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* PunchAWall: One of the taskforce members after learning that [[spoiler: Light really was Kira all along and that L was protecting him from prosecution.]]
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: [[spoiler: Light explains that he has gotten so good at acting and secret keeping because [[StraightGay he is gay]] and trying to conceal it from his extremely homophobic father... ([[DontExplainTheJoke also he's Kira]] but [[MemoryGambit he doesn't know that at the time]]).]]
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: [[spoiler: Light explains to L that he has gotten so good at acting and secret keeping because [[StraightGay he is gay]] and trying to conceal it from his extremely homophobic father... ([[DontExplainTheJoke also he's Kira]] but [[MemoryGambit he doesn't know that at the time]]).]]
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* FailureToSaveMurder: Light blamed himself for being unable to protect Taro and the others from his father.
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* XMeetsY: ''Manga/DeathNote'' meets ''{{Series/Angel}}'' meets ''[[{{WesternAnimation/X-MenEvolution}} X-Men Evolution]]'' ''[[{{Comicbook/X-Men}} X-Men]]'' meets ''{{Saw}}''.
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* TheStoic: L and Light. When Beyond takes Souichiro Yagami hostage, and is giving Light, his father, and L TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and how he's going [[ForcedToWatch to force them all to watch]] as he gives DaChief a slow, painful CruelAndUnusualDeath Light's response is to apathetically examine his fingernails, [[DeadpanSnarker snark back at Beyond]], and then screw up Beyond's carefully laid plans [[spoiler: by CuttingTheKnot. Protip: When your victim for MindRape is a [[TheSociopath Sociopath]] with [[WellDoneSonGuy daddy issues]] who [[MercyKill can kill from a distance, holding his father hostage]] [[ShootTheDog isn't going to give you the result you're looking for.]]]] However Light [[VillainousBreakdown breaks down]] in a NotSoStoic moment immediately afterwards.
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* TheStoic: L and Light. When Beyond takes [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami Yagami]] hostage, and is giving Light, his father, and L TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and how he's going [[ForcedToWatch to force them all to watch]] as he gives DaChief [[spoiler: DaChief]] a slow, painful CruelAndUnusualDeath Light's response is to apathetically examine his fingernails, [[DeadpanSnarker snark back at Beyond]], and then screw up Beyond's carefully laid plans [[spoiler: by CuttingTheKnot. Protip: When your victim for MindRape is a [[TheSociopath Sociopath]] with [[WellDoneSonGuy daddy issues]] who [[MercyKill can kill from a distance, holding his father hostage]] [[ShootTheDog isn't going to give you the result you're looking for.]]]] However Light [[VillainousBreakdown breaks down]] in a NotSoStoic moment immediately afterwards.
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* TheStoic: L and Light. When Beyond takes Souichiro Yagami hostage, and is giving Light, his father, and L TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and how he's going [[ForcedToWatch to force them all to watch]] as he gives DaChief a slow, painful DeathByDismemberment Light's response is to apathetically examine his fingernails, [[DeadpanSnarker snark back at Beyond]], and then screw up Beyond's carefully laid plans [[spoiler: by CuttingTheKnot. Protip: When your victim for MindRape is a [[TheSociopath Sociopath]] with [[WellDoneSonGuy daddy issues]] who [[MercyKill can kill from a distance, holding his father hostage]] [[ShootTheDog isn't going to give you the result you're looking for.]]]] However Light [[VillainousBreakdown breaks down]] in a NotSoStoic moment immediately afterwards.
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* TheStoic: L and Light. When Beyond takes Souichiro Yagami hostage, and is giving Light, his father, and L TheReasonYouSuckSpeech and how he's going [[ForcedToWatch to force them all to watch]] as he gives DaChief a slow, painful DeathByDismemberment CruelAndUnusualDeath Light's response is to apathetically examine his fingernails, [[DeadpanSnarker snark back at Beyond]], and then screw up Beyond's carefully laid plans [[spoiler: by CuttingTheKnot. Protip: When your victim for MindRape is a [[TheSociopath Sociopath]] with [[WellDoneSonGuy daddy issues]] who [[MercyKill can kill from a distance, holding his father hostage]] [[ShootTheDog isn't going to give you the result you're looking for.]]]] However Light [[VillainousBreakdown breaks down]] in a NotSoStoic moment immediately afterwards.
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4769735/1/Constant_Temptation Constant Temptation]]'' by Dragonrider4000 is an AU ''Manga/DeathNote'' fic told in the ancient tradition of the [[OutOfCharacter OOC]] / [[SlashFic slash mode.]] [[FandomSpecificPlot It begins with the standard Light and L fall in love during the Yotsuba arc]] but quickly deviates into something with more original content. As L and Light come to a mutually beneficial arrangement, one of L's old enemies uses all the hype over Kira to escape from prison, intent on destroying L and all he holds dear and because he keeps [[MasterOfDisguise changing his appearance]] he is protected from the powers of the Death Note. Even with the combined forces of Kira, Wammy's House, and [[spoiler: TheMafia]] at his disposal will L be able to put a stop to [[spoiler: Beyond]]'s reign of terror?
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4769735/1/Constant_Temptation Constant Temptation]]'' by Dragonrider4000 [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/1686155/Dragonrider4000 Dragonrider4000]] is an AU ''Manga/DeathNote'' fic told in the ancient tradition of the [[OutOfCharacter OOC]] / [[SlashFic slash mode.]] [[FandomSpecificPlot It begins with the standard Light and L fall in love during the Yotsuba arc]] but quickly deviates into something with more original content. As L and Light come to a mutually beneficial arrangement, one of L's old enemies uses all the hype over Kira to escape from prison, intent on destroying L and all he holds dear and because he keeps [[MasterOfDisguise changing his appearance]] he is protected from the powers of the Death Note. Even with the combined forces of Kira, Wammy's House, and [[spoiler: TheMafia]] at his disposal will L be able to put a stop to [[spoiler: Beyond]]'s reign of terror?
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Jason (but [[IGotBetter he gets better]]), Rem]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Jason (but [[IGotBetter [[UnexplainedRecovery he gets better]]), Rem]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4769735/1/Constant_Temptation Constant Temptation]]'' by Dragonrider4000 is an AU ''DeathNote'' fic told in the ancient tradition of the [[OutOfCharacter OOC]] / [[SlashFic slash mode.]] [[FandomSpecificPlot It begins with the standard Light and L fall in love during the Yotsuba arc]] but quickly deviates into something with more original content. As L and Light come to a mutually beneficial arrangement, one of L's old enemies uses all the hype over Kira to escape from prison, intent on destroying L and all he holds dear and because he keeps [[MasterOfDisguise changing his appearance]] he is protected from the powers of the Death Note. Even with the combined forces of Kira, Wammy's House, and [[spoiler: TheMafia]] at his disposal will L be able to put a stop to [[spoiler: Beyond]]'s reign of terror?
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4769735/1/Constant_Temptation Constant Temptation]]'' by Dragonrider4000 is an AU ''DeathNote'' ''Manga/DeathNote'' fic told in the ancient tradition of the [[OutOfCharacter OOC]] / [[SlashFic slash mode.]] [[FandomSpecificPlot It begins with the standard Light and L fall in love during the Yotsuba arc]] but quickly deviates into something with more original content. As L and Light come to a mutually beneficial arrangement, one of L's old enemies uses all the hype over Kira to escape from prison, intent on destroying L and all he holds dear and because he keeps [[MasterOfDisguise changing his appearance]] he is protected from the powers of the Death Note. Even with the combined forces of Kira, Wammy's House, and [[spoiler: TheMafia]] at his disposal will L be able to put a stop to [[spoiler: Beyond]]'s reign of terror?
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* BetaCouple: or rather, "Beta Threesome" of Matt x Mello x Near
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* HaveYouTriedNotBeingAMonster: {{Lampshaded}}, see DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything below.
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* HaveYouTriedNotBeingAMonster: {{Lampshaded}}, see DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything below.above.
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* BrokenPedestal: Light with his father.
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* GuiltComplex: [[spoiler: Light has a severe one even before becoming Kira.]] See FreudianExcuse.
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* {{Wimpification}}: Subverted, Dragonrider manages to make the pairing Light/L without L losing any points in {{Badass}}.
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* {{Wimpification}}: Subverted, Dragonrider manages to make the pairing Light/L [[{{Seme}} Light]]/[[{{Uke}} L]] without L losing any points in {{Badass}}.
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* ItRunsInTheFamily: In the right learning environment Sayu is just as smart as her brother. Also Light inherited his [[AxeCrazy axe-craziness]] from his father.
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* ItRunsInTheFamily: In the right learning environment Sayu is just as smart as her brother. [[spoiler: Also Light inherited his [[AxeCrazy axe-craziness]] from his father. father.]]
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{{Gorn}}: Courtesy of [[spoiler: B]]
*HannibalLecture HannibalLecture: [[spoiler: B]] gives one to Light after [[spoiler: torturing his father.]] [[MomentOfAwesome Light doesn't even flinch.]]
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* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: Ryuk is caught and punished for interfering in human affairs. This is his punishment. Ryuk decides it was totally worth it when Watari shows him how to make apple pie.]]
* HumanityEnsues: [[spoiler: Ryuk is caught and punished for interfering in human affairs. This is his punishment. Ryuk decides it was totally worth it when Watari shows him how to make apple pie.]]
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* PastVictimShowcase: After [[spoiler: B tortures Souichiro. And later after B tortures Light.]] Both times the protagonists are ForcedToWatch via video feed.
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* {{Nakama}}: And ''how!!!''
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* NotVeryPrettyNowIsHe