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The ''First Try Series'' is a collection of ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail [[{{Fanfic}} Fanfiction stories]], written by the prolific [[Creator/{{Lucillia}} Luci]][[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/579283/Lucillia llia]]. The premise of this story is an AlternateUniverse in which Naruto was able --thanks to a minor stroke of luck-- pass his Academy graduation exam on his [[TitleDrop first try]]. As a result, he becomes a Genin two years earlier than in canon, put on a team with genin teammates [[TheStrategist Satoshi Kamiya]] & [[ActionGirl Suzume Kamizuki]]. Their sensei is [[TeamDad Tetsuo Shimura]], the disowned grandson of [[ManipulativeBastard Danzo Shimura]].
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The ''First Try Series'' is a collection of ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail PointOfDivergence [[{{Fanfic}} Fanfiction stories]], written by the prolific [[Creator/{{Lucillia}} Luci]][[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/579283/Lucillia llia]]. The premise of this story is an AlternateUniverse in which Naruto was able --thanks to a minor stroke of luck-- pass his Academy graduation exam on his [[TitleDrop first try]]. As a result, he becomes a Genin two years earlier than in canon, put on a team with genin teammates [[TheStrategist Satoshi Kamiya]] & [[ActionGirl Suzume Kamizuki]]. Their sensei is [[TeamDad Tetsuo Shimura]], the disowned grandson of [[ManipulativeBastard Danzo Shimura]].
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The ''First Try Series'' is a collection of ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail [[{{Fanfic}} Fanfiction stories]], written by the prolific [[Creator/{{Lucillia}} Luci]][[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/579283/Lucillia llia]]. The premise of this story is an AlternateUniverse in which Naruto was able - thanks to a minor stroke of luck - pass his Academy graduation exam on his [[TitleDrop first try]]. As a result, he becomes a Genin two years earlier than in canon, put on a team with genin teammates [[TheStrategist Satoshi Kamiya]] & [[ActionGirl Suzume Kamizuki]]. Their sensei is [[TeamDad Tetsuo Shimura]], the disowned grandson of [[ManipulativeBastard Danzo Shimura]].
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The ''First Try Series'' is a collection of ''Franchise/{{Naruto}}'' ForWantOfANail [[{{Fanfic}} Fanfiction stories]], written by the prolific [[Creator/{{Lucillia}} Luci]][[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/579283/Lucillia llia]]. The premise of this story is an AlternateUniverse in which Naruto was able - thanks --thanks to a minor stroke of luck - luck-- pass his Academy graduation exam on his [[TitleDrop first try]]. As a result, he becomes a Genin two years earlier than in canon, put on a team with genin teammates [[TheStrategist Satoshi Kamiya]] & [[ActionGirl Suzume Kamizuki]]. Their sensei is [[TeamDad Tetsuo Shimura]], the disowned grandson of [[ManipulativeBastard Danzo Shimura]].
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* RightForTheWrongReasons
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* NamesTheSame: Invoked. Suzume shares her first name with the Academy's kunoichi arts instructor. {{Lampshaded}} in "Team Tetsuo". She also has the same family name as {{Canon}} MauveShirt Izumo Kamizuki. Kita Haruno has the same given name with Academy exam proctor, Kita Hagane.
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Was Actually Friendly has been merged so cleaning up wicks
* GoodAllAlong: At first, Tetsuo hates Naruto for the Kyuubi, mentally referring to him as "the Demon"/"Demon child"/etc. in his head. Then he finds out that Naruto is a Kyuubi orphan ''and'' that he knew Naruto's mother. The nail in the coffin is when he actually gets to test Naruto one-on-one and realizes that he's really just a kid.
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* WasActuallyFriendly: At first, Tetsuo hates Naruto for the Kyuubi, mentally referring to him as "the Demon"/"Demon child"/etc. in his head. Then he finds out that Naruto is a Kyuubi orphan ''and'' that he knew Naruto's mother. The nail in the coffin is when he actually gets to test Naruto one-on-one and realizes that he's really just a kid.
