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* {{Ukefication}}: Subverted, Dragonrider manages to make the pairing Light/L without L losing any points in {{Badass}}.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: Both Light and L.
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** TheBigGuy – Mello
** TheSmartGuy – Matt
** TheChick - Near
** SixthRanger – Light, [[spoiler: Jason]]
** TheObiWan - Wammy
** TheSmartGuy – Matt
** TheChick - Near
** SixthRanger – Light, [[spoiler: Jason]]
** TheObiWan - Wammy
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** TheBigGuy – TheBigGuy: Mello
**TheSmartGuy – TheSmartGuy: Matt
**TheChick - TheChick: Near
**SixthRanger – SixthRanger: Light, [[spoiler: Jason]]
**TheObiWan - TheObiWan: Wammy
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* ItsPersonal - To get to L, [[spoiler: Beyond]] [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies is targeting all of L's allies,]] that is EVERYONE that L has ever had contact with.
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold – Light and Mello
* KarmaHoudiniWarranty - [[spoiler: If you think Light's a KarmaHoudini in the beginning of this fic... it expires rather harshly later... [[BeingGoodSucks when he really takes it for the team...]]]]
* KidFic - Light and L are something like surrogate parents to the trio and [[spoiler: Eleanor.]]
* KirkSummation – Light to Beyond, Beyond responds with ShutUpKirk
* LamarckWasRight - In the right learning environment Sayu is becoming just as smart and confident as her brother.
* LighterAndSofter - Yeah really, (in terms of [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation character interpretation]] [[BlackAndWhiteMorality at least]], see DracoInLeatherPants)
* JerkWithAHeartOfGold – Light and Mello
* KarmaHoudiniWarranty - [[spoiler: If you think Light's a KarmaHoudini in the beginning of this fic... it expires rather harshly later... [[BeingGoodSucks when he really takes it for the team...]]]]
* KidFic - Light and L are something like surrogate parents to the trio and [[spoiler: Eleanor.]]
* KirkSummation – Light to Beyond, Beyond responds with ShutUpKirk
* LamarckWasRight - In the right learning environment Sayu is becoming just as smart and confident as her brother.
* LighterAndSofter - Yeah really, (in terms of [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation character interpretation]] [[BlackAndWhiteMorality at least]], see DracoInLeatherPants)
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* ItsPersonal - ItsPersonal: To get to L, [[spoiler: Beyond]] [[ItsNotYouItsMyEnemies is targeting all of L's allies,]] that is EVERYONE that L has ever had contact with.
*JerkWithAHeartOfGold – JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Light and Mello
*KarmaHoudiniWarranty - KarmaHoudiniWarranty: [[spoiler: If you think Light's a KarmaHoudini in the beginning of this fic... it expires rather harshly later... [[BeingGoodSucks when he really takes it for the team...]]]]
*KidFic - KidFic: Light and L are something like surrogate parents to the trio and [[spoiler: Eleanor.]]
*KirkSummation – KirkSummation: Light to Beyond, Beyond responds with ShutUpKirk
*LamarckWasRight - LamarckWasRight: In the right learning environment Sayu is becoming just as smart and confident as her brother.
*LighterAndSofter - LighterAndSofter: Yeah really, (in terms of [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation character interpretation]] [[BlackAndWhiteMorality at least]], see DracoInLeatherPants)
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* [[spoiler: TheMafia]] - [[spoiler: Mello is the heir to one.]]
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* [[spoiler: TheMafia]] - TheMafia]]: [[spoiler: Mello is the heir to one.]]
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* TheMasochismTango - Light and L.
* MasterOfDisguise – [[spoiler: Beyond]]
* MercyKill – "NOT FAIR!"
* TheMessiah - L.
* MindRape - [[spoiler: Beyond]] is a master at it.
* MasterOfDisguise – [[spoiler: Beyond]]
* MercyKill – "NOT FAIR!"
* TheMessiah - L.
* MindRape - [[spoiler: Beyond]] is a master at it.
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* TheMasochismTango - TheMasochismTango: Light and L.
*MasterOfDisguise – MasterOfDisguise: [[spoiler: Beyond]]
*MercyKill – MercyKill: "NOT FAIR!"
*TheMessiah - TheMessiah: L.
*MindRape - MindRape: [[spoiler: Beyond]] is a master at it.
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* MyGreatestFailure - [[spoiler: when Rem fails to protect Misa from Beyond.]]
* {{Nakama}} - And ''how!!!''
* {{Nakama}} - And ''how!!!''
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* MyGreatestFailure - MyGreatestFailure: [[spoiler: when Rem fails to protect Misa from Beyond.]]
** Light's motive in becoming Kira is [[RetCon RetConned]] to be much more [[ItsPersonal personal]]. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds He seeks to bring justice to the world because]] [[spoiler: his father killed his past boyfriends and [[ItsAllMyFault he could do nothing to protect them.]]]]
*{{Nakama}} - {{Nakama}}: And ''how!!!''
** Light's motive in becoming Kira is [[RetCon RetConned]] to be much more [[ItsPersonal personal]]. [[WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds He seeks to bring justice to the world because]] [[spoiler: his father killed his past boyfriends and [[ItsAllMyFault he could do nothing to protect them.]]]]
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* NotSoStoic –Light after he [[spoiler: [[MercyKill kills]] [[SelfMadeOrphan his father.]]]]
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* NotSoStoic –Light NotSoStoic: Light after he [[spoiler: [[MercyKill kills]] [[SelfMadeOrphan his father.]]]]
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* OddFriendship - [[spoiler: Ryuk and Watari]]?
* OpenMindedParent – Wammy
* OverlordJr – In this ficverse [[spoiler: Mello is the heir to the British Mafia.]]
* OverprotectiveDad - Wammy. Also in this fic [[spoiler: Souichiro is the [[KnightTemplarParent evil version of this trope.]]]]
* PapaWolf - Wammy, Light, L...
* PlayfulHacker - Matt.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami is made into a raging homophobe.]]
* OpenMindedParent – Wammy
* OverlordJr – In this ficverse [[spoiler: Mello is the heir to the British Mafia.]]
* OverprotectiveDad - Wammy. Also in this fic [[spoiler: Souichiro is the [[KnightTemplarParent evil version of this trope.]]]]
* PapaWolf - Wammy, Light, L...
* PlayfulHacker - Matt.
* PoliticallyIncorrectVillain - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami is made into a raging homophobe.]]
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* OddFriendship - OddFriendship: [[spoiler: Ryuk and Watari]]?
*OpenMindedParent – OpenMindedParent: Wammy
*OverlordJr – OverlordJr: In this ficverse [[spoiler: Mello is the heir to the British Mafia.]]
*OverprotectiveDad - OverprotectiveDad: Wammy. Also in this fic [[spoiler: Souichiro is the [[KnightTemplarParent evil version of this trope.]]]]
*PapaWolf - PapaWolf: Wammy, Light, L...
*PlayfulHacker - PlayfulHacker: Matt.
*PoliticallyIncorrectVillain - PoliticallyIncorrectVillain: [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami is made into a raging homophobe.]]
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* PowerTrio - Mello, Matt, and Near.
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* PowerTrio - PowerTrio: Mello, Matt, and Near.
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* PsychologistTeacher – [[spoiler: Light]]
* PunchAWall - One of the taskforce members after learning that [[spoiler: Light really was Kira all along and that L was protecting him from prosecution.]]
* PunchAWall - One of the taskforce members after learning that [[spoiler: Light really was Kira all along and that L was protecting him from prosecution.]]
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* PsychologistTeacher – PsychologistTeacher: [[spoiler: Light]]
*PunchAWall - PunchAWall: One of the taskforce members after learning that [[spoiler: Light really was Kira all along and that L was protecting him from prosecution.]]
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge - [[spoiler: After Beyond brutally murders Misa, killing Beyond becomes Rem's only goal.]]
* SamaritanSyndrome - both Light and L.
* ScarsAreForever – [[spoiler: Mello and Light.]]
* [[spoiler: SelfMadeOrphan]] - Light
* {{Seme}} - ''[[RunningGag Very.]]''
* SamaritanSyndrome - both Light and L.
* ScarsAreForever – [[spoiler: Mello and Light.]]
* [[spoiler: SelfMadeOrphan]] - Light
* {{Seme}} - ''[[RunningGag Very.]]''
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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge - RoaringRampageOfRevenge: [[spoiler: After Beyond brutally murders Misa, killing Beyond becomes Rem's only goal.]]
*SamaritanSyndrome - SamaritanSyndrome: both Light and L.
*ScarsAreForever – ScarsAreForever: [[spoiler: Mello and Light.]]
* [[spoiler:SelfMadeOrphan]] - SelfMadeOrphan]]: Light
*{{Seme}} - {{Seme}}: Light. ''[[RunningGag Very.]]''
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* ShutUpKirk – [[spoiler: Taken rather literally.]]
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* ShutUpKirk – ShutUpKirk: [[spoiler: Taken rather literally.]]
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* StartOfDarkness - In BackStory, [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge Light's motivations]] [[FreudianExcuse are made more personal]] than just [[RetCon a crusade against criminals and evil in general.]]
* StuffedIntoTheFridge - [[spoiler: Misa.]]
* StuffedIntoTheFridge - [[spoiler: Misa.]]
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* StartOfDarkness - StartOfDarkness: In BackStory, [[RoaringRampageOfRevenge Light's motivations]] [[FreudianExcuse are made more personal]] than just [[RetCon a crusade against criminals and evil in general.]]
*StuffedIntoTheFridge - StuffedIntoTheFridge: [[spoiler: Misa.]]
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* TenchiSolution - Mello x Matt x Near.
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* TenchiSolution - TenchiSolution: Mello x Matt x Near.
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* TokenEvilTeammate – Light and Mello
* TooKinkyToTorture – [[spoiler: Subverted]]
* TooKinkyToTorture – [[spoiler: Subverted]]
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* TokenEvilTeammate – TokenEvilTeammate: Light and Mello
*TooKinkyToTorture – TooKinkyToTorture: [[spoiler: Subverted]]
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* TraumaCongaLine - well, everyone.
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* TraumaCongaLine - TraumaCongaLine: well, everyone.
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* {{Ukefication}} - Subverted, Dragonrider manages to make the pairing Light/L without L losing any points in {{Badass}}.
* VillainsOutShopping - When not purging the world of evil, Kira enjoys [[spoiler: playing harmless S & M Bondage games with his life-partner and teaching math to young geniuses.]]
* WellDoneSonGuy - Light with his father, [[spoiler: Beyond]] with L.
* VillainsOutShopping - When not purging the world of evil, Kira enjoys [[spoiler: playing harmless S & M Bondage games with his life-partner and teaching math to young geniuses.]]
* WellDoneSonGuy - Light with his father, [[spoiler: Beyond]] with L.
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* {{Ukefication}} - {{Ukefication}}: Subverted, Dragonrider manages to make the pairing Light/L without L losing any points in {{Badass}}.
*VillainsOutShopping - VillainsOutShopping: When not purging the world of evil, Kira enjoys [[spoiler: playing harmless S & M Bondage games with his life-partner and teaching math to young geniuses.]]
*WellDoneSonGuy - WellDoneSonGuy: Light with his father, [[spoiler: Beyond]] with L.
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* AMillionIsAStatistic - [[spoiler: [[RuleOfEmpathy Kira is redeemable... Beyond is not...]]]]
* AbusiveParents - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami]]
* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon - [[spoiler: Screw the timeline. Mello's gotta be a mafia leader and he's gotta have that scar!]]
* AccidentalPervert – Mello, Matt, and Near just happened to start watching L and Light's bedroom activities...
* TheAloner – L
* AbusiveParents - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami]]
* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon - [[spoiler: Screw the timeline. Mello's gotta be a mafia leader and he's gotta have that scar!]]
* AccidentalPervert – Mello, Matt, and Near just happened to start watching L and Light's bedroom activities...
* TheAloner – L
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* AMillionIsAStatistic - ADayInTheLimeLight: for Sayu and Sachiko, Ryuk, Watari.
* AMillionIsAStatistic: [[spoiler: [[RuleOfEmpathy Kira is redeemable... Beyond is not...]]]]
*AbusiveParents - AbusiveParents: [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami]]
*AcceptableBreaksFromCanon - AcceptableBreaksFromCanon: [[spoiler: Screw the timeline. Mello's gotta be a mafia leader and he's gotta have that scar!]]
*AccidentalPervert – AccidentalPervert: Mello, Matt, and Near just happened to start watching L and Light's bedroom activities...
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*TheAloner – TheAloner: L
* AMillionIsAStatistic: [[spoiler: [[RuleOfEmpathy Kira is redeemable... Beyond is not...]]]]
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* TheAtoner – [[spoiler: Light]], kind of, sort of. [[spoiler: [[AxeCrazy He has no qualms about killing]] but has toned it down a bit for L's sake.]]
* AttractiveBentGender - [[spoiler: Mello, Matt, and Near]]
* BadassFamily - Wammy's House
* BadassLongcoat – [[spoiler: L when preparing for the finale battle with Beyond.]]
* BadassTeacher – [[spoiler: Light]]
* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork - [[spoiler: Light is more than willing to ShootTheDog for L's sake, as is Rem out of loyalty and a desire for vengeance, also the mafia rides to the rescue.]]
* TheAtoner – [[spoiler: Light]], kind of, sort of. [[spoiler: [[AxeCrazy He has no qualms about killing]] but has toned it down a bit for L's sake.]]
* AttractiveBentGender - [[spoiler: Mello, Matt, and Near]]
* BadassFamily - Wammy's House
* BadassLongcoat – [[spoiler: L when preparing for the finale battle with Beyond.]]
* BadassTeacher – [[spoiler: Light]]
* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork - [[spoiler: Light is more than willing to ShootTheDog for L's sake, as is Rem out of loyalty and a desire for vengeance, also the mafia rides to the rescue.]]
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* [[spoiler: ArchnemesisDad]] - ArchnemesisDad]]: Souichiro Yagami.
*TheAtoner – TheAtoner: [[spoiler: Light]], kind of, sort of. [[spoiler: [[AxeCrazy He has no qualms about killing]] but has toned it down a bit for L's sake.]]
*AttractiveBentGender - AttractiveBentGender: [[spoiler: Mello, Matt, and Near]]
*BadassFamily - BadassFamily: Wammy's House
*BadassLongcoat – BadassLongcoat: [[spoiler: L when preparing for the finale battle with Beyond.]]
*BadassTeacher – BadassTeacher: [[spoiler: Light]]
*BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork - BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: [[spoiler: Light is more than willing to ShootTheDog for L's sake, as is Rem out of loyalty and a desire for vengeance, also the mafia rides to the rescue.]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil - Subverted. [[spoiler: Light's RousingSpeech [[TalkingYourWayOut breaks Jason of his conditioning.]]]]
* BigBad - [[spoiler: Beyond]]
* BigBad - [[spoiler: Beyond]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil - BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil: Subverted. [[spoiler: Light's RousingSpeech [[TalkingYourWayOut breaks Jason of his conditioning.]]]]
*BigBad - BigBad: [[spoiler: Beyond]]
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* BreakTheHaughty - [[ColdBloodedTorture poor,]] ''[[FateWorseThanDeath poor]]'' [[JerkAssWoobie Light.]]
* BrokenAce – Light, L, [[spoiler: Beyond...]]
* BroughtDownToNormal – [[spoiler: Ryuk, and for a time Light is stripped of ALL of his weapons...]]
* CListFodder - [[spoiler: Several [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] and a few members of the Kira Taskforce.]]
* BrokenAce – Light, L, [[spoiler: Beyond...]]
* BroughtDownToNormal – [[spoiler: Ryuk, and for a time Light is stripped of ALL of his weapons...]]
* CListFodder - [[spoiler: Several [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] and a few members of the Kira Taskforce.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty - BreakTheHaughty: [[ColdBloodedTorture poor,]] ''[[FateWorseThanDeath poor]]'' [[JerkAssWoobie Light.]]
*BrokenAce – BrokenAce: Light, L, [[spoiler: Beyond...and Beyond.]]
*BroughtDownToNormal – BroughtDownToNormal: [[spoiler: Ryuk, and for a time Light is stripped of ALL of his weapons...weapons.]]
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* CoolTeacher - [[spoiler: Light]]
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment - [[spoiler: Dresses.]]
* CoolAndUnusualPunishment - [[spoiler: Dresses.]]
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*CoolAndUnusualPunishment - CoolAndUnusualPunishment: [[spoiler: Dresses.]]
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* DarkFic - kind of a given with [[spoiler: Beyond]] behaving in character...
* DemotedToExtra - [[spoiler: Misa]]
* DemotedToExtra - [[spoiler: Misa]]
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*DemotedToExtra - DemotedToExtra: [[spoiler: Misa]]
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* DespairEventHorizon - [[MoodWhiplash my God, yes.]]
* DirtyCop - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami.]]
* DisguisedInDrag - [[spoiler: Mello, Matt, and Near]]
* DistressBall - [[spoiler: Light picks it up almost immediatly after [[KarmaHoudiniWarranty he decides he doesn't really want to be Kira anymore.]]]]
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything? - [[spoiler: Light explains that he has gotten so good at acting and secret keeping because [[StraightGay he is gay]] and trying to conceal it from his extremely homophobic father... ([[DontExplainTheJoke also he's Kira]] but [[MemoryGambit he doesn't know that at the time]]).]]
* DirtyCop - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami.]]
* DisguisedInDrag - [[spoiler: Mello, Matt, and Near]]
* DistressBall - [[spoiler: Light picks it up almost immediatly after [[KarmaHoudiniWarranty he decides he doesn't really want to be Kira anymore.]]]]
* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything? - [[spoiler: Light explains that he has gotten so good at acting and secret keeping because [[StraightGay he is gay]] and trying to conceal it from his extremely homophobic father... ([[DontExplainTheJoke also he's Kira]] but [[MemoryGambit he doesn't know that at the time]]).]]
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* DespairEventHorizon - DespairEventHorizon: [[MoodWhiplash my God, yes.]]
*DirtyCop - DirtyCop: [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami.]]
*DisguisedInDrag - DisguisedInDrag: [[spoiler: Mello, Matt, and Near]]
*DistressBall - DistressBall: [[spoiler: Light picks it up almost immediatly after [[KarmaHoudiniWarranty he decides he doesn't really want to be Kira anymore.]]]]
*DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything? - DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: [[spoiler: Light explains that he has gotten so good at acting and secret keeping because [[StraightGay he is gay]] and trying to conceal it from his extremely homophobic father... ([[DontExplainTheJoke also he's Kira]] but [[MemoryGambit he doesn't know that at the time]]).]]
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* DontTellMama - The trio find themselves in a position where [[CrowningMomentOfFunny they have to confess to spying on L and Light...]]
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* DontTellMama - DontTellMama: The trio find themselves in a position where [[CrowningMomentOfFunny they have to confess to spying on L and Light...]]
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* {{Doorstopper}} - {{Doorstopper}}: 102 chapters. It's not a fanfic, it's a NOVEL and totally worth the read.
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* EasilyForgiven - [[spoiler: [[ExaggeratedTrope Kira]]]].
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* EasilyForgiven - EasilyForgiven: [[spoiler: [[ExaggeratedTrope Kira]]]].
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* ElaborateUniversityHigh – ElaborateUniversityHigh: Wammy's House
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* EvilCounterpart – [[spoiler: Beyond for L]]
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* EvilCounterpart – EvilCounterpart: [[spoiler: Beyond for L]]
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** TheHero / TeamMom – TeamMom: L
** TheLancer /TeamDad – TeamDad: Light
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* FreudianExcuse – Light. [[spoiler: His father arranged the deaths of his previous boyfriends.]]
* GenreShift - Romance -> Horror -> Action Movie -> Romance.
* GenreShift - Romance -> Horror -> Action Movie -> Romance.
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* FreudianExcuse – FreudianExcuse: Light. [[spoiler: His father arranged the deaths of his previous boyfriends.]]
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* HarmlessVillain - [[spoiler: Kira]]
* [[HasTwoMommies Has Two Daddies]] – Light and L to the trio and [[spoiler: Eleanor.]]
* [[HasTwoMommies Has Two Daddies]] – Light and L to the trio and [[spoiler: Eleanor.]]
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* HarmlessVillain - HarmlessVillain: [[spoiler: Kira]]
* [[HasTwoMommies Has TwoDaddies]] – Daddies]]: Light and L to the trio and [[spoiler: Eleanor.]]
* [[HasTwoMommies Has Two
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* HeelRealization – "If I kept going ''now'' I'd be a monster!"
* HeelRealization – "If I kept going ''now'' I'd be a monster!"
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* HeroicSacrifice - HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler: Jason (but [[IGotBetter he gets better]]), Rem]]
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* IJustWantToBeNormal - [[spoiler: Reformed!Light]]
* IJustWantToBeNormal - [[spoiler: Reformed!Light]]
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* InTheBlood - [[spoiler: Apparently Light got his warped morals and [[AxeCrazy Axe-Craziness]] [[RonTheDeathEater from his father...]]]]
* IrritationIsTheSincerestFormOfFlattery – [[spoiler: Beyond]]
* InTheBlood - [[spoiler: Apparently Light got his warped morals and [[AxeCrazy Axe-Craziness]] [[RonTheDeathEater from his father...]]]]
* IrritationIsTheSincerestFormOfFlattery – [[spoiler: Beyond]]
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* IJustWantToHaveFriends - IJustWantToHaveFriends: L
*InTheBlood - InTheBlood: [[spoiler: Apparently Light got his warped morals and [[AxeCrazy Axe-Craziness]] [[RonTheDeathEater from his father...]]]]
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* ResuscitateTheDog
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* AlasPoorScrappy - [[spoiler: Misa.]]
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* BeingTorturedMakesYouEvil - subverted.Subverted. [[spoiler: Light's RousingSpeech [[TalkingYourWayOut breaks Jason of his conditioning.]]]]
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* CListFodder - [[spoiler: several [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] and a few members of the Kira Taskforce.]]
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* CListFodder - [[spoiler: several Several [[OriginalCharacter Original Characters]] and a few members of the Kira Taskforce.]]
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything? - [[spoiler: Light explains that he has gotten so good at acting and secret keeping because [[StraightGay he is gay]] and trying to conceal it from his extremly homophobic father... ([[DontExplainTheJoke also he's Kira]] but [[MemoryGambit he doesn't know that at the time]]).]]
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything? - [[spoiler: Light explains that he has gotten so good at acting and secret keeping because [[StraightGay he is gay]] and trying to conceal it from his extremly extremely homophobic father... ([[DontExplainTheJoke also he's Kira]] but [[MemoryGambit he doesn't know that at the time]]).]]
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* FreudianExcuse – Light Light. [[spoiler: His father arranged the deaths of his previous boyfriends.]]
* FridgeLogic - [[spoiler: how was it possible that Rem saw Beyond's name when she didn't see his face?]]]]
* FridgeLogic - [[spoiler: how was it possible that Rem saw Beyond's name when she didn't see his face?]]
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty - [[spoiler: if you think Light's a KarmaHoudini in the beginning of this fic... it expires rather harshly later... [[BeingGoodSucks when he really takes it for the team...]]]]
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* KarmaHoudiniWarranty - [[spoiler: if If you think Light's a KarmaHoudini in the beginning of this fic... it expires rather harshly later... [[BeingGoodSucks when he really takes it for the team...]]]]
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* LamarckWasRight - in the right learning environment Sayu is becoming just as smart and confident as her brother.
* LighterAndSofter - yeah really, (in terms of [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation character interptration]] [[BlackAndWhiteMorality at least]], see DracoInLeatherPants)
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* LamarckWasRight - in In the right learning environment Sayu is becoming just as smart and confident as her brother.
* LighterAndSofter -yeah Yeah really, (in terms of [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation character interptration]] interpretation]] [[BlackAndWhiteMorality at least]], see DracoInLeatherPants)
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* OverlordJr – in this ficverse [[spoiler: Mello is the heir to the British Mafia.]]
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* OverlordJr – in In this ficverse [[spoiler: Mello is the heir to the British Mafia.]]
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* PunchAWall - one of the taskforce members after learning that [[spoiler: Light really was Kira all along and that L was protecting him from prosecution.]]
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* StrangledByTheRedString - in places.
* StrangledByTheRedString - in places.
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* {{Ukefication}} - subverted, Dragonrider manages to make the pairing Light/L without L losing any points in {{Badass}}.
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* {{Ukefication}} - subverted, Subverted, Dragonrider manages to make the pairing Light/L without L losing any points in {{Badass}}.
* VillainDecay – [[spoiler: Kira]], by way of intentional BadassDecay.{{Badass}}.
* VillainDecay – [[spoiler: Kira]], by way of intentional BadassDecay.
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* WellDoneSonGuy - Light with his father, [[spoiler: Beyond]] with L.
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* TheWoobie - Rem. "[[FantasticRacism ARGH! WHY DO THEY ALWAYS SCREAM!!!]]"
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* WellDoneSonGuy - Light with his father, [[spoiler: Beyond]] with L. \n* TheWoobie - Rem. "[[FantasticRacism ARGH! WHY DO THEY ALWAYS SCREAM!!!]]"\n
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* BigDamnVillains
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* EasilyForgiven - [[spoiler: [[ExaggeratedTrope Kira]]]], [[ExaggeratedTrope the story's one]] WallBanger.
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* AbusiveParents - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami]]
* BreakTheHaughty
* DemotedToExtra - [[spoiler: Misa]]
* DirtyCop - [[spoiler: Souichiro Yagami.]]
* IJustWantToBeLoved - L and Light
* IJustWantToHaveFriends - L
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* PapaWolf -Watari. That is all. Wammy, Light, L...
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* TraumaCongaLine - yes.well, everyone.
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* DistressBall - [[spoiler: Light picks it up almost immediatly after [[KarmaHoudiniWarranty he decides he doesn't really want to be Kira anymore.]]]]
* FridgeLogic - [[spoiler: how was it possible that Rem saw Beyond's name when she didn't see his face?]]
* HeelRealization – "If I kept going ''now'' I'd be a monster!"
* IJustWantToBeNormal - [[spoiler: Reformed!Light]]
* LoadsAndLoadsOfCharacters
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* AcceptableBreaksFromCanon - [[spoiler: Screw the timeline. Mello's gotta be a mafia leader and he's gotta have that scar!]]