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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7054051/chapters/16037098 Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7054051/chapters/16037098 Magnus Fate/Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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Now available on [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/7054051/chapters/16037098 AO3]].
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Now available on [=AO3=] [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/7054051/chapters/16037098 AO3]].
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* CovertPervert: In contrast to her usual demeanor, ''Jeanne'' is clearly this trope. [[spoiler: She gets too into thinking about how Arthur conceived Mordred despite his apparent physical age]], as well as being the one most likely to pick up on [[AccidentalInnuendo accidental sexual sentences]]. She even blushes immensely and can't think straight when Arthur walks in on her in the bath.
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: As usual, [[WorldsStrongestMan Gilgamesh]] doesn't even try when he basically annihilates Robin Hood in Chapter 10.]]
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: As usual, [[WorldsStrongestMan Gilgamesh]] doesn't even try when he basically annihilates Robin Hood in Chapter 10.]]
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* CovertPervert: In contrast to her usual demeanor, ''Jeanne'' is clearly this trope. [[spoiler: She gets too into thinking about how Arthur conceived Mordred despite his apparent physical age]], age, as well as being the one most likely to pick up on [[AccidentalInnuendo accidental sexual sentences]]. She even blushes immensely and can't think straight when Arthur walks in on her in the bath.
* CurbStompBattle:[[spoiler: As usual, [[WorldsStrongestMan Gilgamesh]] doesn't even try when he basically annihilates Robin Hood in Chapter 10.]]
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* DeathIsCheap: Somewhat the case in regards to the Class-Card Servants, as they can be summoned again so long as their cards remain intact, though they lose their memories everytime they die. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that this also applies to Manaka's Servants thanks to her abilities and they are even able to retain their memories.]]
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* DeathIsCheap: Somewhat the case in regards to the Class-Card Servants, as they can be summoned again so long as their cards remain intact, though they lose their memories everytime every-time they die. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that this also applies to Manaka's Servants thanks to her abilities and they are even able to retain their memories.]]
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* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Arthur exploits this in regards to Shirou using a Command Seal to force him into suicide at the end of the Third Holy Grail War. He told him to kill himself, but didn't specify how. To which, [[WaveMotionSword Excalibur]] begins glowing...]]
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* ExactWords: [[spoiler: Arthur exploits this in regards to Shirou [[spoiler:Shirou]] using a Command Seal to force him into suicide at the end of the Third Holy Grail War. He told him to kill himself, but didn't specify how. To which, [[WaveMotionSword Excalibur]] begins glowing...]]
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* HeroWorshipper: Rogue Saber [[spoiler:Richard Lionheart]] is this to Arthur. Though, considering his legend, [[FridgeBrilliance Fridge Brilliance]] kicks in when you remember one aspect of his legend.
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* HeroWorshipper: Rogue Saber Saber, aka [[spoiler:Richard Lionheart]] Lionheart]], is this to Arthur. Though, considering his legend, [[FridgeBrilliance Fridge Brilliance]] kicks in when you remember one aspect of his legend.
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** Medea as well, being much more friendlier compared to how she was in FSN thanks to her overall situation as Servant being better.
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** Medea as well, being is much more friendlier friendly compared to how she was in FSN thanks to her overall situation as a Servant being better.
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* TheAlliance: The Red and Black Factions as per the original canon. [[spoiler: As of ACT-2, said two factions unite in order to take on the Rogue Faction and Manaka]].
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* TheAlliance: The Red and Black Factions as per the original canon. [[spoiler: As of ACT-2, said two factions unite in order to take on the Rogue Faction and Manaka]].[[spoiler:Manaka]].
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** The appearances of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Shirou, Issei,]] [[VideoGame/FateExtra Hakuno,]] [[VisualNovel/MahouTsukaiNoYoru and Aoko]] in the Side Act could count. With Shirou and Hakuno even commenting on news about an explosion occurring in a forest near the Tokyo Area. [[spoiler: Which was actually a result Arthur's battle with Richard]].
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** The appearances of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Shirou, Issei,]] [[VideoGame/FateExtra Hakuno,]] [[VisualNovel/MahouTsukaiNoYoru and Aoko]] in the Side Act could count. With Shirou and Hakuno even commenting on news about an explosion occurring in a forest near the Tokyo Area. [[spoiler: Which was actually a result of Arthur's battle with Richard]].
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* BadassTransplant: Sieg [[spoiler:gets a dragon heart implanted in him courtesy of Medea, which gives him the ability to shift parts of his body into a dragon and breath fire. WordOfGod notes that it takes many cues from [[PlayerCharacter Corrin]] of ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'', and adds that default male-Corrin and Sieg are very similar in appearance]].
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* BadassTransplant: Sieg [[spoiler:gets gets a dragon heart implanted in him courtesy of Medea, which gives him the ability to shift parts of his body into a dragon and breath fire. WordOfGod notes that it takes many cues from [[PlayerCharacter Corrin]] of ''VideoGame/FireEmblemFates'', and adds that default male-Corrin and Sieg are very similar in appearance]].appearance.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Gilgamesh is MUCH less of a dick than he is in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', exemplified by how he treats Berserker-Lancelot as a WorthyOpponent in contrast to Anime/FateZero, where he viewed him as an affront to his pride. This is partly due to the author basing Gilgamesh's personality here on his ''Anime/FatePrototype'' incarnation, where he was more of a [[NobleDemon Noble Demon]] character.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalHeroism:
** Gilgamesh is MUCH less of a dick than he is in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', exemplified by how he treats Berserker-Lancelot as a WorthyOpponent in contrast to Anime/FateZero, where he viewed him as an affront to his pride. This is partly due to the author basing Gilgamesh's personality here on his ''Anime/FatePrototype'' incarnation, where he was more of a [[NobleDemon Noble Demon]] character.
** Gilgamesh is MUCH less of a dick than he is in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', exemplified by how he treats Berserker-Lancelot as a WorthyOpponent in contrast to Anime/FateZero, where he viewed him as an affront to his pride. This is partly due to the author basing Gilgamesh's personality here on his ''Anime/FatePrototype'' incarnation, where he was more of a [[NobleDemon Noble Demon]] character.
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* AdaptedOut: The servant roster is rather different than either Fate/Prototype or Fate/Apocrypha, so certain servants from each work are absent.
** Among the servants of the Third Grail War, Berserker and Caster are different. In canon, Berserker was Jekyll & Hyde, while Caster was Paracelsus. Here, Berserker is [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Heracles]] and Caster is [[VideoGame/FateExtra Tamamo no Mae]].
** Rather than the Berserker Servant Frankenstein's Monster, Caules summons [[VideoGame/FateExtra Elizabeth Bathory]] as a Berserker.
** Instead of the Caster Avicebron, Roche summons [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Medea]].
** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin, rather [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
** Instead of Spartacus being summoned as the Berserker of the Red Faction, [[VideoGame/FateExtra Lu Bu Fengxian]] is.
** Among the servants of the Third Grail War, Berserker and Caster are different. In canon, Berserker was Jekyll & Hyde, while Caster was Paracelsus. Here, Berserker is [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Heracles]] and Caster is [[VideoGame/FateExtra Tamamo no Mae]].
** Rather than the Berserker Servant Frankenstein's Monster, Caules summons [[VideoGame/FateExtra Elizabeth Bathory]] as a Berserker.
** Instead of the Caster Avicebron, Roche summons [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Medea]].
** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin, rather [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
** Instead of Spartacus being summoned as the Berserker of the Red Faction, [[VideoGame/FateExtra Lu Bu Fengxian]] is.
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* AdaptedOut: AdaptedOut:
** The servant roster is rather different than either Fate/Prototype or Fate/Apocrypha, so certain servants from each work are absent.
** *** Among the servants of the Third Grail War, Berserker and Caster are different. In canon, Berserker was Jekyll & Hyde, while Caster was Paracelsus. Here, Berserker is [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Heracles]] and Caster is [[VideoGame/FateExtra Tamamo no Mae]].
** *** Rather than the Berserker Servant Frankenstein's Monster, Caules summons [[VideoGame/FateExtra Elizabeth Bathory]] as a Berserker.
** *** Instead of the Caster Avicebron, Roche summons [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Medea]].
** *** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin, rather [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
** *** Instead of Spartacus being summoned as the Berserker of the Red Faction, [[VideoGame/FateExtra Lu Bu Fengxian]] is.
** The servant roster is rather different than either Fate/Prototype or Fate/Apocrypha, so certain servants from each work are absent.
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* ButtMonkey: Robin Hood, who regularly gets abused or poked fun of in most of his appearances.
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* ButtMonkey: ButtMonkey:
** Robin Hood, who regularly gets abused or poked fun of in most of his appearances.
** Robin Hood, who regularly gets abused or poked fun of in most of his appearances.
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler: By the second chapter of ACT-2, Chiron is now dead]], whereas in the original, he is still alive and kicking until the end phase of the Great Holy Grail War.
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* DeathByAdaptation: DeathByAdaptation:
** [[spoiler: By the second chapter of ACT-2, Chiron is now dead]], whereas in the original, he is still alive and kicking until the end phase of the Great Holy Grail War.
** [[spoiler: By the second chapter of ACT-2, Chiron is now dead]], whereas in the original, he is still alive and kicking until the end phase of the Great Holy Grail War.
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* TheDreaded: Manaka whose presence alone is enough to cause an OhCrap reaction from Arthur, Shirou, and Darnic.
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* TheDreaded: TheDreaded:
** Manaka whose presence alone is enough to cause an OhCrap reaction from Arthur, Shirou, and Darnic.
** Manaka whose presence alone is enough to cause an OhCrap reaction from Arthur, Shirou, and Darnic.
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* ForeShadowing: In Chapter 5, during Mordred's flashback, it is clearly stated that she is Arthur's ''eldest'' child. [[spoiler: Sure enough, his ''youngest'' child was a major catalyst in Arthur rejecting Mordred- Lucius had apparently died from an illness around the time Mordred revealed herself, and Arthur was too deep in a [[HeroicBSOD BSOD]] to properly react]].
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* ForeShadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: In Chapter 5, during Mordred's flashback, it is clearly stated that she is Arthur's ''eldest'' child. [[spoiler: Sure enough, his ''youngest'' child was a major catalyst in Arthur rejecting Mordred- Lucius had apparently died from an illness around the time Mordred revealed herself, and Arthur was too deep in a [[HeroicBSOD BSOD]] to properly react]].
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In this universe both the Tohsaka and Sajyou families are related to each other. [[Anime/FatePrototype Ayaka]] herself is the grandmother of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Rin, Sakura,]] and Aya. The latter of whom is based on the Ayaka Sajyou from ''Literature/FateStrangeFake''.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: RelatedInTheAdaptation:
** In this universe both the Tohsaka and Sajyou families are related to each other. [[Anime/FatePrototype Ayaka]] herself is the grandmother of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Rin, Sakura,]] and Aya. The latter of whom is based on the Ayaka Sajyou from ''Literature/FateStrangeFake''.
** In this universe both the Tohsaka and Sajyou families are related to each other. [[Anime/FatePrototype Ayaka]] herself is the grandmother of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Rin, Sakura,]] and Aya. The latter of whom is based on the Ayaka Sajyou from ''Literature/FateStrangeFake''.
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 13. [[spoiler:[[BigBad Manaka]]]] begins to make her move.
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* WhamEpisode: WhamEpisode:
** Chapter 13. [[spoiler:[[BigBad Manaka]]]] begins to make her move.
** Chapter 13. [[spoiler:[[BigBad Manaka]]]] begins to make her move.
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** A second specific mention as well are Arthur and Rogue Saber. During their first bout, [[spoiler: they are easily matched and Rogue Saber gives Arthur his first real injury of the Grail War that even Karna wasn't able to give him. In the following chapter, Arthur expresses the sentiment of wanting to fight Richard again.]]
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** A second specific mention as well are Arthur and Rogue Saber. During their first bout, [[spoiler: they are easily matched and Rogue Saber gives Arthur his first real injury of the Grail War that even Karna wasn't able to give him. In the following chapter, Arthur expresses the sentiment of wanting to fight Richard again.]]]]
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* {{Irony}}: The Holy Grail itself is the only way that Arthur can ascend to become a true Heroic Spirit due to not being completely dead. However, as Jeanne's servant, he is incapable of taking part in the war and winning the Grail. He's aware of this, but he accepts the reality of his situation.
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* MeleeATrois: As of ACT-2, the Alliance, Rogue Faction and Manaka Faction are fighting against each other for the Original Grail and the Greater Grail.
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* MeleeATrois: As of ACT-2, the Alliance, Rogue Faction and Manaka Manaka's Faction are fighting against each other for the Original Grail and the Greater Grail.
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** Iskandar mentions that if Arthur had regretted his rule at the banquet, [[Anime/FateZero he'd have to scold him]]. On a whole, the banquet reaally is just taken from Anime/FateZero, but with more characters and with a different ending.
** It's noted in LightNovel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on equal ground would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]]. [[spoiler: Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.]]
** [[spoiler:Brynhild notes that Siegfried is ''very'' similar to Sigurd in appearance and personality, such that her curse goes into overdrive almost immediately]].
** It's noted in LightNovel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on equal ground would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]]. [[spoiler: Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.]]
** [[spoiler:Brynhild notes that Siegfried is ''very'' similar to Sigurd in appearance and personality, such that her curse goes into overdrive almost immediately]].
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** Iskandar mentions that if Arthur had regretted his rule at the banquet, [[Anime/FateZero he'd have to scold him]]. On a whole, the banquet reaally really is just taken from Anime/FateZero, but with more characters and with a different ending.
** It's noted in LightNovel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on equal ground would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]].[[spoiler: Here, they have a brief fight when the Rogue Faction attacks the Black Faction's castle, and they are indeed quite evenly matched.]]
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**[[spoiler:Brynhild [[spoiler:Brynhild]] notes that Siegfried is ''very'' similar to Sigurd in appearance and personality, such that her curse goes into overdrive almost immediately]].immediately.
** It's noted in LightNovel/FateApocrypha that the only one who could fight [[TheStoic Karna]] on equal ground would be [[BloodKnight Achilles]].
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In Chapter 20, Jeanne gives one towards [[spoiler: Mordred after getting sick of her attitude]]. In contrast to most examples, Jeanne does this not to tear [[spoiler: Mordred]] down but to make her aware of her own flaws and make her realise she needs to surpass them if she wants [[spoiler: to be as great as Arthur is.]]
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* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: In Chapter 20, Jeanne gives one towards [[spoiler: Mordred after getting sick of her attitude]]. attitude. In contrast to most examples, Jeanne does this not to tear [[spoiler: Mordred]] Mordred down but to make her aware of her own flaws and make her realise realize she needs to surpass them if she wants [[spoiler: to be as great as Arthur is.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Shirou Kotomine as per canon. [[spoiler: [[{{Yandere}} Manaka]] reveals herself to be somewhat this, wanting to destroy the current world in order to create a new one where Arthur's wish can come true]].
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 13. [[spoiler: [[BigBad Manaka]] begins to make her move]].
** [[spoiler: By the next chapter, she brings out Heracles and takes out both Vlad and Darnic. The one after that, she reveals the original purpose of the Holy Grail War and takes the Trifas Grail for herself.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 13. [[spoiler: [[BigBad Manaka]] begins to make her move]].
** [[spoiler: By the next chapter, she brings out Heracles and takes out both Vlad and Darnic. The one after that, she reveals the original purpose of the Holy Grail War and takes the Trifas Grail for herself.]]
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: Shirou Kotomine as per canon. [[spoiler: [[{{Yandere}} Manaka]] Manaka]]]] reveals herself to be somewhat this, wanting to destroy the current world in order to create a new one where Arthur's wish can come true]].
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* WhamEpisode: Chapter 13.[[spoiler: [[BigBad Manaka]] [[spoiler:[[BigBad Manaka]]]] begins to make her move]].
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**[[spoiler: By the next chapter, she brings out Heracles and takes out both Vlad [[spoiler:Vlad and Darnic. The one after that, she reveals the original purpose of the Holy Grail War and takes the Trifas Grail for herself.]]
* WhamEpisode: Chapter 13.
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* ForeShadowing: In Chapter 5, during Mordred's flashback, it is clearly stated that she is Arthur's ''eldest'' child. [[spoiler: Sure enough, his ''youngest'' child was a major catalyst in Arthur rejecting Mordred- Lucius had apparently died from an illness around the time Mordred revealed herself, and Arthur was too deep in a [[HeroicBSOD BSOD]] to properly react.]]
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* ForeShadowing: In Chapter 5, during Mordred's flashback, it is clearly stated that she is Arthur's ''eldest'' child. [[spoiler: Sure enough, his ''youngest'' child was a major catalyst in Arthur rejecting Mordred- Lucius had apparently died from an illness around the time Mordred revealed herself, and Arthur was too deep in a [[HeroicBSOD BSOD]] to properly react.]]react]].
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: As of Chapters 14 and 15, six characters have officially kicked the bucket. Lu Bu, Chiron, Darnic, Vlad, Gordes, and Celenike. The latter four of which don't even get a death scene, especially Gordes and Celenike.]]
** [[spoiler: As of the beginning of the third act, Iskandar and Robin have joined that list.]]
** [[spoiler: As of the beginning of the third act, Iskandar and Robin have joined that list.]]
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* KilledOffForReal: [[spoiler: As of Chapters 14 and 15, six characters have officially kicked the bucket. Lu [[spoiler:Lu Bu, Chiron, Darnic, Vlad, Gordes, and Celenike. Celenike]]. The latter four of which don't even get a death scene, especially Gordes [[spoiler:Gordes and Celenike.]]
** [[spoiler:Celenike]]. As of the beginning of the third act, Iskandar [[spoiler:Iskandar and Robin have joined that list.]]
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* MeleeATrois: [[spoiler: As of ACT-2, the Alliance, Rogue Faction and Manaka Faction are fighting against each other for the Original Grail and the Greater Grail.]]
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* PetTheDog: Gilgamesh gets several moments here, such as letting Achilles [[DrowningMySorrows getting piss drunk]] [[spoiler: after the latter finds out Chiron got killed by Perseus]], as well as [[spoiler: giving Fiore a cure for her paralysis that would let her keep being a magus.]] Naturally, Gil just says he [[JerkassFacade did it for no reason]] but Reines knows better. It's also implied he partially did both things due to being reminded of his [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh one true friend.]]
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* PetTheDog: Gilgamesh gets several moments here, such as letting Achilles [[DrowningMySorrows getting piss drunk]] [[spoiler: after the latter finds out Chiron got killed by Perseus]], as well as [[spoiler: giving Fiore a cure for her paralysis that would let her keep being a magus.]] Naturally, Gil just says he [[JerkassFacade did it for no reason]] reason but Reines knows better. It's also implied he partially did both things due to being reminded of his [[Literature/TheEpicOfGilgamesh one true friend.]]
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Fate]] [[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7054051/chapters/16037098 Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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* AdaptedOut: The servant roster is rather different than either Fate/Prototype or Fate/Apocrypha, so certain servants from each work are absent.
** Among the servants of the Third Grail War, Berserker and Caster are different. In canon, Berserker was Jekyll & Hyde, while Caster was Paracelsus. Here, Berserker is [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Heracles]] and Caster is [[VideoGame/FateExtra Tamamo no Mae]].
** Rather than the Berserker Servant Frankenstein's Monster, Caules summons [[VideoGame/FateExtra Elizabeth Bathory]] as a Berserker.
** Instead of the Caster Avicebron, Roche summons [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Medea]].
** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin, rather [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
** Instead of Spartacus being summoned as the Berserker of the Red Faction, [[VideoGame/FateExtra Lu Bu Fengxian]] is.
** Averted in regards to the Archers, Riders, and Lancers of Red. Atalante, Karna, and Achilles are all still summoned, just not as they were in canon. Achilles is summoned as the Lancer of Red, whilst Iskander is summoned as the Rider of Red. Atalante and Karna are still summoned in their respective classes, but as Servants of Shirou Kotomine's Rouge Faction rather than apart of the Red Faction. Instead, [[Anime/FatePrototype Gilgamesh]] is summoned as the Archer of Red.
** Among the servants of the Third Grail War, Berserker and Caster are different. In canon, Berserker was Jekyll & Hyde, while Caster was Paracelsus. Here, Berserker is [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Heracles]] and Caster is [[VideoGame/FateExtra Tamamo no Mae]].
** Rather than the Berserker Servant Frankenstein's Monster, Caules summons [[VideoGame/FateExtra Elizabeth Bathory]] as a Berserker.
** Instead of the Caster Avicebron, Roche summons [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Medea]].
** Jack the Ripper isn't summoned by the Black Faction as the Assassin, rather [[LightNovel/FateZero Hassan of the Hundred Personas]] is. Neither of her masters, Hyouma or Reika, are present either, rather Hundred Personas master is [[Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya Julian Ainsworth]].
** Instead of Spartacus being summoned as the Berserker of the Red Faction, [[VideoGame/FateExtra Lu Bu Fengxian]] is.
** Averted in regards to the Archers, Riders, and Lancers of Red. Atalante, Karna, and Achilles are all still summoned, just not as they were in canon. Achilles is summoned as the Lancer of Red, whilst Iskander is summoned as the Rider of Red. Atalante and Karna are still summoned in their respective classes, but as Servants of Shirou Kotomine's Rouge Faction rather than apart of the Red Faction. Instead, [[Anime/FatePrototype Gilgamesh]] is summoned as the Archer of Red.
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* WellDoneDaughterGirl: Mordred. Which comes in full force this time around with her father now present as Jeanne's Servant.
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* WellDoneDaughterGirl: WellDoneSonGuy: Mordred. Which comes in full force this time around with her father now present as Jeanne's Servant.
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* AdaptationDistillation: As a fanfic that takes on elements from multiple different Fate entries this was bound to happen. The most notable changes of which are:
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** The origin of the Holy Grail War. Much like in ''Fate/stay night'', the Holy Grail War was conceived by the Tohsaka, the Makiri, and the Einzbern families during the 18th-19th Century. However, unlike in canon, it's revealed that Einzbern's didn't truly create the Holy Grail themselves as it was based off the blueprints of the original grail that were stolen by a corrupt cardinal much like in the ''Fate/Prototype'' timeline. Also, much like in the latter timeline, the Holy Grail War takes place in Tokyo instead of Fuyuki.
** The events of the ''Fate/Apocrypha'' version of Third Holy Grail War and the Holy Grail War of ''Fragments of Sky Silver'' are combined into one. Resulting in both Arthur and Amakusa knowing each other as individual Servants who fought in the same conflict, and as well as having both Manaka and Ayaka be several decades older than they are in canon.
** The origin of the Holy Grail War. Much like in ''Fate/stay night'', the Holy Grail War was conceived by the Tohsaka, the Makiri, and the Einzbern families during the 18th-19th Century. However, unlike in canon, it's revealed that Einzbern's didn't truly create the Holy Grail themselves as it was based off the blueprints of the original grail that were stolen by a corrupt cardinal much like in the ''Fate/Prototype'' timeline. Also, much like in the latter timeline, the Holy Grail War takes place in Tokyo instead of Fuyuki.
** The events of the ''Fate/Apocrypha'' version of Third Holy Grail War and the Holy Grail War of ''Fragments of Sky Silver'' are combined into one. Resulting in both Arthur and Amakusa knowing each other as individual Servants who fought in the same conflict, and as well as having both Manaka and Ayaka be several decades older than they are in canon.
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* CatchPhrase: Siegfried's [[MemeticMutation "I'm sorry" and "My apologises"]]. Lampshaded by Achilles in chapter 29 when Sieg tried to copy it.
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-> ''On the eve of the Great Holy Grail War, Ruler summons a Servant of her own to aid her duties as mediator. Answering her call, Servant Saber appears. A knight whose ties to the Holy Grail War runs deep. Together, both set out on their journey but soon realize that such a task is not so simple as Saber reunites with two old acquaintances. This is their story, of a Saint and a King.''
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-> ''On the eve of the Great Holy Grail War, Ruler summons a Servant of her own to aid her in duties as mediator. Answering her call, Servant Saber appears. A knight whose ties to the Holy Grail War runs deep. Together, both Both set out on their journey but journey, soon realize realizing that such an even greater conflict was on the horizon. Uniting both Red and Black, a task is not so simple as Saber reunites with two old acquaintances. battle to save the world begins. This is their story, the tale of a Saint and a King.''
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Gilgamesh is MUCH less of a dick than he is in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', exemplified by how he treats Berserker[[spoiler:-Lancelot]] as a WorthyOpponent in contrast to Anime/FateZero, where he viewed him as an affront to his pride. This is partly due to the author basing Gilgamesh's personality here on his ''Anime/FatePrototype'' incarnation, where he was more of a [[NobleDemon Noble Demon]] character.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Gilgamesh is MUCH less of a dick than he is in ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'', exemplified by how he treats Berserker[[spoiler:-Lancelot]] Berserker-Lancelot as a WorthyOpponent in contrast to Anime/FateZero, where he viewed him as an affront to his pride. This is partly due to the author basing Gilgamesh's personality here on his ''Anime/FatePrototype'' incarnation, where he was more of a [[NobleDemon Noble Demon]] character.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidPrismaIllya'', ''Manga/FateKaleidLinerPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries such as ''LightNovel/FateZero'', ''Manga/FateKaleidPrismaIllya'', and ''Literature/FateStrangeFake'' thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
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-> ''"I like to add things to this page myself from time to time, but I also ask that readers add more themselves to show their support." - 00Altair''
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* AscendedExtra: Reines El-Melloi Archisorte. She was initially just a minor character in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', here, she is the Master of Archer of Red. Siegfried as well as he has more prominence in the story than he did in canon.
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* AscendedExtra: Reines El-Melloi Archisorte. She was initially originally just a minor character in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', here, she is but here she's the Master of Archer of Red. Siegfried as well as he has more prominence in the story than he did in canon.
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* AscendedExtra: Reines Archisorte El-Melloi. Was El-Melloi Archisorte. She was initially just a minor character in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', here, she is the Master of Archer of Red. Siegfried as well as he has more prominence in the story than he did in canon.
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* BizarroEpisode: The first part of Extra Act I. Just... the Extra Act. [[spoiler: Jeanne in that part essentially is Nanoha hopped up on drugs, with some My Little Pony influences as well.]]
* BonusEpisode: To compliment the above, the Side Act. [[spoiler: It serves as a prologue/introduction to FMB's eventual sequel.]]
* BonusEpisode: To compliment the above, the Side Act. [[spoiler: It serves as a prologue/introduction to FMB's eventual sequel.]]
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* UnexpectedCharacter: [[spoiler:Guinevere]] shows up in [[spoiler: Chapters 16 and 17]], to help Arthur get over his issues.
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* AscendedExtra: Reines El-Melloi-initially just a background charcter in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', here, she is the Master of Archer of Red.
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* AscendedExtra: Reines El-Melloi-initially Archisorte El-Melloi. Was initially just a background charcter minor character in ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'', here, she is the Master of Archer of Red.Red. Siegfried as well as he has more prominence in the story than he did in canon.
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** The second bonus act also reveals that Elsa is a Tohsaka herself through marriage, going by Saijou as part of her day job, and is Ayaka's adoptive mother as well.
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** The second bonus act also reveals that Elsa Elsa, Arash's Master from Fragments, is now a Tohsaka herself through marriage, going by Saijou as part of her day job, and is Ayaka's adoptive mother as well.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' branch of the Nasuverse, though it is unique in that it blends together many spin-offs such as ''LightNovel/FateStrangeFake'', ''VideoGame/FateEXTRA'', and ''Anime/FatePrototype'' to name but a few. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
The plot of the story is started in a similar fashion to ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha''- Jeanne d'Arc is summoned as Ruler, overseer of the Holy Grail War, but she quickly summons [[Anime/FatePrototype Arthur Pendragon]] as her Saber-class Servant. It is also quickly revealed that there are more than 14 Servants at play, with a secret third Faction serving as the [[BigBad Big Bad]].
The plot of the story is started in a similar fashion to ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha''- Jeanne d'Arc is summoned as Ruler, overseer of the Holy Grail War, but she quickly summons [[Anime/FatePrototype Arthur Pendragon]] as her Saber-class Servant. It is also quickly revealed that there are more than 14 Servants at play, with a secret third Faction serving as the [[BigBad Big Bad]].
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11479999/1/Fate-Magnus-Bellum Fate Magnus Bellum]]'' is a FanFic in the ''VisualNovel/FateStayNight'' ''[[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Fate]]'' branch of the Nasuverse, though it is unique in that it blends together many spin-offs such as ''LightNovel/FateStrangeFake'', ''VideoGame/FateEXTRA'', and being something of a crossover story between ''Anime/FatePrototype'' to name but a few.and ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha'' with elements from other Fate entries thrown into the mix as well. It is written by [[https://www.fanfiction.net/u/6548585/00Altair [=00Altair=]]], an up and coming author on the site.
The plot of the story is started in a similar fashion to ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha''- Jeanne d'Arc is summoned as Ruler, overseer of the Great Holy Grail War, but she quickly summons [[Anime/FatePrototype Arthur Pendragon]] as her Saber-class Servant. It is also quickly revealed that there are more than 14 Servants at play, with a secret third Faction serving as the [[BigBad Big Bad]].
The plot of the story is started in a similar fashion to ''LightNovel/FateApocrypha''- Jeanne d'Arc is summoned as Ruler, overseer of the Great Holy Grail War, but she quickly summons [[Anime/FatePrototype Arthur Pendragon]] as her Saber-class Servant. It is also quickly revealed that there are more than 14 Servants at play, with a secret third Faction serving as the [[BigBad Big Bad]].
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* AccidentalPervert: During Chapter 16, Arthur walks in on Jeanne while she's bathing. Unlike other instances of this trope, both sides are able to maintain their calm (though Jeanne is thoroughly embarrassed nonetheless) and even hold a conversation with each other through a curtain.
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* RelatedInTheAdaptation: In this universe both the Tohsaka and Sajyou families are related to each other. [[Anime/FatePrototype Ayaka]] herself is the grandmother of [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Rin, Sakura,]] and Aya. The latter of whom is based on the Ayaka Sajyou from ''Literature/FateStrangeFake''.
** The second bonus act also reveals that Elsa is a Tohsaka herself through marriage, going by Saijou as part of her day job, and is Ayaka's adoptive mother as well.
** The second bonus act also reveals that Elsa is a Tohsaka herself through marriage, going by Saijou as part of her day job, and is Ayaka's adoptive mother as well.
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* GreenEyedEphiphany: Being in denial of her feelings for a while, it takes Arthur admitting that he still loves Guinevere and Jeanne subconsciously becoming jealous as a result for her to finally admit to herself that she's in love with him.
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* GreenEyedEphiphany: GreenEyedEpiphany: Being in denial of her feelings for a while, it takes Arthur admitting that he still loves Guinevere and Jeanne subconsciously becoming jealous as a result for her to finally admit to herself that she's in love with him.
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** Medea as well, being much more friendlier compared to how she was in FSN thanks to her overall situation as Servant being better.
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* DeathIsCheap: Somewhat the case in regards to the Class-Card Servants, as they can be summoned again so long as their cards remain intact. Though they lose their memories everytime they die.[[spoiler: It's later revealed that this also applies to Manaka's Servants thanks to her abilities and they are even able to retain their memories.]]
* TheDreaded: [[spoiler: Manaka]] whose presence alone is enough to cause an OhCrap reaction from Arthur, Shirou, and Darnic.
* TheDreaded: [[spoiler: Manaka]] whose presence alone is enough to cause an OhCrap reaction from Arthur, Shirou, and Darnic.
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* DeathIsCheap: Somewhat the case in regards to the Class-Card Servants, as they can be summoned again so long as their cards remain intact. Though intact, though they lose their memories everytime they die.[[spoiler: It's die. [[spoiler:It's later revealed that this also applies to Manaka's Servants thanks to her abilities and they are even able to retain their memories.]]
* TheDreaded:[[spoiler: Manaka]] Manaka whose presence alone is enough to cause an OhCrap reaction from Arthur, Shirou, and Darnic.
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* GreenEyedEphiphany: Being in denial of her feelings for a while, it takes Arthur admitting that he still loves Guinevere and Jeanne subconsciously becoming jealous as a result for her to finally admit to herself that she's in love with him.
* LoveHurts: Jeanne once she realizes she's in love with Arthur as she realizes how next to impossible them getting together is thanks to their situation. Not helped at all by the fact that Arthur hasn't gotten over Guinevere either.
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* ShipTease: Arthur/Jeanne, Caules/Ayaka, Between Arthur and Karna/Atalanta.Jeanne, Caules and Aya, and Karna and Atalanta. ''Especially'' for the former once ACT-2 rolls around.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: [[spoiler: Guinevere]] shows up in [[spoiler: Chapters 16 and 17]], to help Arthur get over his issues.
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* UnexpectedCharacter: [[spoiler: Guinevere]] [[spoiler:Guinevere]] shows up in [[spoiler: Chapters 16 and 17]], to help Arthur get over his issues.
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There's also another story in development, which was previewed in the fanfic's Anniversary Extra Act Chapter, that will be entitled ''Fate/Lunar Regalia'', a spin-off takes place around a year or so after ''Magnus Bellum'', featuring [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Shirou]], [[VideoGame/FateExtra Hakuno (the female protagonist]], and [[VideoGame/FateGrandOrder Servant Saber (Musashi Miyamoto)]] as the main cast with story elements and setting based off of ''VideoGame/FateExtra'' so far.
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There's also another story in development, which was previewed in the fanfic's Anniversary Extra Act Chapter, that will be entitled ''Fate/Lunar Regalia'', a spin-off that takes place around a year or so after ''Magnus Bellum'', featuring [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Shirou]], [[VideoGame/FateExtra Hakuno (the female protagonist]], protagonist)]], and [[VideoGame/FateGrandOrder Servant Saber (Musashi Miyamoto)]] as the main cast with story elements and setting based off of ''VideoGame/FateExtra'' so far.
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There's also another story in development, which was previewed in the fanfic's Anniversary Extra Act Chapter, that will be entitled ''Fate/Lunar Regalia'', a spin-off takes place around a year or so after ''Magnus Bellum'', featuring [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Shirou]], [[VideoGame/FateExtra Hakuno (the female protagonist), Servant Saber (Nero),]] and [[VisualNovel/MahouTsukaiNoYoru Aoko]] as the main cast with story elements and setting based off of ''VideoGame/FateExtra'' so far.
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There's also another story in development, which was previewed in the fanfic's Anniversary Extra Act Chapter, that will be entitled ''Fate/Lunar Regalia'', a spin-off takes place around a year or so after ''Magnus Bellum'', featuring [[VisualNovel/FateStayNight Shirou]], [[VideoGame/FateExtra Hakuno (the female protagonist), protagonist]], and [[VideoGame/FateGrandOrder Servant Saber (Nero),]] and [[VisualNovel/MahouTsukaiNoYoru Aoko]] (Musashi Miyamoto)]] as the main cast with story elements and setting based off of ''VideoGame/FateExtra'' so far.
