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* WackyRacing
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* WackyRacingSolidGoldPoop: Blonde hair is so rare that the few blondes in the setting (Ryoku, Ikura) are sometimes assulted for it and/or hide it.
* WackyRacing: The local form of lawful duelling.
* WackyRacing: The local form of lawful duelling.
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* ThePowerOfLove/ThePowerOfHate: His inner Primal Magic works on emotions, making it run on both tropes.
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* ThePowerOfLove/ThePowerOfHate: PowerDyesYourHair: From blonde to orange [[spoiler:when influenced by his Primal Magic.]].
* ThePowerOfLove and ThePowerOfHate: His inner Primal Magic works on emotions, making it run on both tropes.
* ThePowerOfLove and ThePowerOfHate: His inner Primal Magic works on emotions, making it run on both tropes.
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* DarkActionGirl: Notably stronger in hand-to-hand fighting than any other girl in the setting. And with magic in her arsenal, she's capable of quick kills on Mafia heads.
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* DarkActionGirl: Notably stronger in hand-to-hand fighting than any single other girl in the setting. And with magic in her arsenal, she's capable of quick kills on Mafia heads.heads as her first appearance suggests.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: The Girly Girl to Ikura's Tomboy. Despite her fiery attitude in contrast to Ikura's cool-headed demeanor, she is the one who takes care of her appearance and wears dresses.
* LoopholeAbuse: He has the right to drive without license if he's on a Black Squaddron operation, which is why he's bad at driving.
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* TheStarscream: He has been this to three persons: the Downtown Commissary, the Burgmaster, and Rangiku.
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* TheStarscream: He has been this to three persons: the [[spoiler:the Downtown Commissary, the Burgmaster, and Rangiku.]]
* [[spoiler:LongLostRelative: She's Ryoku's long-lost twin sister.]]
* CurbStompBattle: [[spoiler:Ryoku's last mission with the Mafia was to snatch the latest Predator 3-wheel scooter model, but Joudan promptly roflstomped him and left Ryoku with the older model he had used to beat him with.]]
* EvilLaugh: Fond of delivering those.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: After the Star League is destroyed. Unlike Kasaru, Shiki and Juuki joining together, he just blasts his way out, proving that nothing was to punish him.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: After the Star League is destroyed. Unlike Kasaru, Shiki and Juuki joining together, he just blasts his way out, out of the town, proving that nothing was to could punish him.him.
* TryingTOCatchMeFightingDirty: In case straight-up fighting doesn't work, he always packs Star Grenades, ready to throw them to sow destruction as a way to escape lost battles.
* TryingTOCatchMeFightingDirty: In case straight-up fighting doesn't work, he always packs Star Grenades, ready to throw them to sow destruction as a way to escape lost battles.
* SecretKeeper
* AboveTheInfluence: [[spoiler:She refused to obey to the Star Magister DeathActivatedSuperpower mind control.]]
* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Next-in-line to inherit the Star League, because she's so powerful. Outpowering Mei's magic proves it.
* LittleMissSnarker
* WorldsMostBeautifulWoman: Claims to be so.
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair
* YouGottaHaveBlueHair
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* OldMaster: Behaves like one despite being only 19.
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* OldMaster: Behaves like one despite being only 19. Given the CrapsackWorld the City is, everyone is perfectly fine with him being experienced at only 19 years of age.
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* BlackSheep: The only good guy who descends from the City's Founding Father.
* FelonyMisdemeanor: He was blacklisted and marked for death for his attempt to reinstate family names (when he adopted Sudou, the name of the manor he lived in, as his family name).
* FelonyMisdemeanor: He was blacklisted and marked for death for his attempt to reinstate family names (when he adopted Sudou, the name of the manor he lived in, as his family name).
* EvilOldFolks: 55 years old, and probably the biggest {{jerkass}} of the whole family.
* TakeOverTheWorld: Intends to have the Star League take over the Imperial Magus, then using them to strip the Imperator of his powers by threat and/or kill him. [[spoiler:Joudan and Juuki unwittingly drew too much attention to the Star League instead.]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Got at his place by beating his two brothers: the Downtown Commissary and Baron Sudou. [[spoiler:Bad news for him: Part 3 pits him against [[SuperpoweredAlterEgo Primal Ryoku]].]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: AsskickingEqualsAuthority: Got at his place by beating his two brothers: the Downtown Commissary and Baron Sudou. [[spoiler:Bad news for him: Part 3 pits him against [[SuperpoweredAlterEgo Primal Ryoku]].]]]]
* AFatherToHisMen: He issues an open one-on-one challenge to the Konvicts to avoid too many deaths in the Tops Police.
* AFatherToHisMen: He issues an open one-on-one challenge to the Konvicts to avoid too many deaths in the Tops Police.
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[[folder:The City's Founding Father]]
--> The founder of the City, he isolated his population from everything and built the City aside a huge cliff.
* AssimilationPlot: Had a good part of the population under a form of MindControl that [[{{Geas}} forbade them from even thinking anything bad about him]] before the Imperator, who wasn't under this stranglehold, killed him.
* DeathByOriginStory: Imperator putsched him and threw him off the cliff in what would become Downtown.
* EvilOldFolks: Apparently, even the Imperator was more popular than him, to the point that the Imperator wasn't hated but beloved for killing him.
* NoNameGiven: He's only referred to as "Father", or as his full title.
* SequelHook: His backstory links him with the Alkatos, from [[@/KeitaroHirochi Inside the Cluster]], an obscure fiction from my brother.
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--> The founder of the City, he isolated his population from everything and built the City aside a huge cliff.
* AssimilationPlot: Had a good part of the population under a form of MindControl that [[{{Geas}} forbade them from even thinking anything bad about him]] before the Imperator, who wasn't under this stranglehold, killed him.
* DeathByOriginStory: Imperator putsched him and threw him off the cliff in what would become Downtown.
* EvilOldFolks: Apparently, even the Imperator was more popular than him, to the point that the Imperator wasn't hated but beloved for killing him.
* NoNameGiven: He's only referred to as "Father", or as his full title.
* SequelHook: His backstory links him with the Alkatos, from [[@/KeitaroHirochi Inside the Cluster]], an obscure fiction from my brother.
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* {{Egopolis}}: The Imperator makes the city this progressively with time in the third season.
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* {{Egopolis}}: The Imperator makes the city this progressively with time in the third season.Part 3.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Each part has him take one. In Season 1, Mei teaches him about some magic elements, LevelGrinding him up to par. In Season 2, he's able to rescue Yuuzou all by himself while previously he had to have Mei's support to get Yuuzou out of here at his own expense. And in Season 3, he gets his Primal Magic form.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Each part has him take one. In Season Part 1, Mei teaches him about some magic elements, LevelGrinding him up to par. In Season Part 2, he's able to rescue Yuuzou all by himself while previously he had to have Mei's support to get Yuuzou out of here at his own expense. And in Season Part 3, he gets his Primal Magic form.
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* ShockAndAwe: Gets his inner magic, which is this, in season 2. {{Irony}} wanted his near-death-experience to be due to ElectricTorture.
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* ShockAndAwe: Gets his inner magic, which is this, in season Part 2. {{Irony}} wanted his near-death-experience to be due to ElectricTorture.
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* CurbStompBattle: Hands one of thoe to Ryoku, his Mafia boss, and outside karting she can pretty much beat almost everyone.
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* CurbStompBattle: Hands one of thoe those to Ryoku, his Mafia boss, and outside karting she can pretty much beat almost everyone.
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* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: She somewhat wishes her father would express pride over anything she does instead of wanting her dead for failing him even once.
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* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: She somewhat wishes wished her father would express pride over anything she does instead of wanting her dead for failing him even once.
* HotBlooded
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--> Black Squadron leader, and one of the highest-rankers in the Downtown Police. He's often at odds with the Commissary due to his choice of companions. Tall and imposing, he tries to intimidate the Konvicts out of action while he investigates about the reasons the Konvicts get so much focus from the Downtown Police.
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--> Black Squadron leader, and one of the highest-rankers in the Downtown Police. He's often at odds with the Commissary due to his choice of companions. Tall and imposing, he tries to intimidate the Konvicts out of action while he investigates about the reasons the Konvicts they get so much focus from the Downtown Police.
* NervesOfSteel
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* AxCrazy: In the second part, where she's actually an antagonist.
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* AxCrazy: In the second part, where she's actually an antagonist.
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--> A gung-ho Star League agent, he promptly reveals himself as the leader to the pillagers that used to ransack Downtown. Despite looking frail, his magic is brutal force. [[spoiler:In his tender youth, he used to survive with Ryoku in the No Man's Land until he eventually snatched a pillaging squad leader's quad and followed the others.]]
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--> A gung-ho Star League agent, he promptly reveals himself as the leader to the pillagers that used to ransack Downtown. Despite looking frail, his raw magic power is brutal force.quite high. [[spoiler:In his tender youth, he used to survive with Ryoku in the No Man's Land until he eventually snatched a pillaging squad leader's quad and followed the others.]]
* ForgottenFriendNewFoe: To Ryoku.
* PlayingWithFire
* RedEyesTakeWarning
* RedEyesTakeWarning
* BlackMagicianGirl
* BadassPrincess: Technically duchess of another city, but nonetheless is able to fight.
* BigDamnHeroes: How he saves Hijiri from the Star League's betrayal of her.
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* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler:On all of Shiki and Souki's sister-clones. While Shiki broke out by herself and Souki was snapped out of it by Mei, there were still about six of them murderously targeting the Imperator. He kills all six, and even takes the effort to add some more flashiness to his action, much like killing one with a SpinningPiledriver.]]
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* KungFuWizard: Powerful both physically and magically, and able to endure beatdowns as proven in his show since he doesn't take stunt doubles.
* MagicKnight: His title as an archmage, though he doesn't use weaponry, taking him out of this trope to the above.
* TheWorfEffect:[[spoiler:On [[spoiler:Inflicts this on all of Shiki and Souki's sister-clones. While Shiki broke out by herself and Souki was snapped out of it by Mei, there were still about six of them murderously targeting the Imperator. He kills all six, and even takes the effort to add some more flashiness to his action, much like killing one with a SpinningPiledriver.]]
* MagicKnight: His title as an archmage, though he doesn't use weaponry, taking him out of this trope to the above.
* TheWorfEffect:
* TheDragon: Despite being a DragonWithAnAgenda, she still tries to "protect" the Imperator against the Konvicts.
* MagicKnight: Has the power to create steel weapons and other kinds of powers to go with it.
* MagicKnight: Has the power to create steel weapons and other kinds of powers to go with it.
* GreenEyedMonster: Hates the fact that he's been sent to Downtown with the garbage.
* SuperStrength: The sole power he gets to show.
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* [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Nice Job Breaking It Yuuzou]]: If Yuuzou didn't note the physical resemblance between him and Ryoku, he wouldn't have wandered in the open.
* OffingTheOffspring [[spoiler: Victim of the [[InvertedTrope inversion]] of this trope.]]
* OffingTheOffspring [[spoiler: Victim of the [[InvertedTrope inversion]] of this trope.]]
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* [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Nice Job Breaking It It, Yuuzou]]: If Yuuzou didn't note the physical resemblance between him and Ryoku, he wouldn't have wandered in the open.
open [[spoiler:and died]].
*OffingTheOffspring [[spoiler: Victim OffingTheOffspring: [[spoiler:Victim of the [[InvertedTrope inversion]] of this trope.]]
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Shiki mentions having gone through that at his hands to unlock her inner magic. She's scarred enough to remember it, and it did immediately following her birth.
* PsychicPowers: [[spoiler:Even beyond death, he has all his daughter-clones attempt assassination on the Imperator, though with his grip on life gone, screws progressively go loose.]]
* PsychicPowers: [[spoiler:Even beyond death, he has all his daughter-clones attempt assassination on the Imperator, though with his grip on life gone, screws progressively go loose.]]
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* ColdBloodedTorture: Shiki mentions having gone through that at his hands to unlock her inner magic. She's scarred enough to remember it, and it did happened immediately following her birth.
* PsychicPowers: His main power. [[spoiler:Even beyond death, he has all his daughter-clones attempt assassination on the Imperator, though with his grip on life gone, screws progressively go loose.]]
* PsychicPowers: His main power. [[spoiler:Even beyond death, he has all his daughter-clones attempt assassination on the Imperator, though with his grip on life gone, screws progressively go loose.]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: [[spoiler:Bad news for him: he's pitted against [[SuperpoweredAlterEgo Primal Ryoku]].]]
* [[spoiler:GoodAllAlong]]
* [[spoiler:GoodAllAlong]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: Got at his place by beating his two brothers: the Downtown Commissary and Baron Sudou. [[spoiler:Bad news for him: he's pitted Part 3 pits him against [[SuperpoweredAlterEgo Primal Ryoku]].]]
* [[spoiler:GoodAllAlong]]]]
* [[spoiler:GoodAllAlong]]
* TheStarscream: [[spoiler:Though nobody knew of his intentions before his death.]]
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* BigBad
* MeaningfulRename: He legally changed his name.
* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: He ruled out family names so that his descendance and the rest of his family couldn't get anything from him.
* MeaningfulRename: He legally changed his name.
* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: He ruled out family names so that his descendance and the rest of his family couldn't get anything from him.
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* BigBad
BadassGrandpa
* BigBad: One of the most archetypal.
* DespotismJustifiesTheMeans
* TheEmperor: The "Shadow Emperor" subtype.
* EvilOldFolks: 58 years old.
* EvilOverlord
* ItsAllAboutMe
* MeaningfulRename: He legally changed hisname.
name to his position.
* NonActionBigBad: Subverts this by giving a race-battle to Ryoku.
* OrcusOnHisThrone
* RoyalBlood: [[spoiler:And so few people stand against him because they don't have it... Ryoku being his nephew.]]
* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: He ruled out family names so that hisdescendance offspring and the rest of his family couldn't get anything from him.
* BigBad: One of the most archetypal.
* DespotismJustifiesTheMeans
* TheEmperor: The "Shadow Emperor" subtype.
* EvilOldFolks: 58 years old.
* EvilOverlord
* ItsAllAboutMe
* MeaningfulRename: He legally changed his
* NonActionBigBad: Subverts this by giving a race-battle to Ryoku.
* OrcusOnHisThrone
* RoyalBlood: [[spoiler:And so few people stand against him because they don't have it... Ryoku being his nephew.]]
* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: He ruled out family names so that his
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: He's almost there, but nobody can find people who could replace him.
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* BlackSheep: Unlike Mei, she's the only person to not descend in a way from the Imperator's father.
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* BlackSheep: Unlike Besides Mei, she's the only person to not descend in a way from the Imperator's father.
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* ThePowerOfLove/ThePowerOfHate: His inner Primal Magic works on emotions, making it run on both tropes.
* TookALevelInBadass: Each part has him take one. In Season 1, Mei teaches him about some magic elements, LevelGrinding him up to par. In Season 2, he's able to rescue Yuuzou all by himself while previously he had to have Mei's support to get Yuuzou out of here at his own expense. And in Season 3, he gets his Primal Magic form.
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* PsychoElectro
* ShockAndAwe: Gets his inner magic, which is this, in season 2. {{Irony}} wanted his near-death-experience to be due to ElectricTorture.
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--> A young girl dumped by the Star League across the bridge that separates the two parts of the City. She was sent to be executed, but she was rescued by Mei.
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--> A young girl dumped by the Star League across the bridge that separates the two parts of the City. She was sent Downtown to be executed, but she was rescued by Mei.Mei before the Police got their hands on her.
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--> A Downtown Police captain, and the Commissary's daughter. One of Downtown's most trained fighters, she excels at identifying and manipulating BattleAura. She is the one to identify Ryoku and get the huge bounty he had on his head, but as she didn't manage to keep him jailed, she's threatened of execution by her father.
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--> A Downtown Police captain, and the Commissary's daughter. One of Downtown's most trained fighters, she excels at identifying and manipulating BattleAura. She is the one to identify Ryoku and get the huge bounty he had on his head, but as she didn't manage to keep ''keep'' him jailed, she's threatened of execution by her father.father.
* BraidsOfAction
* BraidsOfAction
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* DarkActionGirl
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* DarkActionGirlDarkActionGirl: Notably stronger in hand-to-hand fighting than any other girl in the setting. And with magic in her arsenal, she's capable of quick kills on Mafia heads.
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* AxCrazy
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* AxCrazyAxCrazy: In the second part, where she's actually an antagonist.
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* LaserGuidedAmnesia: She forgets much when her parasite is killed, to the point she barely remembers how to talk.
* PoisonousPerson
* PoisonousPerson
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* DeceptiveDisciple
* [[spoiler:KlingonPromotion: Despite Shiki being the Magister's next-in-line, he leads the remains of the Star League after his murder of the Magister.]]
* ManipulativeBastard
* [[spoiler:KlingonPromotion: Despite Shiki being the Magister's next-in-line, he leads the remains of the Star League after his murder of the Magister.]]
* ManipulativeBastard
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* {{Expy}}: To [[RurouniKenshin Himura Kenshin]]. Same ponytail, NiceGuy who you shouldn't piss[[spoiler:, and even the orange hair when Under the influence of his Primal Magic]].
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* {{Expy}}: To [[RurouniKenshin Himura Kenshin]]. Same ponytail, NiceGuy who you shouldn't piss[[spoiler:, and even the orange hair when Under [[SplitPersonalityMakeover under the influence of his Primal Magic]].Magic]]]].
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: His Primal Magic-influenced self is cold and murderous, a persona which Ryoku constantly repressed during his childhood or with the Mafia.
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: His Primal Magic-influenced self is cold and murderous, a persona which Ryoku constantly repressed during his childhood or with the Mafia. Though it's actually Ryoku's [[SplitPersonality repressed self]] acting up.
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* AnticlimaxBoss: Story-wise, he isn't that powerful [[spoiler:He can't even handle normal Ryoku without Primal Magic]].
* EvilOverlord: Concerning Downtown. He's actually just a SinisterMinister under the Imperator, and only the DiscOneFinalBoss regarding the whole story.
* EvilOverlord: Concerning Downtown. He's actually just a SinisterMinister under the Imperator, and only the DiscOneFinalBoss regarding the whole story.
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* AnticlimaxBoss: Story-wise, he isn't that powerful [[spoiler:He can't even handle normal DiscOneFinalBoss [[spoiler:And a somewhat easily-defeated one at that. Ryoku kills him, even without Primal Magic]].
Magic.]]
* EvilOverlord: Concerning Downtown. He's actually just a SinisterMinister under theImperator, and only the DiscOneFinalBoss regarding the whole story.Imperator.
* EvilOverlord: Concerning Downtown. He's actually just a SinisterMinister under the
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* CompleteMonster
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!!Shisui [[note]](僊 月彗 ''sen shisui'', Shisui the Hermit)[[/note]]
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* IneffectualLoner
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* IneffectualLonerIneffectualLoner: He is with the Imperials InNameOnly, and is especially wary of Ban and Rangiku.
* PuppetKing: Defied. Shisui was GenreSavvy enough to refuse the Imperator's promotion of him to the Burgmaster's place.
* AnticlimaxBoss: Story-wise, he isn't that powerful [[spoiler:He can't even handle normal Ryoku without Primal Magic]].
* EvilOverlord: Concerning Downtown. He's actually just a SinisterMinister under the Imperator, and only the DiscOneFinalBoss regarding the whole story.
* ItsAllAboutMe: He sees Downtown's people as garbage essentially, despite having been demoted to one.
* ManipulativeBastard: Has the Police do his bidding, though both parties being openly distrustful doesn't help him.
* EvilOverlord: Concerning Downtown. He's actually just a SinisterMinister under the Imperator, and only the DiscOneFinalBoss regarding the whole story.
* ItsAllAboutMe: He sees Downtown's people as garbage essentially, despite having been demoted to one.
* ManipulativeBastard: Has the Police do his bidding, though both parties being openly distrustful doesn't help him.
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--> Leader to an underground [[LaResistance resistance]], he was supposed deceased for 16 years. Only Yuuzou gets to meet him, because the moment he hears one hint about his abandoned twins son and daughter, he wanders the street to meet them, meeting his untimely end at the hands of Juuki [[spoiler:who was his daughter]].
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--> Leader to an underground [[LaResistance resistance]], he was supposed deceased for 16 years. Only Yuuzou gets to meet him, because the moment he hears one hint about his abandoned twins son and daughter, he wanders the street to meet them, meeting his untimely end at the hands of Juuki [[spoiler:who was [[spoiler:who, unknown to him, is his daughter]].daughter]].
* [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Nice Job Breaking It Yuuzou]]: If Yuuzou didn't note the physical resemblance between him and Ryoku, he wouldn't have wandered in the open.
* OffingTheOffspring [[spoiler: Victim of the [[InvertedTrope inversion]] of this trope.]]
* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:He dies less than 1 day following his first appearance.]]
* [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Nice Job Breaking It Yuuzou]]: If Yuuzou didn't note the physical resemblance between him and Ryoku, he wouldn't have wandered in the open.
* OffingTheOffspring [[spoiler: Victim of the [[InvertedTrope inversion]] of this trope.]]
* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler:He dies less than 1 day following his first appearance.]]
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* AxCrazy: [[spoiler:What his Death Wish eventually made everyone affected.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: Shiki mentions having gone through that at his hands to unlock her inner magic. She's scarred enough to remember it, and it did immediately following her birth.
* CompleteMonster
* PsychicPowers: [[spoiler:Even beyond death, he has all his daughter-clones attempt assassination on the Imperator, though with his grip on life gone, screws progressively go loose.]]
* ColdBloodedTorture: Shiki mentions having gone through that at his hands to unlock her inner magic. She's scarred enough to remember it, and it did immediately following her birth.
* CompleteMonster
* PsychicPowers: [[spoiler:Even beyond death, he has all his daughter-clones attempt assassination on the Imperator, though with his grip on life gone, screws progressively go loose.]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: [[spoiler:Bad news for him: he's pitted against [[SuperpoweredAlterEgo Primal Ryoku]].]]
* [[spoiler:GoodAllAlong]]
* MiniBoss
* [[spoiler:GoodAllAlong]]
* MiniBoss
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* BigBad
* MeaningfulRename: He legally changed his name.
* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: He ruled out family names so that his descendance and the rest of his family couldn't get anything from him.
** EvilIsPetty: That's the sole reason he left Baron Sudou for dead 16 years before the story: he tried to instate Sudou as his family name.
* MeaningfulRename: He legally changed his name.
* ScrewTheRulesIMakeThem: He ruled out family names so that his descendance and the rest of his family couldn't get anything from him.
** EvilIsPetty: That's the sole reason he left Baron Sudou for dead 16 years before the story: he tried to instate Sudou as his family name.
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* BoisterousBruiser
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: His own show features him getting roughed up or failing hilariously at everything he does. Nobody expected him to be even remotely competent, and he proceeds to make the Star Magister's death wish completely useless all by himself.
* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler:On all of Shiki and Souki's sister-clones. While Shiki broke out by herself and Souki was snapped out of it by Mei, there were still about six of them murderously targeting the Imperator. He kills all six, and even takes the effort to add some more flashiness to his action, much like killing one with a SpinningPiledriver.]]
* CrouchingMoronHiddenBadass: His own show features him getting roughed up or failing hilariously at everything he does. Nobody expected him to be even remotely competent, and he proceeds to make the Star Magister's death wish completely useless all by himself.
* TheWorfEffect: [[spoiler:On all of Shiki and Souki's sister-clones. While Shiki broke out by herself and Souki was snapped out of it by Mei, there were still about six of them murderously targeting the Imperator. He kills all six, and even takes the effort to add some more flashiness to his action, much like killing one with a SpinningPiledriver.]]
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* RebelliousPrincess: More like a "backstabbing bitch of a daughter", she is to the Imperator.
* RichBitch
* WorthyOpponent: Considers the Konvicts as such, all but Souki. [[spoiler:Souki makes her swallow her pride in the end.]]
* RichBitch
* WorthyOpponent: Considers the Konvicts as such, all but Souki. [[spoiler:Souki makes her swallow her pride in the end.]]
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* TheStarscream: He has been this to three persons: the Downtown Commissary, the Burgmaster, and Rangiku.
* AxCrazy
* DemotedToExtra: The third part has her get raised by Kasaru since, her parasite killed, she's essentially a teenage girl with the mind of a one-year-old kid.
* DemonicPossession: A parasitic symbiote is the actual thing named Juuki, and is in control of her until Kasaru kills it [[spoiler:just before doing so on the Magister]].
* DemotedToExtra: The third part has her get raised by Kasaru since, her parasite killed, she's essentially a teenage girl with the mind of a one-year-old kid.
* DemonicPossession: A parasitic symbiote is the actual thing named Juuki, and is in control of her until Kasaru kills it [[spoiler:just before doing so on the Magister]].
* DisasterScavengers: The Star League pillagers he leads. Ryoku even meets him in a flash once, but both forgot [[ForgottenFriendNewFoe who the other was]].
* {{Irony}}: The most [[{{Jerkass}} immoral and assholish]] of all characters has Dream magic as his inner magic.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: After the Star League is destroyed. Unlike Kasaru, Shiki and Juuki joining together, he just blasts his way out, proving that nothing was to punish him.
* {{Irony}}: The most [[{{Jerkass}} immoral and assholish]] of all characters has Dream magic as his inner magic.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: After the Star League is destroyed. Unlike Kasaru, Shiki and Juuki joining together, he just blasts his way out, proving that nothing was to punish him.
* AnIcePerson: Not in behavior.
* DaddysLittleVillain: [[spoiler:To the Star Magister, though when he dies she quickly copes with it and unites with Kasaru against the Imperator.]]
* SpoiledBrat
* DaddysLittleVillain: [[spoiler:To the Star Magister, though when he dies she quickly copes with it and unites with Kasaru against the Imperator.]]
* SpoiledBrat
* BlackSheep: Unlike Mei, she's the only person to not descend in a way from the Imperator's father.
* GenreBlindness: Didn't expect the Star League to fool her.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Wandering south wasn't the best idea given what kind of a CrapsackWorld awaited her.
* GenreBlindness: Didn't expect the Star League to fool her.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: Wandering south wasn't the best idea given what kind of a CrapsackWorld awaited her.
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* IneffectualLoner
* OldMaster: Behaves like one despite being only 19.
* RealMenWearPink: He has pink hair.
* IneffectualLoner
* OldMaster: Behaves like one despite being only 19.
* RealMenWearPink: He has pink hair.
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* BastardUnderstudy: It's a known reason why the Commissary doesn't like him, not that he can do anything about that. [[spoiler:Subverted when he does pull off the kill on the Imperator as he fully announces a rightful order to everyone in the Imperial Stadium. Though, the Imperator had other plans.]]
* TheDragon
* AFatherToHisMen: He protects his Black Squadron at all costs, providing Gouhei and later Ikura immunity to death sentence through threats.
* TheDragon
* AFatherToHisMen: He protects his Black Squadron at all costs, providing Gouhei and later Ikura immunity to death sentence through threats.
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* TheBrute: He's as much of an asskicker as Ikura, except he knows his stuff about racing too.
* SirSwearsALot: In contrast to his more-educated teammates, he's even worse than Yuuzou in regards to etiquette. Which is why he's never speaking to the Police aside from the Black Squadron.
* TattooedCrook: Not that he shows off the tattoo, but he has it.
* SirSwearsALot: In contrast to his more-educated teammates, he's even worse than Yuuzou in regards to etiquette. Which is why he's never speaking to the Police aside from the Black Squadron.
* TattooedCrook: Not that he shows off the tattoo, but he has it.
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* CurbStompBattle: Hands one of thoe to Ryoku, his Mafia boss, and outside karting she can pretty much beat almost everyone.
* DarkActionGirl
* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: She somewhat wishes her father would express pride over anything she does instead of wanting her dead for failing him even once.
* DarkActionGirl
* [[WellDoneSonGuy "Well Done, Daughter" Girl]]: She somewhat wishes her father would express pride over anything she does instead of wanting her dead for failing him even once.
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* FieryRedhead: Though most of her hair is dyed black.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: To Mei. [[spoiler:Except during Mei's brief return in the Star League.]]
* FieryRedhead: Though most of her hair is dyed black.
* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: To Mei. [[spoiler:Except during Mei's brief return in the Star League.]]
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Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yuuzou and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as the latter murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
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Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yuuzou and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu Shisui near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's Kuugai's return as the latter murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
* TragicKeepsake: She was lost into the City at a very young age. Her necklace is the only souvenir she has of an older brother, though with time the photo that was inside has long faded.
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* {{Expy}}: To [[RurouniKenshin Himura Kenshin]]. Same ponytail, NiceGuy who you shouldn't piss, [[spoiler:and even the orange hair in his angrier form]].
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* {{Expy}}: To [[RurouniKenshin Himura Kenshin]]. Same ponytail, NiceGuy who you shouldn't piss, [[spoiler:and piss[[spoiler:, and even the orange hair in when Under the influence of his angrier form]].Primal Magic]].
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* TeenGenius: As a mechanic. He just manages as a fighter, a racer, and a magician. [[spoiler:Until you manage to get him angry.]]
* TeenGenius: As a mechanic. He just manages as a fighter, a racer, and a magician. [[spoiler:Until you manage to get him angry.]]
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* SuperpoweredEvilSide: If he gets too angry
His Primal Magic-influenced self is cold and murderous, a persona which Ryoku constantly repressed during his childhood or with the Mafia.
* TeenGenius: As a mechanic. He just manages as a fighter, a racer, and a magician. [[spoiler:Untilyou manage to get him angry.he finally "learns" his inner Primal Magic.]]
* TeenGenius: As a mechanic. He just manages as a fighter, a racer, and a magician. [[spoiler:Until
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* EveryoneIsRelated: The society is somewhat inspired by feudal and pre-revolution France, and the social standards as well as the inbreeding of nobility is kept there. Every single character descends from two persons (quite the TangledFamilyTree since four OfficialCouple pairings are brought up).
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--> TheHero. A Downtowner ever since he was conscious, he was abandoned at the age of one. His difficult life left him to handle himself from a very young age, working within the Mafia network to ensure himself an outcome. His craftiness and magical power left him with great success in infiltration as well as force deployments, leaving him with an incredible reputation.
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--> TheHero. A Downtowner ever since he was conscious, he was abandoned at the age of one. His difficult life left him to handle himself from a very young age, working within the Mafia network to ensure himself an outcome.a stable money income. His craftiness and magical power left him with great success in infiltration as well as force deployments, leaving him with an incredible reputation.
* {{Expy}}: To [[RurouniKenshin Himura Kenshin]]. Same ponytail, NiceGuy who you shouldn't piss, [[spoiler:and even the orange hair in his angrier form]].
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* {{Ninja}}: As "the One with the Mask". He drops the mask very early.
* TeenGenius: As a mechanic. He just manages as a fighter, a racer, and a magician.
* TeenGenius: As a mechanic. He just manages as a fighter, a racer, and a magician.
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* {{Ninja}}: As "the One with the Mask". He drops the mask very early.
early though.
* SuperpoweredEvilSide: If he gets too angry
* TeenGenius: As a mechanic. He just manages as a fighter, a racer, and a magician. [[spoiler:Until you manage to get him angry.]]
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* JusticeWillPrevail: Despite his cynicism, he's determined to make things one thing right.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: [[spoiler:During the last arc, he leaves the City with Mei after Joudan blew up the Big Mall and did the same, because the power struggles will destroy the City like Downtown.]]
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* BigGood: For a big portion of the first arc, when she's able to be MissionControl via telepathy but still unable to fight.
* LimitedWardrobe: Same as Yuuzou, she hasn't changed clothes since she was thrown Downtown to not forget about what she was, and what she wants to reclaim.
* LimitedWardrobe: Same as Yuuzou, she hasn't changed clothes since she was thrown Downtown to not forget about what she was, and what she wants to reclaim.
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* GreenEyes
* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:The "ki" in her name is a counter for objects, and "sou" is her "number", as in:the way to determine that [[YouAreNumberSix she's the twin of the first]].]]
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!!Juuki (十基 ''juuki'')
!!Joudan (上段 ''Joudan'')
!!Kasaru (火猿 ''Kasaru'')
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--> The Imperator's youngest son, left to manage the entire Downtown. Since he doesn't care about his territory, he does almost nothing for the people, leaving the Police out of most things. [[spoiler:Though, it's matters from above that eventually claim his life, with Yuuzou and Mei's attacks leaving him open to be assaulted and killed by Ryoku.]]
!!Baron Sudou
--> The Imperator's youngest son, left to manage the entire Downtown. Since he doesn't care about his territory, he does almost nothing for the people, leaving the Police out of most things. [[spoiler:Though, it's matters from above that eventually claim his life, with Yuuzou and Mei's attacks leaving him open to be assaulted and killed by Ryoku.]]
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Commissary (下市 保安官''shimoichi no hoankan'', Sheriff of Downtown)
--> The Imperator's youngest son, left to manage the entire Downtown. Since he doesn't care about his territory, he does almost nothing for the people, leaving the Police out of most things. [[spoiler:Though, it's matters from above that eventually claim his life, with Yuuzou and Mei's attacks leaving him open to be assaulted and killed by Ryoku. With him, the whole Downtown dies.]]
!!BaronSudouSudou (男爵 角藤 ''danshaku Sudou'', Baron Sudou)
--> The Imperator's youngest son, left to manage the entire Downtown. Since he doesn't care about his territory, he does almost nothing for the people, leaving the Police out of most things. [[spoiler:Though, it's matters from above that eventually claim his life, with Yuuzou and Mei's attacks leaving him open to be assaulted and killed by Ryoku. With him, the whole Downtown dies.]]
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--> The Imperator's youngest son, left to manage the entire Downtown. Since he doesn't care about his territory, he does almost nothing for the people, leaving the Police out of most things. [[spoiler:Though, it's matters from above that eventually claim his life, with Yuuzou and Mei's attacks leaving him open to be assaulted and killed by Ryoku.]]
!!Baron Sudou
--> Leader to an underground [[LaResistance resistance]], he was supposed deceased for 16 years. Only Yuuzou gets to meet him, because the moment he hears one hint about his abandoned twins son and daughter, he wanders the street to meet them, meeting his untimely end at the hands of Juuki [[spoiler:who was his daughter]].
!!The Star Magister
--> The leader of the Star League, and the Imperator's little brother. He runs various experiments to increase his magic power and become eternal, in an attempt to outlive the Imperator and take his place.
!!The Burgmaster
--> The Imperator's oldest son, and the leader to the Tops Police. He opposes the Konvicts' messing with the order, but [[spoiler:is also mounting a coup against the Imperator]].
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--> The self-glorified major figure of the City. He legally changed his name to Imperator to signify his status.
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--> The Imperator's youngest son, left to manage the entire Downtown. Since he doesn't care about his territory, he does almost nothing for the people, leaving the Police out of most things. [[spoiler:Though, it's matters from above that eventually claim his life, with Yuuzou and Mei's attacks leaving him open to be assaulted and killed by Ryoku.]]
!!Baron Sudou
--> Leader to an underground [[LaResistance resistance]], he was supposed deceased for 16 years. Only Yuuzou gets to meet him, because the moment he hears one hint about his abandoned twins son and daughter, he wanders the street to meet them, meeting his untimely end at the hands of Juuki [[spoiler:who was his daughter]].
!!The Star Magister
--> The leader of the Star League, and the Imperator's little brother. He runs various experiments to increase his magic power and become eternal, in an attempt to outlive the Imperator and take his place.
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--> The Imperator's oldest son, and the leader to the Tops Police. He opposes the Konvicts' messing with the order, but [[spoiler:is also mounting a coup against the Imperator]].
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The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to end their captivity in Downtown and allow the team a quick way up to the Upper-City. Ryoku eventually kills the Commissary, and Downtown entirely goes down in an earthquake due to the man's DeathActivatedSuperpower. The incident costs a lot of Downtown lives, and causes an influx of Downtown people forcing their way to the Upper-City in the dozen of minutes Downtown takes to entirely fall.\\
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent due to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her way of escaping that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu to break free. They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though Shiki eventually fails, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as the latter murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent due to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her way of escaping that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu to break free. They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though Shiki eventually fails, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as the latter murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
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The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu Yuuzou [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu Yuuzou then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu Yuuzou and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to end their captivity in Downtown and allow the team a quick way up to the Upper-City. Ryoku eventually kills the Commissary, and Downtown entirely goes down in an earthquake due to the man's DeathActivatedSuperpower. The incident costs a lot of Downtown lives, and causes an influx of Downtown people forcing their way to the Upper-City in the dozen of minutes Downtown takes to entirely fall.\\
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed),Yozabu, Yuuzou, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent due to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her way of escaping that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu Yuuzou to break free. They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though Shiki eventually fails, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage.Yozabu Yuuzou and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as the latter murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed),
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage.
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* RotatingProtagonist: In the first part, Ryoku and Yozabu switch main protagonist status. Every time one rescues the other, he gets captured for his trouble.
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* {{Foil}}: Cynical, earthly, and tall in contrast with Ryoku's small, daydreaming, idealist nature.
* JusticeWillPrevail: Despite his cynicism, he's determined to make things right.
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!!Mei
--> A mysterious but benevolent and very powerful magician, released by Ryoku and Yozabu from the Police's grasp at episode 2. She backs Ryoku and Yozabu up until she regains her strength, at which point she enters their struggles and starts joining the fights.
* LimitedWardrobe: Same as Yozabu, she hasn't changed since she was thrown Downtown.
--> A mysterious but benevolent and very powerful magician, released by Ryoku and Yozabu from the Police's grasp at episode 2. She backs Ryoku and Yozabu up until she regains her strength, at which point she enters their struggles and starts joining the fights.
* LimitedWardrobe: Same as Yozabu, she hasn't changed since she was thrown Downtown.
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!!Mei [[note]](命 ''Mei'')[[/note]]
--> A mysterious but benevolent and very powerful
* LimitedWardrobe: Same as
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* PsychicPowers: She uses them to track Ryoku and Yozabu, teach the former about magic, and when she recovers she uses them ForMassiveDamage.
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* PsychicPowers: She uses them to track Ryoku and Yozabu, Yuuzou, teach the former about magic, and when she recovers she uses them ForMassiveDamage.
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* MeaningfulName: [[spoiler:The "ki" in her name is a counter for objects, and "sou" is her "number", as in: the way to determine that [[YouAreNumberSix she's the twin of the first]].]]
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!Characters:
[[folder:The Konvicts]]
!!Ryoku [[spoiler:Sudou]] [[note]]力[[/note]]
--> TheHero. A Downtowner ever since he was conscious, he was abandoned at the age of one. His difficult life left him to handle himself from a very young age, working within the Mafia network to ensure himself an outcome. His craftiness and magical power left him with great success in infiltration as well as force deployments, leaving him with an incredible reputation.
* AwesomeButImpractical: His first fight with the Black Squadron, has him meet quick defeat because his hand-to-hand approach to fighting is this.
* MrFixit: He built a kart himself with stolen spare pieces and metal he melted himself. And he's 17.
* {{Ninja}}: As "the One with the Mask". He drops the mask very early.
!!Yozabu
--> TheLancer, a cynical fugitive, constantly on the run in and out of the jail. He is out to settle a score in the Upper City, which is why the Black Squadron is consistently after him ever since he was thrown Downtown.
* HellBentForLeather
* LimitedWardrobe: He's been wearing the single same outfit for two years, as a souvenir of the Upper City.
* PsychoElectro
!!Mei
--> A mysterious but benevolent and very powerful magician, released by Ryoku and Yozabu from the Police's grasp at episode 2. She backs Ryoku and Yozabu up until she regains her strength, at which point she enters their struggles and starts joining the fights.
* LimitedWardrobe: Same as Yozabu, she hasn't changed since she was thrown Downtown.
* PimpedOutDress
* PsychicPowers: She uses them to track Ryoku and Yozabu, teach the former about magic, and when she recovers she uses them ForMassiveDamage.
* SquishyWizard
!!Souki
--> A young girl dumped by the Star League across the bridge that separates the two parts of the City. She was sent to be executed, but she was rescued by Mei.
* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: She's a twin of the first clone of her series.]]
* FlowerInHerHair
* NiceGirl
* WhiteMage: With GreenThumb instead of light magic, but it is her main function.
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[[folder:Others]]
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!Characters:
[[folder:The Konvicts]]
!!Ryoku [[spoiler:Sudou]] [[note]]力[[/note]]
--> TheHero. A Downtowner ever since he was conscious, he was abandoned at the age of one. His difficult life left him to handle himself from a very young age, working within the Mafia network to ensure himself an outcome. His craftiness and magical power left him with great success in infiltration as well as force deployments, leaving him with an incredible reputation.
* AwesomeButImpractical: His first fight with the Black Squadron, has him meet quick defeat because his hand-to-hand approach to fighting is this.
* MrFixit: He built a kart himself with stolen spare pieces and metal he melted himself. And he's 17.
* {{Ninja}}: As "the One with the Mask". He drops the mask very early.
!!Yozabu
--> TheLancer, a cynical fugitive, constantly on the run in and out of the jail. He is out to settle a score in the Upper City, which is why the Black Squadron is consistently after him ever since he was thrown Downtown.
* HellBentForLeather
* LimitedWardrobe: He's been wearing the single same outfit for two years, as a souvenir of the Upper City.
* PsychoElectro
!!Mei
--> A mysterious but benevolent and very powerful magician, released by Ryoku and Yozabu from the Police's grasp at episode 2. She backs Ryoku and Yozabu up until she regains her strength, at which point she enters their struggles and starts joining the fights.
* LimitedWardrobe: Same as Yozabu, she hasn't changed since she was thrown Downtown.
* PimpedOutDress
* PsychicPowers: She uses them to track Ryoku and Yozabu, teach the former about magic, and when she recovers she uses them ForMassiveDamage.
* SquishyWizard
!!Souki
--> A young girl dumped by the Star League across the bridge that separates the two parts of the City. She was sent to be executed, but she was rescued by Mei.
* [[spoiler:CloningBlues: She's a twin of the first clone of her series.]]
* FlowerInHerHair
* NiceGirl
* WhiteMage: With GreenThumb instead of light magic, but it is her main function.
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After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent due to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her way of escaping that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu. They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though Shiki eventually fails, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
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After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent due to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her way of escaping that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu.Yozabu to break free. They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though Shiki eventually fails, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
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* {{Egopolis}}: The Imperator makes the city this progressively with time in the third season.
* GoKartingWithBowser: To a degree, though in the Upper City important stakes are put on VideoGame/MarioKart style racing duels.
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* TheMafia: There is a Downtown Mafia. Sometimes they're just called "the Families". Though, the Mafia is only background and gives much less trouble to the heroes than the Downtown Police.
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* DeathActivatedSuperpower: Three of them, the Downtown Commissary and the Imperator eventually causing the City's demise.
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An original fiction by @/{{Wax}}.
It happens in an isolated city, surrounded by a forest at the north and a gaping hole in the bottom. The city itself is cut in half by a landslide-caused fissure, now literally separating Downtown from the Upper-City.
The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to end the captivity in Downtown and allow the team a quick way up to the Upper-City. Ryoku eventually kills the Commissary, and Downtown entirely goes down in an earthquake due to the man's DeathActivatedSuperpower. The incident costs a lot of Downtown lives, and causes an influx of Downtown people forcing their way to the Upper-City in the dozen of minutes Downtown takes to entirely fall.\\
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent do to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her power that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though they eventually fail, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, eventually follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as he murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
It happens in an isolated city, surrounded by a forest at the north and a gaping hole in the bottom. The city itself is cut in half by a landslide-caused fissure, now literally separating Downtown from the Upper-City.
The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to end the captivity in Downtown and allow the team a quick way up to the Upper-City. Ryoku eventually kills the Commissary, and Downtown entirely goes down in an earthquake due to the man's DeathActivatedSuperpower. The incident costs a lot of Downtown lives, and causes an influx of Downtown people forcing their way to the Upper-City in the dozen of minutes Downtown takes to entirely fall.\\
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent do to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her power that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though they eventually fail, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, eventually follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as he murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
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An original fiction by @/{{Wax}}.
@/{{Wax}}.\\
It happens in an isolated city, surrounded by a forest at the north and a gaping hole in the bottom. The city itself is cut in half by a landslide-caused fissure, now literally separating Downtown from theUpper-City.
Upper-City.\\
The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to endthe their captivity in Downtown and allow the team a quick way up to the Upper-City. Ryoku eventually kills the Commissary, and Downtown entirely goes down in an earthquake due to the man's DeathActivatedSuperpower. The incident costs a lot of Downtown lives, and causes an influx of Downtown people forcing their way to the Upper-City in the dozen of minutes Downtown takes to entirely fall.\\
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpentdo due to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her power way of escaping that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu Yozabu. They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though they Shiki eventually fail, fails, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron,eventually follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as he the latter murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
It happens in an isolated city, surrounded by a forest at the north and a gaping hole in the bottom. The city itself is cut in half by a landslide-caused fissure, now literally separating Downtown from the
The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to end
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron,
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Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, eventually follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as he murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
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Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, eventually follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as he murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.did.
! This work presents examples of:
* BadassCrew: The Black Squadron starts as a villainous example.
* FiveBadBand: Each arc has one. [[spoiler:Each BigBad is killed.]]
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Most teams that appear. Though, they are not always together.
* RotatingProtagonist: In the first part, Ryoku and Yozabu switch main protagonist status. Every time one rescues the other, he gets captured for his trouble.
! This work presents examples of:
* BadassCrew: The Black Squadron starts as a villainous example.
* FiveBadBand: Each arc has one. [[spoiler:Each BigBad is killed.]]
* FourTemperamentEnsemble: Most teams that appear. Though, they are not always together.
* RotatingProtagonist: In the first part, Ryoku and Yozabu switch main protagonist status. Every time one rescues the other, he gets captured for his trouble.
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An original fiction by @/{{Wax}}.
It happens in an isolated city, surrounded by a forest at the north and a gaping hole in the bottom. The city itself is cut in half by a landslide-caused fissure, now literally separating Downtown from the Upper-City.
The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to end the captivity in Downtown and allow the team a quick way up to the Upper-City. Ryoku eventually kills the Commissary, and Downtown entirely goes down in an earthquake due to the man's DeathActivatedSuperpower. The incident costs a lot of Downtown lives, and causes an influx of Downtown people forcing their way to the Upper-City in the dozen of minutes Downtown takes to entirely fall.\\
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent do to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her power that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though they eventually fail, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, eventually follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as he murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.
It happens in an isolated city, surrounded by a forest at the north and a gaping hole in the bottom. The city itself is cut in half by a landslide-caused fissure, now literally separating Downtown from the Upper-City.
The story is that of Downtown assassin mechanic {{Ninja}} Ryoku. He lives alone since he remembers, and is known as "The Man with the Mask" through Downtown Police and Mafia alike. Despite two years of action without getting recognized, he gets captured while rescuing high-profile criminal Yozabu [[FriendToAllLivingThings for no apparent reason]]. Yozabu then proceeds to liberate him along with a mysterious girl named Mei in the process, getting captured in the process. Ryoku gets entangled in their struggle against the Downtown Police, specifically the Black Squadron, a team that seems devoted to keeping Yozabu and Mei in check. Ryoku discovers the involvement of the Star League (the Upper-City's magician class). Their run is stopped when the band saves a girl dumped from the Upper-City from the Downtown Police's custody. The team of four escapees manages to put out the Black Squadron before attacking the Downtown Commissary to end the captivity in Downtown and allow the team a quick way up to the Upper-City. Ryoku eventually kills the Commissary, and Downtown entirely goes down in an earthquake due to the man's DeathActivatedSuperpower. The incident costs a lot of Downtown lives, and causes an influx of Downtown people forcing their way to the Upper-City in the dozen of minutes Downtown takes to entirely fall.\\
After the panic in the Upper-City has settled down (and many Downtown intruders killed), Yozabu, Mei and Souki immediately strike back at the Star League while Ryoku's laying low. Though, hiding in the mines leaves him open to a mass-murdering poison-wielder called the Steel Serpent do to the person's disguise. After a second meeting, Ryoku manages to shatter the snake mask, revealing a female face that seems too familiar. The Serpent eventually escapes and Ryoku understands from her power that the Star League has a hand in that, so he takes his friends' path of war against the Star League. Through the course of several fights, he discovers the Star League's involvement with the pillagers who ransacked Downtown, as well as re-meeting the Serpent as Juuki, a psychologically-unstable agent. He soon attracts the attention of elite mage Kasaru, eventually allowing Yozabu They quickly rescue Mei and Souki to evade the League's clutches, freeing the latter from {{brainwashing}} in the process. The Star League has to unveil Shiki (Souki's strongest "sister"-clone) to stop the Downtown fugitives, though they eventually fail, leaving the Magister open to attack right at the Wand Tower. Following the incident, the Wand Tower crumples as the Star League is destroyed.\\
Then, the Imperator gets active in reaffirming his control over the City, using the Tops Police to wipe out any remains of the Star League, recruiting the Black Squadron's remaining members into them as well. Archmage-in-training Ban steps up to the menace the Magister posed after his death, as Shiki and Souki's sister-clones are driven crazy and try public attempts at killing the Imperator, and even the fugitives. On orders and being supervised by his cousin, Princess Rangiku, Ban eliminates most of them successfully. Ban eventually gets all the credit, leaving the Burgmaster (the leader of the Tops Police) wide open to a frontal assault as the fugitives took an opportunity to attack him. When Ryoku kills him, Ban and Rangiku eventually find out about his true plans, having a "MyGodWhatHaveIDone" reaction to their doing. They soon are back to action regarding Joudan (the former Star League pillager leader), eventually blasts his way out of the city from the Big Mall, causing massive property damage. Yozabu and Mei, as well as Gouhei from the Black Squadron, eventually follow before hermit Shisu resurfaces and takes over as Burgmaster, instilling order into the City again. Ryoku and Souki eventually join forces with now-fellow-fugitives Kasaru and Shiki (resurfacing from apparent death) to fight the Imperator's soldiers. Eventually, plans collide as Ryoku, finding the Imperator, also finds Shisu near-death at his feet. Ryoku fights the Imperator to a draw, but in the aftermath, he discovers the Black Squadron's leader Kugaju's return as he murders the Imperator. Though, he has no time to establish a fairer order as the Imperator's DeathActivatedSuperpower destroys the whole city, leading everyone to leave before it falls to its doom like Downtown did.