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* HeroicBSOD: Karkat spends some time having one after waking up in ''Stillness of Hours''.
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A fourth story, ''Stillness of Hours'', is [[http://homesmut.dreamwidth.org/38559.html?thread=47175327#cmt47175327 in progress.
progress.]]
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* DreamLand: A variant in ''Dream Sequencer''- they're asleep, but the dream is a simulation designed to help those in the sim process and come to terms with the trauma they've experienced.
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* NoodleIncident: John and the beta kids apparently managed to teleport the Earth to another location.
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* ParentalIncest: Heavily implied with a kid in one of the dreams Karkat has.
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* TalkingInYourDreams: Karkat and John meet and become friends in the simulation in ''Dream Sequencer''.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: After realising that [[spoiler: Twitchy/Mui is dead,]] Karkat decides that he's had enough of the simulation and gets Sam to let him out early.
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* HopeSpot: [[spoiler: Twitchy survives the pirate ship and gets medical treatment, with the doctors telling Karkat that he'll be fully healed in a sweep. He's also told that the United Galaxies have good enough medical technology that they can bring anyone back as long as the brain's intact. Then during their escape from the Condesce's army on Excelsis-Five, Twitchy is crushed under a support beam, and his brain can't be saved.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: Twitchy/Mui.]]
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* WhamLine: Averted in ''Dream Sequencer'': Karkat is told that he sustained some really bad injuries during the battle on Excelsis-Five, so bad in fact that he's in a coma while they treat him. He asks how long he's been asleep, and is told that it's [[spoiler: six days.]]
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/series/51913 The Golden Age]]'' is a series of {{Homestuck}} fanfics written by elanor_pam, author of FanFic/{{Cultstuck}}.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/series/51913 The Golden Age]]'' is a series of {{Homestuck}} {{Webcomic/Homestuck}} fanfics written by elanor_pam, author of FanFic/{{Cultstuck}}.
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The [[EvilEmpire Alternian Empire]] has finally stumbled upon an enemy tougher than they are. For the first time in troll history, they've found themselves against a foe that they can't overrun and whose technology far outshines their own. Fortunately for trollkind (if not for the Condesce), that enemy is none other than the United Galaxies, an near utopian society that is willing to offer asylum to any troll who wishes to defect.
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The [[EvilEmpire Alternian Empire]] has finally stumbled upon an enemy tougher than they are. For the first time in troll history, they've found themselves against a foe that they can't overrun and whose technology far outshines their own. Fortunately for trollkind (if not for the Condesce), that enemy is none other than the United Galaxies, an a near utopian society that is willing to offer asylum to any troll who wishes to defect.
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* HotBlooded: Commander Augria Keelus of the Galactic Police Vessel Singularity. The author even labels him as such on her tumblr.
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* HotBlooded: Commander Augria Auriga Keelus of the Galactic Police Vessel Singularity. The author even labels him as such on her tumblr.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: The difference between "minor assholes" and "major assholes", according to Lieutenant Commander Vareni, and one of the reasons a lot of troll pirates are willing to work with the UG over the empire.
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->''"The Coalition states for the record that it considers Her Imperious Condescension, Empress of Alternia and its conquered territories a Criminal, a Liability to her own people, an immature brat unfit for power, a Crazy Old Bat and an Abuser, and we do hereby charge her with Corruption, Corruption of Minors, Exploitation, Exploitation of Minors, Slavery, Slavery of Minors, Indoctrination, Indoctrination of Minors, Violation of the Prime Directive and Violation of seventy percent of the Chart of Universal Rights for the Sapient Species, and we declare to unanimously hold her in Contempt"''
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->''"The Coalition states for the record that it considers Her Imperious Condescension, Empress of Alternia and its conquered territories a Criminal, a Liability to her own people, an immature brat unfit for power, a Crazy Old Bat and an Abuser, and we do hereby charge her with Corruption, Corruption of Minors, Exploitation, Exploitation of Minors, Slavery, Slavery of Minors, Indoctrination, Indoctrination of Minors, Violation of the Prime Directive and Violation of seventy percent of the Chart of Universal Rights for the Sapient Species, and we declare to unanimously hold her in Contempt"''Contempt."''
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* ListOfTransgressions: See the quote on the top of this page.
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->''"The Coalition states for the record that it considers Her Imperious Condescension, Empress of Alternia and its conquered territories a Criminal, a Liability to her own people, an immature brat unfit for power, a Crazy Old Bat and an Abuser, and we do hereby charge her with Corruption, Corruption of Minors, Exploitation, Exploitation of Minors, Slavery, Slavery of Minors, Indoctrination, Indoctrination of Minors, Violation of the Prime Directive and Violation of seventy percent of the Chart of Universal Rights for the Sapient Species, and we declare to unanimously hold her in Contempt"''
-->--''[[TheHighQueen Jane Dargason]], Queen of Skaia''
-->--''[[TheHighQueen Jane Dargason]], Queen of Skaia''
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* OffWithHisHead: The pirate captain has [[spoiler: the pirate ringleader's]] head cut off for disobeying orders. He then has the head thrown into the kids' cell.
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* SpacePirates: There are quite a few type-one examples in the Alternian Empire. Karkat and company are kidnapped by a crew of them.
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* NumberedHomeworld: Planets Excelsis-One through Five.
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* CoolStarship: The Singularity, especially compared to the junkier, less-advanced ships of the Alternian Empire. In fact, most if not all of the United Galaxies ships qualify.
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* ShinyLookingSpaceships: The entire United Galaxies fleet is comprised of sleek, high-tech examples of this trope, in direct contrast to the dirty, less advanced ships used by the Alternian Empire.
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*BadassBoast: Courtesy of Commander Keelus as he prepares to take on the Alternian Empire's attack.
--> "In this civilization, in '''our''' civilization, '''a helmsman commands his own ship!'''"
--> "In this civilization, in '''our''' civilization, '''a helmsman commands his own ship!'''"
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* YourHeadAsplode: Happens to the pirate captain. [[spoiler: He likely didn't know that the empire planted a tooth bomb to keep the United Galaxies from discovering their trap.]]
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* YourHeadAsplode: Happens to the pirate captain. [[spoiler: He likely didn't know that the empire planted a tooth bomb to keep the United Galaxies from discovering their trap.]]]]
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* HurtComfortFic: While the first story has some shades of this, ''The Great Escape'' brings it to the forefront.
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Twitchy]] dies saving Karkat from falling debris during the Condesce's attack on Excelsis-Five.
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* IllBoy: Twitchy suffers seizures and appears to have brain-damage. [[spoiler: The Empire planted planted a psychic centipede-type thing in his head to track and disable the United Galaxies ship.]]
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* IllBoy: Twitchy suffers seizures and appears to have brain-damage. [[spoiler: The This is because the Alternian Empire planted planted a psychic centipede-type thing in his head to track and disable the United Galaxies ship.]]
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* BadBoss: A common problem within the Alternian Empire. This is stated to be one of the reasons why they're struggling against the United Galaxies, who have a much more forgiving leadership structure.
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* TheHighQueen: Jane, Queen of Skaia, is a slightly more prankstery variation.
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* HotBlooded: Commander Augria Keelus of the United Galaxies. The author even labels him as such on her tumblr.
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* HotBlooded: Commander Augria Keelus of the United Galaxies.Galactic Police Vessel Singularity. The author even labels him as such on her tumblr.
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* PstandardPsychicPstance: Done by Lieutenant Commander Cadrat Vareni when the Alternian Empire attacks. Karkat {{Lampshades}} it.
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*BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler: Queen Jane]] shows up to repel the Alternian attack at the end of ''The Great Escape''.
*HotBlooded: Commander Augria Keelus of the United Galaxies. The author even labels him as such on her tumblr.
*HotBlooded: Commander Augria Keelus of the United Galaxies. The author even labels him as such on her tumblr.
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* YouFightLikeACow: Queen Jane thoroughly taunts the highblood commander of the ship she appears on. To be fair, the guy doesn't seem to grasp that, appearing as a hologram, she can't exactly be hurt by bullets.
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* YouFightLikeACow: Queen Jane thoroughly taunts the highblood commander of the ship she appears on. To be fair, the guy doesn't seem to grasp that, appearing as a hologram, she can't exactly be hurt by bullets.bullets.
* YourHeadAsplode: Happens to the pirate captain. [[spoiler: He likely didn't know that the empire planted a tooth bomb to keep the United Galaxies from discovering their trap.]]
* YourHeadAsplode: Happens to the pirate captain. [[spoiler: He likely didn't know that the empire planted a tooth bomb to keep the United Galaxies from discovering their trap.]]
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Think the [[StarTrek Federation]] Homestuck-style.
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* ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2857436/chapters/6404969 The Great Escape]]'': Karkat and some forty other trolls are kidnaped by pirates to be sold as slaves. The kids band together to try to stay alive in the hellish conditions aboard the pirate ship, but things look bleak. Until, that is, they are saved by a United Galaxy crew.
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* ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2857436/chapters/6404969 The Great Escape]]'': Karkat and some forty other trolls are kidnaped by pirates to be sold as slaves. The kids band together to try to stay alive in the hellish conditions aboard the pirate ship, but things look bleak. Until, that is, they are saved by a United Galaxy crew.
crew. Can Karkat trust these people? Culture shock ensues.
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*IllBoy: Twitchy suffers seizures and appears to have brain-damage. [[spoiler: The Empire planted planted a psychic centipede-type thing in his head to track and disable the United Galaxies ship.]]
*TalkingIsAFreeAction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]], the highblood commander repeatedly attacks Queen Jane while she talks. Of course, Jane only appeared as a hologram, so she's unharmed.
*YouFightLikeACow: Queen Jane thoroughly taunts the highblood commander of the ship she appears on. To be fair, the guy doesn't seem to grasp that, appearing as a hologram, she can't exactly be hurt by bullets.
*IllBoy: Twitchy suffers seizures and appears to have brain-damage. [[spoiler: The Empire planted planted a psychic centipede-type thing in his head to track and disable the United Galaxies ship.]]
*TalkingIsAFreeAction: [[AvertedTrope Averted]], the highblood commander repeatedly attacks Queen Jane while she talks. Of course, Jane only appeared as a hologram, so she's unharmed.
*YouFightLikeACow: Queen Jane thoroughly taunts the highblood commander of the ship she appears on. To be fair, the guy doesn't seem to grasp that, appearing as a hologram, she can't exactly be hurt by bullets.
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[[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused with]] the Marvel/DC fanfic FanFic/TheGoldenAge, or the elseworlds comic TheGoldenAge, or the anime of the same name.
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[[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused with]] the Marvel/DC fanfic FanFic/TheGoldenAge, FanFic/TheGoldenAge or the elseworlds comic TheGoldenAge, or the anime of the same name.TheGoldenAge.
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* ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/898624 First Contact]]: Jane Dargason, Queen of Skaia, Chairwoman to the United Galaxies and Representative of the Coalition of the Free Systems appears onboard a troll ship to offer asylum to any who wish to defect. A brief one-shot introducing the series' concept.
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* ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/898624 First Contact]]: Contact]]'': Jane Dargason, Queen of Skaia, Chairwoman to the United Galaxies and Representative of the Coalition of the Free Systems appears onboard a troll ship to personally offer asylum to any who wish to defect. A brief one-shot introducing the series' concept.world.
*''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2857436/chapters/6404969 The Great Escape]]'': Karkat and some forty other trolls are kidnaped by pirates to be sold as slaves. The kids band together to try to stay alive in the hellish conditions aboard the pirate ship, but things look bleak. Until, that is, they are saved by a United Galaxy crew.
[[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused with]] the Marvel/DC fanfic FanFic/TheGoldenAge, or the elseworlds comic TheGoldenAge, or the anime of the same name.
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*''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/2857436/chapters/6404969 The Great Escape]]'': Karkat and some forty other trolls are kidnaped by pirates to be sold as slaves. The kids band together to try to stay alive in the hellish conditions aboard the pirate ship, but things look bleak. Until, that is, they are saved by a United Galaxy crew.
[[SimilarlyNamedWorks Not to be confused with]] the Marvel/DC fanfic FanFic/TheGoldenAge, or the elseworlds comic TheGoldenAge, or the anime of the same name.
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''[[http://archiveofourown.org/series/51913 The Golden Age]]'' is a series of {{Homestuck}} fanfics written by elanor_pam, author of FanFic/{{Cultstuck}}.
The [[EvilEmpire Alternian Empire]] has finally stumbled upon an enemy tougher than they are. For the first time in troll history, they've found themselves against a foe that they can't overrun and whose technology far outshines their own. Fortunately for trollkind (if not for the Condesce), that enemy is none other than the United Galaxies, an near utopian society that is willing to offer asylum to any troll who wishes to defect.
So far the series contains the following stories:
*''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/898624 First Contact]]: Jane Dargason, Queen of Skaia, Chairwoman to the United Galaxies and Representative of the Coalition of the Free Systems appears onboard a troll ship to offer asylum to any who wish to defect. A brief one-shot introducing the series' concept.
The [[EvilEmpire Alternian Empire]] has finally stumbled upon an enemy tougher than they are. For the first time in troll history, they've found themselves against a foe that they can't overrun and whose technology far outshines their own. Fortunately for trollkind (if not for the Condesce), that enemy is none other than the United Galaxies, an near utopian society that is willing to offer asylum to any troll who wishes to defect.
So far the series contains the following stories:
*''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/898624 First Contact]]: Jane Dargason, Queen of Skaia, Chairwoman to the United Galaxies and Representative of the Coalition of the Free Systems appears onboard a troll ship to offer asylum to any who wish to defect. A brief one-shot introducing the series' concept.
