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* SkinnyDipping: Cal and Kara en route to [[spoiler:meet the Bendu]]. Pretty much everybody who visitsGymnos-1.Gymnos 1.
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* HotWitch: Mera very much fits this trope.
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* ScarilyCompetentTracker: Phara considering she was a highly trained Inquisitor.
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* PromotionToParent: In regards to Phara looking after Cal.
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* FacialMarkings: Most of the members of the Pyso family have Dathomiri facial tattoos.
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* IntimateMarks: Phara and Mera have Dathomiri markings allover their bodies.
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* RaisedByWolves: Kara was raised by Wookiees.
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* Lady of Black Magic: Mera is quite the sorceress almost rivaling in terms of power and knowledge.
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* MamaBear: Mera loves her children dearly and would protect them with all her might.
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* SicklyGreenGlow: The color of Mera's nightsister magic.
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* PlayfulHacker: Lanei is a hacker and a very zany one at that.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: Lanei for the most part.
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* Cloudcuckoolander: CloudCuckoolander: Lanei for the most part.
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* AcademyOfEvil: The Inquisitor academy on Mustafar would most certainly qualify as such.
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* AcademyOfEvil: The Inquisitor Inquisitorius academy on Mustafar would most certainly qualify as such.qualify.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Phara and Bandon border on this.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Some of the arguments between Phara and Bandon Jemini border on this.this. Phara and Bandon, on the other hand, may have [[https://www.deviantart.com/valyrian-wildfire626/art/Phara-X-Bandon-By-00gojiramon-763982676 crossed that border]].
* HippieParents: Jace and Mera have elements of this.
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* ParentalSexualitySquick: Happens to Cal and Phara at or about the end of ''[[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore/art/Star-Wars-Bare-Squadron-The-Warrior-and-the-Witch-751942491 The Warrior and the Witch]]''.
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother: Mera Pyso would count as such.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by [[https://www.deviantart.com/valyrian-wildfire626 Valyrian Wildfire]] before drawing in other [[https://www.deviantart.com DeviantArt]] users, both writers and artists, to create their own nude OriginalCharacters.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by [[https://www.deviantart.com/valyrian-wildfire626 Valyrian Wildfire]] before drawing in other [[https://www.deviantart.com DeviantArt]] users, both writers and artists, to create their own nude OriginalCharacters.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by [[https://www.deviantart.com/valyrian-wildfire626 Valyrian Wildfire]] before drawing in other DeviantArt users, both writers and artists, to create their own nude OriginalCharacters.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by [[https://www.deviantart.com/valyrian-wildfire626 Valyrian Wildfire]] before drawing in other DeviantArt [[https://www.deviantart.com DeviantArt]] users, both writers and artists, to create their own nude OriginalCharacters.
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* BelligerentSexualTension: Phara and Jemini Bandon border on this.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by Byzantinefire before drawing in other DeviantArt users, both writers and artists, to create their own nude OriginalCharacters.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by Byzantinefire [[https://www.deviantart.com/valyrian-wildfire626 Valyrian Wildfire]] before drawing in other DeviantArt users, both writers and artists, to create their own nude OriginalCharacters.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by ByzantineFire1.Byzantinefire before drawing in other DeviantArt users, both writers and artists, to create their own nude OriginalCharacters.
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* SkinnyDipping: Cal and Kara en route to [[spoiler:meet the Bendu]]. Prety much everybody who visits Gymnos-1.
* WardrobeMalfunction: Happens to Phara on Felucia during her duel with Cal.
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* SkinnyDipping: Cal and Kara en route to [[spoiler:meet the Bendu]]. Prety Pretty much everybody who visits Gymnos-1.
* WardrobeMalfunction: Happens to Pharaon Felucia during her duel with Cal.Cal on Felucia.
* WardrobeMalfunction: Happens to Phara
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction roleplay story written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the galaxy. It began as a roleplay by ByzantineFire1.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction roleplay story written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the Star Wars universe.galaxy.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a Star Wars fanfiction roleplay story written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the Star Wars universe.
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'''Bare Squadron''' is a Star Wars ''Franchise/StarWars'' fanfiction roleplay story written by [[https://www.deviantart.com/travolore Travolore]] on [[https://www.deviantart.com/the-bare-squadron/ Deviantart]] about a naturist rebel cell fighting against the Galactic empire and other enemies in the Star Wars universe.
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*Cloudcuckoolander: Lanei for the most part.
*ExposedExtraterrestrials: Alot the characters in the story are aliens who mostly go nude.
*BelligerentSexualTension: Between some of the characters.
*FullFrontalAssault: The central theme of the story.
*InnocentFanserviceGirl: Kara was raised by Wookiees.
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*ModestyBedsheet: Cal wore a bedsheet after his clothes were destroyed in the first chapter he later gets used to life without it.
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*WardrobeMalfunction: Happens to Phara on Felucia during her duel with Cal.
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*Cloudcuckoolander: Lanei for the most part.
*ExposedExtraterrestrials: Alot the characters in the story are aliens who mostly go nude.
*BelligerentSexualTension: Between some of the characters.
*FullFrontalAssault: The central theme of the story.
*InnocentFanserviceGirl: Kara was raised by Wookiees.
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*ModestyBedsheet: Cal wore a bedsheet after his clothes were destroyed in the first chapter he later gets used to life without it.
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*NakedOnArrival:
*NakedPeopleAreFunny:
*ShamelessFanserviceGirl:
*SkinnyDipping:
*WardrobeMalfunction: Happens to Phara on Felucia during her duel with Cal.
