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* {{Expy}}: A HotBlooded yet somehow innocent ActionGirl with NoSocialSkills teams up with a DeadpanSnarker undercover soldier [[Film/{{TheFifthElement}} to save the galaxy with their love.]]

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* PersonalityPowersPersonalityPowers / WeaponOfChoice: Let's see...
**Jax is no-nonsense and hot-blooded. She uses fire-powered-fisticuffs.
**Ves is cold, clinical and methodical. Despite having natural powers like his sister, he prefers knives and small, quiet guns.
**Enif is energetic, bubbly and ruthless. She uses acrobatics, and colorful katanas.
**Penumbra is pragmatic and down-to-earth. He uses infantry-centered weapons and is no stranger to hand-to-hand combat.


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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about a convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here.]]

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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about a convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here.]]
here,]] [[http://linerockets.webcomic.ws/ here]] or even [[http://line-rockets.tumblr.com/ here!]]



'''"Primus"''', Formerly Autopilot 99. Alleged robot supremacist, really all he wants is a little justice.

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'''"Primus"''', Formerly known as Autopilot 99. Alleged robot supremacist, really all he wants is a little justice.

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* JustAMachine: A major source of conflict in the comic.



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** Jax: "Okay, okay, don't go all [[Film/{{Alien}} Ellen Ripley]] on me!"

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** Jax: '''Jax''': "Okay, okay, don't go all [[Film/{{Alien}} Ellen Ripley]] on me!"



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'''Enif''', Ves's bubbly, positive and ruthless right hand.

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'''Enif''', Ves's bubbly, positive and ruthless right hand. Little is known about Enif's past other than she's a "blue-blooded" Tangean, she's very young (though nobody knows how young) and she is an extremely high-functioning individual. Despite this mystery, she has a huge presence in the Parhelia, and often acts as Ves's eyes, ears, and even voice. She seems to thoroughly enjoy her job, and gets along well with just about everyone. She's good natured, silly and helpful. However, she's not nearly as laid-back as her attitude suggests, and everybody knows it. She's domineering, sharp as a knife and extremely intelligent.



* BunnyEarsLawyer
* GamerChick
* GenkiGirl: Loosely.
* GirlyBruiser
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* WarForFunAndProfit

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* WarForFunAndProfit[[spoiler: WarForFunAndProfit]]

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* {{Troperiffic}}



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* AloofBigBrother: Though he is Jax's twin.

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'''Zod''', The head of a large gang. He used to be the head of a drug ring on Trade World, and employed Zod and Jax as his lieutenants before Jax was caught by a rival gang, then arrested. In the five years Jax was in prison, Zod has developed an empire and absorbed multiple gangs into his command. His motives are currently unclear, but he has a suspiciously strong grip on the mission Jax and XR have been sent on by Star Command.

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'''Zod''', The head of a large gang. He used to be the head of a drug ring on Trade World,
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'''"Primus"''', Formerly Autopilot 99. Alleged robot supremacist, really all he wants is a little justice.
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* AsceticAesthetic: The Parhelia's motif, in stark contrast to the {{Zeerust}} of Star Command (and some of the other planets).
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* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: Jax's cuts and stab wounds on her hip.

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* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: Jax's cuts and stab wounds wound scars on her hip.

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* AdultFear: Jax being [[spoiler: tortured and raped.]] The possibility for XR to [[lose his home and potentially the lives of his friends.]]

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* AdultFear: Jax being [[spoiler: tortured and raped.]] The possibility for XR to [[lose [[spoiler: lose his home and potentially the lives of his friends.]]


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* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Natch.


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* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: Jax's cuts and stab wounds on her hip.


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* RunningGag: Jax casually pushing XR over with her foot, Jax CompletelyMissingThePoint when XR tries to flirt with her, them being assumed to be a couple.
* ScrewTheRulesImDoingWhatsRight


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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: Averted. With Enora, Enif, Jax, Nida and Rose the comic ads (much-needed) female characters to the original BLoSC cast.
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* {{Expy}}: A HotBlooded yet somehow innocent ActionGirl with NoSocialSkills teams up with a DeadpanSnarker undercover soldier [[TheFifthElement to save the galaxy with their love.]]

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* {{Expy}}: A HotBlooded yet somehow innocent ActionGirl with NoSocialSkills teams up with a DeadpanSnarker undercover soldier [[TheFifthElement [[Film/{{TheFifthElement}} to save the galaxy with their love.]]
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* BreakTheHaughty: Jax succeeds so often in her criminal endeavors she begins to think she is untouchable. The moment she's alone, she is [[spoiler: captured, tortured and raped.]]


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* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Gender-flipped.

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* AdultFear: Jax being [[spoiler: tortured and raped.]] The possibility for XR to [[lose his home and potentially the lives of his friends.]]
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Gender-flipped. Especially freeing for XR, for whom the law is just about his entire life despite being the only member of the team openly accepting of moral ambiguity.


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* EatingTheEyeCandy: Jax is completely oblivious to how XR is affected by her state of undress.


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** Jax: "Okay, okay, don't go all [[Film/{{Alien}} Ellen Ripley]] on me!"


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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Delivered to XR in Chapter 5 after he goes too far, not only making fun of Jax's fear of space but implying she can't feel empathy. More like armor piercing punch, but same principle.
-->'''XR''': ''Jax pushes him over''. What is wrong with you?
-->'''Jax''': Me?! You couldn't have mentioned that you come apart like a ''jigsaw puzzle?!''
-->'''XR''': ''That's'' What this is about?
-->'''Jax''': I thought you died!
-->'''XR''': That's the whole reason I was built! I thought you knew!
-->'''Jax''': How could I know?!
-->'''XR''': Why are you even so upset? Worried you'll have to deal with the oh-so-scary spaceflight back to base by yourself?
-->'''Jax''': ''She punches his dome with a loud "crack".'' Go to hell.


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* InterplayOfSexAndViolence: Jax and XR's [[SlapSlapKiss high-tension]] sparring match in Chapter 7.
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* ShoutOut
**Primus's name is a reference to [[Theatre.RossumsUniversalRobots Rossum’s Universal Robots.]]
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-->''Jax'': Just shut the ''fuck'' up, XR! ''I am not keeping things from you!'' But I am sick to fuck of your bitching! I can drive a ship if I have to, so either shut your fucking mouth and get behind the fucking controls or get off this fucking ship and find your own fucking way to wherever the fuck you want to go! I'm done with this!

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-->''Jax'': -->'''Jax''': Just shut the ''fuck'' '''fuck''' up, XR! ''I am not keeping things from you!'' But I am sick to fuck '''fuck''' of your bitching! I can drive a ship if I have to, so either shut your fucking '''fucking''' mouth and get behind the fucking '''fucking''' controls or get off this fucking '''fucking''' ship and find your own fucking '''fucking''' way to wherever the fuck '''fuck''' you want to go! I'm done with this!



[[caption-width-right:350:"Just shut the fuck up, XR!"]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:"Just shut the fuck up, XR!"]][[caption-width-right:350:"Oh, cry me a river! I'm not pushing you around! I just need you to ''stay out of my way.''"]]

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* ClusterFBomb:
-->''Jax'': Just shut the ''fuck'' up, XR! ''I am not keeping things from you!'' But I am sick to fuck of your bitching! I can drive a ship if I have to, so either shut your fucking mouth and get behind the fucking controls or get off this fucking ship and find your own fucking way to wherever the fuck you want to go! I'm done with this!



[[caption-width-right:350:"'''Primus''': Don't tell me you're getting ''soft''.'''Jax''': ''Never.''"]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:"'''Primus''': Don't tell me you're getting ''soft''.'''Jax''': ''Never.''"]][[caption-width-right:350:"Just shut the fuck up, XR!"]]



* ALphaBitch: A rare male example. Ves was this as a teenager, and never quite grew out of it. It's only ever worked to his advantage.

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--> '''Primus''': Don't tell me you're getting ''soft''.
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* PoliceState



* {{Robosexual}}: Natch.

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* [[spoiler: {{Robosexual}}: Natch.]]



* SympatheticPOV: A major theme of the comic. While BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand's main focus is on the best of the best, Line Rockets follows the story of an overconfident but successful criminal turned depressed, JadedWashout being put through a system that favors only the inhumanly good, or at least those who are percieved as such, after experiencing a traumatic event and betrayal.
* TagTeamTwins

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* SympatheticPOV: A major theme of the comic. While BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand's main focus is on the best of the best, Line Rockets follows the story of an overconfident but successful criminal turned depressed, JadedWashout being put through a system that favors only depressed and chronically unlucky ex-con, and Team Lightyear's very own ChewToy.
* TagTeamTwins: Jax and Ves, back in
the inhumanly good, or at least those who are percieved as such, after experiencing a traumatic event and betrayal.
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* CommandRoster:
** TheCaptain / AcePilot: Ves
** NumberTwo / TheMarine: Jax
** WrenchWench: Rose
** TheScientist: XL, ironically and unironically.
** CunningLinguist / TheMedic: XR
** CommunicationsOfficer / TheShrink: Enora
** SecurityOfficer: Penumbra
* [[spoiler:TheyFightCrime]]



* WorthyOpponent: Ves eventually comes to see Jax as this.

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* WorthyOpponent: Both Ves and Zod eventually comes come to see Jax as this.



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me alone''."]]you're getting ''soft''.
--> '''Jax''': ''Never.'']]



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* ActionGirl / ActionGirlfriend[[spoiler: ActionGirlfriend]]



* FingerSnapLighter
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--> '''XR''': First of all, I'm not going to mess up. Second, even if I did, So what? Someone else would put away this Zod guy, you'd go back to prison for another two years and have to eat prison food for another two years? You're a "bad guy"! You can handle it. But it's not going to happen because you're on the side of good, now. The winning side? You should be happy!
--> '''Jax''': Are you even... Listening to what's coming out of your mouth?!

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* AllWorkVsAllPlay: The contractor vs. Ochak; Jax vs. XR



* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Zod's (alleged) army.



* AxCrazy: Both Jax and Ves are people you should not expect mercy from.



* BattleCouple: Eventually.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Just another one of the many conflicts Jax and XR find themselves in.

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* BattleCouple: Eventually.
* BelligerentSexualTension: Just another one So very, very much. Enough that they're assumed to be a couple ''because'' of the many conflicts Jax and XR find themselves in.their constant fighting.



* BrainsAndBrawn: Ochak and Jax, respectively. Now XR and Jax.



* CheshireCatGrin: It unfortunately makes Jax (and Ves) hard to trust.



* DeconstructionFic / WarFic:
* [[spoiler: DividedWeFall: The "criminal element" and Star Command have a bigger enemy to face than each other, Zurg and his new army.]]

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* DeconstructionFic / WarFic:
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: Unlike the original series, bullets do, in fact, cause damage to the targets they hit.
* FireForgedFriends / BackToBackBadasses: Jax and XR... Eventually.
* FiveManBand:
** [[TheHero The]][[AntiHero (Anti)]][[TheHero Hero]]: Jax
** TheLancer: XR
** TheBigGuy: Penumbra
** TheSmartGuy: Ves (Or Enora)
** TheChick: Enif
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* FamilyUnfriendlyViolence: Unlike the original series, bullets do, in fact, cause damage to the targets they hit.
* FireForgedFriends / BackToBackBadasses: Jax and XR... Eventually.
* FiveManBand:
** [[TheHero The]][[AntiHero (Anti)]][[TheHero Hero]]: Jax
** TheLancer: XR
** TheBigGuy: Penumbra
** TheSmartGuy: Ves (Or Enora)
** TheChick: Enif
* GadgeteerGenius: Rose, natch.
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* GameFace: Despite having heat powers Jax is not particularly HotBlooded. But she [[GlowingEyesOfDoom can be]] [[SlasherSmile maybe a little too enthusiastic]] in combat.



* InHarmsWay: Natch.
* [[spoiler: IntimateHealing: After the DespairEventHorizon; XR does his best.]]
* KickTheDog: Twice,
** Once,When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]
** And the second time [[spoiler: After Zod decides Jax has gone too far in changing his plans, he sends her on a mission that [[KillItWithIce breaks the boundaries of her biology,]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness They are attacked,]] [[DespairEventHorizon and Jax is seriously injured.]]]]
* LadykillerInLove: XR is almost this when he begins to fall for Jax. She sees him as more of a ladykiller than he is, anyway.
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* KickTheDog: Twice,
** Once,When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]
** And the second time [[spoiler: After Zod decides Jax has gone too far in changing his plans, he sends her on a mission that [[KillItWithIce breaks the boundaries of her biology,]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness They are attacked,]] [[DespairEventHorizon and Jax is seriously injured.]]]]
* LadykillerInLove: XR is almost Depending on your view of XR, he's this when he begins to fall for Jax. She sees him as more of a ladykiller than he is, anyway.
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* LoweredRecruitingStandards[[spoiler: LoweredRecruitingStandards]]: A major alleged roadblock for Star Command.



* ObliviousToLove: Of the [[BrokenBird unworthy of love]] variety. XR tries to flirt with Jax multiple times, she never picks up on it.



[[caption-width-right:350:"No need to thank me, seeing you happy will be its own reward. Well I guess you ''could'' thank me, but don't stress yourself over it."]]

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[[caption-width-right:350:"No [[caption-width-right:350:"And my team... they're all good people, and I'm not like that. So if I need to thank me, seeing you happy will be its own reward. Well I guess you ''could'' thank me, but don't stress yourself get knocked around a little so they can save the galaxy over and over again, it's a small price to pay. And anyway, I like being a part of it."]]



* CantActPervertedTowardALoveInterest: Though it might just be "Can't Act Perverted Toward Someone Who Might Kill You For Being Annoying." It's hard to say.



* TheLoad: Jax sees XR as this.

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* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Zod's faction.

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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: the "criminal element" for Star Command.]]

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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: the "criminal element" Parhelia for Star Command.]]



* CheshireCatGrin: It unfortunately makes Jax hard to trust. Ves too, [[SlasherSmile but you shouldn't trust him anyway.]]

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* CheshireCatGrin: It unfortunately makes Jax (and Ves) hard to trust. Ves too, [[SlasherSmile but you shouldn't trust him anyway.]]trust.



* DangerousDeserter: Jax; she has little to lose but her own life. Penumbra could qualify as this as well.

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* MagnificentBastard
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''WARNING!'' This page contains spoilers! They are under spoiler covers, but because this comic is in-progress, if you read them you will still have to wait for them to come to be in the comic itself. I recommend not actually looking at them. I mostly made this page so I could keep myself on track! - hazardgirl

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''WARNING!'' '''WARNING!''' This page contains spoilers! They are under spoiler covers, but because this comic is in-progress, if you read them you will still have to wait for them to come to be in the comic itself. I recommend not actually looking at them. I mostly made this page so I could keep myself on track! - hazardgirl
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[[caption-width-right:150:''[[AngstWhatAngst I want to be wrong,]] [[ConflictingLoyalty but]] [[TheFriendNobodylikes no-one here]] [[BelligerentSexualTension wants to fight me]] [[CantLivewithThemCantLivewithoutThem like you do.]]'']]

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* [[PunchClockVillain Mizar Penumbra,]] a former Zurg operative who defected, reluctantly now on the Zod side of the conflict. Not that he has much choice.

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* [[PunchClockVillain Mizar Penumbra,]] a former Zurg operative who defected, reluctantly now on the Zod side of the conflict. Not that he has much choice.



* AllWorkVsAllPlay: The contractor vs. Ochak.

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* AllWorkVsAllPlay: The contractor vs. Ochak.Ochak; Jax vs. XR



* DangerousDeserter: Jax; she has little to lose but her own life. Mizar could qualify as this as well.

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* DangerousDeserter: Jax; she has little to lose but her own life. Mizar Penumbra could qualify as this as well.



** TheBigGuy: Mizar

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** TheBigGuy: MizarPenumbra



* GameFace: Despite having heat powers Jax is not particularly HotBlooded. But she [[GlowingEyesOfDoom shines]] [[SlasherSmile maybe a little too brightly]] in combat.

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* GameFace: Despite having heat powers Jax is not particularly HotBlooded. But she [[GlowingEyesOfDoom shines]] can be]] [[SlasherSmile maybe a little too brightly]] enthusiastic]] in combat.



* MildlyMilitary: Star Command. Lampshaded, then

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* MildlyMilitary: Star Command. Lampshaded, thenLampshaded.



* Robosexual: Natch.

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* Robosexual: {{Robosexual}}: Natch.



* SpaceOpera

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* SpaceOperaSpaceOpera: Loosely.



** The Scientist: XL, ironically and unironically.

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** The Scientist: TheScientist: XL, ironically and unironically.



** Security Officer: Mizar

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** Security Officer: MizarSecurityOfficer: Penumbra

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* * BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: the "criminal element" for Star Command.]]

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* * BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: the "criminal element" for Star Command.]]


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* Enif,

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* Enif,[[DitzyGenius Enif]], Ves's assistant and apprentice. Inattentive and a bit ditsy, but very smart and ruthless just like her boss.



* Mizar Penumbra, a former Zurg operative who defected, reluctantly now on the Zod side of the conflict. Not that he has much choice.

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* [[PunchClockVillain Mizar Penumbra, Penumbra,]] a former Zurg operative who defected, reluctantly now on the Zod side of the conflict. Not that he has much choice.



* [[spoiler: BattleCouple]]

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* * BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: BattleCouple]]the "criminal element" for Star Command.]]
* BattleCouple: Eventually.



* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Zod. Other members of the ring are less formal.



* [[spoiler: CainAndAbel]]

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* [[spoiler: CainAndAbel]]CainAndAbel



* DeconstructionFic / WarFic:



* [[spoiler: PreClimaxClimax]]



* [[spoiler: Robosexual: Natch.]]

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* [[spoiler: Robosexual: Natch.]]



* TagTeamTwins



* TheCartel: Natch.



* WarFic: Natch!



* WorthyOpponent: Ves eventually comes to see Jax as this.



* ActionGirl: Later, [[spoiler: ActionGirlfriend]]

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* ActionGirl: Later, [[spoiler: ActionGirlfriend]]ActionGirl / ActionGirlfriend



* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: the "criminal element" for Star Command.]]


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* NotSoStoic


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* ChaoticNeutral
* [[InsectoidAliens Insectoid Alien]]
* MagnificentBastard

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* SecretWeapon: Zurg has a new one almost every episode, but this time [[spoiler: it's a [[HiddenArmyReveal Secret Army.]]]]



* [[spoiler: TheDogBitesBack]]

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* [[spoiler: TheDogBitesBack]]CommandRoster:
** TheCaptain / AcePilot: Ves
** NumberTwo / TheMarine: Jax
** WrenchWench: Rose
** The Scientist: XL, ironically and unironically.
** CunningLinguist / TheMedic: XR
** CommunicationsOfficer / TheShrink: Enora
** Security Officer: Mizar



* ThirdEye: Jax and Ves.


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* VillainessesWantHeroes: Jax and XR, in a very understated sense.


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* TheSoCalledCoward


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* [[AloofDarkHairedgirl Aloof Dark Haired Boy]]
* ALphaBitch: A rare male example. Ves was this as a teenager, and never quite grew out of it. It's only ever worked to his advantage.


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* SociopathicSoldier: Though he is Zod's first lieutenant.

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