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**Jax is no-nonsense and hot-blooded. She uses fire-powered-fisticuffs.
**Ves is cold, clinical and methodical. Despite having natural powers like his sister, he prefers knives and small, quiet guns.
**Enif is energetic, bubbly and ruthless. She uses acrobatics, and colorful katanas.
**Penumbra is pragmatic and down-to-earth. He uses infantry-centered weapons and is no stranger to hand-to-hand combat.
**Jax is no-nonsense and hot-blooded. She uses fire-powered-fisticuffs.
**Ves is cold, clinical and methodical. Despite having natural powers like his sister, he prefers knives and small, quiet guns.
**Enif is energetic, bubbly and ruthless. She uses acrobatics, and colorful katanas.
**Penumbra is pragmatic and down-to-earth. He uses infantry-centered weapons and is no stranger to hand-to-hand combat.
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about a convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here.]]
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'''''Line Rockets''''' is an in-progress [[BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand Buzz Lightyear of Star Command]] fan comic about a convict named Jax who, in exchange for early release from prison, agrees to assist Star Command in infiltrating and taking down a drug ring she used to be a part of. You can read it [[http://hazard-girl.deviantart.com/gallery/46961217 here.]]
here,]] [[http://linerockets.webcomic.ws/ here]] or even [[http://line-rockets.tumblr.com/ here!]]
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'''"Primus"''', Formerly known as Autopilot 99. Alleged robot supremacist, really all he wants is a little justice.
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'''"Primus"''', Formerly Autopilot 99. Alleged robot supremacist, really all he wants is a little justice.
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* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: Jax's cuts and stab wounds wound scars on her hip.
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* AdultFear: Jax being [[spoiler: tortured and raped.]] The possibility for XR to [[lose his home and potentially the lives of his friends.]]
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* AdultFear: Jax being [[spoiler: tortured and raped.]] The possibility for XR to [[lose [[spoiler: lose his home and potentially the lives of his friends.]]
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* RunningGag: Jax casually pushing XR over with her foot, Jax CompletelyMissingThePoint when XR tries to flirt with her, them being assumed to be a couple.
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* AdultFear: Jax being [[spoiler: tortured and raped.]] The possibility for XR to [[lose his home and potentially the lives of his friends.]]
* AllGirlsWantBadBoys: Gender-flipped. Especially freeing for XR, for whom the law is just about his entire life despite being the only member of the team openly accepting of moral ambiguity.
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* ArmorPiercingSlap: Delivered to XR in Chapter 5 after he goes too far, not only making fun of Jax's fear of space but implying she can't feel empathy. More like armor piercing punch, but same principle.
-->'''XR''': ''Jax pushes him over''. What is wrong with you?
-->'''Jax''': Me?! You couldn't have mentioned that you come apart like a ''jigsaw puzzle?!''
-->'''XR''': ''That's'' What this is about?
-->'''Jax''': I thought you died!
-->'''XR''': That's the whole reason I was built! I thought you knew!
-->'''Jax''': How could I know?!
-->'''XR''': Why are you even so upset? Worried you'll have to deal with the oh-so-scary spaceflight back to base by yourself?
-->'''Jax''': ''She punches his dome with a loud "crack".'' Go to hell.
-->'''XR''': ''Jax pushes him over''. What is wrong with you?
-->'''Jax''': Me?! You couldn't have mentioned that you come apart like a ''jigsaw puzzle?!''
-->'''XR''': ''That's'' What this is about?
-->'''Jax''': I thought you died!
-->'''XR''': That's the whole reason I was built! I thought you knew!
-->'''Jax''': How could I know?!
-->'''XR''': Why are you even so upset? Worried you'll have to deal with the oh-so-scary spaceflight back to base by yourself?
-->'''Jax''': ''She punches his dome with a loud "crack".'' Go to hell.
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* ShoutOut
**Primus's name is a reference to [[Theatre.RossumsUniversalRobots Rossum’s Universal Robots.]]
**Primus's name is a reference to [[Theatre.RossumsUniversalRobots Rossum’s Universal Robots.]]
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-->''Jax'': Just shut the ''fuck'' up, XR! ''I am not keeping things from you!'' But I am sick to fuck of your bitching! I can drive a ship if I have to, so either shut your fucking mouth and get behind the fucking controls or get off this fucking ship and find your own fucking way to wherever the fuck you want to go! I'm done with this!
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-->''Jax'': Just shut the ''fuck'' up, XR! ''I am not keeping things from you!'' But I am sick to fuck of your bitching! I can drive a ship if I have to, so either shut your fucking mouth and get behind the fucking controls or get off this fucking ship and find your own fucking way to wherever the fuck you want to go! I'm done with this!
-->''Jax'': Just shut the ''fuck'' up, XR! ''I am not keeping things from you!'' But I am sick to fuck of your bitching! I can drive a ship if I have to, so either shut your fucking mouth and get behind the fucking controls or get off this fucking ship and find your own fucking way to wherever the fuck you want to go! I'm done with this!
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--> '''Primus''': Don't tell me you're getting ''soft''.
--> '''Jax''': ''Never.''"]]
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* PoliceState
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* SympatheticPOV: A major theme of the comic. While BuzzLightyearOfStarCommand's main focus is on the best of the best, Line Rockets follows the story of an overconfident but successful criminal turned depressed, JadedWashout being put through a system that favors only depressed and chronically unlucky ex-con, and Team Lightyear's very own ChewToy.
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** TheCaptain / AcePilot: Ves
** NumberTwo / TheMarine: Jax
** WrenchWench: Rose
** TheScientist: XL, ironically and unironically.
** CunningLinguist / TheMedic: XR
** CommunicationsOfficer / TheShrink: Enora
** SecurityOfficer: Penumbra
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** TheCaptain / AcePilot: Ves
** NumberTwo / TheMarine: Jax
** WrenchWench: Rose
** TheScientist: XL, ironically and unironically.
** CunningLinguist / TheMedic: XR
** CommunicationsOfficer / TheShrink: Enora
** SecurityOfficer: Penumbra
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--> '''XR''': First of all, I'm not going to mess up. Second, even if I did, So what? Someone else would put away this Zod guy, you'd go back to prison for another two years and have to eat prison food for another two years? You're a "bad guy"! You can handle it. But it's not going to happen because you're on the side of good, now. The winning side? You should be happy!
--> '''Jax''': Are you even... Listening to what's coming out of your mouth?!
--> '''Jax''': Are you even... Listening to what's coming out of your mouth?!
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* FireForgedFriends / BackToBackBadasses: Jax and XR... Eventually.
* FiveManBand:
** [[TheHero The]][[AntiHero (Anti)]][[TheHero Hero]]: Jax
** TheLancer: XR
** TheBigGuy: Penumbra
** TheSmartGuy: Ves (Or Enora)
** TheChick: Enif
* GadgeteerGenius: Rose, natch.
* FireForgedFriends / BackToBackBadasses: Jax and XR... Eventually.
* FiveManBand:
** [[TheHero The]][[AntiHero (Anti)]][[TheHero Hero]]: Jax
** TheLancer: XR
** TheBigGuy: Penumbra
** TheSmartGuy: Ves (Or Enora)
** TheChick: Enif
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** [[TheHero The]][[AntiHero (Anti)]][[TheHero Hero]]: Jax
** TheLancer: XR
** TheBigGuy: Penumbra
** TheSmartGuy: Ves (Or Enora)
** TheChick: Enif
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* FiveManBand:
** [[TheHero The]][[AntiHero (Anti)]][[TheHero Hero]]: Jax
** TheLancer: XR
** TheBigGuy: Penumbra
** TheSmartGuy: Ves (Or Enora)
** TheChick: Enif
* GadgeteerGenius: Rose, natch.
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* [[spoiler: IntimateHealing: After the DespairEventHorizon; XR does his best.]]
* KickTheDog: Twice,
** Once,When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]
** And the second time [[spoiler: After Zod decides Jax has gone too far in changing his plans, he sends her on a mission that [[KillItWithIce breaks the boundaries of her biology,]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness They are attacked,]] [[DespairEventHorizon and Jax is seriously injured.]]]]
* LadykillerInLove: XR is almost this when he begins to fall for Jax. She sees him as more of a ladykiller than he is, anyway.
* LoweredRecruitingStandards
* [[spoiler: IntimateHealing: After the DespairEventHorizon; XR does his best.]]
* KickTheDog: Twice,
** Once,When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]
** And the second time [[spoiler: After Zod decides Jax has gone too far in changing his plans, he sends her on a mission that [[KillItWithIce breaks the boundaries of her biology,]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness They are attacked,]] [[DespairEventHorizon and Jax is seriously injured.]]]]
* LadykillerInLove: XR is almost this when he begins to fall for Jax. She sees him as more of a ladykiller than he is, anyway.
* LoweredRecruitingStandards
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* InHarmsWay: Natch.
* [[spoiler: IntimateHealing: AfterKickTheDog: When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the DespairEventHorizon; XR does his best.capture.]]
* KickTheDog: Twice,
** Once,When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]
** And the second time [[spoiler: After Zod decides Jax has gone too far in changing his plans, he sends her on a mission that [[KillItWithIce breaks the boundaries of her biology,]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness They are attacked,]] [[DespairEventHorizon and Jax is seriously injured.]]]]
* LadykillerInLove: XR is almost Depending on your view of XR, he's this when he begins to fall for Jax. She sees him as more of a ladykiller than he is, anyway.
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*LoweredRecruitingStandards[[spoiler: LoweredRecruitingStandards]]: A major alleged roadblock for Star Command.
* [[spoiler: IntimateHealing: After
** Once,When a rival gang captures her, Jax gives away valuable information, [[InterrogatedForNothing but that wasn't the]] [[PastVictimShowcase point of the capture.]]
** And the second time [[spoiler: After Zod decides Jax has gone too far in changing his plans, he sends her on a mission that [[KillItWithIce breaks the boundaries of her biology,]] [[YouHaveOutlivedYourUsefulness They are attacked,]] [[DespairEventHorizon and Jax is seriously injured.]]]]
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* ObliviousToLove: Of the [[BrokenBird unworthy of love]] variety. XR tries to flirt with Jax multiple times, she never picks up on it.
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* CantActPervertedTowardALoveInterest: Though it might just be "Can't Act Perverted Toward Someone Who Might Kill You For Being Annoying." It's hard to say.
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* TheLoad: Jax sees XR as this.
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* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Zod's faction.
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* ArmyOfThievesAndWhores: Zod's faction.(alleged) army.
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: the "criminal element" for Star Command.]]
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* BadGuysDoTheDirtyWork: Jax for XR, eventually [[spoiler: the "criminal element" Parhelia for Star Command.]]
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* CheshireCatGrin: It unfortunately makes Jax hard to trust. Ves too, [[SlasherSmile but you shouldn't trust him anyway.]]
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* LadykillerInLove: XR is almost this when he begins to fall for Jax. She sees him as more of a ladykiller than he is, anyway.
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* [[PunchClockVillain Mizar Penumbra,]] a former Zurg operative who defected, reluctantly now on the Zod side of the conflict. Not that he has much choice.
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* GameFace: Despite having heat powers Jax is not particularly HotBlooded. But she [[GlowingEyesOfDoom shines]] [[SlasherSmile maybe a little too brightly]] in combat.
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* BattleCouple: Eventually.
* BattleCouple: Eventually.
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* BlackmailIsSuchAnUglyWord: Zod. Other members of the ring are less formal.
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* WorthyOpponent: Ves eventually comes to see Jax as this.
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* SecretWeapon: Zurg has a new one almost every episode, but this time [[spoiler: it's a [[HiddenArmyReveal Secret Army.]]]]
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** TheCaptain / AcePilot: Ves
** NumberTwo / TheMarine: Jax
** WrenchWench: Rose
** The Scientist: XL, ironically and unironically.
** CunningLinguist / TheMedic: XR
** CommunicationsOfficer / TheShrink: Enora
** Security Officer: Mizar
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** NumberTwo / TheMarine: Jax
** WrenchWench: Rose
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* ALphaBitch: A rare male example. Ves was this as a teenager, and never quite grew out of it. It's only ever worked to his advantage.
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* SociopathicSoldier: Though he is Zod's first lieutenant.