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* AnyoneCanDie: So far, [[spoiler:Ponyville, Shining Armor and possibly Celestia have all died.]]
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* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler:In the end, Rarity willingly gives up her body and soul for Vale...who goes on to become the genocidal BigBad of ''Inner Demons II''.]]
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* GoodOlWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.
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* GoodOlWays: GoodOldWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.
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* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight.
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* NotWhatISignedOnFor: Tracy didn't realise what the Sons of Midnight were after. It's only when [[spoiler:they prepare to sacrifice everyone in Ponyville that he realises they might not be on the same page.]]
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** Chapter 10: The Sons of Midnight [[spoiler:turn all of Ponyville into a sacrifice to free Katastroph, killing everyone left in it.]]
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* BrainwashedAndCrazy: All the Sons of Midnight have the Power of the Queen, meaning they can do this to ponies.
* ComeWithMeIfYouWantToLive: Said by Octavia to Diamond Tiara in chapter 8.
* GoodOlWays: Red Gala, a.k.a [[spoiler:Granny Smith reborn]], finds the way Sweet Apple Acres is being run by Applejack and Flim and Flam as disgusting.
* [[EvilCannotComprehendGood Jerks Cannot Comprehend Good]]: Vale doesn't get why ponies don't want her to kill a pony.
* PsychosomaticSuperpowerOutage: Pinkie Pie's Laughter-based powers stop working during a fight in chapter 9.
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* VillainousIncest: [[spoiler:Red Gala, formerly known as Granny Smith, forces herself on Big Macintosh.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 9, where Pinkie Pie's Element stops working properly, and then goes dead.
* VillainousIncest: [[spoiler:Red Gala, formerly known as Granny Smith, forces herself on Big Macintosh.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 9, where Pinkie Pie's Element stops working properly, and then goes dead.
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* DealWithTheDevil: [[spoiler:Morgana made a deal with the King of Tartarus, then turned on him and stole some of his power.]]
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* AntiChrist: Diamond Tiara is the Appraiser of the End, the being who will lead Katastrophus out of Tartarus and bring about the end of the world. She's much rather be an AntiAntiChrist.
* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight.
* {{Bishonen}}: Tracy, as the narration explicitly points out.
* AntiChrist: Diamond Tiara is the Appraiser of the End, the being who will lead Katastrophus out of Tartarus and bring about the end of the world. She's much rather be an AntiAntiChrist.
* BigBad: From the looks it, Black Sun, leader of the Sons of Midnight.
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Tracy wants revenge on everyone responsible for the death of his sister, [[spoiler:Trixie.]]
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* AntagonisticOffspring: Twilight Sparkle (or more accurately, Midnight) and her father Katastrophus, King of Tartarus.
** Twilight is pretty shocked to learn that, yeah, Diamond Tiara does actually want to ''hurt'' her mother.
* ChekhovsMIA: Apple Bloom is currently "missing".
** Twilight is pretty shocked to learn that, yeah, Diamond Tiara does actually want to ''hurt'' her mother.
* ChekhovsMIA: Apple Bloom is currently "missing".
* DarkerAndEdgier: Not that the original Inner Demons was a romp in the park, but this story is pretty damn dark already.
* IdiotBall: Somehow Twilight Sparkle cannot tell that leaving Diamond Tiara with her mother, whom she's openly expressed her hatred for, is a Bad Idea.
** Prince Blueblood. And yet Princess Celestia and Princess Luna actually think it's a good idea to leave Canterlot in his hooves.
* LetMeTellYouAStory: Twilight tells Fluttershy a tale about two goddesses. Fluttershy catches on pretty quickly that it's about Midnight and Vale.
* LetMeTellYouAStory: Twilight tells Fluttershy a tale about two goddesses. Fluttershy catches on pretty quickly that it's about Midnight and Vale.
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* ThatThingIsNotMyChild: Pearl Necklace keeps calling Diamond Tiara a "devil-child".
* ThatThingIsNotMyChild: Pearl Necklace keeps calling Diamond Tiara a "devil-child".
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* AbusiveParent: Pearl Necklace, Diamond Tiara's mother, is an insane, needy, emotionally and verbally abusive pony, and the reason Diamond Tiara used to be who she was. Eventually Diamond Tiara reaches her breaking point.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: While wondering what sort of being Diamond Tiara could be, Silver Spoon checks a book which mentions among other things ''Succubi''.
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* ItIsDehumanizing: Vale refers to Diamond Tiara this way.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Pearl Necklace. She makes a scene at her husband's funeral when Diamond Tiara's friends try to comfort her, then demands to leave before the ceremony's even over.
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 6 goes from a frank discussion of Pearl Necklace's mental state to Sweetie Belle wondering if Silver Spoon is in fact a robot (or, as the narration puts it: "a very sexy android")
* MyBelovedSmother: Pearl Necklace, again, is determined to control every aspect of Diamond Tiara's life.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Pearl Necklace. She makes a scene at her husband's funeral when Diamond Tiara's friends try to comfort her, then demands to leave before the ceremony's even over.
* MoodWhiplash: Chapter 6 goes from a frank discussion of Pearl Necklace's mental state to Sweetie Belle wondering if Silver Spoon is in fact a robot (or, as the narration puts it: "a very sexy android")
* MyBelovedSmother: Pearl Necklace, again, is determined to control every aspect of Diamond Tiara's life.
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* {{Cult}}: The Sons of Midnight, who are an ObviouslyEvil bunch of ponies who wander around in black cloaks.
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* KnightTemplar: Vale, Vale, ''Vale''. She is incapable of believing Twilight Sparkle is anything more than a monstrous demon, and admits that if Twilight gets in her way, she'll do her level best to kill her.
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* {{Reincarnation}}: Octavia is Morgana reborn.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Just seeing Vale again is enough for Twilight Sparkle's eyes to turn red.
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* WhamLine: "What she's trying to say is that Mister Rich had a heart attack!"
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* AbusiveParent: Pearl Necklace, Diamond Tiara's mother, is an insane, needy, emotionally and verbally abusive pony, and the reason Diamond Tiara used to be who she was. Eventually Diamond Tiara reaches her breaking point.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Fluttershy is falling to pieces with Rarity missing. It's implied she's been DrowningHerSorrows over not finding Rarity in the evenings.
* HistoryRepeats: Diamond Tiara, like Twilight Sparkle, is hitting twenty-one and having ominous dreams about the future. Unlike last time, she's in a far worse situation than Twilight ever was.
* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle and Princess Celestia have become one during the time skip.]]
* StepfordSmiler: Diamond Tiara. Her friends can tell.
* TookALevelInJerkass: By the time the story starts, [[spoiler:Fluttershy has taken several, edging into AbusiveParent territory in the process.]]
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Twilight Sparkle sure doesn't.
* AbusiveParent: Pearl Necklace, Diamond Tiara's mother, is an insane, needy, emotionally and verbally abusive pony, and the reason Diamond Tiara used to be who she was. Eventually Diamond Tiara reaches her breaking point.
* AngerBornOfWorry: Fluttershy is falling to pieces with Rarity missing. It's implied she's been DrowningHerSorrows over not finding Rarity in the evenings.
* HistoryRepeats: Diamond Tiara, like Twilight Sparkle, is hitting twenty-one and having ominous dreams about the future. Unlike last time, she's in a far worse situation than Twilight ever was.
* OfficialCouple: [[spoiler:Twilight Sparkle and Princess Celestia have become one during the time skip.]]
* StepfordSmiler: Diamond Tiara. Her friends can tell.
* TookALevelInJerkass: By the time the story starts, [[spoiler:Fluttershy has taken several, edging into AbusiveParent territory in the process.]]
* WhoWantsToLiveForever: Twilight Sparkle sure doesn't.
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* InformedAttribute: We're told Vale shares a lot in common personality-wise with Rarity, yet we never see any of this, even [[spoiler:during Inner Demons II, when Vale is awake. Although given the All-Mother has been messing with her mind, this might be intentional.]]
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* SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler:In the end, Rarity willingly gives up her body and soul for Vale...who goes on to become the genocidal BigBad of ''Inner Demons II''.]]
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* FantasticRacism: The All-Mother looks down on Princess Luna because she's [[spoiler:half Earth-pony.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: As Rarity continues up the tower, more and more of her memories are erased [[spoiler:and replaced with Vale's.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: As Rarity continues up the tower, more and more of her memories are erased [[spoiler:and replaced with Vale's. This is to make sure Vale won't be "confused" by any of Rarity's feelings for her friends and family.]]
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* LoveMakesYouEvil: The reason Midnight embraced her purpose? [[spoiler:The inhabitants of the village she lived in killed Azure Sky for defending her.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Midnight was already unstable after [[spoiler:Azure's death. Then Vale decided to finish her mission, pushing Midnight right over into OmnicidalManiac territory.]]
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Midnight was already unstable after [[spoiler:Azure's death. Then Vale decided to finish her mission, pushing Midnight right over into OmnicidalManiac territory.]]
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Princess Celestia, and the first sonic rainboom, threw a monkey-wrench into the All-Mother's plan to resurrect Vale.
** Trixie and Luna are another.
** Trixie and Luna are another.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Morgana, one of Midnight and Vale's friends, though she didn't exactly try to hide it.
* {{Curse}}: Midnight curses [[spoiler:Morgana to live through every reincarnation she has without her magic.]]
* {{Curse}}: Midnight curses [[spoiler:Morgana to live through every reincarnation she has without her magic.]]
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* GoodIsNotNice: The All-Mother and her agents the Angels are largely inconsiderate about the ponies down below.
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* GoodIsNotNice: The All-Mother and her agents the Angels are largely inconsiderate about the ponies down below.below. The All-Mother briefly speaks to Luna and Rarity, outright insulting and denigrating both of them, and stating the ponies are essentially her property.
* KickTheDog: When Rarity vows not to [[spoiler:be erased in favor of Vale, the All-Mother makes her fight a recreation of Spike.]]
* KickTheDog: When Rarity vows not to [[spoiler:be erased in favor of Vale, the All-Mother makes her fight a recreation of Spike.]]
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* BiggerBad: Katastroph, the King of Tartarus, Midnight's father. He briefly appears in a flashback, but in the modern day he's sealed away within Tartarus.
* FetchQuest: How the Elements of Harmony were originally found.
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* {{Reincarnation}}: In addition to the already established Twilight Sparkle and Apple Bloom, we have [[spoiler:Rarity, who is a reincarnation of Vale, and Trixie, a reincarnation of Azure Sky, one of the first ponies who met Midnight.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: As Rarity continues up the tower, more and more of her memories are erased [[spoiler:and replaced with Vale's.]]
* LikeCannotCutLike: During a fight with [[spoiler:a mock-up of Rainbow Dash, Trixie admits she can't help, since she's a reincarnation of a former bearer of the Element of Loyalty.]]
* {{Reincarnation}}: In addition to the already established Twilight Sparkle and Apple Bloom, we have [[spoiler:Rarity, who is a reincarnation of Vale, and Trixie, a reincarnation of Azure Sky, one of the first ponies who metMidnight.]]Midnight, which makes Twilight and Trixie's relationship in the original story a ReincarnationRomance.]]
* ScrewDestiny: Princess Luna expresses this attitude. It's why she tries to help save Rarity.
* LikeCannotCutLike: During a fight with [[spoiler:a mock-up of Rainbow Dash, Trixie admits she can't help, since she's a reincarnation of a former bearer of the Element of Loyalty.]]
* {{Reincarnation}}: In addition to the already established Twilight Sparkle and Apple Bloom, we have [[spoiler:Rarity, who is a reincarnation of Vale, and Trixie, a reincarnation of Azure Sky, one of the first ponies who met
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* [[WhatMeasureIsNonHuman What Measure is Non-Pony]]: As far as the Angels are concerned, [[spoiler:Rarity isn't really alive.]]
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* [[WhatMeasureIsNonHuman [[WhatMeasureIsANonHuman What Measure is A Non-Pony]]: As far as the Angels are concerned, [[spoiler:Rarity isn't really alive.]]
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* GodGuise: Princess Celestia is in fact an Angel, sent to Equestria to control the sun.
* GoodIsNotNice: The All-Mother and her agents the Angels are largely inconsiderate about the ponies down below.
* {{Reincarnation}}: In addition to the already established Twilight Sparkle and Apple Bloom, we have [[spoiler:Rarity, who is a reincarnation of Vale, and Trixie, a reincarnation of Azure Sky, one of the first ponies who met Midnight.]]
* ShoutOut: The framing device is a blatant shout out to VideoGame/KingdomHeartsChainOfMemories.
* SpiritAdvisor: Trixie, who helps Rarity through the tower.
* UsedToBeASweetKid: The original Queen of Darkness, Midnight.
* [[WhatMeasureIsNonHuman What Measure is Non-Pony]]: As far as the Angels are concerned, [[spoiler:Rarity isn't really alive.]]
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** [[spoiler: They're both brought back from the horizon by Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh's love, respectfully.]]
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** [[spoiler: They're both brought back from the horizon by Rainbow Dash and Big Macintosh's love, respectfully.respectively.]]
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** The way the series is structured seems to take a page from [[Franchise/KingdomHearts Kingdom Hearts]]. It has the first installment, then 2 spin-off/pseudo-sequels that take place at roughly the same time, and finally the actual numbered "true" sequel
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Now has an actual sequel, ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8401800/1/10_Years 10 ]] [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/95139/inner-demons-10-years Years]]'', in which all the characters (primarily Apple Bloom and her friends) deal with the emotional aftereffects of everything that happened in ''Inner Demons'', all while Apple Bloom counts down the time until [[spoiler: she can reunite with Lezard]].
Also has another sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/52198/inner-demons-fragments-of-truth Fragments of Truth]]'', which begins to explain some events that occur in the last chapter of "10 Years".
Now has it's true sequel ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/131791/inner-demons-ii Inner Demons II]] set after both "10 Years" and "Fragments of Truth".
Also has another sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/52198/inner-demons-fragments-of-truth Fragments of Truth]]'', which begins to explain some events that occur in the last chapter of "10 Years".
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Can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7966067/1/Inner_Demons here]] or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45017/Inner-Demons here]]. It has also been adapted into an audio drama, which can be listened to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6PXwivAIdZE here]]
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Can be read [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7966067/1/Inner_Demons here]] or [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/45017/Inner-Demons here]]. It has also been adapted into an audio drama, which can be listened to [[http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6PXwivAIdZE com/playlist?list=PLttqCfCJFFAwAe39lVAoH571Ioje1PXIk here]]
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** When Applejack finally gets a chance to confront Queen!Twilight, the latter states "[[HarryPotter/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows Element of Honesty... Come to die.]]"
*** When Apple Bloom meets with [[spoiler: Trixie in the afterlife]], it plays out similar to a scene between Harry and [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] in ''[[HarryPotter/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows The Deathly Hallows]]''.
*** When Apple Bloom meets with [[spoiler: Trixie in the afterlife]], it plays out similar to a scene between Harry and [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] in ''[[HarryPotter/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows The Deathly Hallows]]''.
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*** When Apple Bloom meets with [[spoiler: Trixie in the afterlife]], it plays out similar to a scene between Harry and [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] in''[[HarryPotter/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows ''[[Literature/HarryPotterAndTheDeathlyHallows The Deathly Hallows]]''.
*** When Apple Bloom meets with [[spoiler: Trixie in the afterlife]], it plays out similar to a scene between Harry and [[spoiler: Dumbledore]] in
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** [[spoiler: Example from a villain -- Apple Bloom tries to immobilize Queen!Twilight with a non-fatal sword strike, only for Trixie to [[TakingTheBullet push her out of the way]][[StupidSacrifice and be fatally run through instead.]]]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: If Celestia had told Twilight about the prophecy before she found it, or broken the news to her gentler, it's possible Twilight's downward spiral could have been halted. At the very least, [[spoiler: Celestia wouldn't have been [[TakenForGranite petrified]]]].
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: If Celestia had told Twilight about the prophecy before she found it, or broken the news to her gentler, it's possible Twilight's downward spiral could have been halted. At the very least, [[spoiler: Celestia [[spoiler:Celestia wouldn't have been [[TakenForGranite petrified]]]].
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** [[spoiler: Apple Bloom accidentally kills Trixie while trying to immobilize Queen!Twilight. This causes Queen!Twilight to have a VillainousBreakdown and to [[OneWingedAngel ascend to Alicorn-hood]].]]
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**[[spoiler: Apple [[spoiler:Apple Bloom accidentally kills Trixie while trying to immobilize Queen!Twilight. This causes Queen!Twilight to have a VillainousBreakdown and to [[OneWingedAngel ascend to Alicorn-hood]].]]
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* ATragedyOfImpulsiveness: Pretty much any of the actions that fall under NiceJobBreakingItHero is this.
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Also has another sequel, ''[[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/52198/inner-demons-fragments-of-truth Fragments of Truth]]''.