Line #67 Fanfic/Cenotaph


1	->''"You're saying I shouldn't take the credit," I said.\
2	"I’m saying you have two options. Option one is to join the Wards, where you’ll have support and protection in the event of an altercation. Option two is to keep your head down. Don’t take the credit. Fly under the radar."''
3	-->[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ ~Opening lines.]]
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5	A ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfic by [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/members/notes.284903/ notes]] originally published on Website/SpaceBattlesDotCom. Now with an Archive Of Our Own link [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/1152749/chapters/2337442 here]]. A sequel named Wake has been completed. [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/working-title-worm-au.305014/ Here]]. The third and final installment, [[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/legacy-worm.345448/ Legacy]] has been completed.
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7	These works collectively comprise the [[http://archiveofourown.org/series/160520 Memorials]] series.
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9	[[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/ Cenotaph]] is widely considered one of the best ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' fanfics ever written, a ''very'' OriginalFlavor [[AlternateUniverseFic AU]] that emulates the original style so seamlessly that some consider it equal and opposite the original, with near-legendary status among the fans (some of whom consider it required reading along with the source material). The Hero to Wildbow's Villain- one that flows organically and naturally from a very [[ButterflyOfDoom minor divergence]] into a stand-alone plot that only resembles the original timeline in the very loosest sense.
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11	An impressive feat by itself, what makes it even more impressive is the story is arguably ''[[DarkerAndEdgier darker]]'' than Worm.
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13	In this timeline, Taylor did not give Armsmaster a definitive answer following their pivotal meeting. Instead, he offers her a chance to test the waters, and see if she would be comfortable dealing with Protectorate oversight. Unfortunately, this quickly leads to tragedy. What follows is both an epic RoaringRampageOfRevenge, and a heartwarming exploration of Taylor's character, alongside the character of the Brockton Bay Wards, the Undersiders, and Taylor's other allies and enemies.
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15	The plot makes full use of [[FlatCharacter characters]] [[OCStandIn not fully realized in-canon]] to build a very different perspective of the gangs and happenings of Brockton Bay.
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17	'''Warning:''' Full story provides spoilers for ''{{Literature/Worm}}.''
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19	!! This series provides examples of:
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21	* AbandonedHospital: Well, it wasn't abandoned when they got there, but the climax of ''Wake'' begins in one that has been taken over by the Slaughterhouse Nine, when Taylor [[spoiler: goes to confront Jack about his offer]] before the fight moves out into the surrounding streets.
22	* AdaptationalBadass: Lung was always amongst the top villains, but he got sent to the Birdcage in canon and stayed there until near the end. Here, he's one of the strongest villains who is considered able to fight an Endbringer and walk away.
23	* AlternateUniverseFic
24	** [[spoiler:ABB are all but destroyed now.]]
25	*** [[spoiler:New Wave takes out Coil so Noelle targets them and gets Brandish killed.]]
26	*** [[spoiler:Grue and Tattletale join the Wards.]]
27	*** [[spoiler:Mannequin tries to recruit Skitter rather than Armsmaster because of her ecosystem work with her bee farm ''and'' being the one responsible for manipulating the villains into killing off one another on top of popping out her eyes to kill Valefor, which earned her a probationary position for a second sponsorship from Jack.]]
28	*** [[spoiler:Jack dies this time by Skitter's hands, before he can cause the end of the world.]]
29	*** Theo Anders gets superpowers, but they're not the same as in canon and he takes on a different codename.
30	*** Lung is [[spoiler: free and still around for the Leviathan battle, but he never shows up to fight. It earns him a kill order from the Protectorate/PRT.]]
31	*** In canon, after Leviathan attacked Brockton Bay, the next Endbringer attack was Behemoth in New Delhi. In ''Legacy'', it's the Simurgh in China.
32	*** In canon, Empire Eighty-Eight dissolved into different groups after Kaiser died. Here, [[spoiler: the same thing happens, but they wind up reuniting under Theo Anders/Cadmus.]]
33	** InSpiteOfANail: [[spoiler:Aegis still gets crushed to paste in a HeroicSacrifice against Leviathan and Armsmaster still gets several limbs amputated.]]
34	*** Scion still kills an Endbringer. [[spoiler:Only this time it's the Simurgh.]]
35	* AnArmAndALeg: Flechette and Hookwolf's combined powers managed to take off Leviathan's hand. It's noted that was the most grievous wound an Endbringer had suffered to this point, and part of the reason that Leviathan retreated.
36	* AntiVillain: Skitter's recklessness has been drastically increased due to her personal losses in this timeline. But she remains, essentially herself. [[spoiler:Namely, while she still has a conscience and a desire to do what's right, the death of her father causes her to go from a "merely" competent superhero to "quite possibly BigGood for all of Brockton Bay in order to avenge him." In all of... five weeks give or take a few days.]]
37	* BadassBystander: [[spoiler: Jack Slash gets repeatedly shot by random people during his duel with Skitter. This ultimately gets him killed.]]
38	* BadassFamily: New Wave, who [[spoiler: managed to hold off against Noelle and the Travelers until Eidolon arrived.]]
39	* BeeAfraid: Taylor got a bee-farm. She uses it well.
40	-->A Thinker might be more dangerous, but… if in doubt?\
41	''More bees.''
42	** It didn't end [[spoiler:well for Coil.]]
43	--->Afraid I’d rather you kill me. Quicker.
44	** And no one can forget the bee blanket.
45	--->I pulled the bees about me, and slept.
46	* BeneathTheMask: Taylor is very emotionally repressed due to the abuse perpetuated by Emma. This is played interestingly after she [[spoiler: wakes up from her coma]] as she thinks she ought to feel more than she does- she's too numb to feel the loss, even though [[spoiler: her father was murdered because of her]].
47	* BilingualBonus: This Taylor gets around town on a Vespa. ''Vespa'' is Italian for wasp.
48	* BigDamnHeroes: Skitter [[spoiler: and Hookwolf]] are locked in a stalemate with [[spoiler: Mannequin and Shatterbird]], only for a new combatant to step in and burn Shatterbird: [[spoiler:Lung.]]
49	* BigScrewedUpFamily: Othala's family.
50	* BothSidesHaveAPoint: Taylor believes that inaction enables the status quo, which was bad in Brockton Bay, and by acting she was making things better. Piggot points out that five weeks after acting the gang-fights escalated and countless died from Bakuda's bombs left in place after she killed her for revenge, and Taylor makes choices for everything without being held accountable.
51	* BreakTheHaughty: In her interlude Madison is rather stuck up and air-headed. When Jack kidnaps her and lays out what Madison said about Taylor (which Taylor is Not Amused about) she's tied to a chair, crying in terror, and has soiled herself.
52	* BrickJoke: Girl Scouts.
53	* BroughtDownToBadass: [[spoiler: Jack Slash uses a power nullifier courtesy of Bonesaw to shut down Skitter's insect control for a one-on-one powerless fight. A fight between a man with full-body biotinker augmentations and 10 plus years of combat experience and a 15-year-old girl who just lost key elements of her fighting style. It's still an even fight.]]
54	* ButterflyOfDoom: [[spoiler: Taylor's well-intended actions ironically lead to Leviathan's attack being worse than canon due to the lack of capes because of all the in-fighting.]]
55	* TheChessmaster: Taylor, by necessity due to having a power best suited to reconnaissance and spying. She plays to her strengths and gets her enemies to fight each other. Coil also counts, to a lesser degree.
56	* ChessmasterSidekick: Wisp to Accord.
57	* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler: Lung and Oni Lee vs E88 is horribly one-sided - everyone from E88 who doesn't run dies, while Lung is effortlessly beating them and Oni Lee only dies because of his failed suicide attack on Skitter.]]
58	** [[spoiler: New Wave rolls over Coil's entire base effortlessly with Skitter relaying intel in real time. It isn't even a proper fight.]]
59	** [[spoiler: Eidolon vs ... anyone really. His arrival was what made Leviathan retreat after losing a hand to Hookwolf. Against Noelle, with Sundancer and copies with New Wave's powers, Eidolon completely ignored their attacks and one-shotted them.]]
60	** [[spoiler: Burnscar vs Cherish. Cherish only realizes she was under attack for a moment- Taylor was holding two simultaneous conversations with her and Burnscar, and using the different emotions in each to obfuscate her intent. And the emotions-deadening aspect of Burnscar's power rendered Cherish virtually helpless. She never stood a chance.]]
61	** [[spoiler: Weld vs The Siberian. After [[OneManArmy tearing through everything else Bonesaw sent at him]], the Siberian unceremoniously ripped Weld's head from his body. He gets better though.]]
62	* ContinuityNod: All over the place.
63	** "''I was similarly confident that he had pretty good focus – no one gets to be a crimelord accidentally.''" The joke being- in canon, Taylor essentially did just that.
64	** Insight's(Tattletale) and Skotos'(Grue) swearing-in ceremony is interrupted by [[spoiler: the arrival of the Nine]] much as Taylor's swearing-in to the Protectorate was in Worm.
65	** Jack Slash makes an appearance at the war conference following the Nine's arrival in Brockton. This is a reference to how quickly he showed up ''after'' that same event in canon. Presumably, the absence of Leviathan's lake and island is the difference.
66	** Taylor's outlook on religion comes up rarely, as in canon... but her outlook is [[MirrorUniverse cautiously optimistic instead of indifferent]] or [[KnightInSourArmor pessimistic]].
67	* DarkerAndEdgier: Both played straight and inverted. On one hand [[spoiler: Taylor's father is murdered by Bakuda]] on the other, Taylor dosen't spend the first month of her cape career fighting for her life against ''both'' sides of the law.
68	* DeadMansSwitch: Bakuda had one so that when she died all of the bombs she had around the city had their timers switched on.
69	* DefectorFromDecadence: Purity claimed to have left the E88 two years ago because they were making things worse, and had been targeting other gangs to try to make things better. Victor believes that its because Kaiser was a lying and cheating manipulator.
70	* DidntSeeThatComing: Tattletale had no idea Taylor [[spoiler: was behind the destruction of the ABB]] and later [[spoiler: Kaiser's assassination.]] Finding out about it provokes a brief "[[WaitWhat Wait...what?]]" moment from her.
71	** [[spoiler: And again after Taylor [[OhCrap kills Krieg]].]]
72	* DyingAsYourself: Stormtiger, after turning into the newest Butcher, blows his own head off rather than remain trapped in the prison that is being controlled in that manner.
73	* EldritchAbomination: Crawler... well, more than he already was. His constantly escalating fight with Lung eventually turns him into a ''massive'', acid-spewing, lava-vomiting, venom-spitting hydra-worm over sixty feet tall, with seven heads (which eventually turn into giant speared limbs), tripartite mouths, each of his leg being razor-sharp tentacles and being so numerous they look like cilia, all topped-off with an instant-kill field of fire and heat constantly generated by him hot enough to sublimating ''buildings and asphalt'' and creating molten rock over half-a-mile away.
74	* EmotionlessGirl: Taylor has shades of this after she wakes up from her coma and[[spoiler: finds out Danny was killed by Bakuda.]]
75	* EnemyCivilWar: Skitter gets quite good at stirring these up. Mostly, as a consequence of being a solo vigilante with a power poorly suited to direct confrontation.
76	* EnemyMine: Purity and Skitter teaming up to fight the ABB. Also, with Hookwolf (Now Fenrir) against the Shatterbird and Mannequin [[spoiler:Up until Lung points out she killed Krieg and Cricket (the last one was an accident from Krieg's explosion). This leads to him wanting nothing more than to have her dead.]]
77	* EntertaininglyWrong: Taylor follows Coil home, discovers his secret identity and puts together the pieces of the puzzle at her disposal to come to the conclusion that...Coil is an infiltrator for the PRT. [[spoiler:Quinn points out that's not the case.]]
78	* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Hookwolf was genuinely hurt when Cricket died. [[spoiler:So when Lung pins it on Skitter, he's willing to let Theo take control of the E88 in exchange for bringing her to him since he can't do it himself.]]
79	* EyeScream: [[spoiler: Taylor pops out her eyeballs to be able to fight Valefor... and by that, I mean she popped them out, had insects chew the optic nerves out, and then put them in a case for safekeeping. Panacea had to re-grow them.]]
80	* FallenHero: Taylor is even more reckless than in canon. This bites her hard when she [[spoiler: kills Bakuda... and sets off her failsafe]]- this leads to a moment of MyGodWhatHaveIDone.
81	** Taylor considers herself something like this after the Bakuda arcs.
82	* ForWantOfANail: Taylor's crusade against the gangs is set off by Bakuda spitting on the idea of the unwritten rules and bombing the home of a prospective Ward recruit the moment she knows what Taylor's address is. Taylor loses her father and her house, but lives to seek revenge. Everything else in the story chain reacts from that moment.
83	* {{Foil}}: Just as Coil was manipulating both villains and heroes under two identities, Taylor is doing the same.
84	* ForensicAccounting: How the Empire unveiled Taylor's identity.
85	-->'''Hookwolf:''' Hundreds of pounds of bees delivered to your own doorstep? People notice that shit.
86	* FromBadToWorse: Piggot points out that things can always get worse.
87	* GodzillaThreshold: Crawler and Lung's battle ran the risk of making the former into an extinction-level threat, so if it hadn't ended when it did they would have authorized a nuclear missile strike.
88	* {{Golem}}: Theo has the ability to create stone soldiers.
89	* GuileHero: Skitter, 'natch. She gets most of her enemies to take themselves out and hides her true abilities under a Stranger/Changer classification.
90	* HeelFaceTurn: In Legacy, Theo has tried to shift the E88 towards this direction, having them act as vigilantes who either recruit or send villain capes to the PRT... or kill them, but he's trying hard to avoid that last one.
91	* HeelFaithTurn / HeavenSeeker: An interesting example. [[ContinuityNod In canon]] Taylor is a [[KnightInSourArmor atheist]]. In Cenotaph, she comes to have a cautiously hopeful outlook on religion.
92	** ''To think of them. I had no idea if there was an afterlife – though some theologians were citing Glaistig Uaine as definitive proof – but I liked to hope they were together again. Happy again.''
93	** ''I thought about it. A veiled warning that I could die? I knew that. There were worse things than death, I suppose. It was my last hope of seeing my family again.''
94	* HoistByHisOwnPetard: A literal example - Bakuda is killed by one of her own bombs.
95	** [[spoiler: By disabling Skitter's power, Jack kept her from seeing the random bystanders shooting him with her swarm-sense and therefore wasn't warned by his secondary power.]]
96	* ImaginationBasedSuperpower: Uber's power allows him to do ''anything'' he set his mind to as long as he concentrates. ''Anything''. In the hands of anyone else, it would used to its fullest potential while he's wasting it making webvideos.
97	* ImagineSpot: Taylor has an interesting moment while talking to [[spoiler: Jack Slash]] in which his face morphs into [[ContinuityNod Jack Sparrow's]] in her mind. This is in part because she was blinded at the time, and trying to put a face to his voice.
98	* KeystoneArmy: The ABB by virtue of Bakuda being stupid enough to ensure loyalty by implanting bombs into the majority of them and a DeadMansSwitch. When she dies, she takes nearly the entire gang with her.
99	* LetsYouAndHimFight: Skitter manipulates [[spoiler: Lung and Kaiser]] into a battle to the death... and then ensures the one she thought would be harder to take down doesn't walk away afterwards.
100	** [[spoiler:Cherish manipulated Lung into fighting Crawler in order to keep them both evolving towards a very real world-ending threat.]]
101	*** [[spoiler: Then Skitter gets Burnscar to off Cherish for her.]]
102	* LouisCypher: Taylor is known to the Wards as Tailor.
103	* MeaningfulEcho
104	** Taylor to [[spoiler:Amy Dallon]], relating advice given to her early in the story, almost word for word. Taylor also gives [[spoiler:Amy Dallon]] the same lunchbox she'd been given at around that time, stuffed with money like it had been for her.
105	** [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/cenotaph-worm.273255/page-65#post-12603372 Misconceptions 5.4]]:
106	-->“I ''will'' kill you.” His (Lung's) voice caressed every word.
107	-->“Not here, and not tonight.” (Skitter)
108	** [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/working-title-worm-au.305014/page-41#post-14868590 Working title 4.2]]:
109	--> "I ''will'' kill you." I wasn't sure if the buzzing really conveyed my tone, or how absolute a truth this was.
110	--> He (Lung) smiled still, as Hookwolf vanished into the night. "Not tonight. And not with so weak a pawn."
111	* MeaningfulRename: After [[spoiler:maiming Leviathan]], Hookwolf changes his cape name to Fenrir, after the mythical wolf that bit off the hand of a god.
112	* MoreExpendableThanYou: Piggot uses this argument for why Dauntless and Taylor can't go to deal with the Simurgh, citing that her reconstruction of the city is too important. However, when pressed on it, she admits that she doesn't want to see what kind of weapon Simurgh would make out of her.
113	* MundaneUtility:
114	** Citrine uses her physics-breaking power to run in high heels.
115	** Taylor uses her power to make honey and cloth. Since her spider-silk can be used to make military grade body armor, she makes a ''lot'' of money off of that from the PRT.
116	* MysteriousBacker: Cauldron is secretly helping Taylor's plans to renovate the city, mostly with Number Man warning her of problems like shortages that Accord's men missed.
117	* MythologyGag: Lung's love of Laz-e-Boys and fine sofas began in Cenotaph and has since become a running gag in many other Worm fanfictions.
118	** Quinn Calle [[FandomNod mentions]] that people [[MemeticMutation blame the Simurgh for many of society's problems]]. A reference to the popular meme: "[[AWizardDidIt The Simurgh did it]]".
119	* NeverFoundTheBody: Deliberately pulled by Taylor, [[spoiler: when she kills Krieg and has the insects eat his flesh before getting rid of the bones]] to cover up her plans.
120	* NoodleIncident: Whatever happened between Taylor and the Colombians in Florida during the TimeSkip between Wake and Legacy.
121	* OCStandIn: Very well done. Even [[spoiler: Madison]] [[FlatCharacter gets a time to shine]]...
122	* OffWithHisHead: Brandish decapitates Coil, on his request since it would be quicker. [[spoiler:Taylor cuts off Jack Slash's head to make sure he's dead.]]
123	* OriginalFlavor: Deliciously so.
124	* PlayingBothSides: Lung accuses Taylor of this, and he's not wrong.
125	* PoirotSpeak: Krieg likes to use Herr and Frau when talking to other capes, but speaks otherwise perfect English. It's possible it's just an affectation.
126	** Skitter later observes Krieg adopt a British accent while at his day job, and muses on whether the accents are genuine or not.
127	* PopCulturedBadass: After Taylor sets up the above LetsYouAndHimFight situation, [[spoiler:Lung]] reveals his [[GenreSavvy Genre Savviness]] by referencing ''Film/{{Yojimbo}}''.
128	* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Brandish, who both took the time to listen to Taylor before acting on her information rather than dismissing it out of hand, and credited the PRT so that it looks better for them that they're investigating into their spy issue.
129	* ReedRichardsIsUseless: [[SubvertedTrope Not with Taylor.]] Once Quinn arranges for her to get a farm she becomes a rogue who is the world's only supplier of spider-silk, makes costumes for the PRT, create a Bee Vitamin Supplement, and produces her own honey.
130	* RefugeInAudacity: [[spoiler: Skitter deliberately aggros all five remaining S9 members allow Amy, Weld, and Madison to escape the hospital.]]
131	* RoaringRampageOfRevenge: An exceptionally quiet and careful example of one by Skitter.
132	* SecretKeeper: Only Lisa, Brian, Lung, Madison, and Amy know that Taylor is both Skitter and Tailor, and they keep it secret for one reason or another. [[spoiler:Armsmaster and Piggot have some suspicion, but nothing concrete.]]
133	* ShoutOut:
134	** "[[Film/TheBluesBrothers I hate Illinois Nazis]][[{{Beat}} ...]] and the ones here too, I suppose."
135	** "But Crawler and the Siberian... nothing I could think of would stop them. We could entomb Crawler, probably. At which point he'd [[VideoGame/{{StarCraft}} evolve burrowing]], and then what?"
136	** "And once he got here, I had no faith that he'd be deceived by this [[Series/GameOfThrones game of clones]]."
137	* SparedByTheAdaptation: Mimi (Burnscar) is still alive after the events in Wake, and it is mentioned that her case is causing a lot of trouble for the PRT in court.
138	* SupermanStaysOutOfGotham: Jack Slash enforced it using Cherish's emotion control. It's so strong that the Protectorate won't send in reinforcements to deal with the S9 because they can't risk the heroes killing one another off. Only when she's dealt with do they bring in the big guns.
139	* SurpriseParty: Some of the Wards throw one for Taylor in Legacy.
140	* TitleDrop: As in ''Literature/{{Worm}}'' itself, the title is referenced in every arc, sometimes in a highly creative and subtle fashion.
141	* TookALevelInBadass: [[spoiler:Revenge]] is a hell of a motivator to grind levels in Badass, as Skitter shows.
142	* UncertainDoom: The series ends [[spoiler: with Taylor and Lung’s death from a massive underwater explosion uncertain. Neither’s body was ever found, but as the explosion was part of a spillway project that would have caused everything in the water to be carried out into the ocean, any trace left would have been lost to sea and eaten by fishes had they died. The final epilogue chapters have several characters speculating and coming to different conclusions about Taylor’s survival or death, with evidence supporting either outcome, but nothing is ever made conclusive]].
143	* TheUnfettered: Quinn is this so much. No matter what situation Taylor comes to him with -- be it mass murder or the Slaughterhouse Nine -- he still does his job as Taylor's lawyer.
144	** Taylor is this as well. No matter what happens over the course of the story, she still locks herself to the single goal of cleaning the city.
145	* UnflinchingWalk: Lung, on his way to the fight with Kaiser. He steam-rolled over the others who came after him before he ScaledUp.
146	--> And walking right down the middle of that road came a barefoot man, with dark jeans and a black longcoat. The half-set sun cast his shadow out before him, down the gentle slope towards the construction site and Kaiser. As he came onward, he opened that coat, revealing a chest entirely covered in elaborate tattoos.
147	* VillainWithGoodPublicity: By the end of Wake [[spoiler:Piggot believes that Taylor is the one manipulating events behind the scene and has no way of touching her or even 100% guarantee that she is the one doing it.]]
148	* WhatYouAreInTheDark: During her confrontation with Jack on the hospital roof, Jack tries to goad her into joining first by revealing what Madison said about bullying Taylor (while Madison is tied to a chair freaking out; then he plays on Taylor's need to save the city by offering to let her use the nine as a weapon against other villains. Taylor Madison and Jack are the only ones there. Taylor tells Jack to go fuck himself.
149	* WorthyOpponent: Lung considers Skitter to be this, in his own way. He keeps promising to kill her for what she has done to him. Skitter later exploits this attitude to sit at the negotiating table on the truce-ground, despite the fact that only ''two'' people in the room even knew she existed before then.
150	-->''[Skitter moves to sit at the table]''.\
151	'''Hookwolf''': ''[slams a hand on the table]'' This is the big boy’s table. Take a booth.\
152	'''Skitter''': [[TheDreaded Lung]] will vouch for me.\
153	''[[[SpitTake Hookwolf chokes]].]''\
154	'''Skitter''': The first time we fought, [[GroinAttack I took his manhood]]. The second, [[AnArmAndALeg the hand]] he'd use to touch it.\
155	'''Lung''': ''[smiles, then [[HealingFactor inspects the nails on his regrown right hand]]]'' I heal.\
156	'''Skitter''': Or ask Bakuda or Oni Lee. If you can get Glaistig Uaine out of the Birdcage to ask them for you.\
157	''[Lung and Skitter talk briefly, then Skitter sits down at the table. No one protests.]''
158	* WouldHurtAChild: Bakuda implanted bombs into infants of the apartment complex she had taken over and had specifically engineered a time-bubble bomb to go off on a playground.
159	* XanatosGambit: What Taylor intended with setting up the E88 vs Lung. If Lung killed Kaiser, then the E88 would fracture as it was the largest threat. If he failed, she would use the distraction to assassinate him. If Kaiser killed Lung in the process, that was good too.
160	* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: Hookwolf offers Taylor Cricket's old position in July 3rd of Legacy because the circumstances that led up to the death were AGoodWayToDie in his eyes.

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