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* UnreliableNarrator: Downplayed. Maddie is not trying to lie, but her misunderstandings affect the narration, especially in the early chapters, when the LanguageBarrier is still a major problem. For example, Maddie visits the town of Fornost, but it might not be Fornost; Maddie later uses the name "maybe-not-Fornost". Then in chapter 13, Maddie believes that Lord Kinsey will fire her if "gossip gets out", but this might not be true; perhaps Lord Kinsey is smart enough to know that the gossip is false. A writer's note on chapter 14 declares Maddie as an unreliable narrator.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Downplayed. Maddie is not trying to lie, but her misunderstandings affect the narration, especially in the early chapters, when the LanguageBarrier is still a major problem. For example, Maddie visits the town of Fornost, but it might not be Fornost; Maddie later uses the name "maybe-not-Fornost". Then in chapter 13, Maddie believes that Lord Kinsey will fire her if "gossip gets out", but this might not be true; perhaps Lord Kinsey is smart enough to know that might or might not believe the gossip is false.gossip. A writer's note on chapter 14 declares Maddie as an unreliable narrator.
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* AgentScully: The story dumps Maddie in Middle-earth. Maddie, who has no belief in magic, tries to think of a mundane explanation. A kidnapper drugged her and dumped her, but there are no tire tracks. Maddie is dreaming, but [[PinchMe can't wake]]. She is in a remote part of Canada or America, but no one speaks English. Maddie is not a FlatEarthAtheist; after finding more evidence, she accepts that she is in some fantasy world.
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* BonusMaterial: The drabbles in the "[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9748362/1/HwtF-Drabble-Collection HwtF Drabble Collection]]" ship Maddie with different characters, and include "A Study in Frustration: Erynion". Apart from that, I-Mushi has [[http://i-mushi.tumblr.com/tagged/hwtf tumblr posts tagged "hwtf"]].
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* OutdoorBathPeeping: The bandits want to watch as Maddie and the other prisoners bathe in a stream. They all refuse to bathe, so this is a DefiedTrope.
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* GratuitousFrench: Chapter 10 is "Danse Macabre", French for "[[TheDeadCanDance Dance of Death]]".
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* PointyEars: When Maddie first hears the elves, they don't sound human. When she first sees an elf, she [[{{Fainting}} faints]]. She guesses that they might be fairies, elves or nymphs. Maddie needs a glimpse of pointed ears (hidden under hair) to decide that they are elves.
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* PointyEars: When Maddie first hears the elves, they don't sound human. When she first sees an elf, she [[{{Fainting}} faints]]. She guesses finds creatures that they might be fairies, elves elves, fairies or nymphs. Maddie needs a glimpse of pointed ears (hidden under hair) to decide that they are elves.
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* OntologicalMystery: The readers know that Maddie [[TrappedInAnotherWorld fell into Middle-earth]], but Maddie does not. She only knows that she is in a field and not in her apartment. Then she walks to civilization, but finds a medieval village, where [[LanguageBarrier none speak English]], and none know of America. Maddie discovers this fairy-tale world, but not why it chose her to come here.
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* FromDressToDressing: Maddie rips the sleeves of her dress in chapter 5 "Up and Out", to make pads to soak the blood from her period. In this DeconstructionFic, ripping her dress was not trivial. "I had to use my teeth and rocks, and got some rug burns on my hands from all the pulling."
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* FromDressToDressing: Maddie rips the sleeves of her dress in chapter 5 "Up and Out", to make pads to soak the blood from her own period. In this DeconstructionFic, ripping her dress was not trivial. "I had to use my teeth and rocks, and got some rug burns on my hands from all the pulling."
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* FromDressToDressing: Maddie rips the sleeves of her dress in chapter 5 "Up and Out", to make pads to soak the blood from her period. In this DeconstructionFic, ripping her dress was not trivial. "I had to use my teeth and rocks, and got some rug burns on my hands from all the pulling."
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* MundaneLuxury:
** Maddie misses so many things. From chapter 3 "Where Many Paths and Errands Meet",
---> ''Could I live in a place like this? Without plumbing (the outhouse was ''filthy''), electricity, microwaveable food, the luxuries I was used to?''
** Maddie becomes homesick for 'soda, hamburgers, french fries, ketchup' in chapter 4, and a longer list of foods in chapter 6. Maddie can find one luxury in Middle-earth. In chapter 19, Maddie is happy to have butter.
** Maddie misses so many things. From chapter 3 "Where Many Paths and Errands Meet",
---> ''Could I live in a place like this? Without plumbing (the outhouse was ''filthy''), electricity, microwaveable food, the luxuries I was used to?''
** Maddie becomes homesick for 'soda, hamburgers, french fries, ketchup' in chapter 4, and a longer list of foods in chapter 6. Maddie can find one luxury in Middle-earth. In chapter 19, Maddie is happy to have butter.
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**MundaneLuxury: Maddie misses so many things. From chapter 3 "Where Many Paths and Errands Meet",
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--> ''I wasn't even surprised by my luck of running into people in totally uninhabited places anymore. Something was keeping me alive here, because otherwise I'd have been dead outside Bree months ago.''
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--> ''I I wasn't even surprised by my luck of running into people in totally uninhabited places anymore. Something was keeping me alive here, because otherwise I'd have been dead outside Bree months ago.''
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-> ''Where was the Peace Corps? World Health Organization? What country would allow any citizen, even ones who were chose [sic] to live a more primitive life, live in this kind of muck? I was absolutely gob-smacked by the disgusting standards of living.''
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-> ''Where was ''To make a realistic girl-falls-into-M.E. story: Remind the Peace Corps? World Health Organization? What country would allow any citizen, even ones who were chose [sic] to live a more primitive life, live in this kind of muck? I was absolutely gob-smacked by readers that the disgusting standards of living.medieval ages are a very different world than our own, and that we are completely unprepared to be suddenly dropped in them.''
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* TheHomewardJourney: From the beginning of the story, Maddie wants to go home. To find information, Maddie wanders around Middle-earth, rather than settle in one place.
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* TheresNoPlaceLikeHome: From the beginning of the story, Maddie wants to go home. To search for answers, Maddie wanders around Middle-earth, rather than settle in one place.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: The magic that dumped Maddie into Middle-earth might also have blocked some memories, because [[Maddie forgot about ''The Lord of the Rings''. She has seen the movies and read the books. Her memories come back in chapter 11.]]
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: The magic that dumped Maddie into Middle-earth might also have blocked some memories, because [[Maddie [[spoiler:Maddie forgot about ''The Lord of the Rings''. She has seen the movies and read the books. Her memories come back in chapter 11.]]
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''Home with the Fairies'' (
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6024634/1/Home-with-the-Fairies FFN]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/599365 AO3]]) is a DeconstructionFic about [[TrappedInAnotherWorld girls falling into Middle-earth]], the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. The author I. Mushi wanted to write a "realistic" story, to contrast with other fanfics that drop modern folk into Middle-earth.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6024634/1/Home-with-the-Fairies FFN]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/599365 AO3]]) is a DeconstructionFic about [[TrappedInAnotherWorld girls falling into Middle-earth]], the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. The author I. Mushi wanted to write a "realistic" story, to contrast with other fanfics that drop modern folk into Middle-earth.
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* EasyAmnesia: [[spoiler:Maddie forgot about ''The Lord of the Rings'' for many months, despite having seen the movies and read the books. She believes that the magic that brought her into Middle-earth might have caused this amnesia.]]
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* FixFic: The insertion of Maddie changes the story, in more than one way. The big fix happens in chapter 17.
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* MundaneLuxury:
** Maddie misses so many things. From chapter 3 "Where Many Paths and Errands Meet",
---> ''Could I live in a place like this? Without plumbing (the outhouse was ''filthy''), electricity, microwaveable food, the luxuries I was used to?''
** Maddie becomes homesick for 'soda, hamburgers, french fries, ketchup' in chapter 4, and a longer list of foods in chapter 6.
** Maddie misses so many things. From chapter 3 "Where Many Paths and Errands Meet",
---> ''Could I live in a place like this? Without plumbing (the outhouse was ''filthy''), electricity, microwaveable food, the luxuries I was used to?''
** Maddie becomes homesick for 'soda, hamburgers, french fries, ketchup' in chapter 4, and a longer list of foods in chapter 6.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Maddie almost never uses her full name, Madeline Greene. In Middle-earth, none can guess that Maddie is short for Madeline.
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* SuddenlyAlwaysKnewThat: Maddie throws a flaming torch at an enemy. It hits. How did she learn to aim? "I played softball in college."
* TheresNoPlaceLikeHome: From the beginning of the story, Maddie wants to go home. To search for answers, Maddie wanders around Middle-earth, rather than settle in one place.
* TheresNoPlaceLikeHome: From the beginning of the story, Maddie wants to go home. To search for answers, Maddie wanders around Middle-earth, rather than settle in one place.
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* HeroicBSOD: This happens to Maddie at the very beginning. She is no longer in her apartment, but in a grassland in the middle of nowhere.
--> ''I cried and screamed, ran in circles, tripped and fell, and basically went completely insane for about ten minutes.''
--> ''I cried and screamed, ran in circles, tripped and fell, and basically went completely insane for about ten minutes.''
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* {{Fainting}}: Maddie faints when she first sees an elf, one of an InhumanlyBeautifulRace. Before she faints, she feels "a strange preternatural sense of both awe and fear"; the elf "looks so perfect it was painful". Maddie faints perhaps because she is a transplant from a world with no elves. The faint lasts more than a few seconds. Someone moves Maddie to a bed, and she stays asleep until late morning.
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* {{Fainting}}: Maddie faints when she first sees an elf, one of an InhumanlyBeautifulRace. Before she faints, she feels "a strange preternatural sense of both awe and fear"; the elf "looks so perfect it was painful". Maddie faints perhaps because she is a transplant from a world with no elves. The faint lasts more than a few seconds. Someone moves picks up Maddie and moves her to a bed, and where she stays asleep until late morning.the next day.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Downplayed. Maddie is not trying to lie, but her misunderstandings affect the narration, especially in the early chapters, when the LanguageBarrier is still a major problem. For example, Maddie visits the town of Fornost, but it might not be Fornost; Maddie later uses the name "maybe-not-Fornost". Then in chapter 13, Maddie believes that Lord Kinsey will fire her if "gossip gets out", but this might not be true; perhaps Lord Kinsey is smart enough to know that the gossip is false. A [[WordOfGod writer's note]] on chapter 14 declares Maddie as an unreliable narrator.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Downplayed. Maddie is not trying to lie, but her misunderstandings affect the narration, especially in the early chapters, when the LanguageBarrier is still a major problem. For example, Maddie visits the town of Fornost, but it might not be Fornost; Maddie later uses the name "maybe-not-Fornost". Then in chapter 13, Maddie believes that Lord Kinsey will fire her if "gossip gets out", but this might not be true; perhaps Lord Kinsey is smart enough to know that the gossip is false. A [[WordOfGod writer's note]] note on chapter 14 declares Maddie as an unreliable narrator.
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''Home with the Fairies'' is a DeconstructionFic about [[TrappedInAnotherWorld girls falling into Middle-earth]], the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. The author I. Mushi wanted to write a "realistic" story, to contrast with other fanfics that drop modern folk into Middle-earth.
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''Home with the Fairies'' (
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6024634/1/Home-with-the-Fairies FFN]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/599365 AO3]]) is a DeconstructionFic about [[TrappedInAnotherWorld girls falling into Middle-earth]], the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. The author I. Mushi wanted to write a "realistic" story, to contrast with other fanfics that drop modern folk into Middle-earth.
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6024634/1/Home-with-the-Fairies FFN]] or [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/599365 AO3]]) is a DeconstructionFic about [[TrappedInAnotherWorld girls falling into Middle-earth]], the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. The author I. Mushi wanted to write a "realistic" story, to contrast with other fanfics that drop modern folk into Middle-earth.
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Maddie is a woman from America. She suddenly finds herself alone in a grassland, without knowing that this is Middle-earth. Now she's in "The Medieval Times Show You Can't Leave", and [[LanguageBarrier no one speaks English]]. The story is serious, with many tropes PlayedForDrama, but Maddie eventually adapts to this land, and builds her own adventure.
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Maddie is a woman from America. She suddenly finds herself alone in a grassland, without knowing that this is Middle-earth. Now she's in "The Medieval Times Show You Can't Leave", and [[LanguageBarrier no one speaks English]]. The story is serious, with many tropes PlayedForDrama, but Maddie eventually adapts to this land, and builds makes her own adventure.
adventure in this land.
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--> ''I cried and screamed, ran in circles, tripped and fell, and basically went completely insane for about ten minutes.''
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* TheDungAges: In chapter 3, this is how Maddie perceives the town of Bree. It looks medieval, and it stinks, with "open sewers down the sides of the street" and "the retched filth lying in the gutters and alleys". It disgusts her, but the locals seem to ignore it.
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* {{Fainting}}: Elves are an InhumanlyBeautifulRace. When Maddie first sees an elf, she faints.
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* {{Fainting}}: Elves are Maddie faints when she first sees an elf, one of an InhumanlyBeautifulRace. When Before she faints, she feels "a strange preternatural sense of both awe and fear"; the elf "looks so perfect it was painful". Maddie first sees an elf, faints perhaps because she faints.is a transplant from a world with no elves. The faint lasts more than a few seconds. Someone moves Maddie to a bed, and she stays asleep until late morning.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Downplayed. Maddie is not trying to lie, but her misunderstandings affect the narration, especially in the early chapters, when the LanguageBarrier is still a major problem. For example, Maddie visits the town of Fornost, but it might not be Fornost; Maddie later uses the name "maybe-not-Fornost". Then in chapter 13, Maddie believes that Lord Kinsey will fire her if "gossip gets out", but Lord Kinsey might be smart enough to know that the gossip is false, so he might be protecting Maddie. A [[WordOfGod writer's note]] on chapter 14 declares Maddie as an unreliable narrator.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Downplayed. Maddie is not trying to lie, but her misunderstandings affect the narration, especially in the early chapters, when the LanguageBarrier is still a major problem. For example, Maddie visits the town of Fornost, but it might not be Fornost; Maddie later uses the name "maybe-not-Fornost". Then in chapter 13, Maddie believes that Lord Kinsey will fire her if "gossip gets out", but this might not be true; perhaps Lord Kinsey might be is smart enough to know that the gossip is false, so he might be protecting Maddie.false. A [[WordOfGod writer's note]] on chapter 14 declares Maddie as an unreliable narrator.
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* PointyEars: When Maddie first hears the elves, they don't sound human. When she first sees an elf, she [[{{Fainting}} faints]]. She guesses that they might be fairies, elves or nymphs. Maddie needs a glimpse of pointed ears (hidden under hair) to decide that they are elves.
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* UnreliableNarrator: Downplayed. Maddie is not trying to lie, but her misunderstandings affect the narration, especially in the early chapters, when the LanguageBarrier is still a major problem. For example, Maddie visits the town of Fornost, but it might not be Fornost; Maddie later uses the name "maybe-not-Fornost". Then in chapter 13, Maddie believes that Lord Kinsey will fire her if "gossip gets out", but Lord Kinsey might be smart enough to know that the gossip is false, so he might be protecting Maddie. A [[WordOfGod writer's note]] on chapter 14 declares Maddie as an unreliable narrator.
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Maddie is a woman from America. She lands suddenly finds herself alone in Middle-earth...
a grassland, without knowing that this is Middle-earth. Now she's in "The Medieval Times Show You Can't Leave", and [[LanguageBarrier no one speaks English]]. The story is serious, with many tropes PlayedForDrama, but Maddie eventually adapts to this land, and builds her own adventure.
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* AttemptedRape: Maddie must accept food from strangers. One of these strangers tries to rape Maddie, but Maddie fights him until another character rescues Maddie.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: When Maddie lands in Middle-earth, she has no cell phone reception. Because she knows not that she is in Middle-earth (a place with no cell towers), Maddie continues looking for reception until her phone's battery dies forever.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: When Maddie lands in Middle-earth, she has no cell phone reception. Because she knows not that she is in Middle-earth (a place with no cell towers), Maddie continues looking for reception until her phone's battery dies forever.
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* AttemptedRape: To survive the first chapters, Maddie must accept food from strangers. One of these strangers tries to rape Maddie, but Maddie fights him until another character rescues Maddie.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: When Maddie lands in Middle-earth, she has no cell phone reception.Because she knows Maddie continues looking for reception, not knowing that she is in Middle-earth (a place land with no cell towers), Maddie continues looking for reception until her towers). She stops when phone's battery dies forever.
* CellPhonesAreUseless: When Maddie lands in Middle-earth, she has no cell phone reception.
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* DamselInDistress: Maddie is in a group of travelers when bandits attack them. They kill some {{Red Shirt}}s and kidnap Maddie and the others. They all remain prisoners until the eventual rescue. A few more Red Shirts die, and Maddie is lucky to be among the survivors.
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* DamselInDistress: Maddie is in a group of travelers when bandits attack them. They kill some {{Red Shirt}}s and kidnap Maddie and the others. They all remain Some of the prisoners until the eventual rescue. A few more Red Shirts die, and later die. Maddie is lucky to be among the survivors.
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* EasyAmnesia: [[spoiler:Maddie forgot about ''The Lord of the Rings'' for a long time. She thinks that the magic that brought her to Middle-earth might have caused this amnesia.]]
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* EasyAmnesia: [[spoiler:Maddie forgot about ''The Lord of the Rings'' for a long time. many months, despite having seen the movies and read the books. She thinks believes that the magic that brought her to into Middle-earth might have caused this amnesia.]]
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* LanguageBarrier: In Middle-earth, no one speaks English. Maddie will take months to learn enough [[CommonTongue Westron]] to talk to others.
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* RedShirt: Unnamed characters die because Middle-earth is a dangerous place.
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* RedShirt: Unnamed Some nameless characters die die, because Middle-earth is a dangerous place.
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* CanYouHearMeNow: CellPhonesAreUseless: When Maddie lands in Middle-earth, she has no cell phone reception. Because she knows not that she is in Middle-earth (a place with no cell towers), Maddie continues looking for reception until her phone's battery dies forever.
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-> ''Where was the Peace Corps? World Health Organization? What country would allow any citizen, even ones who were chose [sic] to live a more primitive life, live in this kind of muck? I was absolutely gob-smacked by the disgusting standards of living.''
-->-- Chapter 3, "Where Many Paths and Errands Meet"
''Home with the Fairies'' is a DeconstructionFic about [[TrappedInAnotherWorld girls falling into Middle-earth]], the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. The author I. Mushi wanted to write a "realistic" story, to contrast with other fanfics that drop modern folk into Middle-earth.
Maddie is a woman from America. She lands in Middle-earth...
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6024634/1/Home-with-the-Fairies Read it here.]] The story was not complete.
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* AttemptedRape: Maddie must accept food from strangers. One of these strangers tries to rape Maddie, but Maddie fights him until another character rescues Maddie.
* CanYouHearMeNow: When Maddie lands in Middle-earth, she has no cell phone reception. Because she knows not that she is in Middle-earth (a place with no cell towers), Maddie continues looking for reception until her phone's battery dies forever.
* ChekhovsSkill: In one town, Maddie learns how to ride the horse. Later in the story, Maddie is alone with a horse, and must ride to survive.
* DamselInDistress: Maddie is in a group of travelers when bandits attack them. They kill some {{Red Shirt}}s and kidnap Maddie and the others. They all remain prisoners until the eventual rescue. A few more Red Shirts die, and Maddie is lucky to be among the survivors.
* DeconstructionFic: The author's goal is "a realistic girl-falls-into-M.E. story".
* EasyAmnesia: [[spoiler:Maddie forgot about ''The Lord of the Rings'' for a long time. She thinks that the magic that brought her to Middle-earth might have caused this amnesia.]]
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: To Maddie, Middle-earth resembles TheMiddleAges. Maddie is a modern woman from America who doesn't belong in medieval times.
* GratuitousFrench: Chapter 10 is "Danse Macabre", French for "[[TheDeadCanDance Dance of Death]]".
* LanguageBarrier: In Middle-earth, no one speaks English.
* MementoMacGuffin: Maddie's old things become mementos of her home in America. The most important memento is her dead cell phone; it is the one thing that she never shows to anyone else.
* NobodyPoops: The beginning of the story averts this. Because Middle-earth has no modern toilets, Maddie must learn to use the open outdoors, then an outhouse, then a chamber pot.
* PlotArmor: Maddie misses several chances to die. In chapter 9, she lampshades how events always seem to save her life.
--> ''I wasn't even surprised by my luck of running into people in totally uninhabited places anymore. Something was keeping me alive here, because otherwise I'd have been dead outside Bree months ago.''
* RedShirt: Unnamed characters die because Middle-earth is a dangerous place.
* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler:Baiard dies of an infected wound, and Maddie can't save him. Baiard was the horseman who escorted Maddie through Rohan. As a memorial, Maddie later claims to have a dead brother named Baiard.]]
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Maddie is trapped in Middle-earth. She verifies her problem, when she sees maps of this world, and can't find America or any other recognizable country.
-->-- Chapter 3, "Where Many Paths and Errands Meet"
''Home with the Fairies'' is a DeconstructionFic about [[TrappedInAnotherWorld girls falling into Middle-earth]], the setting of ''Literature/TheLordOfTheRings''. The author I. Mushi wanted to write a "realistic" story, to contrast with other fanfics that drop modern folk into Middle-earth.
Maddie is a woman from America. She lands in Middle-earth...
[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6024634/1/Home-with-the-Fairies Read it here.]] The story was not complete.
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!! This work provides examples of:
* AttemptedRape: Maddie must accept food from strangers. One of these strangers tries to rape Maddie, but Maddie fights him until another character rescues Maddie.
* CanYouHearMeNow: When Maddie lands in Middle-earth, she has no cell phone reception. Because she knows not that she is in Middle-earth (a place with no cell towers), Maddie continues looking for reception until her phone's battery dies forever.
* ChekhovsSkill: In one town, Maddie learns how to ride the horse. Later in the story, Maddie is alone with a horse, and must ride to survive.
* DamselInDistress: Maddie is in a group of travelers when bandits attack them. They kill some {{Red Shirt}}s and kidnap Maddie and the others. They all remain prisoners until the eventual rescue. A few more Red Shirts die, and Maddie is lucky to be among the survivors.
* DeconstructionFic: The author's goal is "a realistic girl-falls-into-M.E. story".
* EasyAmnesia: [[spoiler:Maddie forgot about ''The Lord of the Rings'' for a long time. She thinks that the magic that brought her to Middle-earth might have caused this amnesia.]]
* FishOutOfTemporalWater: To Maddie, Middle-earth resembles TheMiddleAges. Maddie is a modern woman from America who doesn't belong in medieval times.
* GratuitousFrench: Chapter 10 is "Danse Macabre", French for "[[TheDeadCanDance Dance of Death]]".
* LanguageBarrier: In Middle-earth, no one speaks English.
* MementoMacGuffin: Maddie's old things become mementos of her home in America. The most important memento is her dead cell phone; it is the one thing that she never shows to anyone else.
* NobodyPoops: The beginning of the story averts this. Because Middle-earth has no modern toilets, Maddie must learn to use the open outdoors, then an outhouse, then a chamber pot.
* PlotArmor: Maddie misses several chances to die. In chapter 9, she lampshades how events always seem to save her life.
--> ''I wasn't even surprised by my luck of running into people in totally uninhabited places anymore. Something was keeping me alive here, because otherwise I'd have been dead outside Bree months ago.''
* RedShirt: Unnamed characters die because Middle-earth is a dangerous place.
* SacrificialLamb: [[spoiler:Baiard dies of an infected wound, and Maddie can't save him. Baiard was the horseman who escorted Maddie through Rohan. As a memorial, Maddie later claims to have a dead brother named Baiard.]]
* TrappedInAnotherWorld: Maddie is trapped in Middle-earth. She verifies her problem, when she sees maps of this world, and can't find America or any other recognizable country.