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* OlderThanTheyLook: Niall is a minor example. He is fourteen but looks and sounds seven years younger. His child-like appearance is a factor.
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** Niall is a minor example. He is fourteen but looks and sounds seven years younger. His child-like appearance is afactor.factor.
** Niall's maternal grandfather Rick Finlayson is another example. He is in his early seventies, but looks closer to his late fifties.
** Niall is a minor example. He is fourteen but looks and sounds seven years younger. His child-like appearance is a
** Niall's maternal grandfather Rick Finlayson is another example. He is in his early seventies, but looks closer to his late fifties.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9169744/1/Enter-Ken-Finlayson Enter Ken Finlayson]] is the first part of a WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja fan fic series by Jet556.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9169744/1/Enter-Ken-Finlayson Enter Ken Finlayson]] is the first part of a WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja ''WesternAnimation/RandyCunninghamNinthGradeNinja'' fan fic series by Jet556.[=Jet556=].
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* TeensAreShort: Niall is 4'4 and he mentions having used to worn lifts.
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* IllGirl: Niall is stated to be of poor health and falls ill often. He wears a medical mask constantly it seems. As of the end of "Paper-Thin Disguise" a recent bout of illness turned his hair white.
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* RealityEnsues: Ken discovered that Randy was the Ninja due to Randy never using a different voice and posture as the Ninja.
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* SpottingTheThread: Ken discovered that Randy was the Ninja due to Randy never using a different voice and posture as the Ninja.
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* UncattyResemblance: Mrs. Finlayson has a whippet and she resembles one. Her name is Hecate and its name is Trivia.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Mrs. Finlayson comes across as this. She hasn't appeared in person yet but apparently when she is in a specific area blood starts dripping down walls and dogs start forming into packs. Also she was recently in the hospital for cosmetic surgery for her chin, lips, cheeks and eyelids which only begs the question what she even looks like period let alone beforehand. The first chapter of "Expiry by Lamplight" establishes all of this. The second chapter has Theresa describe Mrs. Finlayson as a "not quite human woman." The second chapter of "The Eerie Safari" continues the blood theme with her presence including blood running from faucets as well and, unrelated to the blood theme, Niall, as his female alter ego Alexis, mistakes his step-grandmother for a hat rack. In this story we also get some information about her appearance and it includes broader nostrils, dry lamellar derma and barbed honed fangs.
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* AmbiguouslyHuman: Mrs. Finlayson comes across as this. She hasn't appeared in person yet but apparently when she is in a specific area blood starts dripping down walls and dogs start forming into packs. Also she was recently in the hospital for cosmetic surgery for her chin, lips, cheeks and eyelids which only begs the question what she even looks like period let alone beforehand. The first chapter of "Expiry by Lamplight" establishes all of this. The second chapter has Theresa describe Mrs. Finlayson as a "not quite human woman." The second chapter of "The Eerie Safari" continues the blood theme with her presence including blood running from faucets as well and, unrelated to the blood theme, Niall, as his female alter ego Alexis, mistakes his step-grandmother for a hat rack. In this story we also get some information about her appearance and it includes broader nostrils, dry lamellar derma and barbed honed fangs.fangs and a resemblance to a whippet.
