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* EvilSorcerer: The Marquess is blatantly the master of TheDarkArts and the AuthorityEqualsAsskicking type. He took over the kingdom by force and rules with an iron fist, spreading fear and desolation over the land. He can kill from a distance, with his bare hands or shadow, cast the rain, perform divination to find a way, open doors via telekinesis... He's also a skilled Necromancer who turns Thalès' brothers into obedient ghosts.
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Othemar is the old king of Lycènes. He orders his advisor, Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont ("the Marquess"), to make him immortal. With the king's agreement, the Marquess mutilates the seven princes, then tries to kill them and turn them into obediant ghosts. Only the youngest one, Thalès, escapes this fate. When he is mortally wounded by the king's guards, the guards dump him into the "well of the dead". He is saved by Antimée, who brings him to the garden of Pareïza. The magical garden heals him and makes him a seer. The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical powers of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
This is not a typical HeroicFantasy story: the plot, the universe and the characters are very unique. Sure, you have TheHero and the BigBad, you have SwordsAndSorcery, but maybe because the writer is a woman, she brings something you don't see in classical fantasy adventures. That is why there are a lot of averted or subverted tropes in those books.
This is not a typical HeroicFantasy story: the plot, the universe and the characters are very unique. Sure, you have TheHero and the BigBad, you have SwordsAndSorcery, but maybe because the writer is a woman, she brings something you don't see in classical fantasy adventures. That is why there are a lot of averted or subverted tropes in those books.
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Othemar is the old king of Lycènes. He orders his advisor, Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont ("the Marquess"), to make him immortal. With the king's agreement, the Marquess mutilates the seven princes, then tries to kill them and turn them into obediant obedient ghosts. Only the youngest one, Thalès, escapes this fate. When he is mortally wounded by the king's guards, the guards dump him into the "well of the dead". He is saved by Antimée, who brings him to the garden of Pareïza. The magical garden heals him and makes him a seer. seer.
The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical powers of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda. \n\nThis is not a typical HeroicFantasy story: the plot, the universe and the characters are very unique. Sure, you have TheHero and the BigBad, you have SwordsAndSorcery, but maybe because the writer is a woman, she brings something you don't see in classical fantasy adventures. That is why there are a lot of averted or subverted tropes in those books.\n
The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical powers of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
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* ImmortalityImmorality: The king allows the Marquess to kill his 7 sons while he tries to be immortal. Averted in the case of Antimée, the immortal guardian of the Garden of Pareïza, who is the nicest character.
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* ImmortalityImmorality: The king allows the Marquess to kill his 7 sons while he tries to be immortal. Averted in the case of Antimée, the immortal guardian of the Garden of Pareïza, who may be immortal and is the nicest character.
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* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: At the very moment when Thalès is about to faint, after being severely tortured by the Marquess, Antimée has a sudden panic attack, wakes up, and goes to retrieve him from a certain death.
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* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: At the very moment when Thalès falls in the clutches of the Marquess and is about to faint, after being be severely tortured by the Marquess, tortured, Antimée has a sudden panic attack, wakes up, and goes to retrieve him from a certain death.
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* HotGypsyWoman: Although Griselda attracts men while not being openly sultry and sensual.
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* BlackMagic: Everything the Marquess does is twisted and evil. And creepy, like its [[CastingAShadow shadow magic]].
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* LoveIsAWeakness: For the all-powerful Marquess, whom lets his feelings for Griselda lead him to [[spoiler: his downfall]].
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* RightfulKingReturns: Thalès, who is the only surviving heir to the kingdom of Beldaran. He almost dies, lives for five years as a fugitive and ends up confronting the Marquess as soon as he finds his opponent’s weakness.
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* RightfulKingReturns: Thalès, who is the only surviving heir to the kingdom of Beldaran. He almost dies, lives for five years as a fugitive and ends up confronting the Marquess as soon as he finds his opponent’s weakness.
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* TurnCoat: The captain of the royal guard of Lycènes who, after stabbing and leaving Thalès for dead, switches sides as soon as he learns the Marquess’ take over the kingdom. He then creates a mercenary army and gets in appropriate terms with the prince he almost slained.
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* TurnCoat: The captain of the royal guard of Lycènes who, after stabbing and leaving Thalès for dead, switches sides as soon as he learns the Marquess’ take over the kingdom. He then creates a mercenary army and gets in appropriate terms with the prince he almost nearly slained.
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* OnlyMostlyDead: Thalès "spends his time not dying", according to the Marquess. He narrowly escapes death twice in the story, and owes his victory to [[spoiler: Griselda's impact on the BigBad]].
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* LoveTranscendsSpacetime: At the very moment when Thalès is about to faint, after being severely tortured by the Marquess, Antimée has a sudden panic attack, wakes up, and goes to retrieve him from a certain death.
* OnlyMostlyDead: Thalès"spends his time not dying", is "hard to kill", according to the Marquess. He The young prince narrowly escapes death twice in the story, and owes his victory to [[spoiler: Griselda's impact on the BigBad]].
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* Turncoat: The captain of the royal guard of Lycènes who, after stabbing and leaving Thalès for dead, switches sides as soon as he learns the Marquess’ take over the kingdom. He then creates a mercenary army and gets in appropriate terms with the prince he almost slained.
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* Turncoat: TurnCoat: The captain of the royal guard of Lycènes who, after stabbing and leaving Thalès for dead, switches sides as soon as he learns the Marquess’ take over the kingdom. He then creates a mercenary army and gets in appropriate terms with the prince he almost slained.
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* AlasPoorYorick: When Griselda holds a child’s skull in the castle's charnels during her stay, and questions the Marquess’ cruelty. Angst follows.
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* SpurnedIntoSuicide: [[spoiler: The Marquess, after he lets Griselda leave the castle. He never gets over not having her and loses both his power thirst and will to live.]]
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* AristocratsAreEvil: Guess who? The Marquess. Although he “once used to be a man of honour”, he is the epitome of the EvilChancellor winning the king's trust to thwart him over all the more, and ending up ruling by fear and force.
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* OnlyMostlyDead: Thalès "spends his time not dying", according to the Marquess. He narrowly escapes death twice in the story, and owes his victory thanks to [[spoiler: Griselda's impact on the BigBad.BigBad]].
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* TheTurncoat: The captain of the royal guard of Lycènes who, after stabbing and leaving Thalès for dead, switches sides as soon as he learns the Marquess’ take over the kingdom. He then creates a mercenary army and gets in appropriate terms with the prince he almost slained.
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* TheTurncoat: Turncoat: The captain of the royal guard of Lycènes who, after stabbing and leaving Thalès for dead, switches sides as soon as he learns the Marquess’ take over the kingdom. He then creates a mercenary army and gets in appropriate terms with the prince he almost slained.
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* AlasPoorVillain: the Marquess.
* AlasPoorYorick: when Griselda holds a child’s skull during her stay at the Marquess’. Angst follows.
* AristocratsAreEvil: guess who? The Marquess.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: the Marquess. And how.
* BeautyEqualsGoodness: played straight or averted, YMMV. The Marquis is very ugly. But his physical ugliness is ''strange and fascinating'', says Griselda.
* BigBad: Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont.
* BittersweetEnding: The sweet part ? [[spoiler: The Marquess dies.]] The bitter part ? [[spoiler: The Marquess dies.]]
* BlackMagic: everything the Marquess does is twisted and evil. And creepy, like its [[CastingAShadow shadow magic]].
* AlasPoorYorick: when Griselda holds a child’s skull during her stay at the Marquess’. Angst follows.
* AristocratsAreEvil: guess who? The Marquess.
* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: the Marquess. And how.
* BeautyEqualsGoodness: played straight or averted, YMMV. The Marquis is very ugly. But his physical ugliness is ''strange and fascinating'', says Griselda.
* BigBad: Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont.
* BittersweetEnding: The sweet part ? [[spoiler: The Marquess dies.]] The bitter part ? [[spoiler: The Marquess dies.]]
* BlackMagic: everything the Marquess does is twisted and evil. And creepy, like its [[CastingAShadow shadow magic]].
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%% * BittersweetEnding: The sweetpart ? part? [[spoiler: The Marquess dies.]] The bitter part ? part? [[spoiler: The Marquess dies.]]
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* EyepatchOfPower: averted. Thalès is a capable fighter, he has an eyepatch, but he is not really badass.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: everybody calls Desiderat de Mornemont ''the Marquess''. Also, the captain of the royal guard.
* EvilChancellor: the Marquess, before the king dies.
* EvilSorcerer: also a Necromancer.
* GhostlyGlide: how the Marquess sometimes gets around.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: everybody calls Desiderat de Mornemont ''the Marquess''. Also, the captain of the royal guard.
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* EvilSorcerer: also a Necromancer.
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* HotGypsyWoman: Griselda.
* ImmortalityImmorality: the king allows the Marquess to kill his 7 sons while he tries to be immortal. Averted in the case of Antimée, the immortal guardian of the Garden of Pareïza, who is the nicest character.
* LeanAndMean: Desiderat de Mornemont is skeletally thin.
* LoveIsAWeakness: for the Marquess.
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* OnlyMostlyDead: Thalès
* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Thalès' brothers.
* OurGhoulsAreCreepier: averted, the Ghouls are nice creatures who refuse to eat the livings.
* MookChivalry: averted in the first pages.
* MostWritersAreMale: averted, Isabelle Dethan is maybe the first female to write HeroicFantasy comics.
* RightfulKingReturns: Thalès.
* SpurnedIntoSuicide: [[spoiler: the Marquess.]]
* HotGypsyWoman: Griselda.
* ImmortalityImmorality: the king allows the Marquess to kill his 7 sons while he tries to be immortal. Averted in the case of Antimée, the immortal guardian of the Garden of Pareïza, who is the nicest character.
* LeanAndMean: Desiderat de Mornemont is skeletally thin.
* LoveIsAWeakness: for the Marquess.
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* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Thalès' brothers.
* OurGhoulsAreCreepier: averted, the Ghouls are nice creatures who refuse to eat the livings.
* MookChivalry: averted in the first pages.
* MostWritersAreMale: averted, Isabelle Dethan is maybe the first female to write HeroicFantasy comics.
* RightfulKingReturns: Thalès.
* SpurnedIntoSuicide: [[spoiler: the Marquess.]]
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Othemar is the old king of Lycènes. He orders his advisor, Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont ("the Marquess"), to make him immortal. With the king's agreement, the Marquess mutilates the seven princes, then tries to kill them and turn them into obediant ghosts. Only the youngest one, Thalès, escapes this fate. When he is mortally wounded by the king's guards, the guards dump him into the "well of the dead". He is saved by Antimée, who brings him to the garden of Pareïza. The magical garden heals him and makes him a seer. The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical powers of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is now at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
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* HeroicFantasy, with some elements of HighFantasy: victory is not directly archieved through the force of arms, the BigBad is strong enough to destroy the GardenOfEden and to conquer several kigdoms, ...kingdoms, ...
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* RightfulKingReturns: Thalès.
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Othemar is the old king of Lycènes. He orders his advisor, Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont ("the Marquess"), to make him immortal. With the king's agreement, the Marquess mutilates the seven princes, then tries to kill them and turn them into obediant ghosts.
Only the youngest one, Thalès, escapes this fate. When he is mortally wounded by the king's guards, the guards dump him into the "well of the dead". He is saved by Antimée, who brings him to the garden of Pareïza. The magical garden heals him and makes him a seer.
The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical power of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is now at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
Only the youngest one, Thalès, escapes this fate. When he is mortally wounded by the king's guards, the guards dump him into the "well of the dead". He is saved by Antimée, who brings him to the garden of Pareïza. The magical garden heals him and makes him a seer.
The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical power of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is now at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
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Othemar is the old king of Lycènes. He orders his advisor, Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont ("the Marquess"), to make him immortal. With the king's agreement, the Marquess mutilates the seven princes, then tries to kill them and turn them into obediant ghosts. \n Only the youngest one, Thalès, escapes this fate. When he is mortally wounded by the king's guards, the guards dump him into the "well of the dead". He is saved by Antimée, who brings him to the garden of Pareïza. The magical garden heals him and makes him a seer. \n The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical power powers of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is now at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
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!!'''These books provide example of:'''
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!!'''These books provide example examples of:'''
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* AristocratsAreEvil: Guess who? The Marquess.
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* AristocratsAreEvil: Guess guess who? The Marquess.
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* EvilCrush: the Marquess with Griselda.
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* VillainousCrush: the Marquess with Griselda.
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Othenar is the old king of Lycenes. He orders his advisor, Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont ("the Marquess"), to make him immortal. With the king's agreement, the Marquess mutilate the seven princes, then tries to kill them and turn them into obediant ghosts. Only the youngest one, Thales, escapes this fate. When is mortally wounded by the king's guards, the guards dump him into the "well of the dead". He is saved by Antimée, who brings him to the garden of Pareiza. The magical garden heals him and makes him a seer. The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical power of this place but since Thales defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess let Thales and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess, is now at the head of the kingdom, and Thales tries to find a way to defeat him. Thales' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
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Only the youngest one,
The Marquess detects through sorcery that the prince is alive and finds the garden. He absorbes all magical power of this place but since Thalès defeats him during a swordfight, the Marquess lets Thalès and Antimée fly away. Several years later, the Marquess is now at the head of the kingdom, and Thalès tries to find a way to defeat him. Thalès' seer power allows him to understand the Marquis' only weakness: his love for a gipsy girl, Griselda.
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* [[TheHero Thales]], nicknamed ''le roi cyclope'' is the youngest son of the king.
* [[GreenThumb Antimée]], the guardian of the Garden of Pareiza, Thales' love interest
* [[GreenThumb Antimée]], the guardian of the Garden of Pareiza, Thales' love interest
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* [[TheHero Thales]], Thalès]], nicknamed ''le roi cyclope'' is the youngest son of the king.
* [[GreenThumb Antimée]], the guardian of the Garden ofPareiza, Thales' Pareïza, Thalès' love interest
* [[GreenThumb Antimée]], the guardian of the Garden of
* AbsurdlySharpClaws: the Marquess. His hands are a lethal weapon, along with his LivingShadow’s.
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* AlasPoorVillain: the Marquess
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* AlasPoorVillain: the MarquessMarquess.
* AlasPoorYorick: when Griselda holds a child’s skull during her stay at the Marquess’. Angst follows.
* AristocratsAreEvil: Guess who? The Marquess.
* AlasPoorYorick: when Griselda holds a child’s skull during her stay at the Marquess’. Angst follows.
* AristocratsAreEvil: Guess who? The Marquess.
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* BlindSeer: Thales has lost an eye when he becomes a seer. He can see can see past and present events, but not future ones.
* CharacterTitle: Thales, whose nickname is ''le roi cyclope''.
* DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler: Subverted. When Thales and the Marquis fight at the end, the Marquess already lost his will to live, and let Thales kill him.]]
* EyepatchOfPower: averted. Thales is a capable fighter, he has an eyepatch, but he is not really badass.
* CharacterTitle: Thales, whose nickname is ''le roi cyclope''.
* DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler: Subverted. When Thales and the Marquis fight at the end, the Marquess already lost his will to live, and let Thales kill him.]]
* EyepatchOfPower: averted. Thales is a capable fighter, he has an eyepatch, but he is not really badass.
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* BlindSeer: Thales Thalès has lost an eye when he becomes a seer. He can see can see past and present events, but not future ones.
* CharacterTitle:Thales, Thalès, TheHero, whose nickname is ''le roi cyclope''.
* DuelToTheDeath: [[spoiler: Subverted. WhenThales Thalès and the Marquis fight at the end, the Marquess already lost his will to live, and let Thales lets Thalès kill him.]]
* EyepatchOfPower: averted.Thales Thalès is a capable fighter, he has an eyepatch, but he is not really badass.
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* EyepatchOfPower: averted.
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* EvilSorcerer
* HeroicFantasy, with some elements of HighFantasy: victory is not directly archieved through the force of arms, the BigBad is strong enough to destroy the GardenOfEden and to conquer several kigdoms,...
* HeroicFantasy, with some elements of HighFantasy: victory is not directly archieved through the force of arms, the BigBad is strong enough to destroy the GardenOfEden and to conquer several kigdoms,...
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* EvilSorcerer
EvilCrush: the Marquess with Griselda.
* EvilSorcerer: also a Necromancer.
* GhostlyGlide: how the Marquess sometimes gets around.
* GreenThumb: Antimée. Even after the loss of her garden, she continues to make things grow.
* HeroicFantasy, with some elements of HighFantasy: victory is not directly archieved through the force of arms, the BigBad is strong enough to destroy the GardenOfEden and to conquer severalkigdoms,...kigdoms, ...
* EvilSorcerer: also a Necromancer.
* GhostlyGlide: how the Marquess sometimes gets around.
* GreenThumb: Antimée. Even after the loss of her garden, she continues to make things grow.
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* ImmortalityImmorality: the king allows the Marquess to kill his 7 sons while he tries to be immortal. Averted in the case of Antimée, the immortal guardian of the Garden of Pareiza, who is the nicest character.
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* ImmortalityImmorality: the king allows the Marquess to kill his 7 sons while he tries to be immortal. Averted in the case of Antimée, the immortal guardian of the Garden of Pareiza, Pareïza, who is the nicest character.character.
* LeanAndMean: Desiderat de Mornemont is skeletally thin.
* LeanAndMean: Desiderat de Mornemont is skeletally thin.
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* SwordFight: Thales and the Marquess fight twice, using swords. But the fate of the world does not depend on those duels.
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* SwordFight: Thales Thalès and the Marquess fight twice, using swords. But the fate of the world does not depend on those duels.
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* BigBad: guess who.
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* BigBad: guess who.BigBad: Marquess Desiderat de Mornemont.
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* OnlyMostlyDead: Thalès
* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Thalès' brothers.
* OurGhostsAreDifferent: Thalès' brothers.
