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* "What about security? Sirens?" [[spoiler: Isaac Vera]]
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* "What do you... Get off me! Stop!" [[spoiler: Sharon Knowles]]
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* "Take care of her." [[spoiler: [[TheDragon Grant]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness Chang]]]]
* "This isn't worth it! [[KilledMidSentence You can live with]]–" [[spoiler: [[AssholeVictim Ernesto]] [[RewardedAsATraitorDeserved Santiago]]]]
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* "Take care of her." [[spoiler: Grant Chang]]
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* "We'll always be part of him, kiddo." [[spoiler: Mr. Robot]]
* "Come on. This only works if you let go too." [[spoiler: Mastermind!Elliot]]
* "Come on. This only works if you let go too." [[spoiler: Mastermind!Elliot]]
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* "Come on. This only works if you let go too." [[spoiler: Elliot Alderson a.k.a. the Mastermind]]
* "Hello, Elliot." [[spoiler: Darlene Alderson]]
* "Come on. This only works if you let go too." [[spoiler: Elliot Alderson a.k.a. the Mastermind]]
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* "Think of it this way, [[spoiler:Zhang]]. You didn't lose the game. You just ran out of time." [[spoiler:Phillip Price]]
* "Our paths were too precisely linked to this moment for there not to be a reason. This is why. You get to decide." [[spoiler:Whiterose]]
* "Think of it this way, [[spoiler:Zhang]]. You didn't lose the game. You just ran out of time." [[spoiler:Phillip Price]]
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* "Think of it this way, [[spoiler:Zhang]]. You didn't lose the game. You just ran out of time." [[spoiler:Phillip Price]]
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