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* TheBodyPartsThatMustNotBeNamed: After Dumbledore becomes a nudist, he goes around with only his long beard covering his private parts. Most every time this is brought up, the story uses some silly euphemism to refer to his penis, such as "private wahoo," "joystick," "ding-dong," and "inappropriate wand." Oddly, the word "penis" actually ''is'' used one time. Also, Crystal refers to her vagina as her "pleasure hole."
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: At least every second sentence reminds us that [[StrawMisogynist sexist Ron Raper and his sexist consorts are sexist]]. In the sequel, there is also Uncle Vernon, who is [[ChurchMilitant a Christian fundamentalist.]]
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* ViewersAreGoldfish: At least every second sentence reminds us that [[StrawMisogynist sexist Ron Raper and his sexist consorts are sexist]]. In the sequel, there is also Uncle Vernon, who is [[ChurchMilitant a Christian fundamentalist.]]]]
* WeAllLiveInAmerica: There are quite a lot of references to American culture, especially for a story that takes place in a castle in Scotland. The most egregious is at the talent show, where the buzzers are compared to those on Series/AmericasGotTalent, rather than the ones on it’s TransatlanticEquivalent, Series/BritainsGotTalent.
* WeAllLiveInAmerica: There are quite a lot of references to American culture, especially for a story that takes place in a castle in Scotland. The most egregious is at the talent show, where the buzzers are compared to those on Series/AmericasGotTalent, rather than the ones on it’s TransatlanticEquivalent, Series/BritainsGotTalent.
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* DidNotDoTheBloodyResearch: Near the end of the first story, we’re introduced to a Hogwarts student named Fanny. In Britain, Fanny is considered a much more offensive word than in America, so using it as a name is unheard of over there.
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* KiddieKid: Fanny, who is supposed to be a Hogwarts first year. That would make her eleven or twelve, but she's written like a stereotypical four-year-old.
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* InterruptedIntimacy: Happens twice to Draco and Crystal, with Blaise Zabini interrupting them the first time and Umbridge the second time. On their third attempt, they finally manage to have sex, and [[LawOfInverseFertility Crystal gets pregnant]].
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* ShotgunWedding: In the sequel Arthur and Ginny Weasley plan to force their daughter Ginny into marrying Theodore Nott.
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* ShotgunWedding: In the sequel Arthur and Ginny Molly Weasley plan to force their daughter Ginny into marrying Theodore Nott.
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It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5822132/1/Becoming_Female here]]. The sequel is reposted [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8276634/1/Being_Female_REPOST here]].
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It can be found [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5822132/1/Becoming_Female here]]. The sequel is reposted [[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8276634/1/Being_Female_REPOST archived [[http://archive.is/D52ms here]].
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* ShoutOut: Used many times, to FanFic/MyImmortal, Series/MadMen, and WebVideo/PotterPuppetPals.
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* ShoutOut: Used many times, to FanFic/MyImmortal, Series/MadMen, ''FanFic/MyImmortal'', ''Series/MadMen'', and WebVideo/PotterPuppetPals.''WebVideo/PotterPuppetPals''.
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* StrawmanPolitical: The "sexists". If read as an anti-feminist TrollFic, the heroes are these too.
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Music/ShaniaTwain Man,]][[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y0tAq-MhxNo&index=1&list=PL4gt81gOBFeWcTQOHa1RARrxwiGUSxsge I feel like a woman...]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[Music/ShaniaTwain Man,]][[https://www.Man,]] [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y0tAq-MhxNo&index=1&list=PL4gt81gOBFeWcTQOHa1RARrxwiGUSxsge I feel like a woman...]]]]
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[[caption-width-right:350:[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y0tAq-MhxNo&index=1&list=PL4gt81gOBFeWcTQOHa1RARrxwiGUSxsge Man, I feel like a woman...]]]]
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* FamousLastWords: Vernon dies in Being Female just after claiming, "[[Disney/TheHunchbackOfNotreDame And He shall smite the wicked and plunge them into the fiery pit!]]"
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* ShoutOut: Used many times, to FanFic/MyImmortal, Series/MadMen, and PotterPuppetPals.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: Gilderoy Lockhart (who'd previously gotten a huge does of AdaptationalHeroism) is posthumously said to be stupid, sexist, and to [[Creator/KennethBranagh not even look like Robert Pattinson]]. The same thing happens to Viktor Krum later.
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* BeautyEqualsGoodness: Gilderoy Lockhart goes from a SmallNameBigEgo DirtyCoward to a dashing hero because he was [[Creator/KennethBranagh allegedly]] played by Creator/RobertPattinson. After the author realized this was not so, Lockhart was posthumously described as evil and sexist. Later, [[Creator/DavidTennant Barty Crouch Jr.]] gets the same treatment.
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** After Lockhart was revealed to be a bad guy ([[BeautyEqualsGoodness and to not look like]] Creator/RobertPattinson), the author confused Cedric with [[HuskyRusskie Viktor Krum]], and then with [[DracoInLeatherPants Barty Crouch]] [[Creator/DavidTennant Junior]].
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* {{MST}}: [[https://web.archive.org/web/20160321132224/http://www.whygodwhy.org/t3236-becoming-female Here]] and also [[http://fictionhunt.com/read/8561343/1 here]].
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* {{MST}}: [[https://web.archive.org/web/20160321132224/http://www.whygodwhy.org/t3236-becoming-female Here]] and also [[http://fictionhunt.com/read/8561343/1 com/read/10271875/1 here]].
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Ginny makes Theodore Nott's skin fall off, then puts him on fire and laughs as he dies slowly and painfully. [[DesignatedHero That would teach him for being so sexist!]]
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Theodore Nott's skin fells off, then he is put on fire and dies slowly and painfully. [[DesignatedHero That would teach him for being so sexist!]]
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* ShotgunWedding: Arthur Weasley plans to force his daughter Ginny to marry that sexist idiot Theodore Nott.
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* FamilyUnfriendlyDeath: Theodore Nott's skin fells off, then he is put on fire and dies slowly and painfully. [[DesignatedHero That would teach him for being so sexist!]]
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** In the sequel, Arthur Weasley replaces Lucius.
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* UnsettlingGenderRevealUnexplainedRecovery: Sirius and Ron Raper turn out to be alive after their apparent deaths... because.
* UnsettlingGenderReveal: Crystal Potter is Harry Potter!
* UnsettlingGenderReveal: Crystal Potter is Harry Potter!
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** That being said, in this world the word "slut" doesn't mean ''exactly'' what it means in ours. One of the so-called sluts is Umbridge, who is so sex-phobic that she '''bans sex'''.
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** That being said, in this world the word "slut" doesn't mean ''exactly'' mean what it means in ours. One of the so-called sluts is Umbridge, who is so sex-phobic that she '''bans sex'''.
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** That being said, in this world word "slut" doesn't mean exactly what it means in ours. One of the so-called sluts is Umbridge, who is so sex-phobic that she BANS SEX.
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** That being said, in this world the word "slut" doesn't mean exactly ''exactly'' what it means in ours. One of the so-called sluts is Umbridge, who is so sex-phobic that she BANS SEX.'''bans sex'''.
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** That being said, in this world word "slut" doesn't mean exactly what it means in ours. One of the so-called sluts is Umbridge, who is so sex-phobic that she BANS SEX.
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* [[TonightSomeoneDies Tonight Someone Dies And It Might Be Crystal]]
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** Also also in ''Being Female'', there is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. They end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed"
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** Also also in ''Being Female'', there is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. They She is the star of ''yet another'' sexist show which also dropped Dudley's IQ, and they end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed"needed".
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** In ''Being Female'' there is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. They end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed"
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** In Also in ''Being Female'' Female'', Series/JerseyShore appears as a sexist show which literally dropped Dudley's IQ.
** Also also in ''Being Female'', there is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. They end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed"
** Also also in ''Being Female'', there is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. They end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed"
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** From Chapter 26 of Being Female, we get this piece.
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** From Chapter 26 of Being Female, ''Being Female'', we get this piece.
** In ''Being Female'' there is one of the TakeThatAudience kind against one negative reviewer, Jokegirl. They end up giving her "the lobotomy she needed"
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