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* MoralSociopathy: Despite their almost total lack of emotions, Primes are bound to serve the greater good. Many of them also accept a modification they call the Geas, which renders them physically incapable of acting against their own moral judgment. It is unknown whether Andris has this mod, but like all Primes, ve can be expected to abide by vis moral code regardless. Case in point, Andris's InMediaRes introduction featured ver calmly murdering fourteen people--in order to prevent a war that, according to vis analysis, would have resulted in the extinction of human life on that planet.
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* MoralSociopathy: Despite their almost total lack of emotions, Primes are bound to serve the greater good. Many of them also accept a modification they call the Geas, which renders them physically incapable of acting against their own moral judgment. It is unknown whether Andris has this mod, but like all Primes, ve can be expected to abide by vis moral code regardless. Case in point, Andris's InMediaRes InMediasRes introduction featured ver calmly murdering fourteen people--in order to prevent a war that, according to vis analysis, would have resulted in the extinction of human life on that planet.
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* SociopathicHero: One of the defining traits of a Prime is the Conditioning which divorces them from the immediate experience of emotions; they still feel vestigial emotions, but are highly adept at suppressing, concealing, and/or ignoring them to act logically. On the other hand, they are all bound to act in the interests of their missions, which are almost always in the service of preventing war, genocide, or other serious, large-scale crimes. Case in point, Andris's InMediaRes introduction featured ver calmly murdering fourteen people--in order to prevent a war that, according to vis analysis, would have resulted in the extinction of human life on that planet.
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* SociopathicHero: One of the defining traits of a Prime is the Conditioning which divorces them from the immediate experience of emotions; they still feel vestigial emotions, but are highly adept at suppressing, concealing, and/or ignoring them to act logically. On the other hand, they are all bound to act in the interests of their missions, which are almost always in the service of preventing war, genocide, or other serious, large-scale crimes. Case in point, Andris's InMediaRes InMediasRes introduction featured ver calmly murdering fourteen people--in order to prevent a war that, according to vis analysis, would have resulted in the extinction of human life on that planet.
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* MoralSociopathy: Despite their almost total lack of emotions, Primes are bound to serve the greater good. Many of them also accept a modification they call the Geas, which renders them physically incapable of acting against their own moral judgment. It is unknown whether Andris has this mod, but like all Primes, ve can be expected to abide by vis moral code regardless. Case in point, Andris's InMediaRes introduction featured ver calmly murdering fourteen people--in order to prevent a war that, according to vis analysis, would have resulted in the extinction of human life on that planet.
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* SociopathicHero: One of the defining traits of a Prime is the Conditioning which divorces them from the immediate experience of emotions; they still feel vestigial emotions, but are highly adept at suppressing, concealing, and/or ignoring them to act logically. On the other hand, they are all bound to act in the interests of their missions, which are almost always in the service of preventing war, genocide, or other serious, large-scale crimes. Case in point, Andris's InMediaRes introduction featured ver calmly murdering fourteen people--in order to prevent a war that, according to vis analysis, would have resulted in the extinction of human life on that planet.
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* LongevityTreatment: Taken UpToEleven. Bexahn is virtually immune to aging and most natural diseases, though she can still bleed or be killed like any human.
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!!Andris
->'''Race''': Human(?)[[note]]Andris uses technology that allows ver to create custom bodies from scratch and switch between them at will, so vis original race and appearance are unknown.[[/note]]
->'''Homeworld''': Unknown
->'''{{Leitmotif}}''': Go to [[http://www.pandora.com Pandora]] and create a station based on Music/ParovStelar. Literally anything that plays on this station is appropriate. Specific songs might be listed here in the future.
A Prime--a highly-proficient secret [[SpacePolice Space Cop]]/Super-spy--who has a romantic past with Silas.
* AltumVidetur: The Primes appear to be fond of this trope. Andris's ship is called the ''Ardor'', Latin for "Love", "Passion", or "[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ardor]]".
* {{Expy}}: Andris is not an Expy of a single specific character, but ve--and Primes in general--are essentially [[Literature/SecondApocalypse Dûnyain]] [[VideoGame/MassEffect Justicars]].
* HyperAwareness: Part of a Prime's Conditioning is extensive training in following multiple trains of thought. They miss ''very'' little, and have very keen senses.
* MasterOfDisguise: Andris uses technology that allows ver to create custom bodies from scratch--almost perfect reproductions of actual biological flesh--and switch between them, so it goes without saying that at least visually, ve can be ''literally'' whoever ve wants to be. Ve also happens to be a MasterActor. During vis introduction to the story, ve was posing as a mysterious old man.
* MoralSociopathy: Despite their almost total lack of emotions, Primes are bound to serve the greater good. Many of them also accept a modification they call the Geas, which renders them physically incapable of acting against their own moral judgment. It is unknown whether Andris has this mod, but like all Primes, ve can be expected to abide by vis moral code regardless.
* NoBiologicalSex: Technically, Andris has the biological sex of whatever body ve has created for visself, but when not on a mission, ve has no real reason to pose as anything in particular. At least one of vis preferred "off-duty" bodies has no genitalia at all and is androgynous. In fact, ve is genderfluid, and usually identifies as agender, going by ve (subjective), ver (objective), and vis (possessive) pronouns. Notably, being a MasterActor, ve seems to be able to actually adopt the gender identity of whoever ve happens to be portraying at the moment. So when pretending to be the sly old man Ejra Demoris, he did in fact identify as a man. It's unknown what biological sex, if any, Andris's original body had.
* PhotographicMemory: Thanks to vis Conditioning, Andris misses very little, and can easily review previous situations and memories to find details that ve might have missed the first time.
* PronounTrouble: Vis unusual gender-neutral pronouns aside, the ease with which Andris changes gender can also cause confusion.
* SociopathicHero: One of the defining traits of a Prime is the Conditioning which divorces them from the immediate experience of emotions; they still feel vestigial emotions, but are highly adept at suppressing, concealing, and/or ignoring them to act logically. On the other hand, they are all bound to act in the interests of their missions, which are almost always in the service of preventing war, genocide, or other serious, large-scale crimes.
* SpacePolice: The Primes are a self-appointed force whose members operate individually and have sweeping discretion in what missions they choose to undertake, and how they conduct their operations. They're generally recognized as a legitimate police entity in most places, but they do not interact directly as an organization with any other organization, and they answer only to Warden Prime, an isolated entity somewhere near the Top of the Beyond.
* SuperIntelligence: Ve'll be quick to point out that true Super Intelligence is impossible--or at least exceedingly rare--but vis Conditioning does make ver uncannily good at taking in, analyzing, and applying information. One of the most notable manifestations of this is in what Primes call the Probability Trance, a meditative state in which Andris can thoroughly analyze ''all'' the information at vis disposal, even information ve may not consciously realize is relevant. The Trance allows ver to effectively predict the future, including accounting for various courses of action ve could take and what consequences would result. For the probability Trance to be effective, of course, ve needs to have as much information as possible. Missing key details can result in faulty conclusions, as with any analysis of data.
->'''Race''': Human(?)[[note]]Andris uses technology that allows ver to create custom bodies from scratch and switch between them at will, so vis original race and appearance are unknown.[[/note]]
->'''Homeworld''': Unknown
->'''{{Leitmotif}}''': Go to [[http://www.pandora.com Pandora]] and create a station based on Music/ParovStelar. Literally anything that plays on this station is appropriate. Specific songs might be listed here in the future.
A Prime--a highly-proficient secret [[SpacePolice Space Cop]]/Super-spy--who has a romantic past with Silas.
* AltumVidetur: The Primes appear to be fond of this trope. Andris's ship is called the ''Ardor'', Latin for "Love", "Passion", or "[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Ardor]]".
* {{Expy}}: Andris is not an Expy of a single specific character, but ve--and Primes in general--are essentially [[Literature/SecondApocalypse Dûnyain]] [[VideoGame/MassEffect Justicars]].
* HyperAwareness: Part of a Prime's Conditioning is extensive training in following multiple trains of thought. They miss ''very'' little, and have very keen senses.
* MasterOfDisguise: Andris uses technology that allows ver to create custom bodies from scratch--almost perfect reproductions of actual biological flesh--and switch between them, so it goes without saying that at least visually, ve can be ''literally'' whoever ve wants to be. Ve also happens to be a MasterActor. During vis introduction to the story, ve was posing as a mysterious old man.
* MoralSociopathy: Despite their almost total lack of emotions, Primes are bound to serve the greater good. Many of them also accept a modification they call the Geas, which renders them physically incapable of acting against their own moral judgment. It is unknown whether Andris has this mod, but like all Primes, ve can be expected to abide by vis moral code regardless.
* NoBiologicalSex: Technically, Andris has the biological sex of whatever body ve has created for visself, but when not on a mission, ve has no real reason to pose as anything in particular. At least one of vis preferred "off-duty" bodies has no genitalia at all and is androgynous. In fact, ve is genderfluid, and usually identifies as agender, going by ve (subjective), ver (objective), and vis (possessive) pronouns. Notably, being a MasterActor, ve seems to be able to actually adopt the gender identity of whoever ve happens to be portraying at the moment. So when pretending to be the sly old man Ejra Demoris, he did in fact identify as a man. It's unknown what biological sex, if any, Andris's original body had.
* PhotographicMemory: Thanks to vis Conditioning, Andris misses very little, and can easily review previous situations and memories to find details that ve might have missed the first time.
* PronounTrouble: Vis unusual gender-neutral pronouns aside, the ease with which Andris changes gender can also cause confusion.
* SociopathicHero: One of the defining traits of a Prime is the Conditioning which divorces them from the immediate experience of emotions; they still feel vestigial emotions, but are highly adept at suppressing, concealing, and/or ignoring them to act logically. On the other hand, they are all bound to act in the interests of their missions, which are almost always in the service of preventing war, genocide, or other serious, large-scale crimes.
* SpacePolice: The Primes are a self-appointed force whose members operate individually and have sweeping discretion in what missions they choose to undertake, and how they conduct their operations. They're generally recognized as a legitimate police entity in most places, but they do not interact directly as an organization with any other organization, and they answer only to Warden Prime, an isolated entity somewhere near the Top of the Beyond.
* SuperIntelligence: Ve'll be quick to point out that true Super Intelligence is impossible--or at least exceedingly rare--but vis Conditioning does make ver uncannily good at taking in, analyzing, and applying information. One of the most notable manifestations of this is in what Primes call the Probability Trance, a meditative state in which Andris can thoroughly analyze ''all'' the information at vis disposal, even information ve may not consciously realize is relevant. The Trance allows ver to effectively predict the future, including accounting for various courses of action ve could take and what consequences would result. For the probability Trance to be effective, of course, ve needs to have as much information as possible. Missing key details can result in faulty conclusions, as with any analysis of data.
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A former accountant who grew up on a GenerationShip, Sy came into a massive inheritance after a wealthy relative died and has been adventuring around the galaxy ever since.
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-->Initially: "[[https://youtu.be/nFjej7SW7EM The Tower of Learning]]" and "[[https://youtu.be/xNJDzUa9rpI Shadows]]" by Music/RufusWainwright
-->When his DarkAndTroubledPast comes up: "[[https://youtu.be/O6RKIXrdEfQ Evil Angel]]" by Music/RufusWainwright
A former accountant who grew up on aGenerationShip, {{Generation Ship|s}}, Sy came into a massive inheritance after a wealthy relative died and has been adventuring around the galaxy ever since.
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-->Initially: "[[https://youtu.be/nFjej7SW7EM The Tower of Learning]]" and "[[https://youtu.be/xNJDzUa9rpI Shadows]]" by Music/RufusWainwright
-->When his DarkAndTroubledPast comes up: "[[https://youtu.be/O6RKIXrdEfQ Evil Angel]]" by Music/RufusWainwright
A former accountant who grew up on a
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* DarkSecret: He hides it less well than his DarkAndTroubledPast, but Sy's stock of medical nanomachines can be easily reconfigured into a hallucination-inducing designer drug that causes the user to relive happy memories. Godsgift and Whistler know about it, but it's an uncomfortable topic so they haven't brought it up much.
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** He hides it less well than his DarkAndTroubledPast, but Sy's stock of medical nanomachines can be easily reconfigured into a hallucination-inducing designer drug that causes the user to relive happy memories. Godsgift and Whistler know about it, but it's an uncomfortable topic so they haven't brought it upmuch.much.
** He seems to have another secret that even he doesn't know about--''something'' that was hidden in his mind is all that is clear so far.
* EmotionalMaturityIsPhysicalMaturity: Not only does Sy ''look'' like he's in his twenties despite actually being 51, he also acts like a much younger man. No explicit explanation is given for this, although it's possible that this is at least partially {{Justified|Trope}} by him being stuck in the past, constantly reliving his relationship with Andris, when he ''was'' closer to his twenties.
** He hides it less well than his DarkAndTroubledPast, but Sy's stock of medical nanomachines can be easily reconfigured into a hallucination-inducing designer drug that causes the user to relive happy memories. Godsgift and Whistler know about it, but it's an uncomfortable topic so they haven't brought it up
** He seems to have another secret that even he doesn't know about--''something'' that was hidden in his mind is all that is clear so far.
* EmotionalMaturityIsPhysicalMaturity: Not only does Sy ''look'' like he's in his twenties despite actually being 51, he also acts like a much younger man. No explicit explanation is given for this, although it's possible that this is at least partially {{Justified|Trope}} by him being stuck in the past, constantly reliving his relationship with Andris, when he ''was'' closer to his twenties.
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* LossOfIdentity: Sy seems to be suffering from one as a result of his Assessment. Normally, the test just causes the subject to feel physical sensations which they describe to the person administering the test, but for Sy, it made him feel like "my thoughts are becoming wispy and meaningless, smoke created to hide something more important". Since finishing the test, he's been in a daze, claiming that the test made him feel "like I'm not a real person".
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** Bexahn's ship is named the ''Certum'', a Latin word that means "Certainty". This is a ShoutOut to the ''Literature/SecondApocalypse'' series, in which Anasûrimbor Kellhus (on whom Bexahn is partially based) wields [[ICallHerVera a sword named "Certainty"]].
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** Bexahn's ship is named the ''Certum'', a Latin word that means "Certainty". This is a ShoutOut to the ''Literature/SecondApocalypse'' series, in which Anasûrimbor Kellhus (on whom Bexahn is partially based) wields [[ICallHerVera [[ICallItVera a sword named "Certainty"]].
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** Bexahn's ship is named the ''Certum'', a Latin word that means "Certainty". This is a ShoutOut to the ''Literature/SecondApocalypse'' series, in which Anasûrimbor Kellhus (on whom Bexahn is partially based) wields [[ICallHerVera a sword named "Certainty"]].
** The box-like device Bexahn used to conduct Silas's Assessment is called an "Aestimia", which means "Assessment" or "Census" in Latin.
** The box-like device Bexahn used to conduct Silas's Assessment is called an "Aestimia", which means "Assessment" or "Census" in Latin.
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* {{Expy}}: Bexahn is not an Expy of a single specific character, but she--and Primes in general--are essentially [[Literature/SecondApocalypse Dûnyain]] [[VideoGame/MassEffect Justicars]].
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* BlowYouAway: One of his specialties.
** PoisonousPerson[=/=]CombatPragmatist: He's not above using things like pepper spray, cyanide and nerve agents in a fight.
** PoisonousPerson[=/=]CombatPragmatist: He's not above using things like pepper spray, cyanide and nerve agents in a fight.
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* TheNapoleon: Played for laughs. His brother likes to joke that the reason he flies all the time and flaunts his powers is to compensate for his height, although he's really just slightly shorter than average.
* TheNapoleon: Played for laughs. His brother likes to joke that the reason he flies all the time and flaunts his powers is to compensate for his height, although he's really just slightly shorter than average.
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!!Cadreon "West" West
!!Cordelia "Kord" Arken'eld
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!!Cordelia "Kord" Arken'eld
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!!Planets
[[folder: Hadros IV (moon)]]
*Lunar Data
**Parent Planet: Sonora (gas giant)
**Star name: Hamarae (Orange Dwarf)
**Atmosphere
***Composition: 61.3% argon, 19.2% oxygen, 13.9% carbon dioxide, 5.6% nitrogen
***Pressure at sea level: 168.92 kPa (1.67 x earth)
***Avg Temp 288 K (15 °C)
**Water & land ratio: 45% : 55%
**Gravity: 4.20 m/s2 (0.43 x earth)
**Escape Velocity 4.94 km/s
**Radius: 2903.74 km (0.46 x earth)
**Soil Composition: 44.5% iron, 31.8% oxygen, 14.4% silicon, 7.8% aluminum, 1.5% other metals, 0.0% other elements
**Axial tilt: 9.83 °
**Rotation: 17.80 hours
**Revolution: Sonora: 41 Hadrosian days; Hamarae: 574 Hadrosian days
**Calendar: (7 days/week, 41 days/month, 82 weeks/year, 14 months/year)
**Major species: The Albandarians
**Population: 7,500,000
**Miscellaneous/notes: 1 of 5 moons
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*Lunar Data
**Parent Planet: Sonora (gas giant)
**Star name: Hamarae (Orange Dwarf)
**Atmosphere
***Composition: 61.3% argon, 19.2% oxygen, 13.9% carbon dioxide, 5.6% nitrogen
***Pressure at sea level: 168.92 kPa (1.67 x earth)
***Avg Temp 288 K (15 °C)
**Water & land ratio: 45% : 55%
**Gravity: 4.20 m/s2 (0.43 x earth)
**Escape Velocity 4.94 km/s
**Radius: 2903.74 km (0.46 x earth)
**Soil Composition: 44.5% iron, 31.8% oxygen, 14.4% silicon, 7.8% aluminum, 1.5% other metals, 0.0% other elements
**Axial tilt: 9.83 °
**Rotation: 17.80 hours
**Revolution: Sonora: 41 Hadrosian days; Hamarae: 574 Hadrosian days
**Calendar: (7 days/week, 41 days/month, 82 weeks/year, 14 months/year)
**Major species: The Albandarians
**Population: 7,500,000
**Miscellaneous/notes: 1 of 5 moons
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*Planetary Data
**Star names: Scó Hǎ Shâng (Yellow Main Sequence)
**Atmosphere
***Composition: 69.3% nitrogen, 17.0% oxygen, 13.6% carbon dioxide, trace other gases
***Pressure at sea level: 93.43 kPa (0.92 x terra)
***Avg Temp 293 K (20 °C)
**Water & land ratio: 75 / 25
**Gravity: 9.48 m/s2 (0.97 x terra)
**Escape Velocity: 10.68 km/s
**Radius: 6009.05 km (0.94 x terra)
**Soil Composition: 49.5% iron, 22.5% other metals (titanium, nickel, aluminium, prominently), 16.4% oxygen, 10.4% silicon, 1.1% other elements
**Axial tilt: 24.89 °
**Rotation: 23.78 hours
**Revolution: 324 Myóng Days
**Calendar: (9 days/week, 18 days/month, 36 weeks/year, 18 months/year)
**Moons/satellites: Tsǎi Vyèrh: Planetary Rings
**Major species: The Saramong (Sā, Râ Myóng), shared with the Gòl (Gòl, Râ Myóng), a related and sentient but distinct species from the Saramong.
**Population: 1,384,688,000 Saramong; 157,000 Gòl
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*Planetary Data
**Star names: Araeþa (red supergiant star) and Aesor (blue main-sequence star)
**Atmosphere
***Composition: Dense breathable: 68.0% argon, 17.3% oxygen, 11.6% carbon dioxide 5.1% sulfur dioxide, trace other gases
***Pressure at sea level: 131.84 kPa (1.30 x Terra)
***Avg Temp 271 K (-1 °C)
**Water & land ratio: 45% : 55%. ~50% of the surface is covered by ice and/or snow at least half the year
**Gravity: 10.65 m/s2 (1.09 x Terra)
**Escape Velocity 12.69 km/s
**Radius: 7560.35 km (1.19 x Terra)
**Soil Composition: 38.7% iron, 37.2% oxygen, 19.9% silicon, 3.7% titanium, 0.5% other metals, trace other elements
**Axial tilt: 25.89°
**Rotation: 58.05 hours
**Revolution: 1815 Yggdrasian days (~6 Terran years)
**Calendar: (5 days/week, 55 days/month, 363 weeks/year, 33 months/year)
**Moons/satellites: 1 large moon, Aeþel
**Major species: The Jotnar (Yohtnar)
**Population: 13,590,600
**Miscellaneous/notes: Frequent Electromagnetic Storms
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Zigzagged; when enhanced with force projection, his sword doesn’t cleanly cut through things so much as hack at them really, really hard. However, the end result is mostly the same.
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Zigzagged; when AbsurdCuttingPower: When enhanced with force projection, his sword doesn’t swords can slice through most materials.
**AbsurdlySharpBlade: Zigzagged. They don't cleanly cut through things so much as hack at them really, really hard. However, the end result is mostly the same.
**AbsurdlySharpBlade: Zigzagged. They don't cleanly cut through things so much as hack at them really, really hard. However, the end result is mostly the same.
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* EveryJapaneseSwordIsAKatana: Averted. He uses a chokuto & tanto pair.
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* LatinoIsBrown: Averted. His skin is rather light, and he has mixed heritage.
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* BiTheWay: So far it's only been confirmed due to [[WordOfGod Word Of Author]] deciding to ThrowItIn, but it's still true.
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!!Dominic Arcturus Navarro
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* BizzareAlienBiology: Bizarre Android Biology, if you will. She eats food by ''dragging it inside her arm with tentacles''.
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* BizzareAlienBiology: BizarreAlienBiology: Bizarre Android Biology, if you will. She eats food by ''dragging it inside her arm with tentacles''.
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!!Combat All-Around Sentient Kinetic Android/C.A.S.K.A.
->'''Race''': Android
->'''Homeworld''': Terra
An android designed to have emotions like that of an intelligent living being. Built by Eight Luck Co. Ltd before it went bankrupt, she was soon sold to another company before she proceeded to deactivate herself after a massacre; Years later, she was activated by David.
Currently a work in progress.
* {{Adorkable}}: She's a robot who is just recovering after her activation and has to learn how to feel emotions. HilarityEnsues.
* BizzareAlienBiology: Bizarre Android Biology, if you will. She eats food by ''dragging it inside her arm with tentacles''.
* TVHeadRobot
* PowerCopying: Her Replica Program allows her to copy weapons in sight.
->'''Race''': Android
->'''Homeworld''': Terra
An android designed to have emotions like that of an intelligent living being. Built by Eight Luck Co. Ltd before it went bankrupt, she was soon sold to another company before she proceeded to deactivate herself after a massacre; Years later, she was activated by David.
Currently a work in progress.
* {{Adorkable}}: She's a robot who is just recovering after her activation and has to learn how to feel emotions. HilarityEnsues.
* BizzareAlienBiology: Bizarre Android Biology, if you will. She eats food by ''dragging it inside her arm with tentacles''.
* TVHeadRobot
* PowerCopying: Her Replica Program allows her to copy weapons in sight.
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* {{Technopath}}: While she rarely uses it, she’s able to mentally control computers and software. While she’s unable to physically assemble or take apart electronics, she has far more computing power and fewer range restrictions compared to Val.
* TheEngineer: Along with Val, she has the most training in engineering, and usually takes on this role while Val acts as a sniper or medic.
* TheEngineer: Along with Val, she has the most training in engineering, and usually takes on this role while Val acts as a sniper or medic.
* SuperIntelligence: Being a sapient AI, she has several 'genius' traits like photographic memory and heightened math skills. 'Walking calculator' is not an inaccurate description of half her job in the team.
** SlidingScaleOfRobotIntelligence: Usually between 3 to 3.5, having great intelligence but otherwise acting like a normal person. She can temporarily jump to 4 when devoting her brainpower to a specific task, at the cost of being unable to do some things like walk, smell, taste, etc.
* {{Technopath}}: While she rarely uses it, she’s able to mentally control computers and software. While she’s unable to physically assemble or take apart electronics, she has far more computing power and fewer range restrictions compared to Val.
* TheEngineer: Along with Val, she has the most training in engineering, and usually takes on this role while Val acts as a sniper or medic.
** SlidingScaleOfRobotIntelligence: Usually between 3 to 3.5, having great intelligence but otherwise acting like a normal person. She can temporarily jump to 4 when devoting her brainpower to a specific task, at the cost of being unable to do some things like walk, smell, taste, etc.
* {{Technopath}}: While she rarely uses it, she’s able to mentally control computers and software. While she’s unable to physically assemble or take apart electronics, she has far more computing power and fewer range restrictions compared to Val.
* TheEngineer: Along with Val, she has the most training in engineering, and usually takes on this role while Val acts as a sniper or medic.
* GoldAndWhiteAreDivine: His armor is deliberately colored like this.
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* TheNapoleon: Played for laughs. His brother likes to joke that the reason he flies all the time is to compensate for his height and seem taller, although he's really just slightly shorter than average.
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* TheNapoleon: Played for laughs. His brother likes to joke that the reason he flies all the time and flaunts his powers is to compensate for his height and seem taller, height, although he's really just slightly shorter than average.
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* AnythingThatMoves: Has slept with every other member of the team who isn't Peter or his boyfriends, and sometimes hits on other crew members regardless of gender.
**AfraidOfTheirOwnStrength: He hasn't used his full power since due to fear of it happening again.
* ConsummateProfessional: At least when actually working. Compounded with TheStoic below.
* AmazonianBeauty: In-universe, downplayed. She has an athletic and moderately muscular build, though it usually doesn't show very much from her outfits. Mitch is attracted to her physique partly because of it.
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** EmotionalBruiser: She’s quite straightforward about her feelings, occasionally resulting in friction with others when they offend her.
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** EmotionalBruiser: She’s quite straightforward about expressing her feelings, occasionally resulting in friction with others when they offend her.
* PowerNullifier: She carries around both EMP and anti-psionic grenades that can shut down machines and psionics respecitvely.
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* {{Flight}}: While several other people can fly as well, he's the specialist in this department, able to outspeed race cars and pull off complex maneuvers in the air.
**PowerFloats: Heck, he doesn't even bother to walk a lot of the time, preferring to hover when travelling with others.
**PowerFloats: Heck, he doesn't even bother to walk a lot of the time, preferring to hover when travelling with others.
* InsufferableGenius[=/=]SmugSuper: He’s quite proud of his power, intellect and achievements, and isn't afraid to show them off. Also somewhat downplayed, however, since he's not above complimenting others when he's genuinely impressed or even admitting someone's better than him at something.
* TheNapoleon: Played for laughs. His brother likes to joke that the reason he flies all the time is to compensate for his height and seem taller, although he's really just slightly shorter than average.
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* WeakButSkilled: He has less raw power than Mitch and Dominic, but makes up for it with his insane range, flying speed, precision and larger range of abilities.
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* WeakButSkilled: Relatively speaking, at least. He has less raw power than Mitch and Dominic, but makes up for it with his insane range, flying speed, precision and larger large range of abilities.
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*BadPowersGoodPeople: He arguably has the most directly destructive skillset in his team, easily capable of causing widespread damage. He's also a fun-loving sweetheart.
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**AwesomeButImpractical: Manages to avert this with lava manipulation; he has both enough control and practice to use it quickly and without potentially endangering himself.
**ConvectionSchmonvection: Invoked and justified for himself, averted for his enemies.
**ConvectionSchmonvection: Invoked and justified for himself, averted for his enemies.
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* {{Telepathy}}: [[spoiler: He's actually an accomplished telepath, but he hasn't used it in a long time due to fear of overloading his allies with his bloodlust or bad memories.]]
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* CombatEngineer: Along with Val, she has the most training in engineering, and usually takes on this role while Val acts as a sniper or medic.
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* SuperheroesPackingHeat: Played straight for Izzie, Mitch, Val and Peter. Downplayed for Mike and Dominic, who carries them mostly as backup weapons.
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