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Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind for service in the Time Space Administration Bureau. And that includes friends such as Lelouch and Nunally, the exiled prince and princess sent as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess. He suddenly encounters a crashed truck driven by Eleven terrorists that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Things go even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and see his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
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Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind for in service in of the Time Space Administration Bureau. And that That includes friends such as Lelouch and Nunally, the exiled prince and princess sent to Japan as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess. He suddenly encounters a crashed truck driven by by, Eleven terrorists terrorists, that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Things go even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and see sees his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
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Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the war against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device that identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrow his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau. And that doesn't help when an international terrorist organization called LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent investigate.
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrow his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau. And that doesn't help when an international terrorist organization called LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent investigate.
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Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they They are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the war against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device that identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrow his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau.And that doesn't help when Worse yet, an international terrorist organization called LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent to investigate.
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrow his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau.
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The fanfiction was released on Fanfiction.net by sephiroth12285, found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9708917/1/Kings-of-Revolution here]] and recently edited on Sufficient Velocity, also found [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kings-of-revolution-mgln-x-cg.19260/ here]].
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The fanfiction was released on Fanfiction.net by sephiroth12285, found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9708917/1/Kings-of-Revolution here]] here]], and recently edited on Sufficient Velocity, also found Velocity [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kings-of-revolution-mgln-x-cg.19260/ here]].
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Deconstructed. The Aces are forced to follow this policy, which means watching thousands of their fellow countrymen getting killed by their Britannian oppressors. They can't even bring any of them to TSAB worlds thanks to the Mandarin. And it's already caused trouble with their own friends turning on them. To state which ones, Lelouch (unknowingly) and [[spoiler:Suzuka]].
* ArchEnemy: Ginga to Zero after her first loss.
** The Mandarin to [[spoiler:Jail]].
* ArchEnemy: Ginga to Zero after her first loss.
** The Mandarin to [[spoiler:Jail]].
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Deconstructed. The Aces are forced to follow this policy, which means watching thousands of their fellow countrymen getting killed by their Britannian oppressors. They can't even bring any of them to TSAB worlds thanks to the Mandarin. And it's already caused trouble It gets worse with their own friends turning on them. To state which ones, Lelouch (unknowingly) and [[spoiler:Suzuka]].
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* ArchEnemy: Zero to Gingato Zero after her first loss.
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* AscendedExtra: Colonel Kusakabe of the Japan Liberation Front. The same one who ordered the hotel hijacking from Lake Kawaguchi. Now, he's a major member of Logos with his own Earth-made Battle Device.
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* AscendedExtra: Colonel Kusakabe of the Japan Liberation Front. The same one who ordered the hotel hijacking from Lake Kawaguchi. Now, he's a major member of Logos LOGOS with his own Earth-made Battle Device.
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* BloodKnight: Gray, who was excommunicated as a result.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's willing to take the high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
* BreakTheBadass: The Aces and Wolkenritter sure have their bad days upon fighting LOGOS, but Nanoha suffers the worst of it, seeing all of her students get slaughtered by LOGOS and [[spoiler:knowing Suzuka is a terrorist.]]
* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:Zafira]], thanks to stopping the landslide at Narita.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's willing to take the high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
* BreakTheBadass: The Aces and Wolkenritter sure have their bad days upon fighting LOGOS, but Nanoha suffers the worst of it, seeing all of her students get slaughtered by LOGOS and [[spoiler:knowing Suzuka is a terrorist.]]
* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:Zafira]], thanks to stopping the landslide at Narita.
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* BloodKnight: Gray, who was excommunicated from the Sankt Church as a result.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's willing to take the moral high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
* BreakTheBadass: The Aces and Wolkenritter sure have their bad days upon fighting LOGOS, but Nanoha suffers the worst ofit, seeing all of her students get it,[[spoiler:seeing everyone she knows either getting slaughtered by LOGOS and [[spoiler:knowing Suzuka is a terrorist.or becoming terrorists.]]
* BuriedAlive:[[spoiler:Zafira]], [[spoiler:Zafira, thanks to stopping the landslide at Narita.]]
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's willing to take the moral high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
* BreakTheBadass: The Aces and Wolkenritter sure have their bad days upon fighting LOGOS, but Nanoha suffers the worst of
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** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.]] Any three nukes!
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** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs [[PersonOfMassDestruction a ''three'' child nuke.]] Any three nukes!nukes.]]
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: Peter states that he's working with the Black Knights and fighting the TSAB because [[spoiler:the latter is responsible for the Mandarin's creation.]]
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* CreateYourOwnVillain: Peter states that he's working with the Black Knights and fighting the TSAB because [[spoiler:the the latter is responsible for the Mandarin's creation.]]
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** In a concurrent battle, the Wyvern Drones mowing down an entire Britannian force, leaving no survivors.
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** In a concurrent battle, the Wyvern Drones mowing down an entire Britannian force, leaving no survivors. [[spoiler:Or so they thought.]]
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* DavidVersusGoliath: A RagtagBandofMisfits going against TheEmpire, a NebulousEvilOrganization, ''and'' the SpaceNavy.
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* DavidVersusGoliath: A RagtagBandofMisfits UpToEleven with a RagtagBandOfMisfits going against TheEmpire, a NebulousEvilOrganization, ''and'' the SpaceNavy.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: For the ideals and world of Nanoha. Instead of a world where EverybodyLives and EarnYourHappyEnding, they're now in a place where AnyoneCanDie with the usual BittersweetEnding found in any ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' franchise.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: For the ideals and world of Nanoha. Instead of a world where EverybodyLives and EarnYourHappyEnding, they're now in a place where AnyoneCanDie with the usual BittersweetEnding found in any a typical ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' franchise.
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Kusakabe taunts the [[TheDreaded Blazing General]] by insulting her mistress and Nanoha, then proceeds to fight her to a par and play dirty to knock her down.
* DownerBeginning: For the Nanoha section when Nanoha's students get slaughtered by the Mandarin's weapons, Signum being beaten by one of his commander through underhanded tactics, and the entire LOGOS force getting away. And that excludes the Mandarin broadcasting his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to the TSAB and launching his rebellion.
* DownerBeginning: For the Nanoha section when Nanoha's students get slaughtered by the Mandarin's weapons, Signum being beaten by one of his commander through underhanded tactics, and the entire LOGOS force getting away. And that excludes the Mandarin broadcasting his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to the TSAB and launching his rebellion.
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Kusakabe taunts the [[TheDreaded Blazing General]] by insulting her mistress and Nanoha, then proceeds to fight her to a par and play dirty to knock her down.
* DownerBeginning: Forthe Nanoha section when Nanoha's Nanoha. Her students get slaughtered by the Mandarin's weapons, weapons. Signum being gets beaten by one of his commander commanders through underhanded tactics, and the entire tactics. The LOGOS force getting away. And that excludes the Mandarin broadcasting gets away and their leader broadcasts his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to the TSAB and launching his rebellion.TSAB.
* DownerBeginning: For
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*** Noting about Wyverns really give people chills about fighting as TSAB Mage [[spoiler:or a Britannian soldier]].
*** Noting about Wyverns really give people chills about fighting as TSAB Mage [[spoiler:or a Britannian soldier]].
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*** Aside canon ones like the Aces, Gray is labeled as such. Signum herself had trouble with him.
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*** Standard TSAB Mages are ''terrified'' of the Black Knights as a whole because of him actually.
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*** Standard TSAB Mages are ''terrified'' of the Black Knights as a whole because of him actually.his achievements.
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* ETGaveUsWifi: Accroding to Verossa's investigations, [[spoiler:as well as Peter and Graham, the Mandarin and his allies are responsible for Britannia's rise to power, including the development of Knightmare Frames.]]
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* ETGaveUsWifi: Accroding According to Verossa's investigations, [[spoiler:as well as Peter and Graham, the Mandarin and his allies are responsible for Britannia's rise to power, including the development of Knightmare Frames.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: More of "second chapter spoiler", but you know changes are gonna spike upon [[spoiler:Quattro stealing the Lancelot.]]
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* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: More of "second chapter spoiler", but you know changes the rails are gonna spike tear off upon [[spoiler:Quattro stealing the Lancelot.]]
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* {{Foil}}: Not by people (well, ''maybe''), but by devices. Raising Heart is a GlassCannon who concentrates on [[MemeticMutation maximum power]], Abyss Soul is a FragileSpeedster who uses illusions and precision.
* GenreBlind: Most of Time-Space Bureau have no idea how ''real'' and ''effective'' terrorist organizations operate.
* GenreBlind: Most of Time-Space Bureau have no idea how ''real'' and ''effective'' terrorist organizations operate.
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* {{Foil}}: Not by people (well, ''maybe''), but by devices. Raising Heart is a GlassCannon who concentrates on [[MemeticMutation maximum power]], Abyss Soul is fit for a FragileSpeedster who uses illusions and precision.
* GenreBlind: Most ofTime-Space the Bureau have no idea how ''real'' and ''effective'' terrorist organizations operate.
* GenreBlind: Most of
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** HisNameIs: [[spoiler:Despite not specifying, he mention about the Mandarin and the Britannian Royal Family cooperating with each other.]]
* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes this one by losing a entire Britannian force, [[spoiler: having the Lancelot stolen under him and his experiments going public, destroying his Viceroy career.]] Cornelia even wondered if he'll even avoid being disinherited.
* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes this one by losing a entire Britannian force, [[spoiler: having the Lancelot stolen under him and his experiments going public, destroying his Viceroy career.]] Cornelia even wondered if he'll even avoid being disinherited.
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** HisNameIs: [[spoiler:Despite not specifying, he mention mentions about the Mandarin and the Britannian Royal Family cooperating with each other.]]
* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes thisone by losing a an entire Britannian force, [[spoiler: having the Lancelot stolen under him and his experiments going public, destroying his Viceroy career.]] [[LampshadeHanging Cornelia even wondered wonders if he'll even avoid being disinherited.]]
* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes this
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* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate within Britannia is described to be this. [[spoiler:It's property of LOGOS.]]
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* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate within Britannia is described to be this.as one. [[spoiler:It's property of LOGOS.]]
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* MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses it'' upon sighting TSAB agents.
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* MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses it'' upon sighting fighting TSAB agents.
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* OffTheRails: The first half of R1 is played with a couple of significant changes including [[spoiler:Clovis's miserable survival]]. That changes after Narita when [[spoiler:Cornelia gets captured by the Black Knights.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you steal the Lancelot from him.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you steal the Lancelot from him.]]
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* OffTheRails: The first half of R1 is played with a couple of significant minor changes including [[spoiler:Clovis's miserable survival]]. That changes after Narita divergence splits further when [[spoiler:Cornelia gets captured by the Black Knights.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If Lloyd reacting to[[spoiler:seeing Nina [[spoiler:Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you steal the Lancelot from him.Lancelot.]]
* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: If Lloyd reacting to
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* PragmaticVillainy: If Verossa's investigations are correct, [[spoiler:which they are]], one can reverse engineer interdimensional technology to start a huge company on an undeveloped planet. As long as they hide behind the non-interference policy of the Bureau, one can automatically accumulate manpower and resources for one to wage war against bigger powers.
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* PragmaticVillainy: If Verossa's investigations are correct, [[spoiler:which they are]], one can reverse engineer interdimensional technology to start a huge company on an undeveloped planet. As long as they hide behind the non-interference policy of the Bureau, one can automatically accumulate manpower and resources for one to wage war against bigger powers.
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** Instead of executing Dietard for publishing a newspaper referring to [[spoiler:Cornelia's capture]], Schneizel has him released for the sake of damage control and to possibly discredit him.
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** Instead of executing Dietard for publishing a newspaper referring to [[spoiler:Cornelia's capture]], Schneizel has him released for the sake of damage control and to possibly discredit him.
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** On second note, terrorist or rebel groups won't wage war against great powers until they have the weapons and resources to do so. Something LOGOS exploits.
** Just because you live in a world of magic doesn't mean everything is harmless. Nature itself can overcome magic and severely injure/kill you. [[spoiler:Zafira learned the hard way at Narita.]]
** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all over seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist groups rising up and committing public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but comes after.
** Just because you live in a world of magic doesn't mean everything is harmless. Nature itself can overcome magic and severely injure/kill you. [[spoiler:Zafira learned the hard way at Narita.]]
** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all over seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist groups rising up and committing public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but comes after.
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** On second note, terrorist or rebel groups won't wage war against great powers until they have the weapons and resources to do so. Something LOGOS exploits.
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** Just because you live in a world of magic doesn't mean everything is harmless. Nature itself can overcome magic and severelyinjure/kill injure or kill you. [[spoiler:Zafira learned the hard way at Narita.]]
** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are allover seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is public.[[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist Terrorist groups rising rise up and committing commit public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.civilians as a result.]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but what comes after.after them.
** Just because you live in a world of magic doesn't mean everything is harmless. Nature itself can overcome magic and severely
** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch form the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the Bureau was responsible for creating the BigBad.]]
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch form the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the stating the Bureau was responsible for creating the BigBad.]]
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*** The KillSat weapons used by LOGOS are much like [[Film/GIJoeRetaliation Project Zeus]].
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*** The KillSat weapons used by LOGOS are much like akin to [[Film/GIJoeRetaliation Project Zeus]].
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* BuriedAlive: [[spoiler:Zafira]], thanks to stopping the landslide at Narita.
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* CombatPragmatist: Kusakabe uses this. In his fight against Signum, he mocks her as a police officer "bringing a tool to a swordfight".
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* CombatPragmatist: Kusakabe uses this. In his fight against Signum, he mocks her as boasts that he won because she brought a police officer "bringing a tool "tool" to a swordfight".swordfight.
* CultureClash: The idea of warfare and debate for the AlienNonInterferenceClause greatly contrasts between the two series.
* DavidVersusGoliath: A RagtagBandofMisfits going against TheEmpire, a NebulousEvilOrganization, ''and'' the SpaceNavy.
** [[spoiler:Lelouch versus Nanoha]]
** [[spoiler:Lelouch versus Nanoha]]
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* TheDreaded: Aside canon ones like the Aces, Gray is labeled as such. Signum herself had trouble with him.
** Noting about Wyverns really give people chills about fighting as TSAB Mage [[spoiler:or a Britannian soldier]].
** Zero earned this status upon [[spoiler:bringing down Nanoha Takamachi]].
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** Zero earned this status upon [[spoiler:bringing down Nanoha Takamachi]].
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* TheDreaded: TheDreaded:
** LOGOS earned this status at the beginning of the fic.
*** Aside canon ones like the Aces, Gray is labeled as such. Signum herself had trouble with him.
** *** Noting about Wyverns really give people chills about fighting as TSAB Mage [[spoiler:or a Britannian soldier]].
** Zero also earned this status upon [[spoiler:bringing down NanohaTakamachi]].Takamachi]].
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** LOGOS earned this status at the beginning of the fic.
*** Aside canon ones like the Aces, Gray is labeled as such. Signum herself had trouble with him.
** Zero also earned this status upon [[spoiler:bringing down Nanoha
*** Standard TSAB Mages are ''terrified'' of the Black Knights as a whole because of him actually.
* TheEmpire: Britannia, naturally.
* EndOfAnEra: As TheProphecy states.
* EndOfAnEra: As TheProphecy states.
* LaResistance: The Black Knights.
** LOGOS tries to label themselves as such.
** LOGOS tries to label themselves as such.
* PowerGivesYouWings: Lelouch's "Seraph Wings".
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** Quattro also doesn't kill Nanoha or her friends because it'll break Lelouch's trust, which she cannot afford.
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** Instead of executing Dietard for publishing a newspaper referring to [[spoiler:Cornelia's capture]], Schneizel has him released for the sake of damage control and to possibly discredit him.
* ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill: Lelouch uses this ''Nanoha''-based trope to own accord, [[spoiler:including dealing it to the founder.]]
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Not just this being a crossover with Code Geass, but this involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', whose job is to fight terrorism.
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: A recurring theme of the factic. Not just this for being a crossover with Code Geass, ''Code Geass'' crossover, but this it involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', a SpaceNavy, whose job is to fight terrorism.
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** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all over seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist groups rising up and committing atrocities public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but comes after.
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** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all over seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist groups rising up and committing atrocities public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but comes after.
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* OOCISSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you steal the Lancelot from him.]]
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* OOCISSeriousBusiness: OOCIsSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you steal the Lancelot from him.]]
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--> '''Cornelia:''' [[HumilationConga [[HumiliationConga He'll be lucky to avoid being disinherited.]]
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** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all over seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist groups rising up and committing atrocities public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.]]
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** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all over seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist groups rising up and committing atrocities public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.]]]] As Graham puts it, it's not battles that kill most people, but comes after.
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** Following the victory at Narita, news reporters are all over seeing had happened sharing it to the public, even as close as [[spoiler:capturing Cornelia]]. The result is [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized terrorist groups rising up and committing atrocities public atrocities against the Britannian civilians.]]
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* ThereAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.]]
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* ThereAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized: Following news headlines of the Black Knights' victory at Narita ([[spoiler:and implication of Cornelia's capture]]), insurgent groups rise up publicly, performing lynchings and massacres of both Honorary and ordinary Britannians.
* ThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.]]
* ThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.]]
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* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes this one by losing a entire Britannian force, [[spoiler, having the Lancelot stolen under him and having his experiments go public, destroying his Viceroy career.]] Cornelia even wondered if he'll even avoid being disinherited.
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* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes this one by losing a entire Britannian force, [[spoiler, [[spoiler: having the Lancelot stolen under him and having his experiments go going public, destroying his Viceroy career.]] Cornelia even wondered if he'll even avoid being disinherited.
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--> '''Cornelia:'''([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose]]) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating [[HumilationConga He'll be lucky to avoid being disinherited.]]
--> '''Cornelia:'''
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* ThereAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.
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* ThereAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.]]
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: [[spoiler:Simon Testarossa, the GreaterScopeVillain of the fanfic. Once a child prodigy like the rest of the family, he had dealings with the BigBad of ''Anime/NanohaStrikerS'' and fell in love with Quint Nakajima. Qunit's miscarriage, her following death in action, Scaglietti's betrayal, and the Bureau's confiscation of his work fueled his hatred for the TSAB and the formation of LOGOS.]]
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* DespairEventHorizon: [[spoiler:Simon's past tragedies involving Quint Nakajima, Jail's betrayal, and meddling from the Bureau drove him to create the Mandarin and LOGOS.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: Invoked by Clovis when [[spoiler:his experiments go public and]] Euphemia goes missing for a day.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: [[spoiler:Simon Testarossa, an OriginalCharacter who acts as Fate and Alicia's secret brother. His family devastation and mistreatment from the Bureau are what lead to his crusade.]]
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* RealityEnsues:
** Terrorists ''will kill'' for their reasons. And it doesn't matter if you're [[WouldHurtAChild a young cadet either]].
** On second note, terrorist or rebel groups won't wage war against great powers until they have the weapons and resources to do so. Something LOGOS exploits.
** Just because you live in a world of magic doesn't mean everything is harmless. Nature itself can overcome magic and severely injure/kill you. [[spoiler:Zafira learned the hard way at Narita.]]
** Terrorists ''will kill'' for their reasons. And it doesn't matter if you're [[WouldHurtAChild a young cadet either]].
** On second note, terrorist or rebel groups won't wage war against great powers until they have the weapons and resources to do so. Something LOGOS exploits.
** Just because you live in a world of magic doesn't mean everything is harmless. Nature itself can overcome magic and severely injure/kill you. [[spoiler:Zafira learned the hard way at Narita.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl[=/=]WouldHurtAChild: In the first arrival of LOGOS, one of the Mandarin's weapons mows down every one of Nanoha's cadets proceeds to attack Nanoha as well. Justified as they are officers/soldiers of the TSAB, which is the Mandarin's enemy.
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* DownerBeginning: For the Nanoha section when Nanoha's students get slaughtered by the Mandarin's weapons, Signum being beaten by one of his commander through underhanded tactics, and the entire LOGOS force getting away. And that excludes the Mandarin broadcasting his TheReasonYouSuckSpeech to the TSAB and launching his rebellion.
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* OutsideContextProblem: No one in the TSAB expected to face someone like LOGOS ''or'' Zero and his Black Knights.
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* FiveBadBand: LOGOS
** BigBad: The Mandarin
** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Suzuka]]
** TheEvilGenius: Colonel Kusakabe
** TheBrute: Gray Biaggi
** TheDarkChick: [[spoiler:Mao]]
** SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler:Due]]
** BigBad: The Mandarin
** TheDragon: [[spoiler:Suzuka]]
** TheEvilGenius: Colonel Kusakabe
** TheBrute: Gray Biaggi
** TheDarkChick: [[spoiler:Mao]]
** SixthRangerTraitor: [[spoiler:Due]]
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* TheMole: [[spoiler:Due]]
** ReverseMole: [[spoiler:This isn't the only time she played the above trope.]]
** ReverseMole: [[spoiler:This isn't the only time she played the above trope.]]
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* BerserkButton: Vita really flips out when [[spoiler:the Mandarin's Wyvern drones kill all of Nanoha's students]].
* CurbStompBattle: The Battle of Narita starts off like this in the Britannians' favor. [[spoiler:Then the landslide comes in, turning the tables to devastating effect.]]
** In a concurrent battle, the Wyvern Drones mowing down an entire Britannian force, leaving no survivors.
** In a concurrent battle, the Wyvern Drones mowing down an entire Britannian force, leaving no survivors.
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** KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Considering what how much trouble she caused in canon Geass, it's more cheerful than one would think.]]
* GrandTheftPrototype: [[spoiler:Stealing the Lancelot is quite the achievement.]]
* HeKnowsTooMuch: During a TSAB operation that discovers a survivor scientist, he tries to tell information regarding covert operations on Earth. He's killed before doing so.
** HisNameIs: [[spoiler:Despite not specifying, he mention about the Mandarin and the Britannian Royal Family cooperating with each other.]]
* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes this one by losing a entire Britannian force, [[spoiler, having the Lancelot stolen under him and having his experiments go public, destroying his Viceroy career.]] Cornelia even wondered if he'll even avoid being disinherited.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: During a TSAB operation that discovers a survivor scientist, he tries to tell information regarding covert operations on Earth. He's killed before doing so.
** HisNameIs: [[spoiler:Despite not specifying, he mention about the Mandarin and the Britannian Royal Family cooperating with each other.]]
* HumiliationConga: Clovis undergoes this one by losing a entire Britannian force, [[spoiler, having the Lancelot stolen under him and having his experiments go public, destroying his Viceroy career.]] Cornelia even wondered if he'll even avoid being disinherited.
* ThereAreThingsManWasNotMeantToKnow: How the people who know magic and the TSAB see those who don't. The Black Knights are little easier [[GodzillaThreshold due to being forced under circumstances to earn the trust of the Earth natives.
** [[spoiler: Jeremiah, on the other hand, is learning the hard way.]]
** [[spoiler: Jeremiah, on the other hand, is learning the hard way.]]
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* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.]]
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* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.]]
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-> ''"From the savage seas, [[OutsideContextVillain three terrible beasts]], [[BreakTheBadass whose cries will paralyze even the stalwart warrior]], will herald the coming of the [[TitleDrop Kings of Revolution]] as [[EndOfAnAge our age nears its end]]. [[FallenHero Born from betrayal and loss will arise the Dragon King,]] who shall usher in the destruction of law and blanket all seas in darkness. However, [[Anime/CodeGeass from a far-away land no longer free,]] the Demon King, born of loss and sorrow, shall lead us towards an age of peace shall as he rises up with [[LaResistance his Knights]]. [[HeroAntagonist The Iron Maiden]], the [[VillainProtagonist Fallen Jester]] and [[HeroAntagonist the White Devil]] shall guide one of the kings to decide our fate. Yet be warned, [[WhereItAllBegan upon the return to the roots of Gaea]], [[ThereCanOnlyBeOne one king must fall]]. With his fall a new age shall begin. The age that shall come will be by the will of the victor of the war between the two Kings."''
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-> ''"From the savage seas, [[OutsideContextVillain [[OutsideContextProblem three terrible beasts]], [[BreakTheBadass whose cries will paralyze even the stalwart warrior]], will herald the coming of the [[TitleDrop Kings of Revolution]] as [[EndOfAnAge our age nears its end]]. [[FallenHero Born from betrayal and loss will arise the Dragon King,]] who shall usher in the destruction of law and blanket all seas in darkness. However, [[Anime/CodeGeass from a far-away land no longer free,]] the Demon King, born of loss and sorrow, shall lead us towards an age of peace shall as he rises up with [[LaResistance his Knights]]. [[HeroAntagonist The Iron Maiden]], the [[VillainProtagonist Fallen Jester]] and [[HeroAntagonist the White Devil]] shall guide one of the kings to decide our fate. Yet be warned, [[WhereItAllBegan upon the return to the roots of Gaea]], [[ThereCanOnlyBeOne one king must fall]]. With his fall a new age shall begin. The age that shall come will be by the will of the victor of the war between the two Kings."''
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* FalseFlagOperation: In his introduction, the Mandarin demonstrates his weapons as he destroys a facility owned by the [[Manga/NanohaForce Vandein Corporation]] he claims is part of the corruption within the TSAB. [[spoiler:Those responsible were collaborators of the Mandarin, allowing him to initiate the war and rid of enemy agents within his followers.]]
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* FalseFlagOperation: In his introduction, the Mandarin demonstrates his weapons as he destroys a facility owned by the [[Manga/NanohaForce [[Manga/MagicalRecordLyricalNanohaForce Vandein Corporation]] he claims is part of the corruption within the TSAB. [[spoiler:Those responsible were collaborators of the Mandarin, allowing him to initiate the war and rid of enemy agents within his followers.]]
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* OOCISSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you teal the Lancelot from him.]]
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* OOCISSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you teal steal the Lancelot from him.]]
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Deconstructed. The Aces are forced to follow this policy, which means watching thousands of their fellow countrymen getting killed by the Britannians oppressors. They can't even bring any of them to TSAB worlds thanks to the Mandarin. And it's already caused trouble with their own friends turning on them. To state which ones, Lelouch and [[spoiler:Suzuka]].
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Deconstructed. The Aces are forced to follow this policy, which means watching thousands of their fellow countrymen getting killed by the Britannians their Britannian oppressors. They can't even bring any of them to TSAB worlds thanks to the Mandarin. And it's already caused trouble with their own friends turning on them. To state which ones, Lelouch (unknowingly) and [[spoiler:Suzuka]].
* DroppedABridgeOnHim: [[spoiler:Viletta, who gets cut down by LOGOS's MechaMooks.]]
* FeatheredFiend: The Wyvern Drones look and [[RidiculouslyHumanRobot ''behave'']] like huge birds.
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: More of "second chapter spoiler", but you know changes are gonna spike upon [[spoiler:Quattro stealing the Lancelot.]]
* FirstEpisodeSpoiler: More of "second chapter spoiler", but you know changes are gonna spike upon [[spoiler:Quattro stealing the Lancelot.]]
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* LastofHisKind: Jeremiah is last of the Purist Faction. [[spoiler:Not even Villeta makes it.]]
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* LastofHisKind: Jeremiah is last of LighterAndSofter: The fanfic gives medicine to the Purist Faction. [[spoiler:Not even Villeta makes it.]]scarred Geass-verse from the Nanohaverse.
** DarkerAndEdgier: It's poison the other way around.
** DarkerAndEdgier: It's poison the other way around.
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* OffTheRails: The first half of R1 is played with a couple of significant changes including [[spoiler:Clovis's miserable survival]]. That changes after Narita when [[spoiler:Cornelia gets captured by the Black Knights.]]
* OOCISSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you teal the Lancelot from him.]]
* OOCISSeriousBusiness: Lloyd reacting to [[spoiler:seeing Nina with a sakuradite bomb]] wasn't bad enough, wait until [[spoiler:you teal the Lancelot from him.]]
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* RidiculouslyHumanRobot: More of ridiculously animalistic robots. Justified as they are composed of carbon nanotubes that give them extreme agility and lifelike movements.
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** [[MetalGearRising "You deny your weapon its purpose!"]]
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* SoleSurvivor: Jeremiah is last of the Purist Faction. [[spoiler:Not even Villeta makes it.]]
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** Quattro goes through this with Lelouch, seeking the moral high ground to gain power.
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** As amoral as Quattro could be, she goes through this with Lelouch, seeking the moral high ground to gain power.have people aid her in her plans.
** Quattro also doesn't kill Nanoha or her friends because it'll break Lelouch's trust, which she cannot afford.
** Quattro also doesn't kill Nanoha or her friends because it'll break Lelouch's trust, which she cannot afford.
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Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind for service in the Time Space Administration Bureau. And that includes friends such as Lelouch and Nunally, the exile of prince and princess sent as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess until he encounters a crashed truck. The said truck contains Eleven terrorists that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Thing go even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and see his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
[[MuggingTheMonster However, things go different from here.]]
Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the fight against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device who identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrown his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau. And that doesn't help when the international terrorist organization LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent investigate.
[[MuggingTheMonster However, things go different from here.]]
Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the fight against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device who identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrown his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau. And that doesn't help when the international terrorist organization LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent investigate.
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Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind for service in the Time Space Administration Bureau. And that includes friends such as Lelouch and Nunally, the exile of exiled prince and princess sent as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess until he chess. He suddenly encounters a crashed truck. The said truck contains driven by Eleven terrorists that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Thing Things go even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and see his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
[[MuggingTheMonster However, things godifferent differently from here.]]
Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in thefight war against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device who that identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
Although Lelouch's hopes tooverthrown overthrow his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau. And that doesn't help when the an international terrorist organization called LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent investigate.
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Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the
Although Lelouch's hopes to
* {{Foil}}: Not by people (well, ''maybe''), but by devices. Raising Heart is a GlassCannon who concentrates on [[MemeticMutation maximum power]], Abyss Soul is a FragileSpeedster who uses illusions and precision.
* {{Irony}}: For a girl who known for [[DefeatMeansFriendship "befriending" people]], [[spoiler:she ends up getting a taste of her own medicine.]]
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* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate is described to be this. [[spoiler:It's property of LOGOS.]]
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* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate within Britannia is described to be this. [[spoiler:It's property of LOGOS.]]
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* MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses'' it upon sighting TSAB agents.
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* MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses'' it ''loses it'' upon sighting TSAB agents.agents.
** On a larger scale, the ''Nanoha'' world has taken a hit from this.
** On a larger scale, the ''Nanoha'' world has taken a hit from this.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch forge the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the Bureau was responsible for creating the BigBad.]]
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch forge form the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the Bureau was responsible for creating the BigBad.]]
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* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: A theme in series to show when the cynical world of Geass and the idealist view of Nanoha interact.
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* SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: A theme in series the fanfic is to show when the cynical world of Geass and the idealist view of Nanoha interact.
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** PutOnABus: [[spoiler:He's sent back to the Homeland and is replaced by Corenlia.]]
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** PutOnABus: [[spoiler:He's sent back to the Homeland and is replaced by Corenlia.]]
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--> '''Clovis:''' If word about her [CC] gets out, I'll be disinherited.
--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose]]) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoid be disinherited.]]
--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose]]) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoid be disinherited.]]
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--> '''Clovis:''' If word about her [CC] [C.C.] gets out, I'll be disinherited.
--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose]]) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoidbe being disinherited.]]
--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose]]) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoid
* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.]]
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* DeconstructionCrossover: For the ideals and world of Nanoha. Instead of a world where EverybodyLives and EarnYourHappyEnding, they're now in a place where AnyoneCanDie with the usual BittersweetEnding found in any ''Anime/MoblieSuitGundam'' franchise.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: For the ideals and world of Nanoha. Instead of a world where EverybodyLives and EarnYourHappyEnding, they're now in a place where AnyoneCanDie with the usual BittersweetEnding found in any ''Anime/MoblieSuitGundam'' ''Anime/MobileSuitGundam'' franchise.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: For the ideals and world of Nanoha. Instead of a world where EverybodyLives and EarnYourHappyEnding, they're now in a place where AnyoneCanDie with the usual BittersweetEnding found in any ''Franchise/MoblieSuitGundam'' franchise.
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* DeconstructionCrossover: For the ideals and world of Nanoha. Instead of a world where EverybodyLives and EarnYourHappyEnding, they're now in a place where AnyoneCanDie with the usual BittersweetEnding found in any ''Franchise/MoblieSuitGundam'' ''Anime/MoblieSuitGundam'' franchise.
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--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoid be disinherited.]]
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--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose) expose]]) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoid be disinherited.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: ''Quattro'' of all people.
* AdaptationalHeroism: ''Quattro'' of all people.
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!!Tropes befriended/(not) Geassed:
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: [[spoiler:Clovis]] gets this treatment instead of [[spoiler:being shot by Lelouch]].
* AdaptationalHeroism:''Quattro'' ''[[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]]'' of all people.
* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: [[spoiler:Clovis]] gets this treatment instead of [[spoiler:being shot by Lelouch]].
* AdaptationalHeroism:
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* ArchEnemy: Ginga sees Zero as this after her first loss.
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* ArchEnemy: Ginga sees to Zero as this after her first loss.
* ArrestedForHeroism: Every time Lelouch goes out to save the Japanese as Zero, the Bureau is out to arrest him for it.
* CombatPragmatist: Kusakabe uses this. In his fight against Signum, he mocks her as a police officer "bringing a tool to a swordfight".
* DeconstructionCrossover: For the ideals and world of Nanoha. Instead of a world where EverybodyLives and EarnYourHappyEnding, they're now in a place where AnyoneCanDie with the usual BittersweetEnding found in any ''Franchise/MoblieSuitGundam'' franchise.
** Inverted for the ''Code Geass'' world. Things have gotten far better thanks to what they took away.
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Kusakabe taunts the [[TheDreaded Blazing General]] by insulting her mistress and Nanoha, then proceeds to fight her to a par and play dirty to knock her down.
** Inverted for the ''Code Geass'' world. Things have gotten far better thanks to what they took away.
* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: Kusakabe taunts the [[TheDreaded Blazing General]] by insulting her mistress and Nanoha, then proceeds to fight her to a par and play dirty to knock her down.
** Noting about Wyverns really give people chills about fighting as TSAB Mage [[spoiler:or a Britannian soldier]].
** Zero earned this status upon [[spoiler:bringing down Nanoha Takamachi]].
** Zero earned this status upon [[spoiler:bringing down Nanoha Takamachi]].
* FalseFlagOperation: In his introduction, the Mandarin demonstrates his weapons as he destroys a facility owned by the [[Manga/NanohaForce Vandein Corporation]] he claims is part of the corruption within the TSAB. [[spoiler:Those responsible were collaborators of the Mandarin, allowing him to initiate the war and rid of enemy agents within his followers.]]
* GenreBlind: Most of Time-Space Bureau have no idea how ''real'' and ''effective'' terrorist organizations operate.
* GenreBlind: Most of Time-Space Bureau have no idea how ''real'' and ''effective'' terrorist organizations operate.
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* MageKiller: The Wyvern Drones are stated to be this purpose.
* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate is described to be this. [[spoiler:It'salso property of LOGOS.]]
* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate is described to be this. [[spoiler:It's
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* NeverLiveItDown: Ginga still hasn't recovered from her defeat by Zero.
** [[spoiler:Nanoha still keeps denying that she lost to him as well.]]
** [[spoiler:Nanoha still keeps denying that she lost to him as well.]]
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* NeverLiveItDown: Ginga still hasn't recovered from her defeat by Zero.
** [[spoiler:Nanoha still keeps denying that she lost to him as well.]]MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses'' it upon sighting TSAB agents.
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: Quattro lampshades this for both series, for better or worse.
** [[spoiler:Nanoha still keeps denying that she lost to him as well.]]
* NothingIsTheSameAnymore: Quattro lampshades this for both series, for better or worse.
** Quattro goes through this with Lelouch, seeking the moral high ground to gain power.
* ShoutOut:
** Various new weapons introduced to Nanoha have these.
*** The [[Film/IronMan Sonic Taser]] used by the Black Knights.
*** The KillSat weapons used by LOGOS are much like [[Film/GIJoeRetaliation Project Zeus]].
*** The introduced {{Mooks}} of Logos are skull-masked, katana-wielding cyborgs called [[VideoGame/{{Tekken}} "Yoshimitsu Troopers"]].
** Various new weapons introduced to Nanoha have these.
*** The [[Film/IronMan Sonic Taser]] used by the Black Knights.
*** The KillSat weapons used by LOGOS are much like [[Film/GIJoeRetaliation Project Zeus]].
*** The introduced {{Mooks}} of Logos are skull-masked, katana-wielding cyborgs called [[VideoGame/{{Tekken}} "Yoshimitsu Troopers"]].
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* MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses'' it upon sighting TemptingFate:
--> '''Clovis:''' If word about her [CC] gets out, I'll be disinherited.
--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoid be disinherited.]]
* TookALevelInKindness: Quattro, changing from a cruel, amoral woman into someone more willing to help out, even a crippled girl like Nunally.
* WrongGenreSavvy: The TSABagents.forces are completely unaware of [[DeconstructionCrossover the world they just crossed over with]].
--> '''Clovis:''' If word about her [CC] gets out, I'll be disinherited.
--> '''Cornelia:''' ([[spoiler:after Shinjiku disaster and expose) [[ZeroPercentApprovalRating He'll be lucky to avoid be disinherited.]]
* TookALevelInKindness: Quattro, changing from a cruel, amoral woman into someone more willing to help out, even a crippled girl like Nunally.
* WrongGenreSavvy: The TSAB
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!!Tropes befriended/(not) Geassed":Geassed:
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** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs a [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.]] Any three nukes!
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** AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Considering what how much trouble she caused in canon Geass, it's more cheerful than one would think.]]
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** AssholeVictim: KickTheSonOfABitch: [[spoiler:Considering what how much trouble she caused in canon Geass, it's more cheerful than one would think.]]
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* ETGaveUsWifi: Accroding to Verossa's investigations, [[spoiler:as well as Peter and Graham, the Mandarin and his allies are responsible for Britannia's rise to power, including the development of Knightmare Frames!]]
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* ETGaveUsWifi: Accroding to Verossa's investigations, [[spoiler:as well as Peter and Graham, the Mandarin and his allies are responsible for Britannia's rise to power, including the development of Knightmare Frames!]]Frames.]]
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** Peter [[spoiler:rescued Quattro [[spoiler:was rescued by Peter from an assassination attempt and attempt, who left a clean copy of her corpse.]]
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** You also have: Britannia vs the Black Knights vs LOGOS[[spoiler:, under the guise of the JLF]].
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** You also have: Britannia vs the Black Knights vs LOGOS[[spoiler:, under LOGOS [[spoiler:under the guise of the JLF]].
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* PragmaticVillainy: If Verossa's investigations are correct, [[spoiler:which they are]], one can reverse engineer interdimensional technology to start a huge company on an undeveloped planet. As long as they hide behind the non-interference policy of the Bureau, one can automatically accumulate manpower and resources for one to wage war against bigger threats.
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* PragmaticVillainy: If Verossa's investigations are correct, [[spoiler:which they are]], one can reverse engineer interdimensional technology to start a huge company on an undeveloped planet. As long as they hide behind the non-interference policy of the Bureau, one can automatically accumulate manpower and resources for one to wage war against bigger threats.powers.
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch forge the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the Bureau was responsible for LOGOS' creation.]]
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* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch forge the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the Bureau was responsible for LOGOS' creation.creating the BigBad.]]
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** In Nanoha, on the other hand, you now have people getting slaughtered, heavy corruption within the Bureau, and not being able help friends due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause. Oh, and that excludes said friends being your enemies, whether you're [[KnightTemplar trying to arrest them for saving countless lives]] or [[spoiler:them trying to kill for leaving them in the first place.]]
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** In Nanoha, on the other hand, you now have people getting slaughtered, heavy corruption within the Bureau, and not being able help your friends due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause. Oh, and that excludes includes said friends being your enemies, whether you're [[KnightTemplar [[ArrestedForHeroism trying to arrest them for saving countless lives]] or [[spoiler:them trying to kill you for leaving them in the first place.]]
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Not just this being a crossover with Code Geass, but this involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', whose job is to fight terrorism.
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* YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Not just this being a crossover with Code Geass, but this involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', whose job is to fight terrorism.terrorism.
** The Mandarin even states this when he first reveals himself to the TSAB.
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** The Mandarin even states this when he first reveals himself to the TSAB.
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* CoolVersusAwesome: [[MagicalGirlWarrior Magical Girl Police]] versus [[HumongousMecha]]!
** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs a [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.] Any three nukes!
** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs a [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.] Any three nukes!
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* CoolVersusAwesome: [[MagicalGirlWarrior Magical Girl Police]] versus [[HumongousMecha]]!
HumongousMecha!
** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs a [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.] ]] Any three nukes!
** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs a [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.
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** [[spoiler:Not that it helps as they already created [[Anime/NanohaStrikerS Jail Scaglietti]].
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** [[spoiler:Not that it helps as they already created [[Anime/NanohaStrikerS [[Anime/StrikerS Jail Scaglietti]].Scaglietti]]]].
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* SlidingScaleofIdealismAndCynicism: A theme in series to show when the cynical world of Geass and the idealist view of Nanoha interact.
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* SlidingScaleofIdealismAndCynicism: SlidingScaleOfIdealismVersusCynicism: A theme in series to show when the cynical world of Geass and the idealist view of Nanoha interact.
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* YouTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Not just this being a crossover with Code Geass, but this involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', whose job is to fight terrorism.
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* YouTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: YourTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Not just this being a crossover with Code Geass, but this involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', whose job is to fight terrorism.
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* AlienNonInterferenceClause: Deconstructed. The Aces are forced to follow this policy, which means watching thousands of their fellow countrymen getting killed by the Britannians oppressors. They can't even bring any of them to TSAB worlds thanks to the Mandarin. And it's already caused trouble with their own friends turning on them. To state which ones, Lelouch and [[spoiler:Suzuka]].
* ArchEnemy: Ginga sees Zero as this after her first loss.
* ArchEnemy: Ginga sees Zero as this after her first loss.
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Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[Original Character [[OriginalCharacter a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the fight against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device who identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
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''"From the savage seas, [[OutsideContextVillain three terrible beasts]], [[BreakTheBadass whose cries will paralyze even the stalwart warrior]], will herald the coming of the [[TitleDrop Kings of Revolution]] as [[EndOfAnAge our age nears its end]]. [[FallenHero Born from betrayal and loss will arise the Dragon King,]] who shall usher in the destruction of law and blanket all seas in darkness. However, [[Anime/CodeGeass from a far-away land no longer free,]] the Demon King, born of loss and sorrow, shall lead us towards an age of peace shall as he rises up with [[LaResistance his Knights]]. [[HeroAntagonist The Iron Maiden]], the [[VillainProtagonist Fallen Jester]] and [[HeroAntagonist the White Devil]] shall guide one of the kings to decide our fate. Yet be warned, [[WhereItAllBegan upon the return to the roots of Gaea]], [[ThereCanOnlyBeOne one king must fall]]. With his fall a new age shall begin. The age that shall come will be by the will of the victor of the war between the two Kings."''
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---> ''"From the savage seas, [[OutsideContextVillain three terrible beasts]], [[BreakTheBadass whose cries will paralyze even the stalwart warrior]], will herald the coming of the [[TitleDrop Kings of Revolution]] as [[EndOfAnAge our age nears its end]]. [[FallenHero Born from betrayal and loss will arise the Dragon King,]] who shall usher in the destruction of law and blanket all seas in darkness. However, [[Anime/CodeGeass from a far-away land no longer free,]] the Demon King, born of loss and sorrow, shall lead us towards an age of peace shall as he rises up with [[LaResistance his Knights]]. [[HeroAntagonist The Iron Maiden]], the [[VillainProtagonist Fallen Jester]] and [[HeroAntagonist the White Devil]] shall guide one of the kings to decide our fate. Yet be warned, [[WhereItAllBegan upon the return to the roots of Gaea]], [[ThereCanOnlyBeOne one king must fall]]. With his fall a new age shall begin. The age that shall come will be by the will of the victor of the war between the two Kings."''
** The Mandarin to [[spoiler:Jail]].
* ArmsDealer: [[spoiler:On Earth, the Mandarin is recognized as an international weapons dealer.]]
* BloodKnight: Gray, who was excommunicated as a result.
* BreakTheBadass: The Aces and Wolkenritter sure have their bad days upon fighting LOGOS, but Nanoha suffers the worst of it, seeing all of her students get slaughtered by LOGOS and [[spoiler:knowing Suzuka is a terrorist.]]
* ChainsawGood: Gray's device has a chainsaw blade.
* CoolVersusAwesome: [[MagicalGirlWarrior Magical Girl Police]] versus [[HumongousMecha]]!
** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs a [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.] Any three nukes!
*** [[spoiler:Oh, an in the first round, the mastermind wins.]]
* ChainsawGood: Gray's device has a chainsaw blade.
* CoolVersusAwesome: [[MagicalGirlWarrior Magical Girl Police]] versus [[HumongousMecha]]!
** Also, [[DiabolicalMastermind a child mastermind]] vs a [[PersonOfMassDestruction a child nuke.] Any three nukes!
*** [[spoiler:Oh, an in the first round, the mastermind wins.]]
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** [[spoiler:Not that it helps as they already created [[Anime/NanohaStrikerS Jail Scagllieti]].
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** [[spoiler:Not that it helps as they already created [[Anime/NanohaStrikerS Jail Scagllieti]].Scaglietti]].
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Villeta, killed by during a surprise attack from LOGOS.]]
** AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Considering what how much trouble she caused in canon Geass, it's more cheerful than one would think.]]
* TheDreaded: Aside canon ones like the Aces, Gray is labeled as such. Signum herself had trouble with him.
* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Villeta, killed by during a surprise attack from LOGOS.]]
** AssholeVictim: [[spoiler:Considering what how much trouble she caused in canon Geass, it's more cheerful than one would think.]]
* TheDreaded: Aside canon ones like the Aces, Gray is labeled as such. Signum herself had trouble with him.
* {{Expy}}: [[OriginalCharacter Gray Biaggi]], the Heretic Knight of the Saint Church is [[Anime/Gundam00 Ali Al-Saachez]].
* FakingTheDead: All major founders of the Black Knights underwent this in the eyes of their superiors.
** Lelouch and Nunally were reported dead to the Empire.
** Graham and the twins reported themselves KIA to the TSAB.
** Peter [[spoiler:rescued Quattro from an assassination attempt and left a clean copy of her corpse.]]
* LastofHisKind: Jeremiah is last of the Purist Faction. [[spoiler:Not even Villeta makes it.]]
* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate is described to be this. [[spoiler:It's also property of LOGOS.]]
* MeleeATrois: On the macro scale, you have LOGOS vs TSAB vs the Black Knights.
** You also have: Britannia vs the Black Knights vs LOGOS[[spoiler:, under the guise of the JLF]].
* NeverLiveItDown: Ginga still hasn't recovered from her defeat by Zero.
** [[spoiler:Nanoha still keeps denying that she lost to him as well.]]
** Lelouch and Nunally were reported dead to the Empire.
** Graham and the twins reported themselves KIA to the TSAB.
** Peter [[spoiler:rescued Quattro from an assassination attempt and left a clean copy of her corpse.]]
* LastofHisKind: Jeremiah is last of the Purist Faction. [[spoiler:Not even Villeta makes it.]]
* MegaCorp: The Donovian Technology Conglomerate is described to be this. [[spoiler:It's also property of LOGOS.]]
* MeleeATrois: On the macro scale, you have LOGOS vs TSAB vs the Black Knights.
** You also have: Britannia vs the Black Knights vs LOGOS[[spoiler:, under the guise of the JLF]].
* NeverLiveItDown: Ginga still hasn't recovered from her defeat by Zero.
** [[spoiler:Nanoha still keeps denying that she lost to him as well.]]
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* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.]]
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* RebelliousRebel: The Black Knights follow the more moral route of LaResistance by showing that traditional terrorism is powerless. [[spoiler:They're also facing members of the JLF, another resistance group in league with LOGOS.]]
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch forge the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the Bureau was responsible for LOGOS' creation.]]
* SlidingScaleofIdealismAndCynicism: A theme in series to show when the cynical world of Geass and the idealist view of Nanoha interact.
** In the Geass world, you now have a DiabolicalMastermind with a power far more gentle than Geass. He has allies he can count on and knows some of the truth early, [[spoiler:including about the death of his mother]], that makes him far more stable. And speaking of truth, he's forced to become more honest with himself as Zero. Even when they're already being overwhelmed by the very scope of the threat the Black Knights face, it's much better in the long run than keeping secrets like in canon.
** In Nanoha, on the other hand, you now have people getting slaughtered, heavy corruption within the Bureau, and not being able help friends due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause. Oh, and that excludes said friends being your enemies, whether you're [[KnightTemplar trying to arrest them for saving countless lives]] or [[spoiler:them trying to kill for leaving them in the first place.]]
* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Clovis, who instead has his experiments exposed to the public, giving him a ZeroPercentApprovalRating.]]
** PutOnABus: [[spoiler:He's sent back to the Homeland and is replaced by Corenlia.]]
* MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses'' it upon sighting TSAB agents.
* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.]]]]
* YouTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Not just this being a crossover with Code Geass, but this involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', whose job is to fight terrorism.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight: Why Peter and Graham helped Lelouch forge the Black Knights and fight TSAB opposition, even if it means challenging [[TheDreaded The Aces and Wolkenritter]]. The former especially because [[spoiler:the Bureau was responsible for LOGOS' creation.]]
* SlidingScaleofIdealismAndCynicism: A theme in series to show when the cynical world of Geass and the idealist view of Nanoha interact.
** In the Geass world, you now have a DiabolicalMastermind with a power far more gentle than Geass. He has allies he can count on and knows some of the truth early, [[spoiler:including about the death of his mother]], that makes him far more stable. And speaking of truth, he's forced to become more honest with himself as Zero. Even when they're already being overwhelmed by the very scope of the threat the Black Knights face, it's much better in the long run than keeping secrets like in canon.
** In Nanoha, on the other hand, you now have people getting slaughtered, heavy corruption within the Bureau, and not being able help friends due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause. Oh, and that excludes said friends being your enemies, whether you're [[KnightTemplar trying to arrest them for saving countless lives]] or [[spoiler:them trying to kill for leaving them in the first place.]]
* SparedByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Clovis, who instead has his experiments exposed to the public, giving him a ZeroPercentApprovalRating.]]
** PutOnABus: [[spoiler:He's sent back to the Homeland and is replaced by Corenlia.]]
* MoodWhiplash: [[spoiler:Suzuka]] ''loses'' it upon sighting TSAB agents.
* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.
* YouTerroristsAreOurFreedomFighters: Not just this being a crossover with Code Geass, but this involves fighting an ''interdimensional alien police navy'', whose job is to fight terrorism.
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''"From the savage seas, [[OutsideContextVillain three terrible beasts]], [[BreakTheBadass whose cries will paralyze even the stalwart warrior]], will herald the coming of the [[TitleDrop Kings of Revolution]] as [[EndOfAnAge our age nears its end]]. [[FallenHero Born from betrayal and loss will arise the Dragon King,]] who shall usher in the destruction of law and blanket all seas in darkness. However, [[Anime/CodeGeass from a far-away land no longer free,]] the Demon King, born of loss and sorrow, shall lead us towards an age of peace shall as he rises up with [[LaResistance his Knights]]. [[HeroAntagonist The Iron Maiden]], the [[VillainProtagonist Fallen Jester]] and [[HeroAntagonist the White Devil]] shall guide one of the kings to decide our fate. Yet be warned, [[WhereItAllBegan upon the return to the roots of Gaea]], [[ThereCanOnlyBeOne one king must fall]]. With his fall a new age shall begin. The age that shall come will be by the will of the victor of the war between the two Kings."''
That's TheProphecy given in a now blended world between the war-torn world of ''Anime/CodeGeass'' and the anti-war world of ''Franchise/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha''.
Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind for service in the Time Space Administration Bureau. And that includes friends such as Lelouch and Nunally, the exile of prince and princess sent as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess until he encounters a crashed truck. The said truck contains Eleven terrorists that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Thing go even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and see his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
[[MuggingTheMonster However, things go different from here.]]
Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[Original Character a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the fight against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device who identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrown his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau. And that doesn't help when the international terrorist organization LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent investigate.
With his old friends back in the picture, will Lelouch have what it takes overcome his new obstacles and succeed in creating a happier place?
The fanfiction was released on Fanfiction.net by sephiroth12285, found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9708917/1/Kings-of-Revolution here]] and recently edited on Sufficient Velocity, also found [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kings-of-revolution-mgln-x-cg.19260/ here]].
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!!Tropes befriended/(not) Geassed":
* AdaptationalHeroism: ''Quattro'' of all people.
* ArchEnemy: Ginga sees Zero as this after her first loss.
* AscendedExtra: Colonel Kusakabe of the Japan Liberation Front. The same one who ordered the hotel hijacking from Lake Kawaguchi. Now, he's a major member of Logos with his own Earth-made Battle Device.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's willing to take the high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
* CreateYourOwnVillain: Peter states that he's working with the Black Knights and fighting the TSAB because [[spoiler:the latter is responsible for the Mandarin's creation.]]
** [[spoiler:Not that it helps as they already created [[Anime/NanohaStrikerS Jail Scagllieti]].
* ETGaveUsWifi: Accroding to Verossa's investigations, [[spoiler:as well as Peter and Graham, the Mandarin and his allies are responsible for Britannia's rise to power, including the development of Knightmare Frames!]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Suzuka]]
* PragmaticVillainy: If Verossa's investigations are correct, [[spoiler:which they are]], one can reverse engineer interdimensional technology to start a huge company on an undeveloped planet. As long as they hide behind the non-interference policy of the Bureau, one can automatically accumulate manpower and resources for one to wage war against bigger threats.
* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.]]
That's TheProphecy given in a now blended world between the war-torn world of ''Anime/CodeGeass'' and the anti-war world of ''Franchise/MagicalGirlLyricalNanoha''.
Welcome to ''Kings of Revolution'', where Japan has been taken over by the Britannian Empire just as the Aces left Earth behind for service in the Time Space Administration Bureau. And that includes friends such as Lelouch and Nunally, the exile of prince and princess sent as political hostages. Seven years later, Lelouch is attending Ashford Academy, just leaving from another game of chess until he encounters a crashed truck. The said truck contains Eleven terrorists that contains a green-haired girl named C.C. Thing go even more awry when he runs into the Britannian Army and see his own friend get shot by the Royal Guards.
[[MuggingTheMonster However, things go different from here.]]
Before the R1 canon, Lelouch encounters a number of individuals who also seek to destroy Britannia. These guys are different as they are composed of [[Anime/MagicalGirlLyricalNanohaAs Gil Graham]], [[ManipulativeBitch Quattro]], and [[Original Character a scientist who goes by the name "Peter"]]. Informed of the existence of magic, the TSAB and the Dimensional Sea, Lelouch is offered a position in the fight against Britannia. And his special gift? His personal Device who identifies itself as "Abyss Soul".
Although Lelouch's hopes to overthrown his tyrannical father have increased, so have the challenges. Due to the AlienNonInterferenceClause, Lelouch gets into serious trouble with the Bureau. And that doesn't help when the international terrorist organization LOGOS declares a holy war against the Bureau through the guidance of its masked leader known as "The Mandarin." And with all of his resources and weapons being traced back to Earth, a team composed of the Aces and the Wolkenritter are sent investigate.
With his old friends back in the picture, will Lelouch have what it takes overcome his new obstacles and succeed in creating a happier place?
The fanfiction was released on Fanfiction.net by sephiroth12285, found [[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9708917/1/Kings-of-Revolution here]] and recently edited on Sufficient Velocity, also found [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/kings-of-revolution-mgln-x-cg.19260/ here]].
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!!Tropes befriended/(not) Geassed":
* AdaptationalHeroism: ''Quattro'' of all people.
* ArchEnemy: Ginga sees Zero as this after her first loss.
* AscendedExtra: Colonel Kusakabe of the Japan Liberation Front. The same one who ordered the hotel hijacking from Lake Kawaguchi. Now, he's a major member of Logos with his own Earth-made Battle Device.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Quattro herself admits she has no sense of morality. [[PragmaticVillainy That doesn't mean she's willing to take the high ground if it allows her to survive.]]
* CreateYourOwnVillain: Peter states that he's working with the Black Knights and fighting the TSAB because [[spoiler:the latter is responsible for the Mandarin's creation.]]
** [[spoiler:Not that it helps as they already created [[Anime/NanohaStrikerS Jail Scagllieti]].
* ETGaveUsWifi: Accroding to Verossa's investigations, [[spoiler:as well as Peter and Graham, the Mandarin and his allies are responsible for Britannia's rise to power, including the development of Knightmare Frames!]]
* FaceHeelTurn: [[spoiler:Suzuka]]
* PragmaticVillainy: If Verossa's investigations are correct, [[spoiler:which they are]], one can reverse engineer interdimensional technology to start a huge company on an undeveloped planet. As long as they hide behind the non-interference policy of the Bureau, one can automatically accumulate manpower and resources for one to wage war against bigger threats.
* VillainRespect: Jail Scaglietti gives his own respects to Zero, even after [[spoiler:inadvertently getting close to killing one of his own subordinates.]]
