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* OpenSecret: The cult is this among lowbloods. Everyone knows about it, if only through rumors, and some trade with it- but nobody talks about it. (The highbloods know considerably less, because, you know, ''insurgents''.)
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author often responds to comments, and has clarified many things about the fic's setting.

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* AllThereInTheManual: The author often responds to comments, and has clarified many things about the fic's setting. Her blog also supplies concept art.
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* InsistentTerminology: In a [[http://elanorpam.tumblr.com/post/59520489658/inktail-asked-you-oh-oh-the-scene-where-tavros-wheels sidestory drabble]].
-->Protocol required different responses for different threats. This particular threat appeared to be a lone one — perhaps a subjugglator on one of the one-wheeled devices they favored. Depending on his or her apparent degree of hostility, misdirection could be employed, or murder might be required.
-->''(Never shy away from that word. Murder is murder is murder.)''
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* OverlyNarrowSuperlative: Tavros saying that Equius "isn't too bad either, for a weird [[FurryFandom hoofbeast]] pervert."

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--> [[spoiler:You should have thought of this before, are the words all sloshing in the inside of your thinkpan when you lie back on the floor. Your motherfucking best friend was always up in your case about quitting the pies, and you wanted to make him happy, really you did. And you really should have thought of trying before now, when he wasn't all of being around being his tiny little breakable self where the thoughts in your head keep telling you about it over and over.]]
--> [[spoiler:If you put the hurt in your brother, you'll just — you'll up and throw yourself into the sea, is what you tell yourself while you stare up at the ceiling, your guts all twisted up and cramping and asking for pie. And then you squeeze your eyes shut until they hurt because your thinkpan is trying to conjure up a thought of his little thin arm bent all out of shape, and it's horrible, and you're horrible.]]


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* TooMuchInformation: In Chapter 12, Feferi and Eridan end up having a fight over Trollian and Kanaya asks them to move it to a private chatlog.
-->AA: if anybody else feels the need to discuss their quadrant issues in this space
-->AA: please dont
-->TA: [[SarcasmMode aw 2hiit, ii had thi2 huge fuckiing paragraph wiith all my ii22ue2 paiin2takiingly de2criibed for general 2crutiiniity and you forced me two delete iit, AA.]]
-->TA: [[SarcasmMode how can you liive wiith your2elf.]]

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--> CA: thinkin hes this big fuckin genius because he thought a contactin us under kars name
--> CA: but he doesnt knoww ship aboat kar
--> CA: and he doesnt knoww ship aboat [[TrueCompanions us]]
--> CT: D --> That is a remarkable display of incompetence


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* MoralMyopia: [[spoiler:Sober!Gamzee]] cares deeply for his moirail, but knowingly lets the threshcutioners murder children because it would be too much trouble to save them.
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* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: ''Cultstuck'' focuses entirely on the trolls; ''Earthbent'' opens with a chatlog between John and Dave.
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--> He walks by without any sign of acknowledgement, and you already have a very bad feeling even before you hear the shuffling behind you.

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--> [[MindControl He walks by without any sign of acknowledgement, acknowledgement,]] and you already have a very bad feeling even before you hear the shuffling behind you.

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* MookHorrorShow: The chapters in which threshcutioners attack Gamzee and Vriska.
--> Your body creaks as you push to your feet, heavy and sluggish. Carrying her tied-up body all the way up seems like such a chore! Regardless, she’s proven too dangerous to allow any freedom, and too important to leave behind.
--> You hear the tapping of feet above your head, and can’t believe your eyes as your fellow tealblood makes it to the bottom of the stairs.
--> “Hey!” your voice sounds nearly two sweeps younger as you approach him. “Most of the team is lost, but the target is secure, just help me get her to the buggy and we’ll be able to interrogate—”
--> He walks by without any sign of acknowledgement, and you already have a very bad feeling even before you hear the shuffling behind you.
--> Your lungs lock up. You turn around, slowly, but not enough to miss the way the girl discards the rope on her arms. Your eyes track the ends. There’s no fray. The other ropes are similarly unwrapped, as if kept only for show.
--> You walk out of the door, heart on your throat. You don’t know where you’re going, you just want to leave the ghastly corpses, the ghastly girl, you just want to be away from your failure, just for one second, just to catch your breath. You blink at the path, and it ends just in front and something in you does not like that, or what lies beyond. And beyond there’s white, and snapping jaws, clicking pincers, baleful eyes. Several of them. They’re all staring at you, and you know it.
--> Your legs are still kicking after you walk off the end of the road.



** Another example in Chapter 2, when Karkat disagrees with the Greenblood Cultist's plan to commit suicide (for the sole purpose- or so Karkat thinks- of intimidating the Empire). The Cultist sees this as an awe-inspiring expression of the Sufferer's nobility and compassion for all beings, to the extent of writing poems about it. Karkat sees it as doing what any sane troll would do and preventing a pointless waste of life.

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** Another example in Chapter 2, when Karkat disagrees with the Greenblood Cultist's plan to commit suicide (for the sole purpose- or so Karkat thinks- of intimidating the Empire). suicide. The Cultist sees this as an awe-inspiring expression of the Sufferer's nobility and compassion for all beings, to the extent of writing and he writes poems about it. Karkat sees it as doing what any sane troll would do and preventing a pointless waste of life.
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** In [[HomeStuck canon]], Karkat is actually left handed.

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** In [[HomeStuck canon]], Karkat is actually left handed.right handed, which is like being left-handed on Earth.
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--> Lower than the lowest, higher than the highest. Scream of the Sufferer echoing through time, his Blood now Returned to redeem our crime. Signless Reborn, the Carrier of Blood. Grubloaf of Life, fill our starving souls. (...) Oh He Whose Blood Runs Purest, Descendant of Suffering! Rekindle the Righteous Rage, burn our shameful world. Oh Shadow's Serene, Pink Moon's Moirail, [[TheSacredDarkness Night of the world!]] (...) Oh, Grace of Blood, Comforter of the Weeping!

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--> [[ForeShadowing Lower than the lowest, higher than the highest. highest.]] Scream of the Sufferer echoing through time, his Blood now Returned to redeem our crime. Signless Reborn, the Carrier of Blood. Grubloaf of Life, fill our starving souls. (...) Oh He Whose Blood Runs Purest, Descendant of Suffering! Rekindle the Righteous Rage, burn our shameful world. Oh Shadow's Serene, Pink Moon's Moirail, [[TheSacredDarkness Night of the world!]] (...) Oh, Grace of Blood, Comforter of the Weeping!



* MeaningfulRename: The cultists choose new names that reflect their interests or jobs within the cult; it is entirely possible for them to change their name several times, or indeed as often as they like. The Grand Elder chose his name to reflect his size; on learning that people interpreted it as "the elder who is in charge", [[MyNameIsNotDurwood he attempted to rename himself Big Elder,]] but he seems to be the only person who actually uses the latter form of his name. Even Karkat calls him Grand Elder.
* MullhollandRelationshipMoment: Tavros sees Karkat's blood color [[spoiler:while he is being tended to by the cultists.]]

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* MeaningfulRename: The cultists choose new names that reflect their interests or jobs within the cult; it is entirely possible for them to change their name several times, or indeed as often as they like. The Grand Elder chose his name to reflect his size; on learning that people interpreted it as "the elder who is in charge", [[MyNameIsNotDurwood he attempted to rename himself Big Elder,]] but he seems to be the only person who actually uses the latter form of his name. Even Karkat calls him Grand Elder.
* MullhollandRelationshipMoment: MilhollandRelationshipMoment: Tavros sees Karkat's blood color [[spoiler:while he is being tended to by the cultists.]]



* ReluctantPsycho: [[spoiler:Gamzee while going through withdrawal]] in Chapter 6. [[spoiler:He gets urges to kill Karkat, and takes sadistic glee in murdering a gang of threshcutioners. But he knows what he has become.]]

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* ReluctantPsycho: ReluctantPsycho / TragicMonster: [[spoiler:Gamzee while going through withdrawal]] in Chapter 6. [[spoiler:He gets urges to kill Karkat, and takes sadistic glee in murdering a gang of threshcutioners. But he knows what he has become.]]

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* InelegantBlubbering: Elder Inditer has a tendency to do this, likely as a result of his DarkAndTroubledPast.



* [[spoiler: ReluctantPsycho: Gamzee while going through withdrawal. He gets urges to kill Karkat, and takes sadistic glee in murdering a gang of threshcutioners. But he knows what he has become.]]

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* [[spoiler: ReluctantPsycho: Gamzee [[spoiler:Gamzee while going through withdrawal. He withdrawal]] in Chapter 6. [[spoiler:He gets urges to kill Karkat, and takes sadistic glee in murdering a gang of threshcutioners. But he knows what he has become.]]



--> (...)
--> [[spoiler:You'll do it. You'll ride this one to the end, because your brother is already far on the way back to his hive where you can't put the hurt on him. And if your heart up and tells you to get your chase on, the sea is right over there, you'll jump in, you'll chase the fishes instead.]]



-> There. Now [[{{Mook}} he]] thinks he's got dirt on a super heretic moirail sucker, and with your main Spidersister putting her convince on in his mind that these weak-ass fuckers will know all about where a heretic mutant gets his hideout in, you just have to kick back and enjoy some rest before you get to rid the universe of this one batch of moirail-hunting thresh-holes. Life is good. Time to relax. It's totally okay to let your guard down for now!
-> You know what's going on before you even catch the skittery little tickle in the back of your head. You're not surprised. That's how the spider plays. She really ain't subtle at all, is she?

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-> --> There. Now [[{{Mook}} he]] thinks he's got dirt on a super heretic moirail sucker, and with your main Spidersister putting her convince on in his mind that these weak-ass fuckers will know all about where a heretic mutant gets his hideout in, you just have to kick back and enjoy some rest before you get to rid the universe of this one batch of moirail-hunting thresh-holes. Life is good. Time to relax. It's totally okay to let your guard down for now!
-> --> You know what's going on before you even catch the skittery little tickle in the back of your head. You're not surprised. That's how the spider plays. She really ain't subtle at all, is she?

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-> TC: you don't manipulate shit by pushing it off a cliff, spiderbitch.
-> TC: THAT'LL JUST DESTROY IT.
-> AG: [[ClusterFBomb F8CK Y8U F8CK Y8U F8CK Y8U]]
-> AG: [[ClusterFBomb F8CK Y8U!!!!!!!!]]

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-> --> TC: you don't manipulate shit by pushing it off a cliff, spiderbitch.
-> --> TC: THAT'LL JUST DESTROY IT.
-> --> AG: [[ClusterFBomb F8CK Y8U F8CK Y8U F8CK Y8U]]
-> --> AG: [[ClusterFBomb F8CK Y8U!!!!!!!!]]



* LongTitle: Karkat has one thought up by the Cult. We haven't heard it in full, but it includes "Higher than the Highest, Lower than the Lowest", "Comforter of the Weeping" and "[[TheSacredDarkness Night of the World]]".
** ''Earthbent'''s blurb adds to it.
--> Lower than the lowest, higher than the highest. Scream of the Sufferer echoing through time, his Blood now Returned to redeem our crime. Signless Reborn, the Carrier of Blood. Grubloaf of Life, fill our starving souls. (...) Oh He Whose Blood Runs Purest, Descendant of Suffering! Rekindle the Righteous Rage, burn our shameful world. Oh Shadow's Serene, Pink Moon's Moirail, Night of the world! (...) Oh, Grace of Blood, Comforter of the Weeping!

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* LongTitle: Karkat has one thought up by the Cult. We haven't heard it in full, but it includes "Higher than the Highest, Lower than the Lowest", "Comforter of the Weeping" and "[[TheSacredDarkness Night of the World]]".
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''Earthbent'''s blurb adds to gives us some idea of it.
--> Lower than the lowest, higher than the highest. Scream of the Sufferer echoing through time, his Blood now Returned to redeem our crime. Signless Reborn, the Carrier of Blood. Grubloaf of Life, fill our starving souls. (...) Oh He Whose Blood Runs Purest, Descendant of Suffering! Rekindle the Righteous Rage, burn our shameful world. Oh Shadow's Serene, Pink Moon's Moirail, [[TheSacredDarkness Night of the world! world!]] (...) Oh, Grace of Blood, Comforter of the Weeping!



* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: The cult's Elders. Fortunately, the Grand Elder is there to sort them out.

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* NotSoOmniscientCouncilOfBickering: The cult's Elders. Fortunately, the Grand Elder is and Plucker are there to sort them out.



* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Eridan’s trolling of the Threshcutioner who was impersonating Karkat (and convincing no one). Apparently, he proposed red once, black twice, referred to himself as Lord High Snappertail, and implied Tavros was his kismesis and Vriska his moirail.

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* ObliviousToLove: Sopor!Gamzee to Karkat.
* OffscreenMomentOfAwesome: Eridan’s trolling of the Threshcutioner who was impersonating Karkat (and convincing no one).Karkat. Apparently, he proposed red once, black twice, referred to himself as Lord High Snappertail, and implied Tavros was his kismesis and Vriska his moirail.


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* [[spoiler: ReluctantPsycho: Gamzee while going through withdrawal. He gets urges to kill Karkat, and takes sadistic glee in murdering a gang of threshcutioners. But he knows what he has become.]]
--> [[spoiler:You should have thought of this before, are the words all sloshing in the inside of your thinkpan when you lie back on the floor. Your motherfucking best friend was always up in your case about quitting the pies, and you wanted to make him happy, really you did. And you really should have thought of trying before now, when he wasn't all of being around being his tiny little breakable self where the thoughts in your head keep telling you about it over and over.]]
--> [[spoiler:If you put the hurt in your brother, you'll just — you'll up and throw yourself into the sea, is what you tell yourself while you stare up at the ceiling, your guts all twisted up and cramping and asking for pie. And then you squeeze your eyes shut until they hurt because your thinkpan is trying to conjure up a thought of his little thin arm bent all out of shape, and it's horrible, and you're horrible.]]
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--> [[spoiler:You'll do it. You'll ride this one to the end, because your brother is already far on the way back to his hive where you can't put the hurt on him. And if your heart up and tells you to get your chase on, the sea is right over there, you'll jump in, you'll chase the fishes instead.]]


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* SanitySlippage: PlayedWith. As [[spoiler:Gamzee progresses through withdrawal, he actually gets saner, but his narration grows more violent and uncontrollable.]] Its conclusion results in SanityStrengthening.

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* JumpedAtTheCall: Nepeta takes the news that the Empire's trying to kill her surprisingly well.
--> "Pounce! We're going hunting!"



--> ''Love's lance through her breast...''

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--> ''Love's lance through her breast...'' ''
* LameComeback: Vriska's response to Gamzee reminding her about Tavros.
-> TC: you don't manipulate shit by pushing it off a cliff, spiderbitch.
-> TC: THAT'LL JUST DESTROY IT.
-> AG: [[ClusterFBomb F8CK Y8U F8CK Y8U F8CK Y8U]]
-> AG: [[ClusterFBomb F8CK Y8U!!!!!!!!]]



* TearsOfJoy: Karkat and Inditer's reaction to the events of Chapter 20. [[CrowningMomentOfHeartwarming (And probably the fanbase's.)]]



--> ...which they were, except not in whatever fanciful ways they came up with in their impressionable minds -- but how do you even express that? "I'm not angry because you're doing things wrong, I'm angry because you're such dumbasses about things!" [[SarcasmMode That sure would go over well,]] if they even parsed your words in a way that wasn't completely opaque.

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--> ...which they were, except not in whatever fanciful ways they came up with in their impressionable minds -- but how do you even express that? "I'm not angry because you're doing things wrong, I'm angry because you're such dumbasses ''dumbasses' about things!" [[SarcasmMode That sure would go over well,]] if they even parsed your words in a way that wasn't completely opaque.


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* SuspiciouslySpecificDenial: When Vriska tries to control Gamzee mentally, it's represented by his narration briefly becoming this.
-> There. Now [[{{Mook}} he]] thinks he's got dirt on a super heretic moirail sucker, and with your main Spidersister putting her convince on in his mind that these weak-ass fuckers will know all about where a heretic mutant gets his hideout in, you just have to kick back and enjoy some rest before you get to rid the universe of this one batch of moirail-hunting thresh-holes. Life is good. Time to relax. It's totally okay to let your guard down for now!
-> You know what's going on before you even catch the skittery little tickle in the back of your head. You're not surprised. That's how the spider plays. She really ain't subtle at all, is she?
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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Some of the children raised by the cult were picked because the adult cultists thought they were cute and couldn’t bear to let them into the harsh world. The majority are orphans [[note]]Some had their lusus killed by Eridan, according by the author[[/note]] or were too weak/sickly/injured to survive as little grubs, though.

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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Some of the children raised by the cult were picked because the adult cultists thought they were cute and couldn’t bear to let them into the harsh world. The majority are orphans [[note]]Some of which had their lusus killed by Eridan, according by to the author[[/note]] or were too weak/sickly/injured to survive as little grubs, though.
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** WordOfGod explains it [[http://elanorpam.tumblr.com/tagged/homestuck-discussion like this]].
-> The system only favors them on a surface level. If you’re a highblood, you have to act as expected from a highblood or be steamrolled by your own peers. Lowbloods will always expect the worst from you, unless they’re quadrantmates. And you’ll have to watch as your lowblood quadrantmates are slowly and inexorably crushed by a system that for all intents and purposes values and favors you — and yet, despite all these resources you theoretically have access to, there’s very little you can actually do for them without losing this favor and becoming a target as well. You gotta be on top of things to preserve yourself and yours, and you gotta toe the line or lose your grip, and toeing the line means giving lip service to the very bullshit that threatens you and yours.
-> After an entire highblood lifespan of losing however many good, decent lowblood friends / quadrantmates / underlings to this ocean of bullshit, all while watching from the top of your safe little boat with full knowledge of how precariously held together it actually is, and surrounded by assholes trying to convince you that it should be in your nature to not give a shit, wouldn’t you be thoroughly sick and tired of upholding this bullshit?

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** WordOfGod explains it [[http://elanorpam.tumblr.com/tagged/homestuck-discussion com/tagged/cultstuck like this]].
-> --> The system only favors them on a surface level. If you’re a highblood, you have to act as expected from a highblood or be steamrolled by your own peers. Lowbloods will always expect the worst from you, unless they’re quadrantmates. And you’ll have to watch as your lowblood quadrantmates are slowly and inexorably crushed by a system that for all intents and purposes values and favors you — and yet, despite all these resources you theoretically have access to, there’s very little you can actually do for them without losing this favor and becoming a target as well. You gotta be on top of things to preserve yourself and yours, and you gotta toe the line or lose your grip, and toeing the line means giving lip service to the very bullshit that threatens you and yours.
-> --> After an entire highblood lifespan of losing however many good, decent lowblood friends / quadrantmates / underlings to this ocean of bullshit, all while watching from the top of your safe little boat with full knowledge of how precariously held together it actually is, and surrounded by assholes trying to convince you that it should be in your nature to not give a shit, wouldn’t you be thoroughly sick and tired of upholding this bullshit?



* DidYouDie: Terezi to Sollux.

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* DidYouDie: Terezi to Sollux.during Sollux's story.



* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Some of the children raised by the cult were picked because the adult cultists thought they were cute and couldn’t bear to let them into the harsh world. The majority are orphans or were too weak/sickly/injured to survive as little grubs, though.

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* ImTakingHerHomeWithMe: Some of the children raised by the cult were picked because the adult cultists thought they were cute and couldn’t bear to let them into the harsh world. The majority are orphans [[note]]Some had their lusus killed by Eridan, according by the author[[/note]] or were too weak/sickly/injured to survive as little grubs, though.
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** InSpiteOfANail: Despite that, some things remain the same. For example, nearly all characterization remains intact, and Gamzee and Karkat still become moirails. Strangely, despite the lack of time travel, Aradia still uses a Cosbytop.

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** InSpiteOfANail: Despite that, some things remain the same. For example, nearly all characterization remains intact, Terezi is still blind, and Gamzee and Karkat still become moirails. Strangely, despite the lack of time travel, Aradia still uses a Cosbytop.



* DarkSecret: Dave claims that every suburban family has one.

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* DarkSecret: Dave claims that every suburban family has one. Given that he's talking to John Egbert, [[spoiler:whose uncle is sheltering the alien Karkat]] he's probably right.



** The blog (and ''Cultsuck'''s last chapter) mentions that many [[SpoiledSweet highbloods]] have converted to the Cult, [[TheMole and secretly support it.]]

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** The blog mentions that many [[SpoiledSweet highbloods]] have converted to the Cult, [[TheMole and secretly support it.]]

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** The blog (and ''Cultsuck'''s last chapter) mentions that many [[SpoiledSweet highbloods]] have converted to the Cult, [[TheMole and secretly support it.]] ]]
** WordOfGod explains it [[http://elanorpam.tumblr.com/tagged/homestuck-discussion like this]].
-> The system only favors them on a surface level. If you’re a highblood, you have to act as expected from a highblood or be steamrolled by your own peers. Lowbloods will always expect the worst from you, unless they’re quadrantmates. And you’ll have to watch as your lowblood quadrantmates are slowly and inexorably crushed by a system that for all intents and purposes values and favors you — and yet, despite all these resources you theoretically have access to, there’s very little you can actually do for them without losing this favor and becoming a target as well. You gotta be on top of things to preserve yourself and yours, and you gotta toe the line or lose your grip, and toeing the line means giving lip service to the very bullshit that threatens you and yours.
-> After an entire highblood lifespan of losing however many good, decent lowblood friends / quadrantmates / underlings to this ocean of bullshit, all while watching from the top of your safe little boat with full knowledge of how precariously held together it actually is, and surrounded by assholes trying to convince you that it should be in your nature to not give a shit, wouldn’t you be thoroughly sick and tired of upholding this bullshit?
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--> CA: thinkin hes this big fuckin genius because he thought a contactin us under kars name
--> CA: but he doesnt knoww ship aboat kar
--> CA: and he doesnt knoww ship aboat [[TrueCompanions us]]
--> CT: D --> That is a remarkable display of incompetence
--> GA: Youre Still Putting Yourself Into Unnecessary Risk As Terezi Put It
--> CA: swweet a you ta wworry but no
--> CA: cause i came up wwith this fuckin revvolutionary strategy
--> CA: its called
--> CA: lying


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** ''Earthbent'''s blurb adds to it.
--> Lower than the lowest, higher than the highest. Scream of the Sufferer echoing through time, his Blood now Returned to redeem our crime. Signless Reborn, the Carrier of Blood. Grubloaf of Life, fill our starving souls. (...) Oh He Whose Blood Runs Purest, Descendant of Suffering! Rekindle the Righteous Rage, burn our shameful world. Oh Shadow's Serene, Pink Moon's Moirail, Night of the world! (...) Oh, Grace of Blood, Comforter of the Weeping!

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* AdaptationalBadass: Played with. Power levels are, if anything, ''lower'' than they were in canon, but many of the characters are saner and more emotionally stable than they were in ''Homestuck''. [[TheLeader Aradia]] is a particularly noticeable example of this.
** ''Earthbent'' makes the Guardians into more ReasonableAuthorityFigure[=s=] than they were in canon.



* CoolAndUnusualPunishment:
--> GT: anyway, dad talked to me all the way home about attitudes and responsibility and blah blah blah i won't bore you with it.
--> GT: he made me bake like five cakes, though. five! he said it was to commemorate my manly decisive attitude which finally brought justice to the schoolyard, but i think it was also some sort of subtle punishment, because, well, i do admit i was incredibly lucky and things could have gone hells of wrong.
--> GT: and if they were really meant as a prize i really don't think he'd make me stay up until 2am learning how to pipe roses.



* DarkSecret: Dave claims that every suburban family has one.



* MillhollandRelationshipMoment: Tavros sees Karkat's blood color [[spoiler:while he is being tended to by the cultists.]]

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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: John does a prankster's version of this to his bullies.
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There are two shorter side stories: ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/728530 Bringing down the moons]]'', about Karkat as a young child, and the in-progress ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/696375 > Karkat: half-heartedly attend your own wriggling day celebrations]]'', which tells the story of what Karkat did on his sixth wriggling day in this universe. There is also a spoilerrific [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1003020 intermission]] set after the main story.

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There are two shorter side stories: ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/728530 Bringing down the moons]]'', about Karkat as a young child, and the in-progress ''[[http://archiveofourown.org/works/696375 > Karkat: half-heartedly attend your own wriggling day celebrations]]'', which tells the story of what Karkat did on his sixth wriggling day in this universe. There is also a spoilerrific [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1003020 intermission]] set after the main story.
story. [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1047141 Earthbent]] is the sequel to the fic proper.
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* MillhollandRelationshipMoment: Tavros sees Karkat's blood color [[spoiler:while he is being tended to by the cultists.]]
--> ...and it suddenly, finally hits you that Karkat is a Mutant and that you should care but still don’t.
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* AccidentalTruth: The cult tries to convince the Empire that they [[spoiler:have the Summoner on their side]]; come [[spoiler:Tavros meeting the cult]] several chapters later, they actually do.
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* BattleCouple: A meowrail variant: Equius and Nepeta become this after he switches allegiances.


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* LetsGetDangerous: Equius in Chapter 19.


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* StealthPun: Equius makes a crossbow- literally, a [[spoiler:%bow]].
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* AllThereInTheManual: The author often responds to comments, and has clarified many things about the fic's setting.


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* DidYouDie: Terezi to Sollux.


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* GotMeDoingIt: According to WordOfGod, Karkat is so used to pompous elders calling his favourite tabard "the sable tabard with silver threading" that he describes it that way even in his own narration.


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* MaybeMagicMaybeMundane: Karkat's possible connection to the Signless' memories. [[ShrugOfGod The author's response when asked?]] An EvilLaugh.
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* LoveYouAndEverybody: In their last conversation before [[spoiler:Karkat is moved offworld]], Karkat says goodbye to Terezi and tells her he loves her. Terezi feels awkward until Karkat clarifies that he loves all his friends, platonically.
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* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Karkat does not believe he is TheMessiah, and [[RefusedTheCall does not want to be.]] Unfortunately, ''everyone else'' disagrees. Most importantly, the Empire disagrees, and sends out threshcutioners to [[{{Unperson}} kill him and everyone who knows him.]]

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* TheCallKnowsWhereYouLive: Karkat does not believe he is TheMessiah, the MessianicArchetype, and [[RefusedTheCall does not want to be.]] Unfortunately, ''everyone else'' disagrees. Most importantly, the Empire disagrees, and sends out threshcutioners to [[{{Unperson}} kill him and everyone who knows him.]]
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* SeriousBusiness: The cultists treat ''everything'' relating to Karkat as this. It's the source of most of the fic's comedy.
** As exemplified when a ceremonial robe is made for Karkat:
--> "Where the ''fuck'' is Silk Weaver!?"
--> "He locked himself in the hygiene block, says he made a mistake on the gloves—"
--> "Somebody dig ‘im out!"
--> "He keeps sobbing and asking for an honorable cull—"
--> "Somebody remind ‘im we don't do that, and then ''dig ‘im out!''"
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** Which makes sense[[spoiler: since he's Darkleer]], and thus was alive during the Sufferers time.

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** Which makes sense[[spoiler: since sense [[spoiler:since he's Darkleer]], Darkleer and thus was alive during the Sufferers time.Sufferer's time]].
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* PimpedOutDress: The cult often puts Karkat into these. [[http://elanorpam.tumblr.com/post/63949070862/cultstuck-chapter-20 They're]] [[http://elanorpam.tumblr.com/post/43315630633/zombiepineapples-elanorpam-roachpatrol so]] elaborate that you can't help laughing and feeling sorry for him at the same time.

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