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* BehindTheMask: All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. Joshua breaks tis rule constantly and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it. He even has a photo album of all of the people he's protected
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* BehindTheMask: BeneathTheMask: All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. Joshua breaks tis rule constantly and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it. He even has a photo album of all of the people he's protected
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* ApocalypseHow: A class 6 example of omniversal scope is what will happen is Josh or Heath don't die. Also a class 6 example is the Vanishing, but much smaller in scale, limited to the person and the events he wants to erase.
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Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. In his dimension however, somethings changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfishness, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to end his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could have more power, and even gain a form in the real world. Joshua denies, and the creature, which claims itself to be named "Real", beats him up, trying to kill him. As Josh becomes weaker and weaker, his Vanishing stats to fall apart, and traces of the past which he had erased started to resurface. Wendy and Kyle, now married, begin to remember the events of the war between them and the Orde. Meanwhile, Josh finally decides to let go, and escapes the sealed realm, and searched for his best friend. Once he finds them, on the brink of death, he is helped by the two friends, who are now foully in possession of their old memories. When he exited the sealed relm, the Gift and the war that had broken out to rule the Gifted had returned to everyone whoi had been involved. A few months after Josh's return, he went and found the people from the newly restored First and Second Orde and explained the situation to them, and that they were not to use the Gift, no matter how desperate they were. The continued use of the Gift's powers however, were doing exactly what Real wanted
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Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. In his dimension however, somethings changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfishness, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to end his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could have more power, and even gain a form in the real world. Joshua denies, and the creature, which claims itself to be named "Real", beats him up, trying to kill him. As Josh becomes weaker and weaker, his Vanishing stats to fall apart, and traces of the past which he had erased started to resurface. Wendy and Kyle, now married, begin to remember the events of the war between them and the Orde. Meanwhile, Josh finally decides to let go, and escapes the sealed realm, and searched for his best friend. Once he finds them, on the brink of death, he is helped by the two friends, who are now foully in possession of their old memories. When he exited the sealed relm, realm, the Gift and the war that had broken out to rule the Gifted had returned to everyone whoi who had been involved. A few months after Josh's return, he went and found the people from the newly restored First and Second Orde and explained the situation to them, and that they were not to use the Gift, no matter how desperate they were. The continued use of the Gift's powers however, were doing exactly what Real wantedwanted. Real managed to obtain a form in real life, and went after Joshua, because his Vanishing and existence is in conflict with another's. he has to die or the world will end and he is going to end with it. Just when Joshua, Kyle and Wendy are about to die, a mysterious eight year old boy appears out of nowhere and helps them escape. He says his name is Heath, and he is the one who did the first Vanishing, and the one who created the Gift.
* LethalChef: Joshua is revealed to be this in ''Alternate Stories'', in contrast with Kyle who is a SupremeChef.
* TrademarkFavoriteFood: In ''Alternate Stories'' candy is heath's favorite food. Josh's favourite food is bread.
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Josh retains the memories of how the events were in origin, being the one who caused the change.
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Josh retains the memories of how the events were in origin, being the one who caused the change. Heath also has the original memories.
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* UnwittingPawn: The First Orde higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kyle to find the reality re writers.
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* SomeoneHasToDie: Either Heath or Joshua, otherwise the world will disappear. Josh however doesn't know this, and thinks that heis the only one that has to die. Heath ends up sacrificing himself.
* SupremeChef: Kyle is this.
* UnwittingPawn: The First Orde higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and usingpeople like Joshua and Kyle the Masters to find the reality re writers.
* SupremeChef: Kyle is this.
* UnwittingPawn: The First Orde higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to re-write reality itself. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they poses, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle Silven, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to re-write reality itself. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they poses, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle Silven, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
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The story is devided in two parts: The Vanishing and The Vestige. Each of the parts are devided in seven and five chapters respectively.
The story is devided in two parts: The Vanishing and The Vestige. Each of the parts are devided in seven and five chapters respectively.
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* TheReveal: ''Rheiss'' was ordering the kidnaping of the Gifted, not Martin, and it was his fault Martin was ill
** Ariane is working for The Second Orde
** Ariane is working for The Second Orde
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* TheReveal: ''Rheiss'' was ordering the kidnaping of the Gifted, kidnapings, not Martin, and it was his fault Martin was ill
** Ariane is the secret agent working for The Second Orde
** Ariane is the secret agent working for The Second Orde
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* SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere/TheUnderworld: More like sealed ''dimension'', which is where the Vanished people go. You ''can'' technically escape, but it would mean ending your Vanishing and reset the world as it was when you left it.
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* SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere/TheUnderworld: SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere[=/=]TheUnderworld: More like sealed ''dimension'', which is where the Vanished people go. You ''can'' technically escape, but it would mean ending your Vanishing and reset the world as it was when you left it.
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* BadassAbnormal: the people in the first masquerade actually have reality bending powers but only to the very minimum possible extent. This results many times in WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway. For example Josh can [[PaperMaster make paper do stuff on its own.]] Of course, because it's the only thing they have, most of them manage to make HeartIsAnAwesomePower
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* ConsummateProfessional: All of the people in The First Orde are supposed to be this. Of course number one has Joshua and Kyle, who break this rule constantly and masquerade two is full of people that care only for themselves.
* TheReveal: ''Rheiss'' was ordering the kidnaping of the Gifted, not Martin, and it was his fault Martin was ill
** Ariane is working for The Second Orde
** Heath is the one who made the Gift
** Ariane is working for The Second Orde
** Heath is the one who made the Gift
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* SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere: More like sealed ''dimension'', which is where the Vanished people go. You ''can'' technically escape, but it would mean ending your Vanishing and reset the world as it was when you left it.
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* SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere: SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere/TheUnderworld: More like sealed ''dimension'', which is where the Vanished people go. You ''can'' technically escape, but it would mean ending your Vanishing and reset the world as it was when you left it.
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* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kyle to find the reality re writers.
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* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's First Orde higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kyle to find the reality re writers.
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* WhereTheHellIsSpringfield: the location in which the story takes place is never revealed.
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Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. In his dimension however, somethings changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfishness, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to end his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could have more power, and even gain a form in the real world. Joshua denies, and the creature, which claims itself to be named "Real", beats him up, trying to kill him. As Josh becomes weaker and weaker, his Vanishing stats to fall apart, and traces of the past which he had erased started to resurface. Wendy and Kyle, now married, begin to remember the events of the war between them and the Orde. Meanwhile, Josh finally decides to let go, and escapes the sealed realm, and searched for his best friend.
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Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. In his dimension however, somethings changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfishness, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to end his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could have more power, and even gain a form in the real world. Joshua denies, and the creature, which claims itself to be named "Real", beats him up, trying to kill him. As Josh becomes weaker and weaker, his Vanishing stats to fall apart, and traces of the past which he had erased started to resurface. Wendy and Kyle, now married, begin to remember the events of the war between them and the Orde. Meanwhile, Josh finally decides to let go, and escapes the sealed realm, and searched for his best friend. Once he finds them, on the brink of death, he is helped by the two friends, who are now foully in possession of their old memories. When he exited the sealed relm, the Gift and the war that had broken out to rule the Gifted had returned to everyone whoi had been involved. A few months after Josh's return, he went and found the people from the newly restored First and Second Orde and explained the situation to them, and that they were not to use the Gift, no matter how desperate they were. The continued use of the Gift's powers however, were doing exactly what Real wanted
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* MadeOfEvil: Real is made of greed, selfishness and anger of the peope who were Gifted, a sort of SuperpoweredEvilSide.
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* MadeOfEvil: Real is made of greed, selfishness and anger of the peope people who were Gifted, a sort of SuperpoweredEvilSide.
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* HesBack: Joshua, after escaping the sealed dimension.
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-> " Josh, 'know why the Vanishing is such a great idea? 'Cause the Gift only works when the Gifted lives, and the Vanishing makes a person immortal. However, it makes them immortal only to time, not wounds. But, you can't wound or kill a man that doesn't exist, so that loophole is fixed. But, Josh, ''I'' know you exist. And I ''can, and will'' kill you, and with you, your Vanishing."
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-> " Josh, 'know why the Vanishing is such a great idea? 'Cause the Gift only works when the Gifted lives, and the Vanishing makes a person immortal.immortal, so no need to worry. However, it makes them immortal only to time, not wounds. But, you can't wound or kill a man that doesn't exist, so that loophole is fixed. But, Josh, ''I'' know you exist. And I ''can, and will'' kill you, and with you, your Vanishing."
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* RippleEffectProofMemory: Josh retains the memories of how the events were in origin, being the one who caused the change.
* SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere: More like sealed ''dimension'', which is where the Vanished people go. You ''can'' technically escape, but it would mean ending your Vanishing and reset the world as it was when you left it.
* SealedRoomInTheMiddleOfNowhere: More like sealed ''dimension'', which is where the Vanished people go. You ''can'' technically escape, but it would mean ending your Vanishing and reset the world as it was when you left it.
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The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returns home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane searching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using the information that The First Orde is providing, they scout various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Joshua and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer is for Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimension so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity. He desperately fights against this fate, and searches for another way of ending the Gift's existence. But he is now being chased by both the First and Second Orde, who now have the power of the Gift, which they obtained by forcing the Gifted to do their bidding. Kyle and Josh fight back, trying to protect Wendy, who cannot correctly use her powers yet, but they are soon defeated. Seeing Kyle, who is now facing death, and Wendy, who faces an existence of imprisonment by the Orde, trying to fight and win an winnable fight, Josh decides to succumb to his fate, and commits the Vanishing. Resetting the world to the state it was before the events of the war began, he erases every trace of trace of the Gift and himself from the world. He is destined to be forgotten by the world, and neither Kyle nor Wendy, who were in love now, would remember him.//
''Part 2: The Vestige.''//
''Part 2: The Vestige.''//
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''Part 1: The Vanishing''\\
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returns home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane searching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using the information that The First Orde is providing, they scout various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Joshua and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer is for Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimension so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity. He desperately fights against this fate, and searches for another way of ending the Gift's existence. But he is now being chased by both the First and Second Orde, who now have the power of the Gift, which they obtained by forcing the Gifted to do their bidding. Kyle and Josh fight back, trying to protect Wendy, who cannot correctly use her powers yet, but they are soon defeated. Seeing Kyle, who is now facing death, and Wendy, who faces an existence of imprisonment by the Orde, trying to fight and win an winnable fight, Josh decides to succumb to his fate, and commits the Vanishing. Resetting the world to the state it was before the events of the war began, he erases every trace of trace of the Gift and himself from the world. He is destined to be forgotten by the world, and neither Kyle nor Wendy, who were in love now, would rememberhim.//
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''Part 2: The Vestige.''//''\\
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returns home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane searching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using the information that The First Orde is providing, they scout various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Joshua and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer is for Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimension so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity. He desperately fights against this fate, and searches for another way of ending the Gift's existence. But he is now being chased by both the First and Second Orde, who now have the power of the Gift, which they obtained by forcing the Gifted to do their bidding. Kyle and Josh fight back, trying to protect Wendy, who cannot correctly use her powers yet, but they are soon defeated. Seeing Kyle, who is now facing death, and Wendy, who faces an existence of imprisonment by the Orde, trying to fight and win an winnable fight, Josh decides to succumb to his fate, and commits the Vanishing. Resetting the world to the state it was before the events of the war began, he erases every trace of trace of the Gift and himself from the world. He is destined to be forgotten by the world, and neither Kyle nor Wendy, who were in love now, would remember
''Part 2: The Vestige.
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to re-write reality itself. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they posess, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle Silven, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer is for Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity. He despereatly fights against this fate, and searches for another way of ending the Gift's existstance. But he is now being chased by both the First and Second orde, who now have the power of the Gift, whichthey obtained by forcing the Hifted to do their bidding. Kyle and Josh fight back, trying to protect Wendy, who cannot correctly wse her powers yet, but they are soon defeated. Seeing Kyle, who is now facind death, and Webdy, who faces an existance of imprisonment by the Orde, on the ground Josh decides to succumb to his fate, and commits the Vanishing. Resetting the world to the state it was before the events of the war began, he eraces every trace of trace of the Gift and himself from the world. He is destined to be forgotten by the world, and neither Kyle nor Wendy, who were in love now, would remember him.
''Part 2: The Vestige.''
Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. Inside the dimension in which Josh is locked in, the time flows differentlty and for him, it had already been 10 years since he had been in the real world. In this dimension however, somethis has changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfisnesh, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to dnd his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer is for Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity. He despereatly fights against this fate, and searches for another way of ending the Gift's existstance. But he is now being chased by both the First and Second orde, who now have the power of the Gift, whichthey obtained by forcing the Hifted to do their bidding. Kyle and Josh fight back, trying to protect Wendy, who cannot correctly wse her powers yet, but they are soon defeated. Seeing Kyle, who is now facind death, and Webdy, who faces an existance of imprisonment by the Orde, on the ground Josh decides to succumb to his fate, and commits the Vanishing. Resetting the world to the state it was before the events of the war began, he eraces every trace of trace of the Gift and himself from the world. He is destined to be forgotten by the world, and neither Kyle nor Wendy, who were in love now, would remember him.
''Part 2: The Vestige.''
Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. Inside the dimension in which Josh is locked in, the time flows differentlty and for him, it had already been 10 years since he had been in the real world. In this dimension however, somethis has changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfisnesh, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to dnd his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to re-write reality itself. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they posess, poses, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle Silven, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, hereturnes returns home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching searching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation the information that The First Orde is providing, they scou scout various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha Joshua and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer is for Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention dimension so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity. He despereatly desperately fights against this fate, and searches for another way of ending the Gift's existstance. existence. But he is now being chased by both the First and Second orde, Orde, who now have the power of the Gift, whichthey which they obtained by forcing the Hifted Gifted to do their bidding. Kyle and Josh fight back, trying to protect Wendy, who cannot correctly wse use her powers yet, but they are soon defeated. Seeing Kyle, who is now facind facing death, and Webdy, Wendy, who faces an existance existence of imprisonment by the Orde, on the ground trying to fight and win an winnable fight, Josh decides to succumb to his fate, and commits the Vanishing. Resetting the world to the state it was before the events of the war began, he eraces erases every trace of trace of the Gift and himself from the world. He is destined to be forgotten by the world, and neither Kyle nor Wendy, who were in love now, would remember him.
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''Part 2: The Vestige.''
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Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished.Inside the dimension in which Josh is locked in, the time flows differentlty and for him, it had already been 10 years since he had been in the real world. In this his dimension however, somethis has somethings changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfisnesh, selfishness, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to dnd end his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could have more power, and even gain a form in the real world. Joshua denies, and the creature, which claims itself to be named "Real", beats him up, trying to kill him. As Josh becomes weaker and weaker, his Vanishing stats to fall apart, and traces of the past which he had erased started to resurface. Wendy and Kyle, now married, begin to remember the events of the war between them and the Orde. Meanwhile, Josh finally decides to let go, and escapes the sealed realm, and searched for his best friend.
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he
''Part 2: The Vestige.
Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished.
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* OhCrap: Real, explaining the the Vanishing doesn't make a person completely immortal:
-> " Josh, 'know why the Vanishing is such a great idea? 'Cause the Gift only works when the Gifted lives, and the Vanishing makes a person immortal. However, it makes them immortal only to time, not wounds. But, you can't wound or kill a man that doesn't exist, so that loophole is fixed. But, Josh, ''I'' know you exist. And I ''can, and will'' kill you, and with you, your Vanishing."
-> " Josh, 'know why the Vanishing is such a great idea? 'Cause the Gift only works when the Gifted lives, and the Vanishing makes a person immortal. However, it makes them immortal only to time, not wounds. But, you can't wound or kill a man that doesn't exist, so that loophole is fixed. But, Josh, ''I'' know you exist. And I ''can, and will'' kill you, and with you, your Vanishing."
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to re-write reality itself]]. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they posess, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle Silven, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer leads Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity.
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer leads Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity.
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to re-write reality itself]].itself. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they posess, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle Silven, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
shadows]].
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answerleads is for Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity.humanity. He despereatly fights against this fate, and searches for another way of ending the Gift's existstance. But he is now being chased by both the First and Second orde, who now have the power of the Gift, whichthey obtained by forcing the Hifted to do their bidding. Kyle and Josh fight back, trying to protect Wendy, who cannot correctly wse her powers yet, but they are soon defeated. Seeing Kyle, who is now facind death, and Webdy, who faces an existance of imprisonment by the Orde, on the ground Josh decides to succumb to his fate, and commits the Vanishing. Resetting the world to the state it was before the events of the war began, he eraces every trace of trace of the Gift and himself from the world. He is destined to be forgotten by the world, and neither Kyle nor Wendy, who were in love now, would remember him.
''Part 2: The Vestige.''
Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. Inside the dimension in which Josh is locked in, the time flows differentlty and for him, it had already been 10 years since he had been in the real world. In this dimension however, somethis has changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfisnesh, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to dnd his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer
''Part 2: The Vestige.''
Part two takes places 3 years after Joshua Vanished. Inside the dimension in which Josh is locked in, the time flows differentlty and for him, it had already been 10 years since he had been in the real world. In this dimension however, somethis has changed. From the use of the Gift in the final act of the war, a creature was born, made of greed, pride and selfisnesh, who only wished to become stronger. He finds Josh and tells him to dnd his Vanishing and bring back the Gift so that he could
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to re-write reality itself]]. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they posess, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle, Kyle Silven, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].shadows]].
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer leads Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity.
The story begins as Joshua is intent on searching a building where the 18th birthday of Wendy Reenra, who is a Gifted he is protecting, is happening. After the ball takes place, and Wendy and Josh dance, he returnes home, to the HQ of The First Orde where his love, Ariane and Kyle, his best friend, are waiting for him. After a series of events, Joshua discovers Ariane seartching through files in his office. After having been asked what she was doing, Ariane reveals that she is working against The First Orde and stabs him. From that point onward, Kyle and Josha try to find her and understand what drove her to change side. Using thr ingormation that The First Orde is providing, they scou various locations, in vain. All the information however is false, for the Orde manipulating the Masters into finding the Gifted so that they could keep their powers for themselves. One day, The First Orde decides to get rid of all the Masters, so that they alone could know where the Gifted were. So Josha and Kylee are forced to run from the place they had called home and save Wendy from her abductors of The First Orde. Together they try to find a way to end the powers which were causing the war. The answer leads Josh to "Vanish" and for ever be locked away in another dimention so that he could protect the knowledge of the Gift from humanity.
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to [[RealtyWraper Re-Write reality itself]]. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they posess, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
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[[TheMasquerade The First Orde]] is an organization which works to protect the persons born with "The Gift", which allows them to [[RealtyWraper Re-Write re-write reality itself]]. The First Orde's job is finding and protecting these people from those who wold want to abuse of the powers and use them to enslave humanity. The people with The Gift however do not know about the power they posess, so it is virtually impossible to tell them apart from normal people. The only ones that can recognize the are "Masters", people with a tiny part of The Gift. The story revolves around Joshua Knightly who is a Master that can [[PaperMaster control paper]] and Kyle, another master that can [[LivingShadow control shadows]].
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A story which narrates TheMasquerade in a world where people some are born [[{{Muggles}} normal]] others are born with the power to [[RealityWarper rewrite reality itself.]] Two [[TheMasquerade Masquerades]] exist: one is trying to hide and protect the ones who can rewrite reality from the people who would abuse of it. The people who ''would'' abuse of it are part of the second Masquerade and want keep the power for themselves, to satisfy greed, lust, to put an end the ''existence'' of a rival or restore pride. The main character is Joshua Nightly, a man who serves the first Masquerade.
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* ConsummateProfessional: All of the people in the Masquerade, be it the number one or the number two, are supposed to be this. Of course number one has Joshua and Kyle, who break this rule constantly and masquerade two is full of people that care only for themselves.
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* ConsummateProfessional: All of the people in the Masquerade, be it the number one or the number two, The First Orde are supposed to be this. Of course number one has Joshua and Kyle, who break this rule constantly and masquerade two is full of people that care only for themselves.
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* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality rewriting powers, Josh and Kyle, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
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* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality rewriting powers, Josh and Kyle, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, The First Orde, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
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* LethalHarmlessPowers: If a person has a lame power, you can bet they fond a smrat way of using it.
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* LethalHarmlessPowers: If a person has a lame power, you can bet they fond a smrat way of using it.it lethaly
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* HeroicSacrifice: Joshua [[RetGone Ret Gones]] himself to erase the reality re writing abilityes
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* HeroicSacrifice: Joshua [[RetGone Ret Gones]] Ret-Gonned]] himself to erase the reality re writing abilityesabilities
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# One can pass onto another person the responsibility of keeping the re-writed reality intact, so basically if someone knows what the change ahas been, they can keep it that way.
# One choses to [[RetGone "vanish",]] which means the person acquires a sort of immortality, [[FateWorseThanDeath but are destined never to make contact with other people and if they do, they would immediately forget about them.]]
# One choses to [[RetGone "vanish",]] which means the person acquires a sort of immortality, [[FateWorseThanDeath but are destined never to make contact with other people and if they do, they would immediately forget about them.]]
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* HeroicSacrifice: Joshua [[RetGon Ret Gones]] himself to erase the reality re writing abilityes
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* HeroicSacrifice: Joshua [[RetGon [[RetGone Ret Gones]] himself to erase the reality re writing abilityes
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A story which narrates TheMasquerade in a world where people some are born [[{{Muggles}} normal]] others are born with the power to [[RealityWarper rewrite reality itself.]] Two [[TheMasquerade Masquerades]] exist: one is trying to hide and protect the ones who can rewrite reality from the people who would abuse of it. The people who would abuse of it are part of the second Masquerade, who try to eliminate the first and keep the power for themselves, to satisfy greed, lust, to put an end the ''existence'' of a rival or restore pride. The main character is Joshua Nightly, a man who serves the first Masquerade.
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A story which narrates TheMasquerade in a world where people some are born [[{{Muggles}} normal]] others are born with the power to [[RealityWarper rewrite reality itself.]] Two [[TheMasquerade Masquerades]] exist: one is trying to hide and protect the ones who can rewrite reality from the people who would abuse of it. The people who would ''would'' abuse of it are part of the second Masquerade, who try to eliminate the first Masquerade and want keep the power for themselves, to satisfy greed, lust, to put an end the ''existence'' of a rival or restore pride. The main character is Joshua Nightly, a man who serves the first Masquerade.
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* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kyle are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
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* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kyle are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules Joshua breaks tis rule constantly and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.it. He even has a photo album of all of the people he's protected
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* EnthusiasmVersusStoicism: Josh is Stoic, Kyle is Enthusiastic; Also Ariane.
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* EnthusiasmVersusStoicism: Josh is Stoic, Kyle is Enthusiastic; Also Ariane.Wendy is also an Enthusiast.
* FateWorseThanDeath: Vanishing. You're basically cut off from the rest of the world for ever.
* FateWorseThanDeath: Vanishing. You're basically cut off from the rest of the world for ever.
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* HeartBrokenBadass
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* HeartBrokenBadassHeroicSacrifice: Joshua [[RetGon Ret Gones]] himself to erase the reality re writing abilityes
* NoOntologicalInertia: The reality re writing powers. They are active as long as the caster lives, once he/she dies whatever they changed goes back to being exactly as it was before, no mater how big or important the change has been.
** Can be Averted in two ways:
# One can pass onto another person the responsibility of keeping the re-writed reality intact, so basically if someone knows what the change ahas been, they can keep it that way.
# One choses to [[RetGone "vanish",]] which means the person acquires a sort of immortality, [[FateWorseThanDeath but are destined never to make contact with other people and if they do, they would immediately forget about them.]]
** Can be Averted in two ways:
# One can pass onto another person the responsibility of keeping the re-writed reality intact, so basically if someone knows what the change ahas been, they can keep it that way.
# One choses to [[RetGone "vanish",]] which means the person acquires a sort of immortality, [[FateWorseThanDeath but are destined never to make contact with other people and if they do, they would immediately forget about them.]]
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* ScrewDestiny: Mayor theme of the story. Josh tells everyone that they should fight fate and make their own path. Which makes him a {{Hypocrite}}, because [[TitleDrop his destiny is to vanish, and he does.]]
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* RetGone: Vanishing
* ScrewDestiny: Mayor theme of the story. Josh tells everyone that they should fight fate and make their own path. Which makes him a {{Hypocrite}}, because [[TitleDrop his destiny is tovanish, vanish,]] and he does.]]
* ScrewDestiny: Mayor theme of the story. Josh tells everyone that they should fight fate and make their own path. Which makes him a {{Hypocrite}}, because [[TitleDrop his destiny is to
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* YouAndWhatArmy: Rick mocks Joshua for coming alone to fight his army asking him that. Josh then proceeds to creates his own army, made of paper, which turns out to be a CrubStompBattle [[WhosLaughingNow for Rick.]]
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* YouAndWhatArmy: Rick mocks Joshua for coming alone to fight his army asking him that. Josh then proceeds to creates his own army, made of paper, which turns out to be a CrubStompBattle CurbStompBattle [[WhosLaughingNow for Rick.]]
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Either you have reality rewriting powers that allow you to become basically ''Gods'' or you have this.
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* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Either you have reality rewriting powers that allow you to become basically ''Gods'' or you have this.this.
* YouAndWhatArmy: Rick mocks Joshua for coming alone to fight his army asking him that. Josh then proceeds to creates his own army, made of paper, which turns out to be a CrubStompBattle [[WhosLaughingNow for Rick.]]
* YouAndWhatArmy: Rick mocks Joshua for coming alone to fight his army asking him that. Josh then proceeds to creates his own army, made of paper, which turns out to be a CrubStompBattle [[WhosLaughingNow for Rick.]]
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* LethalHarmlessPowers: If a person has a lame power, you can bet they fond a smrat way of using it.
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* BadassAbnormal: the people in the first masquerade actually have reality bending powers but only to the very minimum possible extent. This results many times in WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway. For example Josh can make paper do stuff on its own. Of course, because it's the only thing they have, most of them manage to make HeartIsAnAwesomePower
* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
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* BadassAbnormal: the people in the first masquerade actually have reality bending powers but only to the very minimum possible extent. This results many times in WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway. For example Josh can [[PaperMaster make paper do stuff on its own. own.]] Of course, because it's the only thing they have, most of them manage to make HeartIsAnAwesomePower
* BehindTheMask: Joshua andKael Kyle are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* BehindTheMask: Joshua and
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* ConsummateProfessional: All of the people in the Masquerade, be it the number one or the number two, are supposed to be this. Of course number one has Joshua and Kael, who break this rule constantly and masquerade two is full of people that care only for themselves.
* DancesAndBalls: A reccuring theme.
* DancesAndBalls: A reccuring theme.
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* ConsummateProfessional: All of the people in the Masquerade, be it the number one or the number two, are supposed to be this. Of course number one has Joshua and Kael, Kyle, who break this rule constantly and masquerade two is full of people that care only for themselves.
* DancesAndBalls: Areccuring recurring theme.
* DancesAndBalls: A
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* EnthusiasmVersusStoicism: Josh is Stoic, Kael is Enthusiastic; Also Ariane.
* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality rewriting powers, Josh and Kael, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality rewriting powers, Josh and Kael, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
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* EnthusiasmVersusStoicism: Josh is Stoic, Kael Kyle is Enthusiastic; Also Ariane.
* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality rewriting powers, Josh andKael, Kyle, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality rewriting powers, Josh and
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* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Literally. Joshua was in love with a woman who was also part of his same masquerade, so this was ok, until he discovered that she was [[TheMole actually working for the ''other'' Masquerade]] and she had to [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade kill him to uphold her end of the Masquerade]].
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* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Literally. Joshua was in love with a woman who was also part of his same masquerade, so this was ok, OK, until he discovered that she was [[TheMole actually working for the ''other'' Masquerade]] and she had to [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade kill him to uphold her end of the Masquerade]].
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* NobleMaleRoguishMale: Joshua and Kael respectively.
* NotQuiteDead: Joshua, who was found and saved by Kael
* NotQuiteDead: Joshua, who was found and saved by Kael
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* NobleMaleRoguishMale: Joshua and Kael Kyle respectively.
* NotQuiteDead: Joshua, who was found and saved byKaelKyle.
* NotQuiteDead: Joshua, who was found and saved by
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* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael to find the reality re writers.
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* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael Kyle to find the reality re writers.
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A story which narrates TheMasquerade in a world where people some are born [[{{Muggles}} normal]] others are born with the power to [[RealityWarper rewrite reality itself. itself.]] Two [[TheMasquerade Masquerades]] exist: one is trying to hide and protect the ones who can rewrite reality from the people who would abuse of it. The people who would abuse of it are part of the second Masquerade, who try to eliminate the first and keep the power for themselves, to satisfy greed, lust, to put an end the ''existence'' of a rival or restore pride. The main character is Joshua Nightly, a man who serves the first Masquerade.
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* BadassAbnormal: the people in the first masquerade actually have reality bending powers but only to the very minimum possible extent. This results many times in WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway. For example Josh can make paper do stuff on its own. Of course, because it's the only thing they have, most of them manage to make HeartIsAnAwsomePower
* BloodFromTheMouth: Joshua when he was stabbed bt Ariane
* BloodFromTheMouth: Joshua when he was stabbed bt Ariane
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* BadassAbnormal: the people in the first masquerade actually have reality bending powers but only to the very minimum possible extent. This results many times in WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway. For example Josh can make paper do stuff on its own. Of course, because it's the only thing they have, most of them manage to make HeartIsAnAwsomePower
HeartIsAnAwesomePower
* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* BloodFromTheMouth: Joshua when he was stabbedbt by Ariane
* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* BloodFromTheMouth: Joshua when he was stabbed
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* DancesAndBalls: A reccuring theme.
** Joshua invites Wendy to dance while protecting her
** Joshua invites Wendy to dance while protecting her
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* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality re writing powers, Josh and Kael, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
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* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality re writing rewriting powers, Josh and Kael, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
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* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael to find the reality re writers
* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael to find the reality re writers
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* BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All RealityWarper: Some people can do this.
* ScrewDestiny: Mayor theme of thepeople in the Masquerade are not supposed story. Josh tells everyone that they should fight fate and make their own path. Which makes him a {{Hypocrite}}, because [[TitleDrop his destiny is to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules vanish, and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
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* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael to find the reality rewriterswriters.
* ScrewDestiny: Mayor theme of the
* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael to find the reality re
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** Hey, what's that thing the higher ups said? Wait, what?! You are actually trying to keep the power away from the other Masquerade, ''[[CorruptCorporateExecutive so you can keep it for yourselves?!]]''
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** Hey, what's that thing the higher ups said? Wait, what?! You are actually trying to keep the power away from the other Masquerade, ''[[CorruptCorporateExecutive so you can keep it for yourselves?!]]''yourselves?!]]''
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Either you have reality rewriting powers that allow you to become basically ''Gods'' or you have this.
* WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway: Either you have reality rewriting powers that allow you to become basically ''Gods'' or you have this.
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* AlmightyJanitor: Joshua
* BadassAbnormal: the people in the first masquerade actually have reality bending powers but only to the very minimum possible extent. This results many times in WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway. For example Josh can make paper do stuff on its own. Of course, because it's the only thing they have, most of them manage to make HeartIsAnAwsomePower
* BadassAbnormal: the people in the first masquerade actually have reality bending powers but only to the very minimum possible extent. This results many times in WhatKindOfLamePowerIsHeartAnyway. For example Josh can make paper do stuff on its own. Of course, because it's the only thing they have, most of them manage to make HeartIsAnAwsomePower
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* GoBackToTheSource: To finally put an end to the reality re writing powers, Josh and Kael, after having been betrayed by their Masquerade, travel to the source to destroy the powers forever.
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* LadyAndNight: Josh is this to every lady, though the story focuses on Wendy mostly
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* LadyAndNight: LadyAndKnight: Josh is this to every lady, though the story focuses on Wendy mostlymostly.
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* NobleMaleRouguishMale: Joshua and Kael respectively.
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* NobleMaleRouguishMale: NobleMaleRoguishMale: Joshua and Kael respectively.
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* EnthusiasmVersusStoicism: Josh is Stoic, Kael is Enthusiastic; Also Ariane.
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* LadyAndNight: Josh is this to every lady, though the story focuses on Wendy mostly
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* NobleMaleRouguishMale: Joshua and Kael respectively.
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* MutualMaquerade: Joshua and Ariane were working in the same Masquerade. [[TheMole Sort of.]]
* NotQuiteDeadYet: Joshua, who was found and saved by Kael
* NotQuiteDeadYet: Joshua, who was found and saved by Kael
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* MutualMaquerade: MutualMasquerade: Joshua and Ariane were working in the same Masquerade. [[TheMole Sort of.]]
*NotQuiteDeadYet: NotQuiteDead: Joshua, who was found and saved by Kael
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* UnderTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
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* UnderTheMask: BehindTheMask: Joshua and Kael are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Joshua when he was stabbed bt Ariane
* LoveInterestTraitor: Ariane To Joshua
* NotQuiteDeadYet: Joshua, who was found and saved by Kael
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* UnderTheMask: Joshua and Kael is very guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* WhamEpisode: Hey, what's Ariane doing in Josh's office? Oh, Wait, what?! Did Ariane just knife Joshua?!
* WhamEpisode: Hey, what's Ariane doing in Josh's office? Oh, Wait, what?! Did Ariane just knife Joshua?!
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* UnderTheMask: Joshua and Kael is very are guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael to find the reality re writers
* WhamEpisode: Hey, what's Ariane doing in Josh's office? Oh, Wait, what?! Did Ariane just knifeJoshua?!Joshua?!
** Hey, what's that thing the higher ups said? Wait, what?! You are actually trying to keep the power away from the other Masquerade, ''[[CorruptCorporateExecutive so you can keep it for yourselves?!]]''
* UnwittingPawn: The first Masquerade's higher ups are actually trying to keep the power for themselves and using people like Joshua and Kael to find the reality re writers
* WhamEpisode: Hey, what's Ariane doing in Josh's office? Oh, Wait, what?! Did Ariane just knife
** Hey, what's that thing the higher ups said? Wait, what?! You are actually trying to keep the power away from the other Masquerade, ''[[CorruptCorporateExecutive so you can keep it for yourselves?!]]''
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A story which narrates TheMasquerade in a world where people some are born [[Muggles normal]] others are born with the power to rewrite reality itself. Two [[TheMasquerade Masquerades]] exist: one is trying to hide and protect the ones who can rewrite reality from the people who would abuse of it. The people who would abuse of it are part of the second Masquerade, who try to eliminate the first and keep the power for themselves, to satisfy greed, lust, to put an end the ''existence'' of a rival or restore pride. The main character is Joshua Nightly, a man who serves the first Masquerade.
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A story which narrates TheMasquerade in a world where people some are born [[Muggles [[{{Muggles}} normal]] others are born with the power to rewrite reality itself. Two [[TheMasquerade Masquerades]] exist: one is trying to hide and protect the ones who can rewrite reality from the people who would abuse of it. The people who would abuse of it are part of the second Masquerade, who try to eliminate the first and keep the power for themselves, to satisfy greed, lust, to put an end the ''existence'' of a rival or restore pride. The main character is Joshua Nightly, a man who serves the first Masquerade.
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* UnderTheMask: Joshua is very guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
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* UnderTheMask: Joshua is very guilty of this. ComingOfAge: Wendy
* ConsummateProfessional: All of the people in theMasquerade Masquerade, be it the number one or the number two, are not supposed to get to attached to the be this. Of course number one has Joshua and Kael, who break this rule constantly and masquerade two is full of people they're protecting. He completely broke that care only for themselves.
* DancesAndBalls: Joshua invites Wendy to dance while protecting her
* DanceOfRomance: Joshua and Ariane dance together therules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.first time they meet
* HeartBrokenBadass
* ConsummateProfessional: All of the people in the
* DancesAndBalls: Joshua invites Wendy to dance while protecting her
* DanceOfRomance: Joshua and Ariane dance together the
* HeartBrokenBadass
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* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Literally. Joshua was in love with a woman who was also part of his same masquerade, so this was ok, until he discovered that she was [[DoubleAgent actually working for the ''other'' Masquerade]] and she had to [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade kill him to uphold her end of the Masquerade]].
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* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Literally. Joshua was in love with a woman who was also part of his same masquerade, so this was ok, until he discovered that she was [[DoubleAgent [[TheMole actually working for the ''other'' Masquerade]] and she had to [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade kill him to uphold her end of the Masquerade]].
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* TrueBlueFemininity: Nearly all of Wendy's clothing is light blue.
* UnderTheMask: Joshua and Kael is very guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* UnderTheMask: Joshua and Kael is very guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
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A story which narrates TheMasquerade in a world where people some are born [[Muggles normal]] others are born with the power to rewrite reality itself. Two [[TheMasquerade Masquerades]] exist: one is trying to hide and protect the ones who can rewrite reality from the people who would abuse of it. The people who would abuse of it are part of the second Masquerade, who try to eliminate the first and keep the power for themselves, to satisfy greed, lust, to put an end the ''existence'' of a rival or restore pride. The main character is Joshua Nightly, a man who serves the first Masquerade.
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* UnderTheMask: Joshua is very guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* TheMasquerade: Of Course
* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Literally. Joshua was in love with a woman who was also part of his same masquerade, so this was ok, until he discovered that she was [[DoubleAgent actually working for the ''other'' Masquerade]] and she had to [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade kill him to uphold her end of the Masquerade]].
* MutualMaquerade: Joshua and Ariane were working in the same Masquerade. [[TheMole Sort of.]]
* WhamEpisode: Hey, what's Ariane doing in Josh's office? Oh, Wait, what?! Did Ariane just knife Joshua?!
!! Tropes:
* UnderTheMask: Joshua is very guilty of this. All of the people in the Masquerade are not supposed to get to attached to the people they're protecting. He completely broke the rules and he cares for them deeply, even though he has to hide it.
* TheMasquerade: Of Course
* TheMasqueradeWillKillYourDatingLife: Literally. Joshua was in love with a woman who was also part of his same masquerade, so this was ok, until he discovered that she was [[DoubleAgent actually working for the ''other'' Masquerade]] and she had to [[KilledToUpholdTheMasquerade kill him to uphold her end of the Masquerade]].
* MutualMaquerade: Joshua and Ariane were working in the same Masquerade. [[TheMole Sort of.]]
* WhamEpisode: Hey, what's Ariane doing in Josh's office? Oh, Wait, what?! Did Ariane just knife Joshua?!