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* AbandonedHospital: The climax of ''Wake'' begins in one that has been taken over by the Slaughterhouse Nine, when Taylor [[spoiler: goes to confront Jack about his offer]]before moving out into the surrounding streets.

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: By disabling Skitter's power, Jack kept her from seeing the random bystanders shooting him with her swarm-sense and therefore wasn't warned by his secondary power.]]

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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: A literal example - Bakuda is killed by one of her own bombs.
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** BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler: Jack Slash uses a power nullfier courtesy of Bonesaw to shut down Skitter's insect control for a one-on-one powerless fight. A fight between a man with full-body biotinker augumentations and 10 plus years of combat experience and a 15-year-old girl who just lost key elements of her fighting style. It's still an even fight.]]

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** * BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler: Jack Slash uses a power nullfier courtesy of Bonesaw to shut down Skitter's insect control for a one-on-one powerless fight. A fight between a man with full-body biotinker augumentations and 10 plus years of combat experience and a 15-year-old girl who just lost key elements of her fighting style. It's still an even fight.]]
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* BadassBystander: [[spoiler: Jack Slash gets repeatedly shot by random people during his duel with Skitter. This ultimately gets him killed.]]


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** BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler: Jack Slash uses a power nullfier courtesy of Bonesaw to shut down Skitter's insect control for a one-on-one powerless fight. A fight between a man with full-body biotinker augumentations and 10 plus years of combat experience and a 15-year-old girl who just lost key elements of her fighting style. It's still an even fight.]]


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* HoistByHisOwnPetard: [[spoiler: By disabling Skitter's power, Jack kept her from seeing the random bystanders shooting him with her swarm-sense and therefore wasn't warned by his secondary power.]]


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* RefugeInAudacity: [[spoiler: Skitter deliberately aggro's all five remaining S9 members allow Amy, Weld, and Madison to escape the hospital.]]
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** [[TheBluesBrothers I hate Illinois Nazis]][[{{Beat}} ...]] and the ones here too, I suppose.

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** [[TheBluesBrothers "[[TheBluesBrothers I hate Illinois Nazis]][[{{Beat}} ...]] and the ones here too, I suppose."

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** [[TheBluesBrothers I hate Illinois Nazis]][[{{Beat}} ...]] and the ones here too, I suppose.
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* ImagineSpot: Taylor has an interesting moment while talking to [[spoiler: Jack Slash]] in which his face morphs into [[ContinuityNod Jack Sparrow's]] in her mind. This is in part because she was blinded at the time, and trying to put a face to his voice.
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** [[spoiler: Burnscar vs Cherish. Cherish never even realizes she's under attack. One moment things are fine, next moment Burnscar incinerates her.]]
** [[spoiler: Weld vs The Siberian. After tearing through everything else Bonesaw sent at him, the Siberian unceremoniously reduces Weld to nothing but a head.]]


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** [[spoiler: Then she gets Burnscar to off Cherish for her.]]
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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphan]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, alongside the character of the Brockton Bay Wards, the Undersiders, and Taylor's other allies and enemies.

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In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. Taylor wakes up a month two days later, a [[spoiler: newly minted orphan]]. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, alongside the character of the Brockton Bay Wards, the Undersiders, and Taylor's other allies and enemies.
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* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Taylor pops out her eyeballs to be able to fight Valefor.]]
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-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/working-title-worm-au.305014/page-41#post-14868590 Working title 4.2]]:

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-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/page-65#post-12603372 Misconceptions 5.4]]:

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-->[[http://forums.** [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/page-65#post-12603372 Misconceptions 5.4]]:
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** [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/page-65#post-12603372 Misconceptions 5.4]]:

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** [[http://forums.-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/page-65#post-12603372 Misconceptions 5.4]]:



[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/working-title-worm-au.305014/page-41#post-14868590 Working title 4.2]]:

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* MeaningfulEcho: Taylor to [[spoiler:Amy Dallon]], relating advice given to her early in the story, almost word for word. Taylor also gives [[spoiler:Amy Dallon]] the same lunchbox she'd been given at around that time, stuffed with money like it had been for her.

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Taylor to [[spoiler:Amy Dallon]], relating advice given to her early in the story, almost word for word. Taylor also gives [[spoiler:Amy Dallon]] the same lunchbox she'd been given at around that time, stuffed with money like it had been for her.her.
** [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/page-65#post-12603372 Misconceptions 5.4]]:
-->“I ''will'' kill you.” His (Lung's) voice caressed every word.
-->“Not here, and not tonight.” (Skitter)
[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/working-title-worm-au.305014/page-41#post-14868590 Working title 4.2]]:
--> "I ''will'' kill you." I wasn't sure if the buzzing really conveyed my tone, or how absolute a truth this was.
--> He (Lung) smiled still, as Hookwolf vanished into the night. "Not tonight. And not with so weak a pawn."
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** Insight and Skotos' swearing-in ceremony is interrupted by [[spoiler: the arrival of the Nine]] much as Taylor's swearing-in to the Protectorate was interrupted by Golden Morning.

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** Insight and Skotos' swearing-in ceremony is interrupted by [[spoiler: the arrival of the Nine]] much as Taylor's swearing-in to the Protectorate was interrupted by Golden Morning.in Worm.
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** Insight and Skotos' swearing-in ceremony is interrupted by [[spoiler: the arrival of the Nine]] much as Taylor's swearing-in to the Protectorate was interrupted by Golden Morning.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Skitter [[spoiler: and Hookwolf]] are locked in a stalemate with [[Mannequin and Shatterbird]], only for a new combatant to step in and burn Shatterbird.

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* BigDamnHeroes: Skitter [[spoiler: and Hookwolf]] are locked in a stalemate with [[Mannequin [[spoiler: Mannequin and Shatterbird]], only for a new combatant to step in and burn Shatterbird.
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* BigDamnHeroes: Skitter [[spoiler: and Hookwolf]] are locked in a stalemate with [[Mannequin and Shatterbird]], only for a new combatant to step in and burn Shatterbird.

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* ShoutOut: "But Crawler and the Siberian... nothing I could think of would stop them. We could entomb Crawler, probably. At which point he'd [[{{StarCraft}} evolve burrowing]], and then what?"

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* ShoutOut: "But ShoutOut:
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Crawler and the Siberian... nothing I could think of would stop them. We could entomb Crawler, probably. At which point he'd [[{{StarCraft}} evolve burrowing]], and then what?"what?"
** "And once he got here, I had no faith that he'd be deceived by this [[GameOfThrones game of clones]]."

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** In Cenotaph, Taylor was given a low Tinker rating- referencing Brian's comments in canon that her ability to create bug-themed equipment, or use her insects to create usful products, was a Tinker trait.

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** In Cenotaph, Taylor was given a low Tinker rating- referencing Brian's comments in canon that her ability to create bug-themed equipment, or use her insects to create usful useful products, was a Tinker trait.trait.
** Jack Slash makes an appearance at the war conference following the Nine's arrival in Brockton. This is a reference to how quickly he showed up ''after'' that same event in canon. Presumably, the absence of Leviathan's lake and island is the difference.
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* ShoutOut: "But Crawler and the Siberian... nothing I could think of would stop them. We could entomb Crawler, probably. At which point he'd [[{{StarCraft}} evolve burrowing]], and then what?"
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* MundaneUtility: Citrine uses her physics-breaking power to run in high heels.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the original style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the original, with near-legendary status among the fans(some of whom consider it required reading along with the source material). The Hero to Wildbow's Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very [[ForWantOfANail minor divergence]] into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the original timeline in the very loosest sense.

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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the original style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the original, with near-legendary status among the fans(some fans (some of whom consider it required reading along with the source material). The Hero to Wildbow's Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very [[ForWantOfANail minor divergence]] into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the original timeline in the very loosest sense.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the original style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the original. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very [[ForWantOfANail minor divergence]] into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the original timeline in the very loosest sense.

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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the original style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the original.original, with near-legendary status among the fans(some of whom consider it required reading along with the source material). The Hero to Wildbow's Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very [[ForWantOfANail minor divergence]] into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the original timeline in the very loosest sense.
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Now with an Archive Of Our Own [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1152749/chapters/2337442 link]].

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Now with an Archive Of Our Own [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1152749/chapters/2337442 link]].
link]]. A sequel has been announced [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/working-title-worm-au.305014/ Here]].
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* BilingualBonus: This Taylor gets around town on a Vespa. ''Vespa'' is Italian for wasp.
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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the origional style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very [[ForWantOfANail minor divergence]] into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional timeline in the very loosest sense.

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[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]]is widely considered one of the best [[Literature/{{Worm}} Worm]] fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the origional original style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the origional. original. The Hero to Wildbow's Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very [[ForWantOfANail minor divergence]] into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the origional original timeline in the very loosest sense.

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** In Cenotaph, Taylor was given a low Tinker rateing- refferenceing Brian's comments in canon that her ability to create bug-themed equipment, or use her insects to create usful products, was a Tinker trait.

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** In Cenotaph, Taylor was given a low Tinker rateing- refferenceing rating- referencing Brian's comments in canon that her ability to create bug-themed equipment, or use her insects to create usful products, was a Tinker trait.



** [[spoiler: And again after Taylor kills Krieg.]]

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** [[spoiler: And again after Taylor [[OhCrap kills Krieg.Krieg]].]]


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* [[spoiler: NeverFoundTheBody]] Deliberately pulled by Taylor, [[spoiler: when she kills Krieg]] to cover up her plans.


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* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: an exceptionally quiet and careful example of one.
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** And one can not forget the bee blanket.

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** And no one can not forget the bee blanket.
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--->I pulled the bees about me, and slept.

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