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** Mako actually subverts this by asking Korra for an open relationship so he can sleep around while in the Fire Nation (specifically, with Iroh's younger sister, Achika). Not very nice, but at least he got permission first. She agrees and starts seeing Asami, but only until Mako returns.
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** Mako actually subverts this by asking Korra for an open relationship so he can sleep around while in the Fire Nation (specifically, with Iroh's younger sister, Achika). Not very nice, but at least he got permission first. She agrees and starts seeing Asami, but only until Mako returns.returns.
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** [[GenreSavvy Mako]] Mako actually subverts this by asking Korra for an open relationship so he can sleep around while in the Fire Nation (specifically, with Iroh's younger sister, Achika). Not very nice, but at least he got permission first. She agrees and starts seeing Asami, but only until Mako returns.
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* ShownThierWork: Even people who hate this fic admit that OddlyEnded did a great job at realistically portraying an abusive relationship. [[AdultFear A bit too realistic for some.]]
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* ShownThierWork: ShownTheirWork: Even people who hate this fic admit that OddlyEnded [=OddlyEnding=] did a great job at realistically portraying an abusive relationship. [[AdultFear A bit too realistic for some.]]
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* LoveDodecahedron: Mako and Asami both love Korra. Bolin loves Korra too, but doesn't have a shot. Korra's in love with Mako, but has feelings for Asami. Meanwhile, Mako is sleeping with Achika, who ReallyGetsAround. Also, Iroh is in love with Bolin.
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* LoveDodecahedron: Mako and Asami both love Korra. Bolin loves Korra too, but doesn't have a shot. Korra's in love with Mako, but has feelings for Asami. Meanwhile, Mako is sleeping with Achika, who ReallyGetsAround. Also, [[HoYay Iroh is in love with Bolin.Bolin]].
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* LoveDodecahedron: Mako and Asami both love Korra. Bolin loves Korra too, but doesn't have a shot. Korra's in love with Mako, but has feelings for Asami. Meanwhile, Mako is sleeping with Achika, who ReallyGetsAround.
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* LoveDodecahedron: Mako and Asami both love Korra. Bolin loves Korra too, but doesn't have a shot. Korra's in love with Mako, but has feelings for Asami. Meanwhile, Mako is sleeping with Achika, who ReallyGetsAround. Also, Iroh is in love with Bolin.
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* EthicalSlut: Achika wouldn't sleep with anyone whose in a relationship...[[{{Polyamory}}unless they get permission from their partner first.]]
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* {{Harem}}: Achika has six steady [[LesYay girlfriends]] in addition to her long string of lovers.
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* AlwaysSomeoneBetter: How Bolin feels about Mako.
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** Pema's advice for Korra's relationship problems is for her to be more submissive and docile.
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* BettyAndVeronica: Mako is the Veronica to Asami's Betty for Korra's Archie.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Mako actually asks Korra's [[{{Polyamory}}permission to Achika wouldn't sleep with Achika]], rather than have anyone whose in a secret affair. relationship...[[{{Polyamory}}unless they get permission from their partner first.]]
* HotterAndSexier: Much more blatantly sexual than the show.
* SexyDiscretionShot: While it blatantly admits that everyone is having sex and shows some sexual contact, the fic doesn't elaborate on what's going on the bedroom.
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** [[GenreSavvy Mako]] actually subverte this by asking Korra for an open relationship so he can sleep around while in the Fire Nation (specifically, with Iroh's younger sister, Achika). Not very nice, but at least he got permission first. She agrees and starts seeing Asami, but only until Mako returns.
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** [[GenreSavvy Mako]] actually subverte subverts this by asking Korra for an open relationship so he can sleep around while in the Fire Nation (specifically, with Iroh's younger sister, Achika). Not very nice, but at least he got permission first. She agrees and starts seeing Asami, but only until Mako returns.
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** [[GenreSavvy Mako]] asks actually subverte this by asking Korra for an open relationship so he can sleep around while in the Fire Nation (specifically, with Iroh's younger sister, Achika).Achika). Not very nice, but at least he got permission first. She agrees and starts seeing Asami, but only until Mako returns.
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[[http://oddlyending.tumblr.com/post/25937251847/re-abuse-cycle-what-tenzin-saw Abuse Cycle]] by [=OddlyEnding=] is a LegendOfKorra fanfiction that revolves around the Makorra relationship. It traces the slow decline of Mako and Korra's relationship into eventual abuse and addresses politics within the LegendOfKorra world. It's... [[BrokenBase polarizing]] ''[[BrokenBase polarizing]]'' within the fandom. It actually began as an initial fanfiction divided into parts and a prequel was later written.
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* BloodOnTheseHands: [[spoiler: During a chi-blocker attack on the restaurant she was eating at, Korra accidentally kills several non-benders and injures Mako because she lost control of the Avatar State. It does not help her reputation among non-benders.]]
* BrokenBird: Sakari
* TheCharmer: There is a female version of this in Princess Achika. She has several steady girlfriends and sleeps with [[BiTheWay anyone good-looking enough]]. However, unlike a perfect charmer, she is interested in [[ReallyGetsAround sex on top of flirting]].
* {{Chickification}}: Has been accused of doing this to Korra, since the author turns the ActionGirl of canon into a borderline DistressedDamsel.
* ButtMonkey: Bolin, at least, romantically. He's in love with Korra, but she only notices Mako and Asami
* BrokenBird: Sakari
* TheCharmer: There is a female version of this in Princess Achika. She has several steady girlfriends and sleeps with [[BiTheWay anyone good-looking enough]]. However, unlike a perfect charmer, she is interested in [[ReallyGetsAround sex on top of flirting]].
* {{Chickification}}: Has been accused of doing this to Korra, since the author turns the ActionGirl of canon into a borderline DistressedDamsel.
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* BloodOnTheseHands: [[spoiler: During a chi-blocker attack on the restaurant she was eating at, Korra accidentally kills several non-benders and injures Mako because she lost control of the Avatar State. It does not doesn't help her reputation among non-benders.]]
* BrokenBird:Sakari
Sakari.
* TheCharmer:There is There's a female version of this in the form of Princess Achika. She has several steady girlfriends and sleeps with [[BiTheWay anyone good-looking enough]]. However, unlike a perfect charmer, she is she's interested in [[ReallyGetsAround sex on top of flirting]].
* {{Chickification}}: Has been accused of doing this to Korra, since the author turnsthe her from a boisterous ActionGirl of canon into a borderline DistressedDamsel.
* ButtMonkey: Bolin, at least, romantically. He's in love with Korra, but she only notices Mako andAsamiAsami.
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* ButtMonkey: Bolin, at least, romantically. He's in love with Korra, but she only notices Mako and
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* [[DaddysGirl Daddy's Girl]]: DaddysGirl: [[spoiler: Sakari]] is darker version of this. [[spoiler: She welcomes Amon/Noatok into her life with open arms and after his death death, picks up his goals willingly.]]
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* IfItsYouItsOkay: Both Asami and Korra were straight before falling in love with each other. Now their both bisexual.
* {{Jerkass}}: Mako to everyone. [[DomesticAbuse especially Korra.]]
* [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: Amon/Noatok in Part 4, during a confrontation with Korra in the Si Wong desert.]]
* {{Jerkass}}: Mako to everyone. [[DomesticAbuse especially Korra.]]
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* IfItsYouItsOkay: Both Asami and Korra were straight before falling in love with each other. Now their they're both bisexual.
* {{Jerkass}}:Mako to everyone. [[DomesticAbuse especially Korra.]]
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* [[spoiler:KilledOffForReal]]: [[spoiler: KilledOffForReal: Amon/Noatok in Part 4, 4 during a confrontation with Korra in the Si Wong desert.]]
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* LoveDodecahedron: Mako and Asami both love Korra; Korra. Bolin loves Korra too, but doesn't have a shot. Korra is Korra's in love with Mako Mako, but has feelings for Asami. Meanwhile, Mako is sleeping with Achika, who ReallyGetsAround.
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* {{Polyamory}}: Mako and Korra were in an open relationship while he was in the Fire Nation. Mako slept with Achika and Korra slept with [[BiTheWay Asami.]]
* ReallyGetsAround: Princess Achika
* RealWomenNeverWearDresses: Inverted. Mako not so subtly tries to make Korra more feminine. He specifically tells her to wear more revealing dresses, makeup, and leave her hair down instead of in the usual tomboy ponytail.
* ReallyGetsAround: Princess Achika
* RealWomenNeverWearDresses: Inverted. Mako not so subtly tries to make Korra more feminine. He specifically tells her to wear more revealing dresses, makeup, and leave her hair down instead of in the usual tomboy ponytail.
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* {{Polyamory}}: Mako and Korra were in an open relationship while he was in the Fire Nation. Mako slept with Achika and Korra slept with [[BiTheWay Asami.]]
Asami.
* ReallyGetsAround: PrincessAchika
Achika.
* RealWomenNeverWearDresses: Inverted. Mako not so subtly tries to make Korra more feminine. He specifically tells her to wear more revealing dresses, makeup, and leave her hair down instead of in the usualtomboy ponytail.TomboyishPonytail.
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* [[spoiler: SurprisePregnancy]]: [[spoiler: SurprisePregnancy: Lin becomes pregnant after sleeping with Tenzin.]]
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: Amon/Noatok (to his daughter Sakari): I mean, my child, that I am going to show you how you can control all 4 elements...''without needing to be the Avatar''.]]
* YankTheDogsChain: Asami hoped that Korra would stay with her, but Korra left her to go back to Mako.
* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Tenzin cheats on Pema with Lin. He later confesses to Pema, while Jinora and Ikki spy on them.]]
* YankTheDogsChain: Asami hoped that Korra would stay with her, but Korra left her to go back to Mako.
* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Tenzin cheats on Pema with Lin. He later confesses to Pema, while Jinora and Ikki spy on them.]]
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* WhamLine: [[spoiler: Amon/Noatok (to his daughter daughter, Sakari): I mean, my child, that I am going to show you how you can control all 4 elements...elements... ''without needing to be the Avatar''.]]
* YankTheDogsChain: Asami hoped that Korra would stay with her, but Korra left her to go back to Mako.
* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Tenzin cheats on Pema with Lin. He later confesses to Pema, Pema while Jinora and Ikki spy on them.]]
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[[http://oddlyending.tumblr.com/post/25937251847/re-abuse-cycle-what-tenzin-saw Abuse Cycle]] by [=OddlyEnding=] is a LegendOfKorra fanfiction that revolves around the Makorra relationship. It traces the slow decline of Mako and Korra's relationship into eventual abuse and addresses politics within the LegendOfKorra world. It is...It's... [[BrokenBase polarizing]] within the fandom. It actually began as an initial fanfiction divided in parts, into parts and a prequel was later written.
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* GirlOnGirlIsHot: Bolin spends his nights listening to Asmai and Korra having sex.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Bolin for [[LesYay Korra/Asami]].