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* TraitorShot: Deconstructed. The first time Penta catched on to her real nature was when he caught a glimpse of her PsychoticSmirk.
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* TraitorShot: Deconstructed. The first time Penta catched caught on to her real nature was when he caught a glimpse of her PsychoticSmirk.
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A mysterious runaway Runner with a secret connecting her to her former home in another lunar colony known as "Colony A-3". [[spoiler:In reality, Rabi is actually the GameMaster of Colony A-3's RFM until a coup d'etat led by Makoto Rokuzi robbed her of her status and is keep imprisoned before she barely able to escape to Colony A-7, where she goes incognito as a costumed Runner known as Raccoon Dog Man until Makoto and his terrorist group known as Kairos initiates their devious plans on Colony A-7 in pursuit of something called "Enigma"...]]
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A mysterious runaway Runner with a secret connecting her to her former home in another lunar colony known as "Colony A-3". [[spoiler:In reality, Rabi is actually the GameMaster of Colony A-3's RFM until a coup d'etat led by Makoto Rokuzi Rozuki robbed her of her status and is keep kept imprisoned before she barely able managed to escape to Colony A-7, where she goes incognito as a costumed Runner known as Raccoon Dog Man until Makoto and his terrorist group known as Kairos initiates initiate their devious plans on Colony A-7 in pursuit of something called "Enigma"...]]
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** She meats up with Sawyer and Sigma at the train station shortly after Jotaro Sengoku was attacked and placed in a vagon.
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** She meats meets up with Sawyer and Sigma at the train station shortly after Jotaro Sengoku was attacked and placed in a vagon.
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* FrankensteinsMonster: [[spoiler: When he battles Sigma and Sawyer, he injects himself with a chemical that transforms him into a hulking monster very reminiscent of the Mary Shelly novel.]]
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* FrankensteinsMonster: [[spoiler: When [[spoiler:When he battles Sigma and Sawyer, he injects himself with a chemical that transforms him into a hulking monster very reminiscent of the Mary Shelly novel.]]
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* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: His final serum enables him to turn into FrankensteinsMonster. However, he is dependent on constantly injecting the serum to maintain this form.]]
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* OneWingedAngel: [[spoiler: His [[spoiler:His final serum enables him to turn into FrankensteinsMonster. However, he is dependent on constantly injecting the serum to maintain this form.]]
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A mysterious man that Sawyer meats shortly before the London game. He joins the game himself later in the Egypt Arc.
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A mysterious man that Sawyer meats meets shortly before the London game. He joins the game himself later in the Egypt Arc.
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* HandicappedBadass: [[spoiler: Despite already being in his late forties and having a prosthetic leg, he performs pretty well in the Egypt arc.]]
* GreaterScopeParagon: [[spoiler: As the former champion of Run For Money, Moriss' teacher and as one of the people who participated in the development of the Cry Trigger and the Warcry system in the first place.]]
* LivingLegend: [[spoiler: 20 years ago, he was the then-champion of Run For Money. That he came from the Gray Area only made it more notable.]]
* GreaterScopeParagon: [[spoiler: As the former champion of Run For Money, Moriss' teacher and as one of the people who participated in the development of the Cry Trigger and the Warcry system in the first place.]]
* LivingLegend: [[spoiler: 20 years ago, he was the then-champion of Run For Money. That he came from the Gray Area only made it more notable.]]
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* HandicappedBadass: [[spoiler: Despite [[spoiler:Despite already being in his late forties and having a prosthetic leg, he performs pretty well in the Egypt arc.]]
* GreaterScopeParagon: [[spoiler: As the former champion of Run For Money,Moriss' Morris' teacher and as one of the people who participated in the development of the Cry Trigger and the Warcry system in the first place.]]
* LivingLegend:[[spoiler: 20 [[spoiler:20 years ago, he was the then-champion of Run For Money. That he came from the Gray Area only made it more notable.]]
* GreaterScopeParagon: [[spoiler: As the former champion of Run For Money,
* LivingLegend:
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!!! Codename: [[spoiler:Rebellious Gamemaster]]
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!!! Codename: [[spoiler:Rebellious Gamemaster]][[spoiler:''Rebellious Gamemaster'']]
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* [[spoiler:AuthorityEqualsAsskicking]]: [[spoiler:She is her colony's GameMaster, and even though she's starting her participation in Kairos' RFM, she has enough tenacity to take on the challenge and take her colony's control from Makoto.]]
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* [[spoiler:AuthorityEqualsAsskicking]]: [[spoiler:She is her colony's GameMaster, and even though she's starting her participation in Kairos' RFM, she has enough tenacity to take on the challenge and take her colony's in hopes of taking back control of her colony from Makoto.]]
