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* RefugeInAudacity: Gotta admit, his little plan is pretty [[IncrediblyLamePun ballsy.]] Even more radical than Dono's, in its own way.
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* RefugeInAudacity: Gotta admit, his little plan is pretty [[IncrediblyLamePun [[{{Pun}} ballsy.]] Even more radical than Dono's, in its own way.
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** In ''Memory'', Miles castigates himself for not realizing that Illyan ''would'' have an agent in the Dendarii Mercenaries he ''didn't'' know of, which is how Simon discovered Miles falsified his report.
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** In ''Memory'', Miles castigates himself for not realizing that Illyan ''would'' have an agent in the Dendarii Mercenaries he ''didn't'' know of, which is how Simon discovered Miles falsified his report. [[spoiler:Miles had found two of Simon's agents. Simon had ''three''.]]
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* DeadpanSnarker: One of the things that keeps Ivan in line is the fear that if he doesnt the admiral will use sarcasm on him.
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* DeadpanSnarker: One of the things that keeps Ivan in line is the fear that if he doesnt doesn't the admiral will use sarcasm on him.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: values Ivan for the skills he uses to maintain his relatively low profile, as they make Ivan a competent adjutant.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: values Values Ivan for the skills he uses to maintain his relatively low profile, as they make Ivan a competent adjutant.
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Barrayaran general assigned as commander of the most miserable base on the planet as punishment for suspected atrocities during the Komarr Revolt. Latter gets it into his head to bully Miles, then orders a group of techs to risk unnecessary danger cleaning up [[FateWorseThanDeath gene-mutating poison]]. When they refuse, he orders them to strip naked in polar winter under the eyes of a firing squad made up of young, newly-recruited soldiers. Under the eyes of the son of the [[TooDumbToLive most powerful man in Barrayar]] (who, it must be noted, would be ''murderously'' offended by this behavior.) When he [[SarcasmMode "somehow"]] finds himself in exile, he takes service under Cavilo, only to try to murder Admiral Naismith and get captured in the process.
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Barrayaran general assigned as commander of the most miserable base on the planet as punishment for suspected atrocities during the Komarr Revolt. Latter Later gets it into his head to bully Miles, then orders a group of techs to risk unnecessary danger cleaning up [[FateWorseThanDeath gene-mutating poison]]. When they refuse, he orders them to strip naked in polar winter under the eyes of a firing squad made up of young, newly-recruited soldiers. Under the eyes of the son of the [[TooDumbToLive most powerful man in Barrayar]] (who, it must be noted, would be ''murderously'' offended by this behavior.) When he [[SarcasmMode "somehow"]] finds himself in exile, he takes service under Cavilo, only to try to murder Admiral Naismith and get captured in the process.
