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* RockPaperScissors: The four friends do rock-aper-scissors to decide who gets which piece of the armor.
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* AsianStoreOwner: One of them An Asian liquor store owner gets robbed by the gang early on.
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* GoodFeelsGood: Trent discovers this as he uses the boots and their thrusters to save people.
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* GoodFeelsGood: Trent discovers this feels happy as he uses the boots and their thrusters to save people.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The man sent to recover the suit (who has a suit of his own) is killed with a self destruct mechanism by his employer to keep himform from being captured.captured after his defeat.
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* PsychoPartyMember: Mike is the most reckless and violent of the four.
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* PsychoPartyMember: Mike is the most reckless and violent of the four.
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A series from the short-lived DC Focus imprint (following people with powers outside of the usual superhero genre). Fraction follows a quartet of ChildhoodFriend's (Ford, Trent, Mike and Pete) who stumble across a set of super-powered armor and divvy it up. Pete gets the helmet, Trent the boots, Mike the gloves and Ford the chest plate. The four begin using those pieces for vastly different purposes, as the original owners of the armor try to track them down.
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A series from the short-lived DC Focus imprint (following people with powers outside of the usual superhero genre). Fraction follows a quartet of ChildhoodFriend's {{Childhood Friend}}s (Ford, Trent, Mike and Pete) who stumble across a set of super-powered armor and divvy it up. Pete gets the helmet, Trent the boots, Mike the gloves and Ford the chest plate. The four begin using those pieces for vastly different purposes, as the original owners of the armor try to track them down.
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* GoodFeelsGood: Trent discovers this as he uses the bootsand their thrusters to save people.
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* HeKnowsTooMuch: The man sent to recover the suit (who has a suit of his now) is killed with a self destruct mechanism by his employer to keep him form being captured.
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* GoodFeelsGood: Trent discovers this as he uses the bootsand boots and their thrusters to save people.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The man sent to recover the suit (who has a suit of hisnow) own) is killed with a self destruct mechanism by his employer to keep him form being captured.
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A series from the short-lived DC Focus imprint (following people with powers outside of the usual superhero genre). Fraction follows a quartet of ChildhoodFriend's (Ford, Trent, Mike and Pete) who stumble across a set of super-powered armor and divvy it up. Pete gets the helmet, Trent the boots, Mike the gloves and Ford the chest plate. The four begin using those pieces for vastly different purposes, as the original owners of the armor try to track them down.
!!Tropes:
* AsianStoreOwner: One of them gets robbed by the gang early on.
* BasementDweller: Pete still lives with his overbearing mother.
* BurgerFool: Ford works as one, dressed like a chicken.
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Attempted. Ford tries to sell the chest plate to a technology firm, but they tell him they won't deal in obviously stolen property.
* DivorceIsTemporary: Teased, as Trent still has feelings for his ex.
* GoodFeelsGood: Trent discovers this as he uses the bootsand their thrusters to save people.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The man sent to recover the suit (who has a suit of his now) is killed with a self destruct mechanism by his employer to keep him form being captured.
* LecherousStepparent: Mike was raped by his stepfather as a kid and uses the gloves to kill him.
* OffTheWagon: Ford is a recovering drunk who gives in to temptation due to various stresses in his life.
* PsychoPartyMember: Mike is the most reckless and violent of the four.
* SympatheticInspectorAntagonist: The local cop trying to make sense of what's login on, who fixates on the four.
!!Tropes:
* AsianStoreOwner: One of them gets robbed by the gang early on.
* BasementDweller: Pete still lives with his overbearing mother.
* BurgerFool: Ford works as one, dressed like a chicken.
* CutLexLuthorACheck: Attempted. Ford tries to sell the chest plate to a technology firm, but they tell him they won't deal in obviously stolen property.
* DivorceIsTemporary: Teased, as Trent still has feelings for his ex.
* GoodFeelsGood: Trent discovers this as he uses the bootsand their thrusters to save people.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: The man sent to recover the suit (who has a suit of his now) is killed with a self destruct mechanism by his employer to keep him form being captured.
* LecherousStepparent: Mike was raped by his stepfather as a kid and uses the gloves to kill him.
* OffTheWagon: Ford is a recovering drunk who gives in to temptation due to various stresses in his life.
* PsychoPartyMember: Mike is the most reckless and violent of the four.
* SympatheticInspectorAntagonist: The local cop trying to make sense of what's login on, who fixates on the four.
