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The story is available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/ SufficientVelocity]], Sufficient Velocity]], [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.352491/ SpaceBattles]], and [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ fanfiction.net]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [[{{Fanfic/Outcry}} LD1449]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
The story is also available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/ SV]] and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.352491/ SB]].
The story is also available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/ SV]] and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.352491/ SB]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by {{Fanfic/Outcry LD1449}}. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by {{Fanfic/Outcry LD1449}}.[[{{Fanfic/Outcry}} LD1449]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [[Fanfic/Outcry LD1449]].{{Fanfic/Outcry LD1449}}. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [[FanFic/Outcry [=LD1449=]]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [[FanFic/Outcry [=LD1449=]]].[[Fanfic/Outcry LD1449]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [[FanFic/Outcry LD1449]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [[FanFic/Outcry LD1449]].[=LD1449=]]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [FanFic/Outcry LD1449]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [FanFic/Outcry LD1449].[[FanFic/Outcry LD1449]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by [=LD1449=].[FanFic/Outcry LD1449]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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* AlternateUniverse: In many ways. The people that Naruto meets in the new timeline are the same, for the most part, but so many points of divergence exist from what Naruto remembers that his foreknowledge is basically useless. Even certain characters' abilities are different; for example, the Uchiha clan didn't inherit the Sharingan, like none of the Senju inherited the Mokuton in the original timeline.
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* AlternateUniverse: In many ways. The people that Naruto meets in the new timeline are the same, for the most part, but so many points of divergence exist from what Naruto remembers that his foreknowledge is basically useless. Even certain characters' abilities are different; for example, none of Madara's descendants activated the Uchiha clan didn't inherit the Sharingan, Sharingan [[spoiler: except for Itachi]], like none of the Senju inherited the Mokuton in the original timeline.
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* ActionGirl: Ryoko and Kyofu, Naruto's genin teammates under Orochimaru. Sakura, Tsunade, and [[spoiler:Akane]] as well.
* AdaptationalHeroism: In the new timeline, Orochimaru never left Konoha.
* AdaptationalHeroism: In the new timeline, Orochimaru never left Konoha.
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* ActionGirl: Ryoko and Kyofu, Naruto's genin teammates under Orochimaru. Sakura, Tsunade, and [[spoiler:Akane]] as well.
Pretty much every named female character, but this is Naruto; it's expected.
* AdaptationalHeroism: In the new timeline, Orochimaru never left Konoha. [[spoiler:Itachi is successfully talked down from massacring the Uchiha and becomes a Konoha hunter-nin instead.]]
* AdaptationalHeroism: In the new timeline, Orochimaru never left Konoha. [[spoiler:Itachi is successfully talked down from massacring the Uchiha and becomes a Konoha hunter-nin instead.]]
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*GenderFlip: Haku is a girl in this story because the character was originally intended to be female in canon. The other two, [[spoiler:Itachi]] and [[spoiler:Bee]], come completely out of left field.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by Creator/LD1449.[=LD1449=]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by Tropers/LD1449. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by Tropers/LD1449.Creator/LD1449. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by LD1449.Tropers/LD1449. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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* BadFuture: The bad future, in which Tobi and Kabuto's Edo Tensei army kills everyone except Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. However, this setting only exists in the first chapter because Naruto immediately leaves that timeline.
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* DayOfTheJackboot: The bad future, in which Tobi and Kabuto's Edo Tensei army kills everyone except Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. However, this setting only exists in the first chapter because Naruto immediately leaves that timeline.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by LD 1449.LD1449. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Dan, Sarutobi, [[spoiler:the entire Uchiha clan]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: Dan, Sarutobi, and [[spoiler:the entire Uchiha clan]].clan. Naruto successfully convinces Itachi to not commit familicide this time around]].
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* DeathByAdaptation: Jiraiya (before the events of the story), [[spoiler:Onoki]], [[spoiler:Neji]], [[spoiler:Shino]], [[spoiler:Kiba]], and [[spoiler:Kurenai]].
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* DeathByAdaptation: Jiraiya (before the events of the story), [[spoiler:Onoki]], [[spoiler:Neji]], [[spoiler:Shino]], [[spoiler:Kiba]], and [[spoiler:Kurenai]].[[spoiler:Kurenai]].
** [[spoiler:While Neji did die in canon, here he dies much earlier, right after the Chuunin Exams.]]
** [[spoiler:While Neji did die in canon, here he dies much earlier, right after the Chuunin Exams.]]
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* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Deconstructed. Naruto tries, but even his best isn't enough to save everyone.
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* CoolBigSis: [[spoiler:Itachi]] to Naruto.
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* ActionGirl: Ryoko and Kyofu, Naruto's genin teammates under Orochimaru. Sakura, Tsunade, and [[spoiler:Akane]] as well.
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* ForWantOfANail: Averted. The differences in the new timeline cannot be traced to anything Naruto has done or to any single point of divergence.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction Fic]] by LD 1449. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. Oh, and he doesn't have the Kyuubi any more. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
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* AlternateUniverse: Invoked heavily. The people that Naruto meets in the new timeline are the same, for the most part, but so many points of divergence exist from what Naruto remembers that his foreknowledge is basically useless. Even certain characters' abilities are different; for example, the Uchiha clan didn't inherit the Sharingan, like none of the Senju inherited the Mokuton in the original timeline.
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* AlternateUniverse: Invoked heavily.In many ways. The people that Naruto meets in the new timeline are the same, for the most part, but so many points of divergence exist from what Naruto remembers that his foreknowledge is basically useless. Even certain characters' abilities are different; for example, the Uchiha clan didn't inherit the Sharingan, like none of the Senju inherited the Mokuton in the original timeline.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Naruto rigs himself with a seal to enhance his absorption of nature chakra and accidentally gives himself water and earth affinities as a result, as well as the ability to use [[spoiler:Mokuton]]. Subverted since he sacrifices Kurama to allow him to travel through time.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Naruto rigs himself with a seal to enhance his absorption of nature chakra and accidentally gives himself water and earth affinities as a result, as well as the ability to use [[spoiler:Mokuton]]. Subverted since because he sacrifices sacrificed Kurama to allow him to so that he could travel through back in time.
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**[[spoiler:Tsunade's daughter, Akane, has the same super-strength as her mother due to the Gobi modifying her chakra coils, since she's his Jinchuuriki. And Jinchuuriki mini-Tsunade is just as scary as it sounds.]]
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* AlternateUniverse: Invoked heavily. The people that Naruto meets in the new timeline are the same, for the most part, but so many points of divergence exist from what Naruto remembers that his foreknowledge is basically useless. Even certain characters' abilities are different; for example, the Uchiha clan didn't inherit the Sharingan, like none of the Senju inherited the Mokuton in the original timeline.
* DayOfTheJackboot: The bad future, in which Tobi and Kabuto's Edo Tensei army kills everyone except Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. However, this setting only exists in the first chapter because Naruto immediately leaves that timeline.
* DayOfTheJackboot: The bad future, in which Tobi and Kabuto's Edo Tensei army kills everyone except Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke. However, this setting only exists in the first chapter because Naruto immediately leaves that timeline.
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* DeathByAdaptation: Jiraiya (before the events of the story), [[spoiler:Onoki]], [[spoiler:Neji]], [[spoiler:Shino]], and [[spoiler:Kiba]].
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* DeathByAdaptation: Jiraiya (before the events of the story), [[spoiler:Onoki]], [[spoiler:Neji]], [[spoiler:Shino]], [[spoiler:Kiba]], and [[spoiler:Kiba]].[[spoiler:Kurenai]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: In the new timeline, Orochimaru never left Konoha.
* DeathByAdaptation: Jiraiya (before the events of the story), [[spoiler:Onoki]], [[spoiler:Neji]], [[spoiler:Shino]], and [[spoiler:Kiba]].
*SparedByTheAdaptation: Dan, Sarutobi, [[spoiler:the entire Uchiha clan]].
* DeathByAdaptation: Jiraiya (before the events of the story), [[spoiler:Onoki]], [[spoiler:Neji]], [[spoiler:Shino]], and [[spoiler:Kiba]].
*SparedByTheAdaptation: Dan, Sarutobi, [[spoiler:the entire Uchiha clan]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto fanfiction by LD 1449 that upsets several of the tropes surrounding Naruto time travel stories, most significantly by applying Deconstruction and [[RealityEnsues Reality Ensues]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers.
The story is also available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/ SV]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a Naruto fanfiction by LD 1449 that upsets several of the tropes surrounding Naruto time travel stories, most significantly by applying [[PeggySue Peggy Sue]] [[DeconstructionFic Deconstruction and [[RealityEnsues Reality Ensues]].Fic]] by LD 1449. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers. \n\n Oh, and he doesn't have the Kyuubi any more. Saving his friends is going to be a lot of work.
The story is also available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/SV]].SV]] and [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.352491/ SB]].
The story is also available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a [[Naruto]] Naruto fanfiction by LD 1449 that upsets several of the tropes surrounding Naruto time travel stories, most significantly by applying [[Deconstruction]] Deconstruction and [[RealityEnsues Reality Ensues]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers.
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* [=SuperpowerLottery=]: Naruto rigs himself with a seal to enhance his absorption of nature chakra and accidentally gives himself water and earth affinities as a result, as well as the ability to use [[spoiler:Mokuton]]. Subverted since he sacrifices Kurama to allow him to travel through time.
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* [=SuperpowerLottery=]: SuperpowerLottery: Naruto rigs himself with a seal to enhance his absorption of nature chakra and accidentally gives himself water and earth affinities as a result, as well as the ability to use [[spoiler:Mokuton]]. Subverted since he sacrifices Kurama to allow him to travel through time.time.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9834391/1/ Legacy Undone]] is a [[Naruto]] fanfiction by LD 1449 that upsets several of the tropes surrounding Naruto time travel stories, most significantly by applying [[Deconstruction]] and [[RealityEnsues Reality Ensues]]. The story begins with Tobi winning the Fourth Shinobi World War and Naruto sending himself back in time. However, when he wakes up, very little is how he remembers.
The story is also available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/ SV]].
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!! Tropes contained in Legacy Undone:
* [=SuperpowerLottery=]: Naruto rigs himself with a seal to enhance his absorption of nature chakra and accidentally gives himself water and earth affinities as a result, as well as the ability to use [[spoiler:Mokuton]]. Subverted since he sacrifices Kurama to allow him to travel through time.
The story is also available on [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/legacy-undone-naruto.21528/ SV]].
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!! Tropes contained in Legacy Undone:
* [=SuperpowerLottery=]: Naruto rigs himself with a seal to enhance his absorption of nature chakra and accidentally gives himself water and earth affinities as a result, as well as the ability to use [[spoiler:Mokuton]]. Subverted since he sacrifices Kurama to allow him to travel through time.
