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** [[spoiler: Then she gets Burnscar to off Cherish for her.]]
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** [[spoiler:Cherish manipulated Lung into fighting Crawler in order to keep them both evolving towards a very real world-ending threat.]]
*** [[spoiler: Then she gets Burnscar to off Cherish for her.]]
*** [[spoiler: Then she gets Burnscar to off Cherish for her.]]
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*** [[spoiler:Mannequin tries to recruit her rather than Armsmaster.]]
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*** [[spoiler:Mannequin tries to recruit her Skitter rather than Armsmaster.Armsmaster ''and'' popping out her eyes in addition to killing Valefor earned her a probationary position from a second sponsorship.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Taylor pops out her eyeballs to be able to fight Valefor.]]
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Taylor pops out her eyeballs to be able to fight Valefor.Valefor... and by that, I mean she popped them out, had insects chew the optic nerves out, and then put them in a case for safekeeping.]]
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** StationsOfCanon: [[spoiler:Aegis still gets crushed to paste in a HeroicSacrifice.]]
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** StationsOfCanon: [[spoiler:Aegis InSpiteOfANail:[[spoiler:Aegis still gets crushed to paste in a HeroicSacrifice.HeroicSacrifice against Leviathan and Armsmaster still gets several limbs amputated.]]
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*** [[spoiler:ABB are all but destroyed now.]]
*** [[spoiler:New Wave takes out Coil so Noelle targets them and gets Brandish killed.]]
*** [[spoiler:Grue and Tattletale join the Wards.]]
*** [[spoiler:Mannequin tries to recruit her rather than Armsmaster.]]
** StationsOfCanon: [[spoiler:Aegis still gets crushed to paste in a HeroicSacrifice.]]
*** [[spoiler:New Wave takes out Coil so Noelle targets them and gets Brandish killed.]]
*** [[spoiler:Grue and Tattletale join the Wards.]]
*** [[spoiler:Mannequin tries to recruit her rather than Armsmaster.]]
** StationsOfCanon: [[spoiler:Aegis still gets crushed to paste in a HeroicSacrifice.]]
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* [[spoiler: ButterflyOfDoom: Taylor's well-intended actions ironically lead to Leviathan's attack being worse than canon.]]
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* [[spoiler: ButterflyOfDoom: [[spoiler: Taylor's well-intended actions ironically lead to Leviathan's attack being worse than canon.canon due to the lack of capes because of all the in-fighting.]]
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* EnemyMine: Purity and Skitter teaming up to fight the ABB.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Taylor follows Coil home, discovers his secret identity and puts together the pieces of the puzzle at her disposal to come to the conclusion that...Coil is an infiltrator for the PRT.
* EntertaininglyWrong: Taylor follows Coil home, discovers his secret identity and puts together the pieces of the puzzle at her disposal to come to the conclusion that...Coil is an infiltrator for the PRT.
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* EnemyMine: Purity and Skitter teaming up to fight the ABB.
ABB. Also, with Hookwolf (Now Fenrir) against the Shatterbird and Manniquen [[spoiler:Up until Lung points out she killed Krieg and Cricket (the last was an accident from Krieg's explosion).]]
* EntertaininglyWrong: Taylor follows Coil home, discovers his secret identity and puts together the pieces of the puzzle at her disposal to come to the conclusion that...Coil is an infiltrator for the PRT. [[spoiler:Quinn points out that's not the case.]]
* EntertaininglyWrong: Taylor follows Coil home, discovers his secret identity and puts together the pieces of the puzzle at her disposal to come to the conclusion that...Coil is an infiltrator for the PRT. [[spoiler:Quinn points out that's not the case.]]
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* GuileHero: Skitter, 'natch.
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* GuileHero: Skitter, 'natch. She gets most of her enemies to take themselves out and hides her true abilities under a Stranger classification.
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: Skitter manipulates [[spoiler: Lung and Kaiser]] into a battle to the death... and then ensures the one she thought would be harder to take down dosen't walk away afterwards.
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* LetsYouAndHimFight: Skitter manipulates [[spoiler: Lung and Kaiser]] into a battle to the death... and then ensures the one she thought would be harder to take down dosen't doesn't walk away afterwards.
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* [[spoiler: NeverFoundTheBody]] Deliberately pulled by Taylor, [[spoiler: when she kills Krieg]] to cover up her plans.
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* [[spoiler: NeverFoundTheBody]] Deliberately pulled by Taylor, [[spoiler: when she kills Krieg]] Krieg and has the insects eat his flesh before getting rid of the bones]] to cover up her plans.plans. [[spoiler:
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* TheChessmaster: Skitter. Due to haveing a power best suited to reconnaissance and spying, she plays to her strengths and gets her enemies to fight each other. Coil also counts, to a lesser degree.
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* TheChessmaster: Skitter. Due to haveing having a power best suited to reconnaissance and spying, she plays to her strengths and gets her enemies to fight each other. Coil also counts, to a lesser degree.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Skitter [[spoiler: and Hookwolf]] are locked in a stalemate with [[spoiler: Mannequin and Shatterbird]], only for a new combatant to step in and burn Shatterbird.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Skitter [[spoiler: and Hookwolf]] are locked in a stalemate with [[spoiler: Mannequin and Shatterbird]], only for a new combatant to step in and burn Shatterbird. [[spoiler:Lung.]]
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** ForWantOfANail
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** ForWantOfANailForWantOfANail: The moment she goes for a ride-along before deciding, everything changes...
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** Lung as well. He knowingly walks into an ambush he knows was arranged by [[spoiler: Skitter]] because he is confident he can survive.
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** Lung as well. He knowingly walks into an ambush he knows was arranged by [[spoiler: Skitter]] because he is confident he can survive. He is consistently ranked as someone who can fight the three most powerful heroes to a standstill. [[spoiler:When he appears in a battle between the S9 and Hookwolf and Skitter, the two members of the S9 retreated.]]
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Purity claimed to have left the E88 2 years ago because they were making things worse, and had been targeting other gangs to try to make things better.
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* DefectorFromDecadence: Purity claimed to have left the E88 2 years ago because they were making things worse, and had been targeting other gangs to try to make things better. Victor believes that its because Kaiser was a lying and cheating manipulator.
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* ImaginationBasedSuperpower: Uber's power allows him to do anything he set his mind to as long as he concentrates. ''Anything''. In the hands on anyone else, it would used to its fullest potential while he's wasting.
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* PopCulturedBadass: After Taylor sets up the above LetsYouAndHimFight situation, [[spoiler:Lung]] reveals his [[GenreSavvy genre savviness]] by referencing {{Yojimbo}}.
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* PopCulturedBadass: After Taylor sets up the above LetsYouAndHimFight situation, [[spoiler:Lung]] reveals his [[GenreSavvy genre savviness]] by referencing {{Yojimbo}}.''Film/{{Yojimbo}}''.
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* BreakTheHaughty: In her interlude Madison is rather stuck up and air headed. When Jack kidnaps her and lays out what Madison said about Taylor (which Taylor is Not Amused about) she's tied to a chair, crying in terror, and has soiled herself.
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* WhatYouAreInTheDark: During her confrontation with Jack on the hospital roof, Jack tries to goad her into joining first by revealing what Madison said about bullying Taylor (while Madison is tied to a chair freaking out; then he plays on Taylors need to save the city by offering to let her use the nine as a weapon against other villains. Taylor Madison and Jack are the only ones there. Taylor tells Jack to go fuck himself.
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** Taylor's outlook on religion comes up rarely, as in canon... but her outlook is [[MirrorUniverse cautiously optimistic instead of indifferent]].
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** Taylor's outlook on religion comes up rarely, as in canon... but her outlook is [[MirrorUniverse cautiously optimistic instead of indifferent]].indifferent]] or [[KnightInSourArmor pessimistic]].
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** Taylor's outlook on religion comes up rarely, as in canon... but her outlook is cautiously [[MirrorUniverse optimistic instead of indifferent]].
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** Taylor's outlook on religion comes up rarely, as in canon... but her outlook is cautiously [[MirrorUniverse cautiously optimistic instead of indifferent]].
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* HeelFaithTurn=/=HeavenSeeker: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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* HeelFaithTurn=/=HeavenSeeker: HeelFaithTurn / HeavenSeeker: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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* HeelFaithTurn/HeavenSeeker: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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* HeelFaithTurn/HeavenSeeker: HeelFaithTurn=/=HeavenSeeker: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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* HeelFaithTurn: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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* HeelFaithTurn: HeelFaithTurn/HeavenSeeker: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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--> ''To think of them. I had no idea if there was an afterlife – though some theologians were citing Glaistig Uaine as definitive proof – but I liked to hope they were together again. Happy again.''
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--> ''I thought about it. A veiled warning that I could die? I knew that. There were worse things than death, I suppose. It was my last hope of seeing my family again.''
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--> ''I thought about it. A veiled warning that I could die? I knew that. There were worse things than death, I suppose. It was my last hope of seeing my family again.''
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--> ''I thought about it. A veiled warning that I could die? I knew that. There were worse things than death, I suppose. It was my last hope of seeing my family again.''
--> ''I thought about it. A veiled warning that I could die? I knew that. There were worse things than death, I suppose. It was my last hope of seeing my family again.''
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* HeelFaithTurn: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor athiest]]. atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cutiously cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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* HeelFaithTurn: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNo In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor athiest]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cutiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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* HeelFaithTurn: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNo [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor athiest]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cutiously hopeful outlook on religion.
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--> ''To think of them. I had no idea if there was an afterlife – though some theologians were citing Glaistig Uaine as definitive proof – but I liked to hope they were together again. Happy again.''
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* AbandonedHospital: Well, it wasn't abandoned when they got there, but the climax of ''Wake'' begins in one that has been taken over by the Slaughterhouse Nine, when Taylor [[spoiler: goes to confront Jack about his offer]] before moving out into the surrounding streets.
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* AbandonedHospital: Well, it wasn't abandoned when they got there, but the climax of ''Wake'' begins in one that has been taken over by the Slaughterhouse Nine, when Taylor [[spoiler: goes to confront Jack about his offer]] before moving the fight moves out into the surrounding streets.
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* AbandonedHospital: Well, it wasn't abandoned when they got there, but the climax of ''Wake'' begins in one that has been taken over by the Slaughterhouse Nine, when Taylor [[spoiler: goes to confront Jack about his offer]]before offer]] before moving out into the surrounding streets.
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* AbandonedHospital: The Well, it wasn't abandoned when they got there, but the climax of ''Wake'' begins in one that has been taken over by the Slaughterhouse Nine, when Taylor [[spoiler: goes to confront Jack about his offer]]before moving out into the surrounding streets.
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* AntiVillain: Skitter's recklessness has been drasticly increased due to her personal losses in this timeline. But she remains, essentially herself. [[spoiler:Namely, while she still has a conscience and a desire to do what's right, the death of her father causes her to go from a "merely" competent superhero to "quite possibly BigGood for all of Brockton Bay in order to avenge him." In all of... three weeks.]]
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* AntiVillain: Skitter's recklessness has been drasticly drastically increased due to her personal losses in this timeline. But she remains, essentially herself. [[spoiler:Namely, while she still has a conscience and a desire to do what's right, the death of her father causes her to go from a "merely" competent superhero to "quite possibly BigGood for all of Brockton Bay in order to avenge him." In all of... three weeks.]]
