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* TheCorruption: [[spoiler:It is suggested that the Abyssals can "convert" shipgirls.]]

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* TheCorruption: [[spoiler:It is suggested that the [[spoiler:The Abyssals can "convert" shipgirls.the original steel hulls of the ships into themsevles, and there are a lot of those on the seabed.]]
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* ConverseWithTheUnconscious: What everybody tried to do with Enterprise to wake her up, from the loaned US destroyers, her own sisters and even all of the Kidou Butai carriers.

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* ConverseWithTheUnconscious: What everybody tried to do with Enterprise to wake her up, from the loaned US destroyers, destroyers to her own sisters and sisters. Hiryuu even arrange that the reunion of all of the Kidou Butai carriers.carriers to be on her steel hull in hopes that it will bring some kind of reaction, but no luck.
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* ConverseWithTheUnconscious: What everybody tried to do with Enterprise to wake her up, from the loaned US destroyers, her own sisters and even all of the Kidou Butai carriers.
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''Eternity'' is a VideoGame/KantaiCollection fanfic written by Sheo Darren, set in an alternate Earth, where the first small, but major change occurred in 1945 when a raid on Kure by USS Enterprise and others managed to damage Yamato's engines, preventing her participation in Operation Ten-Go (with Nagato taking her place) and leading to her capture by the Americans.

Fast Forward to 1957, New York. Fleet Admiral Halsey was unable to secure support to retire Enterprise as a museum ship, and unwilling to see her scrapped, he contacted General [=MacArthur=] with a deal: He will help the General in convincing the Government to keep Yamato on the more permanent basis, and in return the General will help him persuade the Japanese, who were looking to strengthen their Navy as the precaution against the communists, to buy Enterprise.

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''Eternity'' is a VideoGame/KantaiCollection fanfic written by Sheo Darren, set in an alternate Earth, where the first small, but major change occurred in 1945 when a raid on Kure by USS Enterprise and others managed to damage Yamato's engines, preventing her participation in Operation Ten-Go (with Ten-Go, with Nagato taking her place) and leading place. Desptie attempts to her capture scuttle her, she was captured by the Americans.

Americans, and General [=MacArthur=] took a liking to her.

Fast Forward to 1957, New York. Fleet Admiral Halsey was unable to secure support to retire Enterprise as a museum ship, and unwilling to see her scrapped, he contacted General [=MacArthur=] with a deal: He will help the General in convincing the Government to keep refit the aging Yamato and keep her on the more permanent basis, and in return the General will help him persuade the Japanese, who were looking to strengthen their Navy as the precaution against the communists, to buy Enterprise.
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* StarterEquipment: The Five Starter Destroyers were one of the first to awaken, and are now an elite group.

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* StarterEquipment: The Five Starter Destroyers were one of the first to awaken, and thus are now among the most experienced of the shipgirls. They form an elite group.group simply known as ''The First Five''.
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* TheCorruption: [[spoiler:It is suggested that the Abyssals can "convert" shipgirls.]]
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* TheRival: Hiryuu sees Enterprise as this, partly out of admiration, partly out of desire for closure to the events of Midway.

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* StudentAndMasterTeam: Due to manpower shortages and the general inexperience of late war shipgirls, the IJN Carrier teams consists of two shipgrils: a veteran carrier and a rookie carrier, with the former training the latter until deemed combat-ready on her own.


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* StudentAndMasterTeam: Due to manpower shortages and the general inexperience of late war shipgirls, the IJN Carrier teams consists of two shipgrils: a veteran carrier and a rookie carrier, with the former training the latter until deemed combat-ready on her own.
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* StudentAndMasterTeam: Due to manpower shortages and the general inexperience of late war shipgirls, the IJN Carrier teams consists of two shipgrils: a veteran carrier and a rookie carrier, with the former training the latter until deemed combat-ready on her own.
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* RefusalOfTheCall: When initially called to in the beginning of Abysall War in 2026, Yonaga refuses, partly to allow the reborn Imperial shipgirls to prove and redeem themsevles, and partly out of fear that she will regress to her murderous Pacific War-self and kill them all.

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* RefusalOfTheCall: When initially called to in the beginning of Abysall War in 2026, Yonaga refuses, partly to allow the reborn Imperial shipgirls to prove and redeem themsevles, and partly out of fear that she will regress to her murderous Pacific War-self and kill them all. Similarly, Montana is also still asleep by the start of the story.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [=WOEntrerpise=], Big E's cooped-up bloodlust and hatred.

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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [=WOEntrerpise=], Big E's [=WOEnterprise=], Yonaga's cooped-up bloodlust and hatred.
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* BrokenAce: With her sisters and many of her friends dead, living friends droven away, and having driven the Japanese into ground more than strictly nessecarry, Enterprise was this at the end of the Pacific War.

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* BrokenAce: With her sisters and many of her friends dead, living friends droven away, away by herself, and having driven the Japanese into ground more than strictly nessecarry, Enterprise was this at the end of the Pacific War.




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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: [=WOEntrerpise=], Big E's cooped-up bloodlust and hatred.
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* BrokenAce: With her sisters and many of her friends dead, living friends droven away, and having driven the Japanese into ground more than strictly nessecarry, Enterprise was this at the end of the Pacific War.
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Fast forward again to 2027, one year since since the beginning of The Abyssal War, and Yonaga was one of the few who still hasn't appeared. But when she did, the shipgirl who answered the call was radically different from the one who fought in the Pacific War, to the mixed reactions on the both sides of the pond. And on top of that, Yonaga has her own issues to deal with.

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Fast forward again to 2027, one year since since the beginning of The Abyssal War, and Yonaga was one of the few who still hasn't appeared. But when she did, the shipgirl who answered the call was radically different from the one who fought in the Pacific War, to the mixed reactions on the both sides of the pond. And on top of that, Yonaga has her own issues to deal with.

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Fast forward again to 2027, and a year has passed since the The Abyssal War started, and Yonaga was one of the few who still hasn't appeared. But when she did, the shipgirl who answered the call was radically different from the one who fought in the Pacific War, to the mixed reactions on the both sides of the pond. And on top of that, Yonaga has her own issues to deal with.

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Fast forward again to 2027, and a one year has passed since since the beginning of The Abyssal War started, War, and Yonaga was one of the few who still hasn't appeared. But when she did, the shipgirl who answered the call was radically different from the one who fought in the Pacific War, to the mixed reactions on the both sides of the pond. And on top of that, Yonaga has her own issues to deal with.


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* RefusalOfTheCall: When initially called to in the beginning of Abysall War in 2026, Yonaga refuses, partly to allow the reborn Imperial shipgirls to prove and redeem themsevles, and partly out of fear that she will regress to her murderous Pacific War-self and kill them all.
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* SoldierVsWarrior: Hiryuu's (Warrior) conflict with Yonaga (Soldier) has overtones of this, though it also comes from what Hiryuu considers as Enterprise demeaning herself.

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* SoldierVsWarrior: Hiryuu's (Warrior) conflict with Yonaga (Soldier) has overtones of this, though it also comes from what Hiryuu considers sees as Enterprise demeaning herself.

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* TheBait: During the Pacific War, knowing that it will anger the Japanese, the Americans used the damaged Nagato as a kamikaze bait. Despite the orders to let the suicide bombers to do as they wish, Willie D. Porter's captain ordered his crew to shoot them down, resulting in friendship between the two as shipgirls.

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* TheBait: During the Pacific War, knowing that it keeping the damaged, post-Ten-Go Nagato as a war trophy will anger the Japanese, the Americans used the damaged Nagato her as a kamikaze bait. Despite the orders to let the suicide bombers to do as they wish, Willie William D. Porter's captain ordered his crew to shoot them down, resulting in friendship between the two as shipgirls.


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* DividedWeFall: For the most part, Allied and Axis shipgirls do not work well with each other, if at all, along with other conflicts such as British and French shipgirls not liking each other. The one of the few exceptions to this are Bismarck and Hood, and the post-WW2 Cold Warriors.


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* SoldierVsWarrior: Hiryuu's (Warrior) conflict with Yonaga (Soldier) has overtones of this, though it also comes from what Hiryuu considers as Enterprise demeaning herself.
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* [[AFatherToHisMen A Mother To Her Girls]]: Rear Admiral Hina Togo, the descendant of Gensui Heihachiro "Nelson of the East" Togo.
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* StarterEquipment: The Five Starter Destroyers were one of the first to awaken, and are now an elite group.
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* BrokenPedestal: Hiryuu is very conflicted about the OlderAndWiser, but from her point of view very passive Yonaga who is very unlike Enterprise against whom she fought and lost.

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* BrokenPedestal: Hiryuu is very conflicted about the OlderAndWiser, but from her point of view very passive Yonaga who is very unlike Enterprise against whom she fought and lost.lost, and looked up to.
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* BrokenPedestal: Hiryuu is very conflicted about the OlderAndWiser, but from her point of view very passive Yonaga who is very unlike Enterprise against whom she fought and lost.
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Fast Forward to 1957, New York. Admiral Halsey was unable to secure support to retire Enterprise as museum ship, and unwilling to see her scrapped, he contacted General [=McArthur=] with a deal: He will help the General in convincing the Government keep Yamato on the more permanent basis, and in return the General will help him persuade the Japanese, who were looking to strengthen their Navy as the precaution against the communists, to buy Enterprise.

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Fast Forward to 1957, New York. Fleet Admiral Halsey was unable to secure support to retire Enterprise as a museum ship, and unwilling to see her scrapped, he contacted General [=McArthur=] [=MacArthur=] with a deal: He will help the General in convincing the Government to keep Yamato on the more permanent basis, and in return the General will help him persuade the Japanese, who were looking to strengthen their Navy as the precaution against the communists, to buy Enterprise.



Fast forward again to 2027, and it is year since the The Abyssal War started, and Yonaga was one of the few who still hasn't appeared. But when she did, the shipgirl who answered to call was radically different from the one who fought in the Pacific War, to the mixed reactions on the both sides of the pond. And on top of that, Yonaga has her own issues to deal with.

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Fast forward again to 2027, and it is a year has passed since the The Abyssal War started, and Yonaga was one of the few who still hasn't appeared. But when she did, the shipgirl who answered to the call was radically different from the one who fought in the Pacific War, to the mixed reactions on the both sides of the pond. And on top of that, Yonaga has her own issues to deal with.



* TheBait: During the Pacific War, knowing that it will anger the Japanese, the Americans used the damaged Nagato as a kamikaze bait. Despite the orders to let suicide bombers to do as they wish, Willie D. Porter's captain ordered his crew to shoot them down, resulting in friendship between the two as shipgirls.

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* TheBait: During the Pacific War, knowing that it will anger the Japanese, the Americans used the damaged Nagato as a kamikaze bait. Despite the orders to let the suicide bombers to do as they wish, Willie D. Porter's captain ordered his crew to shoot them down, resulting in friendship between the two as shipgirls.



** To elaborate: Not taking part in Ten-Go led to Yamato being captured when US Marines secured Kure, leading to General MacArthur deciding to keep her as a war trophy and to hold the surrender ceremony on her deck as a further humiliation to the Japanese. He then kept her as a war prize in Tokyo, and in the 50s used his influence to have her crewed by American and Japanese sailors, where she participated in shore bombardment duties in the Korean War, alongside USS Iowa and USS New Jersey. This leads to:
** 1957: Fleet Admiral Halsey calls MacArthur to offer a quid pro quo: MacArthur wants to keep Yamato as an American war prize, Halsey wants to keep Enterprise from being scrapped. Halsey lends his support to MacArthur's efforts to retain Yamato in US service, in exchange for MacArthur convincing the nascent [[KaijuDefenseForce JMSDF]] to purchase Enterprise as their flagship. Both ships receive refits and serve for decades with their new navies.

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** To elaborate: Not taking part in Ten-Go led to Yamato being captured when US Marines secured Kure, leading to General MacArthur [=MacArthur=] deciding to keep her as a war trophy and to hold the surrender ceremony on her deck as a further humiliation to the Japanese. He then kept her as a war prize in Tokyo, and in the 50s used his influence to have her crewed by American and Japanese sailors, where she participated in shore bombardment duties in the Korean War, alongside USS Iowa and USS New Jersey. This leads to:
** 1957: Fleet Admiral Halsey calls MacArthur [=MacArthur=] to offer a quid pro quo: MacArthur [=MacArthur=] wants to keep Yamato as an American war prize, Halsey wants to keep Enterprise from being scrapped. Halsey lends his support to MacArthur's [=MacArthur=]'s efforts to retain Yamato in US service, in exchange for MacArthur [=MacArthur=] convincing the nascent [[KaijuDefenseForce JMSDF]] to purchase Enterprise as their flagship. Both ships receive refits and serve for decades with their new navies.
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-->''My name is USS Montana. Battleship, United States Navy. Hull number BB-72.''
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''Eternity'' is a VideoGame/KantaiCollection'' written by Sheo Darren, set in the alternate Earth, where the first small, but major change occured in 1945 when a raid on Kure by USS Enterprise and others managed to damage Yamato's engines, preventing her participation in Operation Ten-Go (with Nagato taking her place) and leading to her capture by the Americans.

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''Eternity'' is a VideoGame/KantaiCollection'' VideoGame/KantaiCollection fanfic written by Sheo Darren, set in the an alternate Earth, where the first small, but major change occured occurred in 1945 when a raid on Kure by USS Enterprise and others managed to damage Yamato's engines, preventing her participation in Operation Ten-Go (with Nagato taking her place) and leading to her capture by the Americans.

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** JDS Hyuga and Ise are commissioned in the 80s, and are built as [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/CVA-01 CVA-01 style aircraft carriers]] as a joint Anglo-Japanese project, as opposed to being flattop helicopter destroyers.



* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Yamato saw a lot more action as Montana, since USA had lot a more resources to spare.

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* InSpiteOfANail: Budget shock from JDS Amatsukaze still kills the JMSDF's [=CVH-B=] helicopter carrier in the 60s.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Yamato saw a lot more action as Montana, since USA US had lot a more the resources to spare.deploy her.

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And thus Yamato was formally made part of USN as USS Montana, while Enterprise joined the nascent Japanese Maritime Self Defense Force together with Halsey as an advisor. Enterprise in particular, now renamed Yonaga (Long Night), served Japan for so long that she earned the nickname "Eien", "[[TitleDrop Eternity]]".

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And thus Yamato was formally made part of USN United States Navy as USS Montana, while Enterprise joined the nascent Japanese Maritime Self Defense Force together with Halsey as an advisor. Enterprise in particular, now renamed Yonaga (Long Night), served Japan for so long that she earned the nickname "Eien", "[[TitleDrop Eternity]]".



The story can found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/eternity-a-kantai-collection-story.372481/ SpaceBattles.com]]

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The story can found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/eternity-a-kantai-collection-story.372481/ SpaceBattles.com]]
com]].



* FireForgedFriends: Such is the unlikely friendship between Nagato and Willie Dee.



* GoingNative: Enterprise > Yonaga and Yamato > Montana are the biggest examples, and there are many more, like the Destroyers that USA loaned to Japan.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Jun'you is one of the few who fough Enterprise and lived to tell about, and the experience made her heavy drunkard.

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* GoingNative: ** To elaborate: Not taking part in Ten-Go led to Yamato being captured when US Marines secured Kure, leading to General MacArthur deciding to keep her as a war trophy and to hold the surrender ceremony on her deck as a further humiliation to the Japanese. He then kept her as a war prize in Tokyo, and in the 50s used his influence to have her crewed by American and Japanese sailors, where she participated in shore bombardment duties in the Korean War, alongside USS Iowa and USS New Jersey. This leads to:
** 1957: Fleet Admiral Halsey calls MacArthur to offer a quid pro quo: MacArthur wants to keep Yamato as an American war prize, Halsey wants to keep
Enterprise > Yonaga and from being scrapped. Halsey lends his support to MacArthur's efforts to retain Yamato > Montana in US service, in exchange for MacArthur convincing the nascent [[KaijuDefenseForce JMSDF]] to purchase Enterprise as their flagship. Both ships receive refits and serve for decades with their new navies.
** This also eventually leads to Halsey spending his last years in Japan as an advisor to the [=JMSDF=], as well as (indirectly) a revision of Article 9 in the 70s.
** USS William D. Porter is not destroyed by a kamikaze attack, but instead fights off a massive kamikaze raid to protect Nagato, and is eventually sunk alongside Nagato during the Operation Crossroads nuclear tests.
* GoingNative:
** Enterprise/Yonaga and Yamato/Montana
are the biggest examples, examples of this, though it's more pronounced with Montana, who no longer considers herself Yamato, and considers herself to be an American battleship.
** In a lesser example,
there are the many more, like destroyers and frigates of the Destroyers that USA loaned to Japan.
[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mutual_Defense_Assistance_Act#Mutual_Assistance_Program_-_Military_Assistance_Program Military Assistance Program]], particularly the American ships who became the first ships of the JMSDF - USS Heywood L. Evans introduces herself as JDS Ariake.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Jun'you is one of the few who fough fought Enterprise and lived to tell about, about it, and the experience made her a heavy drunkard.

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* TheAtoner: Yonaga sees herself serving the Japanese as an atonement for her extremely violent past.

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* TheAtoner: Yonaga sees herself serving the Japanese as an atonement making amends for her extremely violent past.



* GoingNative: Enterprise > Yonaga and Yamato > Montana are the biggest examples, and there are many more, like the Destroyers that USA loaned to Japan.



* GoingNative: Enterprise > Yonaga and Yamato > Montana are the biggest examples, and there are many more, like the Destroyers that USA loaned to Japan.

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* GoingNative: Enterprise > Yonaga and Yamato > Montana are the biggest examples, and there are many more, like the Destroyers that USA loaned to Japan.InSeriesNickname: ''Eien'' (Eternity) for Yonaga.
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And thus Yamato was formally made part of USN as USS Montana, while Enterprise joined the nascent Japanese Maritime Self Defense Force together with Halsey . Enterprise in particular, now renamed Yonaga (Long Night), served Japan for so long that she earned the nickname "Eien", "[[TitleDrop Eternity]]".

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And thus Yamato was formally made part of USN as USS Montana, while Enterprise joined the nascent Japanese Maritime Self Defense Force together with Halsey .Halsey as an advisor. Enterprise in particular, now renamed Yonaga (Long Night), served Japan for so long that she earned the nickname "Eien", "[[TitleDrop Eternity]]".
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Yonaga sees her time as Enterprise as something which she has to suprass for the benefit of herself and others.
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-->'''''Before we're through with them,'''''\\
''I promise.''\\


-->'''''the Japanese language'''''\\
''I will protect Japan and its people from those who would seek to do them harm.''\\


-->'''''will be spoken only in Hell.'''''\\
''No one will hurt my new home and my new people in the way that my old nation and former countrymen were hurt on the seventh of December so many years back.''

-->'''''That is the promise I intend to keep.'''''\\
''That is the promise I intend to keep.''

-->'''''USS Enterprise.'''''\\
''JDS Yonaga.''

-->'''''Weigh''''' ''anchor!''

''Eternity'' is a VideoGame/KantaiCollection'' written by Sheo Darren, set in the alternate Earth, where the first small, but major change occured in 1945 when a raid on Kure by USS Enterprise and others managed to damage Yamato's engines, preventing her participation in Operation Ten-Go (with Nagato taking her place) and leading to her capture by the Americans.

Fast Forward to 1957, New York. Admiral Halsey was unable to secure support to retire Enterprise as museum ship, and unwilling to see her scrapped, he contacted General [=McArthur=] with a deal: He will help the General in convincing the Government keep Yamato on the more permanent basis, and in return the General will help him persuade the Japanese, who were looking to strengthen their Navy as the precaution against the communists, to buy Enterprise.

And thus Yamato was formally made part of USN as USS Montana, while Enterprise joined the nascent Japanese Maritime Self Defense Force together with Halsey . Enterprise in particular, now renamed Yonaga (Long Night), served Japan for so long that she earned the nickname "Eien", "[[TitleDrop Eternity]]".

Fast forward again to 2027, and it is year since the The Abyssal War started, and Yonaga was one of the few who still hasn't appeared. But when she did, the shipgirl who answered to call was radically different from the one who fought in the Pacific War, to the mixed reactions on the both sides of the pond. And on top of that, Yonaga has her own issues to deal with.

The story can found on [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/eternity-a-kantai-collection-story.372481/ SpaceBattles.com]]

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!! This Fanfic contains examples of:

* TheAtoner: Yonaga sees herself serving the Japanese as an atonement for her extremely violent past.
* TheBait: During the Pacific War, knowing that it will anger the Japanese, the Americans used the damaged Nagato as a kamikaze bait. Despite the orders to let suicide bombers to do as they wish, Willie D. Porter's captain ordered his crew to shoot them down, resulting in friendship between the two as shipgirls.
* BerserkButton: Do not insult Halsey in front of Yonaga.
* ForWantOfANail: In RealLife, Yamato weathered the Kure raid relatively unscathed. In ''Eternity'', the same raid damaged her engines, leading to all the changes described above.
* INeedAFreakingDrink: Jun'you is one of the few who fough Enterprise and lived to tell about, and the experience made her heavy drunkard.
* GoingNative: Enterprise > Yonaga and Yamato > Montana are the biggest examples, and there are many more, like the Destroyers that USA loaned to Japan.
* LikeADuckTakesToWater: Yamato saw a lot more action as Montana, since USA had lot a more resources to spare.
* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: Enterprise's default emotional state during the Pacific War, which estranged her with basically everyone else at the time, something which she greatly regrets.

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-->''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QyO4LM8Iqzk Woe is me\\
Woe is me...]]''

-->'''''WO...'''''

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