



* AntiMagic: Danel's crew and later the Logosian army employ smoke grenades containing some sort of gaseous drug, that temporarily inhibits the mana use of those who inhale it.

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* AntiMagic: Danel's crew AssInAmbassador: Viscount Barnaval, the leader of the Atlantisian delagation ostensibly sent to peacefully resolve Logos's separation from the crown, acts like he's above everyoneelse in Logos, and later [[spoiler: poisons the Logosian army employ smoke grenades containing some sort of gaseous drug, that temporarily inhibits Council on the mana use of those who inhale it.celebration held after signing the treaty.]]


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* LoveRuinsTheRealm: Downplayed. While Bezel and the Knight's relationship going south did directly contribute to the war erupting between Atlantis and Logos, [[spoiler: Viscount Barnaval, the leader of the Atlantisian delagation had been tasked with eliminating the Council of Logos from the start.]]
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* AmbigousSituation: [[spoiler: ''Everything'' the Liar predicts to Knight in Chapter 3, comes to pass. However given that everything it taunts the Knight with regarding his past ''is'' false, it's claims about his future can also be taken as SelfFulfillingProphecy through feeding the the seeds of doupt in his mind, or even as an outright {{Curse}}.]]

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* AmbigousSituation: AmbiguousSituation: [[spoiler: ''Everything'' the Liar predicts to Knight in Chapter 3, comes to pass. However given that everything it taunts the Knight with regarding his past ''is'' false, it's claims about his future can also be taken as SelfFulfillingProphecy through feeding the the seeds of doupt in his mind, or even as an outright {{Curse}}.]]
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* AmbigousSituation: [[spoiler: ''Everything'' the Liar predicts to Knight in Chapter 3, comes to pass. However given that everything it taunts the Knight with regarding his past ''is'' false, it's claims about his future can also be taken as SelfFulfillingProphecy through feeding the the seeds of doupt in his mind, or even as an outright {{Curse}}.]]


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* MetaphoricalMarriage: Due to the difference in their social statuses, the Knight and Bezel can't marry while they're in Atlantis, [[spoiler: and their relationship ends when she decides to escape, and he initially refuses to go with her.]] They still both consider themselves married to eachother, even over a decade later.


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* TooManyMouths: The Liar's true form is a humanoid with mouths in the place of it's eyes, on it's arms and even fingertips.
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* BringIt: Gwen claims that Frank replied like this, when Flint's rich dad threatened to sue them, after she beat-up Flint and Sean for assaulting her and Michelle. Since Frank is a lawyer himself, he likely meant it.


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* ChildrenAreInnocent: In Chapter 21, Sandra comes home from a Music/BonJovi concert with her T-shirt inside-out, skirt ruffled and a hickey on her neck. Because Ben just finished calming Gwen down, after the incident on her schooltrip to the First Contact Museum, he thinks his mom was attacked too, and only calms down when Carl claims the red spot is just a stain from the cherry soda he accidentally spilt on her. Believing him, Ben innocently answers that he can't even imagine what Gwen would do, if he did that to her, earning a cringe from Carl, and a barely contained laugh from Sandra. Doubly ironic, since this is directly before Ben realises he has non-platonic feelings for Gwen.
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* ShoutOut: In Chapter 4 Instructor Drake uses a GloveSlap to challenge the Knight to a duel, claiming that he had no business interfering with the training of Bezel. The Knight accepts, with smacking him across the [[Film/RobinHoodMenInTights face with his gauntlet]].

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* ArmorPiercingResponce: After the destruction of Lux, Bezel and Numa Wimmet the Speaker of Council of Logos, has a (verbal) fight, with Bezel accusing the council of being no better than the Atlantean royalty, viewing themselves as more important than the people, and making the all the wrong choices. Numa in turn accuses Bezel of many things, chief amongst them being running away from her responsibilities as a princess, pointing out that she could've done a lot of good fighting the corruption of Atlantis from the inside, had she stayed. Bezel doesn't have a proper comeback for that, since she herself has agonised over that choice in the past.

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* ArmorPiercingResponce: ArmorPiercingResponse: After the destruction of Lux, Bezel and Numa Wimmet the Speaker of Council of Logos, has a (verbal) fight, with Bezel accusing the council of being no better than the Atlantean royalty, viewing themselves as more important than the people, and making the all the wrong choices. Numa in turn accuses Bezel of many things, chief amongst them being running away from her responsibilities as a princess, pointing out that she could've done a lot of good fighting the corruption of Atlantis from the inside, had she stayed. Bezel doesn't have a proper comeback for that, since she herself has agonised over that choice in the past.


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* OnlyThePureOfHeart: The Charm of Healing abandons Bezel after [[spoiler: she kills Jorran in self-defense, because those who take a life, don't deserve the gift of it.]]


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* TechnicalPacifist: Bezel hates violence, but recognises the need for self-defense. For this reason she uses an enchanted staff in combat, and with the Knight's guidance she creates a spell dubbed Republsion Blast, that knocks the target away and at worst out, instead of the destructive Incineration Wave. [[spoiler: It's only when her older brother tries to strangle her on a battlefield, that she breaks her commitment towards non-lethal combat.]]
* UniqueItems: Bezel created the Charms in such way, that as long as they exist, they can not be replicated, in order to prevent another one of her inventions from being weaponized.

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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Charmcaster calls the LM-universe's version of Old/Sir George father in chapter 34. Prime-Canon!Charmcaster's father was Spellbinder, and was killed by Addwaitya, and they have no established relationship to George. [[spoiler: Furthermore, it's implied that George is Bezel's unnamed Knight from "The Sorceress and the Knight". Prime-Canon!George had no relation to Prime!Bezel. Nor was he a magic user, with Ascalon being Azmuth's previous "greatest invention" prior to the Omnitrix. Further muddling things, Charmcaster looks nothing like how Boudica is described to look like in this story, but spells that disguise someone' true apperance have appeared in the story. And of course it's also possible, Charmcaster's a distant descendant of Boudica's.]]

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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Charmcaster calls the LM-universe's version of Old/Sir George father in chapter 34. Prime-Canon!Charmcaster's father was Spellbinder, and was killed by Addwaitya, and they have no established relationship to George. [[spoiler: Furthermore, it's implied that George is Bezel's unnamed Knight from "The Sorceress and the Knight". Prime-Canon!George had no relation to Prime!Bezel. Nor was he a magic user, with Ascalon being Azmuth's previous "greatest invention" prior to the Omnitrix. Further muddling things, Charmcaster looks nothing like how Boudica is described to look like in this that story, but spells that disguise someone' true apperance have appeared in the story. it. And of course it's also possible, Charmcaster's a distant descendant of Boudica's.Boudica's, or that she's lying.]]


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* ArmorPiercingResponce: After the destruction of Lux, Bezel and Numa Wimmet the Speaker of Council of Logos, has a (verbal) fight, with Bezel accusing the council of being no better than the Atlantean royalty, viewing themselves as more important than the people, and making the all the wrong choices. Numa in turn accuses Bezel of many things, chief amongst them being running away from her responsibilities as a princess, pointing out that she could've done a lot of good fighting the corruption of Atlantis from the inside, had she stayed. Bezel doesn't have a proper comeback for that, since she herself has agonised over that choice in the past.
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Knight and Bezel's relationship start-out in their childhood, as a chance encounter in a park, where Bezel shares her food with the starving boy, who in turn spends time having fun with her, allowing her to escape the expectations placed upon her even for a single afternoon.

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: The Knight and Bezel's relationship start-out in their childhood, as a chance encounter in a park, where Bezel shares her food with the starving boy, who in turn spends time having fun with her, allowing her to escape the expectations placed upon her even for a single afternoon.



* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Boudica and [[spoiler: Sacha, Danel the Wolf's son grew-up together, because of the close friendship between Danel and Bezel. In fact they're all so close, that when Knight finds them all casually walking-in on him and Bezel having breakfast, he assumes they're family. By the end of the war, when Boudica is 13, and Sacha is 12, they show clear signs of the same affection Knight and Bezel had for eachother at the start of the story.]]

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* ChildhoodFriendRomance: Boudica and [[spoiler: Sacha, Danel the Wolf's son grew-up together, because of the close friendship between Danel and Bezel. In fact they're all so close, that when Knight finds them all casually walking-in on him and Bezel having breakfast, he assumes they're family. By the end of the war, when Boudica is 13, and Sacha is 12, they show clear signs of the same affection the Knight and Bezel had for eachother each other at the start of the story.]]



* DarkAndTroubledPast: Knight grew-up with a StrugglingSingleMother, whom he loved very much, until she's killed in an anti-royal riot, trying to protect him and Princess Bezel, whom he rescued from the initial onslaught.
* DownerEnding: Atlantis and Logos are both destroyed, the survivors either escaped to Ledgerdomain, or are bracing for a nuclear winter in the wake of [[spoiler: Atlantis crashing into what's implied to be Greenland. To top it off, Bezel dies in Knight's arms while he tries to save her by pumping all his remaining magic, eventually freezing himself in time.]]

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: The Knight grew-up with a StrugglingSingleMother, StrugglingSingleMother whom he loved very much, until she's she was killed in an anti-royal riot, riot trying to protect him and Princess Bezel, whom he rescued from the initial onslaught.
* DownerEnding: Atlantis and Logos are both destroyed, the survivors either escaped to Ledgerdomain, Ledgerdomain or are bracing for a nuclear winter in the wake of [[spoiler: Atlantis crashing into what's implied to be Greenland. To top it off, Bezel dies in Knight's arms while he tries to save her by pumping all his remaining magic, eventually freezing himself in time.]]



* GreaterScopeVillain: Part of why Knight refuses to abandon Atlantis, despite semi-openly despising King Desmond and Supreme Commander Jorran (Bezel's older brothers), and the extremely inequal status quo they try to uphold, is that he believes that extraterrestrial aliens and interdimensional demons pose a far greater danger to humanity, and Atlantis and her Mage Knights are the only forces capable of protecting Terra from them.

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* GreaterScopeVillain: Part of why the Knight refuses to abandon Atlantis, despite semi-openly despising King Desmond and Supreme Commander Jorran (Bezel's older brothers), brothers) and the extremely inequal status quo they try to uphold, is that he believes that extraterrestrial aliens and interdimensional demons pose a far greater danger to humanity, and Atlantis and her Mage Knights are the only forces capable of protecting Terra from them.



** [[spoiler: Bezel herself ends-up dying in The Knight's arms, after his Lieutenants, who view him as the new rightful King, interfere with their honor duel. Knowing he wouldn't be able to kill her, but incorrectly assuming she would kill him, they drug him, and face her themselves. Since at this point Bezel has lost all of her Charms, she's exhausted, heartbroken and outnumbered, she takes a mortal wound to her back.]]

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** [[spoiler: Bezel herself ends-up dying in The the Knight's arms, after his Lieutenants, who view him as the new rightful King, interfere with their honor duel. Knowing he wouldn't be able to kill her, but incorrectly assuming she would kill him, they drug him, and face her themselves. Since at this point Bezel has lost all of her Charms, she's exhausted, heartbroken and outnumbered, she takes a mortal wound to her back.]]
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* AnimalMotifs: Danel is consitently refered to as "The Wolf", because of his strong belief that working together even the weak and unfortunate can overcome massive obstacles, and defeat powerful foes, much like a pack of wolves.

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* AnimalMotifs: Danel is consitently refered consistently referred to as "The Wolf", because of his strong belief that working together even the weak and unfortunate can overcome massive obstacles, obstacles and defeat powerful foes, much like a pack of wolves.



* AntiMagic: Danel's crew and later the Logosian army employ smokegrenades containing some sort of gasesous drug, that temporarly inhibits the mana use of those who inhale it.

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* AntiMagic: Danel's crew and later the Logosian army employ smokegrenades smoke grenades containing some sort of gasesous gaseous drug, that temporarly temporarily inhibits the mana use of those who inhale it.



* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Knight and Bezel's relationship start-out in their childhood, as a chance encounter in a park, where Bezel shares her food with the starving boy, who inturn spends time having fun with her, allowing her to escape the expectations placed upon her even for a single afternoon.
* CainAndAbel: [[spoiler: Bezel kills her older brother, Jorran in self-defence, while he's trying to suffocate her with his bare (and horrifically burnt) hands.]]
* TheCassandra: Bezel's research into the leylines opens up a myriad of possibilities, but the Royal Alchemists consistently belittle her, [[spoiler: then start to weaponise her research, behind her back. She also accurately predicts in the second year of the war, that if Atlantis and Logos continue to abuse the leylines, it will within the next year result in the complete collapse of the planet's mana-network, but neither side listens to her.]]

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Knight and Bezel's relationship start-out in their childhood, as a chance encounter in a park, where Bezel shares her food with the starving boy, who inturn in turn spends time having fun with her, allowing her to escape the expectations placed upon her even for a single afternoon.
* CainAndAbel: [[spoiler: Bezel kills her older brother, brother Jorran in self-defence, while he's trying to suffocate her with his bare (and horrifically burnt) hands.]]
* TheCassandra: Bezel's research into the leylines opens up a myriad of possibilities, but the Royal Alchemists consistently belittle her, [[spoiler: then start to weaponise weaponize her research, behind her back. She also accurately predicts in the second year of the war, that if Atlantis and Logos continue to abuse the leylines, it will within the next year result in the complete collapse of the planet's mana-network, mana-network within the next year, but neither side listens to her.]]



* CombatPragmatist: Knight becomes one of the best Mage Knights by embracing this, and refusing to use HonorBeforeReason in combat. This allows him to easily win an honor duel with the best duelist of the Royal Guard, at the age of 14.

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* CombatPragmatist: The Knight becomes one of the best Mage Knights by embracing this, and refusing to use HonorBeforeReason in combat. This allows him to easily win an honor duel with the best duelist of the Royal Guard, at the age of 14.



* DarkAndTroubledPast: Knight grew-up with a StrugglingSingleMother, whom he loved very much, until she's killed in an anti-royal riot, trying to protect him and Princess Bezel, whom he rescued from the intial onslaught.
* DownerEnding: Atlantis and Logos are both destroyed, the survivors either escaped to Ledgerdomain, or are bracing for a nuclear winter in the wake of [[spoiler: Atlantis crashing into what's implied to be Greenland, Bezel's dying in Knight's arms, while he tries to save her by pumping all his remaining magic, eventually freezing himself in time.]]

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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Knight grew-up with a StrugglingSingleMother, whom he loved very much, until she's killed in an anti-royal riot, trying to protect him and Princess Bezel, whom he rescued from the intial initial onslaught.
* DownerEnding: Atlantis and Logos are both destroyed, the survivors either escaped to Ledgerdomain, or are bracing for a nuclear winter in the wake of [[spoiler: Atlantis crashing into what's implied to be Greenland, Bezel's dying Greenland. To top it off, Bezel dies in Knight's arms, arms while he tries to save her by pumping all his remaining magic, eventually freezing himself in time.]]



* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: Knight is never refered to by any name, instead, his called Boy, Squire and Knight both in-universe and in-narration. Although he picks-up the nickname "Bezel's Knight".

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* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The Knight is never refered referred to by any name, instead, his he is called Boy, Squire and Knight both in-universe and in-narration. Although he picks-up the nickname "Bezel's Knight".



** Due his DarkAndTroubledPast, Knight is everybit as distrustful of anti-establishment factions, as he is disdainful of the establishment. [[spoiler: This causes a rift between him and Bezel, when she decides to join the Adherents of Logos, leaving him embittered, and ultimately his unresolved anger sinks any chance of repairing their relationship.]]

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** Due to his DarkAndTroubledPast, The Knight is everybit every bit as distrustful of anti-establishment factions, as he is disdainful of the establishment. [[spoiler: This causes a rift between him and Bezel, when she decides to join the Adherents of Logos, leaving him embittered, and ultimately his unresolved anger sinks any chance of repairing their relationship.]]



* GreaterScopeVillain: Part of why Knight refuses to adandon Atlantis, despite semi-openly despising King Desmond and Supreme Commander Jorran (Bezel's older brothers), and the extremely inequal status quo they try to uphold, is that he believes that extraterrestial aliens and interdimensional demons pose a far greater danger to humanity, and Atlantis and her Mage Knights are the only forces capable of protecting Terra from them.
* LadyAndKnight: For most of the story Bezel and her unnamed knight follow this dynamic, going through stages of PuppyLove when they first meet, CourtlyLove between Bezel taking him as her personal bodyguard when she's 13, until the hormons kick-in when she's 15, and it becomes a fullblown BodyguardCrush.

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* GreaterScopeVillain: Part of why Knight refuses to adandon abandon Atlantis, despite semi-openly despising King Desmond and Supreme Commander Jorran (Bezel's older brothers), and the extremely inequal status quo they try to uphold, is that he believes that extraterrestial extraterrestrial aliens and interdimensional demons pose a far greater danger to humanity, and Atlantis and her Mage Knights are the only forces capable of protecting Terra from them.
* LadyAndKnight: For most of the story Bezel and her unnamed knight follow this dynamic, going through stages of PuppyLove when they first meet, CourtlyLove between Bezel taking him as her personal bodyguard when she's 13, until the hormons hormones kick-in when she's 15, and it becomes a fullblown BodyguardCrush.



** [[spoiler: Bezel herself ends-up dying in Knight's arm, after his Lietunants, who view him as the new rightful King, interfere with their honor duel, and knowing he wouldn't be able to kill her, but incorrectly assuming she would kill him, they drug him, and face her themselves. Since at this point Bezel lost all of her Charms, she's exhausted, heartbroken and outnumbered, she takes a mortal wound to her back.]]
* MurderTheHypotenuse: Knight believes he does this by killing [[spoiler: Danel the Wolf, who he thinks Bezel got together weeks after she ran off on him. Danel with his LastWords reveals to him that Boudica is Knight's daugter, not his.]]
* OnlyTheChosenMayWield: Downplayed. Ascalon is an EmpathicWeapon, that burns anyone it dislikes, if they try to wield it, but it can be beaten into submission by someone magically strong enough. [[spoiler: Although doing so is dangerous, as Jorran found-out, when it rebelled against him, while he fought Bezel (whom it liked) with it.]]
* PatchworkKids: Boudica, [[spoiler: Bezel and Knight's daughter]] has her mother's face, her father's dark hair, and heterochromatic eyes one green and one grayish blue from each of them.

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** [[spoiler: Bezel herself ends-up dying in The Knight's arm, arms, after his Lietunants, Lieutenants, who view him as the new rightful King, interfere with their honor duel, and knowing duel. Knowing he wouldn't be able to kill her, but incorrectly assuming she would kill him, they drug him, and face her themselves. Since at this point Bezel has lost all of her Charms, she's exhausted, heartbroken and outnumbered, she takes a mortal wound to her back.]]
* MurderTheHypotenuse: The Knight believes he does this by killing [[spoiler: Danel the Wolf, who he thinks Bezel got together weeks after she ran off on him. Danel with his LastWords reveals to him that Boudica is Knight's daugter, daughter, not his.]]
* OnlyTheChosenMayWield: Downplayed. Ascalon is an EmpathicWeapon, EmpathicWeapon that burns anyone it dislikes, if they try to wield it, but it can be beaten into submission by someone magically strong enough. [[spoiler: Although doing so is dangerous, as Jorran found-out, when it rebelled against him, while he fought Bezel (whom it liked) with it.]]
* PatchworkKids: Boudica, [[spoiler: Bezel and The Knight's daughter]] has her mother's face, her father's dark hair, and heterochromatic eyes - one green and one grayish blue from each of them.



* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler: Because Bezel didn't tell Knight she was pregnant before escaping from Atlantis, when they reunite 10 years later, and Knight finds out she has a pre-teen daughter, and that Danel and his son has free access to her home, he assumes Bezel moved-on from their relationship rather quickly, which breaks his heart. He nastily lashes out at her, before she could explain, then sells out the secret of her Charms to Atlantis's AssInAmbassador, who attempts to assasinate her along with the entire Logosian leadership, and the only reason she and Danel survived, was the Charm of Healing (Ressurection in the Ben 10 canon) helping her to recover in time to save Danel. This ends-up triggering the catastrophic war between Atlantis and Logos, and permanently ruining any chance of reconciliation between them.]]
* PowerGlows: Mages possess auras, the color of which cover the spectrum of a rainbow, growing in power from red to violet, although blue is the most powerful human mages usually possess. [[spoiler: Because of this, when Bezel reveals her's aura has reached pink, it causes quite a stir in the royal court. While using the all of the Charms her aura glows [[GoldenSuperMode gold]], in a CallBack to Future!Gwendolyn's aura in "[[Ben10S3E1BenTenThousand Ben 10000]]".]]
* RebelliousPrincess: Bezel hates violence, but as royalty, she's expected to excell at combat magic. She's an extermely talented artificer and runecraftswoman, and dedicated researcher, who revolutionised the way magic is used, but because of her gender, her skills are first dismissed, then her inventions are turned into weapons behind her back, which causes her to reject her title, escape from Atlantis and join with the Adherents of Logos.

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* PoorCommunicationKills: [[spoiler: Because Bezel didn't tell Knight she was pregnant before escaping from Atlantis, when they reunite 10 years later, later and The Knight finds out she has a pre-teen daughter, and that Danel and his son has free access to her home, he assumes Bezel moved-on from their relationship rather quickly, which breaks his heart. He nastily lashes out at her, her before she could can explain, then sells out the secret of her Charms to Atlantis's AssInAmbassador, who attempts to assasinate assassinate her along with the entire Logosian leadership, and the leadership. The only reason she and Danel survived, was survives is that the Charm of Healing (Ressurection (Resurrection in the Ben 10 canon) helping helps her to recover in time to save Danel. This ends-up triggering the catastrophic war between Atlantis and Logos, Logos and permanently ruining any chance of reconciliation between them.]]
* PowerGlows: Mages possess auras, the color of which cover the spectrum of a rainbow, growing in power from red to violet, although blue is the most powerful human mages usually possess. [[spoiler: Because of this, when Bezel reveals her's her aura has reached pink, it causes quite a stir in the royal court. While using the all of the Charms her aura glows [[GoldenSuperMode gold]], in a CallBack to Future!Gwendolyn's aura in "[[Ben10S3E1BenTenThousand Ben 10000]]".]]
* RebelliousPrincess: Bezel hates violence, but as royalty, she's expected to excell excel at combat magic. She's an extermely extremely talented artificer and artificer, runecraftswoman, and dedicated researcher, researcher who revolutionised revolutionized the way magic is used, but used. Yet because of her gender, her skills are first dismissed, then dismissed before her inventions are turned into weapons behind her back, which causes her to reject her title, escape from Atlantis and join with the Adherents of Logos.



* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: Knight's defeat [[spoiler: of The Liar, an interdimensional demon of the highest (Code Violet) threat level, as a squire practically fresh-out the Academy]], is such a feat, that both him and Bezel can use it multiple time as a tool of intimidation.
* SelfMadeMan: Knight goes from impoverished boy, to royal bodyguard, and eventually highest ranking general of Atlantis.

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* RememberWhenYouBlewUpASun: The Knight's defeat [[spoiler: of The Liar, an interdimensional demon of the highest (Code Violet) threat level, as a squire practically fresh-out the Academy]], is such a feat, that both him he and Bezel can use it multiple time as a tool of intimidation.
* SelfMadeMan: The Knight goes from impoverished boy, to royal bodyguard, and eventually highest ranking general of Atlantis.



** Even 12 years after his one and only relationship ended, when one of his Lietunants tries to seduce him, [[spoiler: Knight still can't feel even a twinge of sexual desire towards her, because she's not Bezel.]]
** [[spoiler: Bezel herself was never able to move on from their relationship either, althought, when they first reunite post-TimeSkip, Knight mistakenly assumes that she got together with Danel, even thinking that Boudica is Danel's child.]]

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** Even 12 years after his one and only relationship ended, when one of his Lietunants Lieutenants tries to seduce him, [[spoiler: Knight still can't feel even a twinge of sexual desire towards her, because she's not Bezel.]]
** [[spoiler: Bezel herself was never able to move on from their relationship either, althought, although, when they first reunite post-TimeSkip, The Knight mistakenly assumes that she got together with Danel, Danel and even thinking thinks that Boudica is Danel's child.]]



* SmallRoleBigImpact: The Liar, an EldritchAbomination from another dimension appears in the middle of part of Chapter 3, [[spoiler: and is defeated and banished for 100 years by Knight (then still just a Squire), after it kills his entire squad]]. While it never appears again, it's lies keep haunting him well into his adulthood, contributing to his trust issues and ultimately to the ruin of his relationship with Bezel, and the catastrophic war.
* StarcrossedLovers: Bezel and Knight are evetually torn apart by the corruption of Atlantis.

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* SmallRoleBigImpact: The Liar, an EldritchAbomination from another dimension appears in the middle of part of Chapter 3, [[spoiler: and is defeated and banished for 100 years by the Knight (then still just a Squire), after it kills his entire squad]]. While it never appears again, it's its lies keep haunting him well into his adulthood, contributing to his trust issues and ultimately to the ruin of his relationship with Bezel, and the catastrophic war.
* StarcrossedLovers: Bezel and Knight are evetually eventually torn apart by the corruption of Atlantis.



* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: [[spoiler: After Knight commits regicide in a futile attempt to stop King Desmond from firing the Mana Canon at Logos's capital Lux, his Lietunants start to hail him as the new King. He rejects it, by destroying the throne, but his men desperate for a leader don't accept his rejection.]]


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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: [[spoiler: After the Knight commits regicide in a futile attempt to stop King Desmond from firing the Mana Canon at Logos's capital Lux, his Lietunants Lieutenants start to hail him as the new King. He rejects it, it by destroying the throne, but his men desperate for a leader don't accept his rejection.]]

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