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* PrecisionFStrike: Snape gives Harry one just before [[spoiler:he Portkeys to America]].
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, the current definition of Would Hit A Girl is "A guy that has no problems with violence against women is treated as morally questionable at best or evil at worst in a work's narrative and other characters". Any example that doesn't fit the new definition is removed.
, the current definition of Would Hit A Girl is "A guy that has no problems with violence against women is treated as morally questionable at best or evil at worst in a work's narrative and other characters". Any example that doesn't fit the new definition is removed.Changed line(s) 9,10 (click to see context) from:
%%* AboveTheInfluence: Harry.
%%* AntiHero: Harry is this in spades. Also Ginevra.
%%* AntiHero: Harry is this in spades. Also Ginevra.
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%%* AboveTheInfluence: Above The Influence: Harry.
%%*AntiHero: Anti Hero: Harry is this in spades. Also Ginevra.
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%%* WouldHitAGirl: Harry.
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The story begins in 1990, when Gellert Grindelwald - the wizard Dumbledore defeated back in 1945 - recovers the will to fight after reading an article about Harry in the newspaper. Escaping from the prison of Nurmengard, he returns to England and rescues Harry Potter from the Dursleys before forcing the latter to kill themselves via MakeItLookLikeAnAccident. As a consequence, people believe that Harry has died.
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The story begins in 1990, when Gellert Grindelwald - -- the wizard Dumbledore defeated back in 1945 - -- recovers the will to fight after reading an article about Harry in the newspaper. Escaping from the prison of Nurmengard, he returns to England and rescues Harry Potter from the Dursleys before forcing the latter to kill themselves via MakeItLookLikeAnAccident. As a consequence, people believe that Harry has died.
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* AboveTheInfluence: Harry.
* AntiHero: Harry is this in spades. Also Ginevra.
* AtrociousAlias: The fake name in Snape's passport when he is spirited by Harry to America, getting him out of the war. [[spoiler: Artemius Higginbottom.]]
* AntiHero: Harry is this in spades. Also Ginevra.
* AtrociousAlias: The fake name in Snape's passport when he is spirited by Harry to America, getting him out of the war. [[spoiler: Artemius Higginbottom.]]
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* AtrociousAlias: The fake name in Snape's passport when he is spirited by Harry to America, getting him out of the war.
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** [[spoiler: Also, two young adults are not going to be completely uprooting and reforming an entrenched and corrupt national government anytime soon.]]
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** [[spoiler: Also, [[spoiler:Also, two young adults are not going to be completely uprooting and reforming an entrenched and corrupt national government anytime soon.]]
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* BlackWidow: Blaise Zabini's mother is this, seducing rich wizards and then poisoning them - without leaving any proof - to inherit their money. Blaise plans to become [[TheBluebeard the male version of this]] [[spoiler:but when he accidentally kills Tracey Davis, Harry and Ginevra kill him in revenge]].
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* BlackWidow: Blaise Zabini's mother is this, seducing rich wizards and then poisoning them - -- without leaving any proof - -- to inherit their money. Blaise plans to become [[TheBluebeard the male version of this]] [[spoiler:but when he accidentally kills Tracey Davis, Harry and Ginevra kill him in revenge]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Harry's fights with anyone that attacks him at school. Particularly the fight in the first night, where he puts six of his fellow seventh-year Slytherins into the hospital wing, only using magic with one of them.
** Also, the duel between Ginevra and Hannah Abbott. Hannah barely has the time to cast a shield before Ginevra blasts her away.
** Also, the duel between Ginevra and Hannah Abbott. Hannah barely has the time to cast a shield before Ginevra blasts her away.
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* CurbStompBattle: CurbStompBattle:
** Harry's fights with anyone that attacks him at school. Particularly the fight in the first night, where he puts six of his fellow seventh-year Slytherins into the hospital wing, only using magic with one of them.
**Also, the The duel between Ginevra and Hannah Abbott. Hannah barely has the time to cast a shield before Ginevra blasts her away.
** Harry's fights with anyone that attacks him at school. Particularly the fight in the first night, where he puts six of his fellow seventh-year Slytherins into the hospital wing, only using magic with one of them.
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* DeconstructionFic: Of many Harry Potter Fanfic Tropes:
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* DeconstructionFic: Of many Harry Potter Fanfic Tropes:fanfic tropes:
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* EroticEating: Tracey Davis does this, eating things from Harry's plate, both to joke with Harry and [[spoiler:to make Draco Malfoy think she is willing to work for him]]. Unfortunately, [[spoiler:this accidentally gets her killed when she drinks poison that Blaise Zabini had put on Harry's drink.]]
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* EroticEating: Tracey Davis does this, eating things from Harry's plate, both to joke with Harry and [[spoiler:to make Draco Malfoy think she is willing to work for him]]. Unfortunately, [[spoiler:this accidentally gets her killed when she drinks poison that Blaise Zabini had put on in Harry's drink.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: turns out Dumbledore was right when he said there were worse things than death. [[spoiler:Namely, being condemned to stay in Limbo forever, without moving on.]]
** Or, as Madam Bones discovers, [[spoiler:losing all of her memories from after leaving Hogwarts, pretty much more than half of her life.]]
** Or, as Madam Bones discovers, [[spoiler:losing all of her memories from after leaving Hogwarts, pretty much more than half of her life.]]
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* FateWorseThanDeath: turns FateWorseThanDeath:
** Turns out Dumbledore was right when he said there were worse things than death.[[spoiler:Namely, being Namely, [[spoiler:being condemned to stay in Limbo forever, without moving on.]]
** Or, as Madam Bones discovers, [[spoiler:losing all of her memories from after leaving Hogwarts, i.e. pretty much more than half of her life.]]
** Turns out Dumbledore was right when he said there were worse things than death.
** Or, as Madam Bones discovers, [[spoiler:losing all of her memories from after leaving Hogwarts, i.e. pretty much more than half of her life.]]
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* HormoneAddledTeenager: Harry is quite shocked to discover that, at least in Slytherin, the older students have a lot of sex (in particular, Draco Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson and Blaise Zabini are apparently in a threesome).
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* HormoneAddledTeenager: HormoneAddledTeenager:
** Harry is quite shocked to discover that, at least in Slytherin, the older students have a lot of sex (in particular, Draco Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson and Blaise Zabini are apparently in a threesome).
** Harry is quite shocked to discover that, at least in Slytherin, the older students have a lot of sex (in particular, Draco Malfoy, Pansy Parkinson and Blaise Zabini are apparently in a threesome).
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* Hypocrite: Madam Bones claims she wants an orderly and lawful society, but has no problem in locking up one of the few people that can fight Voldemort or [[spoiler:allowing an Auror to rape a teenager]].
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* Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: Madam Bones claims she wants an orderly and lawful society, but has no problem in locking up one of the few people that can fight Voldemort or [[spoiler:allowing an Auror to rape a teenager]].
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* IToldYouSo: it does not happen, but Ginny knows Harry would be within his rights to say this [[spoiler:when his reluctance to visit the Burrow proves right, after the Weasleys trap Ginny and give her up to the Ministry]].
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* IToldYouSo: it does not happen, but Ginny Ginevra knows Harry would be within his rights to say this [[spoiler:when his reluctance to visit the Burrow proves right, after the Weasleys trap Ginny Ginevra and give her up to the Ministry]].
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: Grindelwald gets rid of the Dursleys this way, by causing a rupture in the gas line and forcing Petunia - under the Imperius curse - to light candles.
** Also [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra getting rid of Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, although it is more of Making It Look Like A Murder-Suicide.]]
** Also [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra getting rid of Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, although it is more of Making It Look Like A Murder-Suicide.]]
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* MakeItLookLikeAnAccident: MakeItLookLikeAnAccident:
** Grindelwald gets rid of the Dursleys this way, by causing a rupture in the gas line and forcing Petunia- -- under the Imperius curse - -- to light candles.
**Also [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra getting rid of Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, although it is more of Making It Look Like A Murder-Suicide.]]
** Grindelwald gets rid of the Dursleys this way, by causing a rupture in the gas line and forcing Petunia
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* MugglesDoItBetter: when several Death Eaters attack a Muggle town, [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra]] attack them with submachineguns (a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/%C5%A0korpion_vz._61 Skorpion]] and a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heckler_%26_Koch_MP5 MP5]]) and explosives, wiping them out in a few minutes. Amelia Bones (the Minister for Magic) orders the reports to be suppressed to avoid the Magical World from rioting, because, in the eyes of the magical community, Death Eaters trump Muggles defending themselves.
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* MugglesDoItBetter: when several Death Eaters attack a Muggle town, [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra]] attack them with submachineguns submachine guns (a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/%C5%A0korpion_vz._61 Skorpion]] and a [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heckler_%26_Koch_MP5 MP5]]) and explosives, wiping them out in a few minutes. Amelia Bones (the Minister for Magic) orders the reports to be suppressed to avoid the Magical World from rioting, because, in the eyes of the magical community, Death Eaters trump Muggles defending themselves.
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* SpannerInTheWorks: Grindelwald was one for Dumbledore's plans for Harry.
** Voldemort is one for Harry's plans [[spoiler:when he kills Rufus Scrimgeour]].
** Voldemort is one for Harry's plans [[spoiler:when he kills Rufus Scrimgeour]].
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%%** Grindelwald was one for Dumbledore's plans for Harry.
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* VillainousBreakdown: the reason why Dumbledore was able to defeat Grindelwald was because he lost his will after the Muggle woman he had fallen in love with died in an Allied bombing.
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* VillainousBreakdown: the The reason why Dumbledore was able to defeat Grindelwald was because he lost his will after the Muggle woman he had fallen in love with died in an Allied bombing.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 13. [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra kill Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, by [[MoreThanMindControl Imperiusing]] the latter to leave a suicide note over learning that Malfoy is marrying someone else, and then having her trap Malfoy on the tower and make the two of them fall off it to make it look like a IfICantHaveYou.]]
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* WhamEpisode: A four-parter.
** Chapter 13. [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra kill Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, by [[MoreThanMindControl Imperiusing]] the latter to leave a suicide note over learning that Malfoy is marrying someone else, and then having her trap Malfoy on the tower and make the two of them fall off it to make it look like a IfICantHaveYou.]]
** Chapter 13. [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra kill Draco Malfoy and Pansy Parkinson, by [[MoreThanMindControl Imperiusing]] the latter to leave a suicide note over learning that Malfoy is marrying someone else, and then having her trap Malfoy on the tower and make the two of them fall off it to make it look like a IfICantHaveYou.]]
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* WouldHitAGirl: Harry.
* YouHaveToBelieveMe: Sirius when he tried to convince Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks that he is innocent. Unfortunately, none of them believed him, and they were ready to send him to the dementors without even considering the possibility that he might be innocent.
* YouHaveToBelieveMe: Sirius when he tried to convince Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks that he is innocent. Unfortunately, none of them believed him, and they were ready to send him to the dementors without even considering the possibility that he might be innocent.
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* YouHaveToBelieveMe: Sirius when he tried to convince Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks that he is innocent. Unfortunately, none of them believed him, and they were ready to send him to the
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Harry and Ginevra get to live their lives happily in America with Sirius, but only under fake identities after leaving Magical Britain and swearing off harming Voldemort.]]
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* [[spoiler: BittersweetEnding: Harry [[spoiler:Harry and Ginevra get to live their lives happily in America with Sirius, but only under fake identities after leaving Magical Britain and swearing off harming Voldemort.]]
