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The digimon make it back to the human world thanks to some [=DigiGnomes=], though they are fairly scattered across the city during the arrival. Two of the members end up together, but are quickly captured by a man named Goro. His method of capture, an adhesive substance that quickly dried to hardness, limited the pair's ability to escape or attack. It also left the two digimon [[StickySituation stuck]] [[IncrediblyLamePun stuck together]] and having to rely on each other to make it out. [[FromBadToWorse And that is only the beginning of the trouble for tamers and their partners]].
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* BadassArmy: [[LordOfTheRings Considering the source material]], it is probably safe to say this will definitely occur and there seems to be hints that there will be new additions to the forces beyond [[DigimonXrosWars those dragged into the world]].
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* BadassArmy: [[LordOfTheRings [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Considering the source material]], it is probably safe to say this will definitely occur and there seems to be hints that there will be new additions to the forces beyond [[DigimonXrosWars those dragged into the world]].
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* OhMyGods: Both "Fanglongmon" and "Arceus" are used like this since both are the top gods of there home dimsones.
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** Acting as something between this, TheJinx, and the master of DisasterDominoes, Jar Jar Binks has taken his ability to cause chaos to a level where he can defeat you by tripping. This skill at causing problems has Henry wondering if he was made an ambassador by the Gungans in order to simply get rid of him.
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** Acting as something between this, TheJinx, and the master of DisasterDominoes, Jar Jar Binks has taken his ability to cause chaos to a level where he can defeat you by tripping. This skill at causing problems has Henry wondering if he was made an ambassador by the Gungans in order to simply get rid of him. [[spoiler:Jar Jar also takes out an AT-AT in this fashion.]]
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** According to Uxie, the ultimate answer is [[TheHitchhikersGuideToTheGalaxy 42]]
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* BonusMaterial: The ''Reviewer Requests'' oneshots created alongside this piece have been referenced to several times later on in the fic.
* BonusMaterial: The ''Reviewer Requests'' oneshots for Chapters 2, 4, 6, 7, 8, and 9 have been referenced to several times later on in the main storyline.
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* Crossover: CrackFic: Some of the Alternate Universe one-shots could be considered this, but Chapter 5 is probably the best example of that.
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The work of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2064553/Fergus_Flamacron Fergus Flamacron]], ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5344991/1/A_Sticky_Situation A Sticky Situation]]'' and the sequels ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5600553/1/Secret_of_the_327th Secret of the 327th]]'', ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8076396/1/Quest_of_the_Gods Quest of the Gods]]'', and and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8076405/1/To_Be_a_King To Be A King]]'' follows the lives of the tamers and digimon after the end of [[Anime/DigimonTamers Digimon Season 3]] while eventually weaving in some characters from other worlds.
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The work of [[http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2064553/Fergus_Flamacron Fergus Flamacron]], ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5344991/1/A_Sticky_Situation A Sticky Situation]]'' and the sequels ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5600553/1/Secret_of_the_327th Secret of the 327th]]'', ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8076396/1/Quest_of_the_Gods Quest of the Gods]]'', and and ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8076405/1/To_Be_a_King To Be A King]]'' follows the lives of the tamers and digimon after the end of [[Anime/DigimonTamers Digimon Season 3]] while eventually weaving in some characters from other worlds.
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** [[Film/Titanic "I'M KING OF THE WORLD!"]] being said while on the S.S. Anne.
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* {{Fanboy}}: Kazu, Kenta, and Takato all display these traits when they encounter digimon that are especially cool and/or are connected to the television show in some way. An especially amusing example is when Takato meets [[spoiler:Omnimon]]
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The digimon make it back to the human world thanks to some [=DigiGnomes=], though they are fairly scattered across the city during the arrival. Two of the members end up together, but are quickly captured by a man named Goro. His method of capture, an adhesive substance that quickly dried to hardness, limited the pair's ability to escape or attack. It also left the two digimon [[IncrediblyLamePun stuck together]] and having to rely on each other to make it out. [[FromBadToWorse And that is only the beginning of the trouble for tamers and their partners.
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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: At least a few pokemon seem to feel this.
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* HumansAreTheRealMonsters: At least a few pokemon seem to feel this. As does Felkan.
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The digimon make it back to the human world thanks to some [=DigiGnomes=], though they are fairly scattered across the city during the arrival. Two of the members end up together, but are quickly captured by a man named Goro. His method of capture, an adhesive substance that quickly dried to hardness, limited the pair's ability to escape or attack. It also left the two digimon [[IncrediblyLamePun stuck together]] and having to rely on each other to make it out. And that is [[ItGotWorse only the beginning of the trouble for tamers and their partners]].
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