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Leah is from Simon's village and is heiress of Damascas. She is a traveler of Liriel.
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Leah is from Simon's village and is heiress of Damascas. She is a traveler of Liriel.Liriel, the Crystal Fields, and Ragnarus, the Crimson Vault.
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The protagonist of Traveler’s Gate. Simon is a traveler of Valinhall, the House of Blades.
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The protagonist of Traveler’s Traveler's Gate. Simon is a traveler of Valinhall, the House of Blades.
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Simon wields a huge sword that’s only usable with super strength. It’s also hard to use in close combat. His gifted Nye cloak looks cool, but he’s frustrated with it when he first gets it. [[spoiler:He does eventually get use to the Nye cloak and he even finds it useful with Nye essence.]]
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* AwesomeButImpractical: Simon wields a huge sword that’s that's only usable with super strength. It’s It's also hard to use in close combat. His gifted Nye cloak looks cool, but he’s he's frustrated with it when he first gets it. [[spoiler:He does eventually get use to the Nye cloak and he even finds it useful with Nye essence.]]]]
* CripplingOverspecialization: Valinhall in general is overspecialized in fighting, but Simon specifically is overspecialized in ''killing''. He's absolutely terrible at everything else, but he's one of the few people who can fight Incarnations at an even level. In one short story, Indirial's daughter thinks she's a better fighter than him because she's beating him in a spar... until she sees him fight for real and realizes he's just terrible at holding back.
* CripplingOverspecialization: Valinhall in general is overspecialized in fighting, but Simon specifically is overspecialized in ''killing''. He's absolutely terrible at everything else, but he's one of the few people who can fight Incarnations at an even level. In one short story, Indirial's daughter thinks she's a better fighter than him because she's beating him in a spar... until she sees him fight for real and realizes he's just terrible at holding back.
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* TheUnchosenOne: Simon is explicitly told that he isn’t meant for anything, as apposed to Alin, who has a whole prophecy about him.
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* TheUnchosenOne: Simon is explicitly told that he isn’t isn't meant for anything, as apposed to Alin, who has a whole prophecy about him.
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Alin is a member of Simon’s village. He is a traveler of Elysia, the City of Light.
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Alin is a member of Simon’s Simon's village. He is a traveler of Elysia, the City of Light.
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* LargeHam: Simon describes Alin as talking like he’s narrating a story. He can be talking about literally anything and still try to make it sound grand.
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* FatalFlaw: He's got a few, making it hard to pick out his worst, but the one that most often bites him in the back is his tunnel vision. Once he gets set on something, he goes at it full bore without stopping and without asking questions. It doesn't help when everyone around him is praising him as a hero.
* LargeHam: Simon describes Alin as talking likehe’s he's narrating a story. He can be talking about literally anything and still try to make it sound grand.grand.
* OnlyFriend: Although Simon doesn't seem to really realize it, Alin is the only person in the village he's actually close to. Alin, likewise, is ''friendly'' with everyone but only (rarely) lets his guard down around Simon.
* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: He's the first natural-born Elysian Traveler in three hundred years, letting him fight a trained Endross Traveler within five minutes of awakening his powers. He still has to train to get better, though.
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* OnlyFriend: Although Simon doesn't seem to really realize it, Alin is the only person in the village he's actually close to. Alin, likewise, is ''friendly'' with everyone but only (rarely) lets his guard down around Simon.
* TrainingTheGiftOfMagic: He's the first natural-born Elysian Traveler in three hundred years, letting him fight a trained Endross Traveler within five minutes of awakening his powers. He still has to train to get better, though.
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Leah is from Simon’s Simon's village and is heiress of Damascas. She is a traveler of Liriel.
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* CompellingVoice: Her Ragnarus crown allows her to give an order that must be obeyed. The price is that she is struck mute and has her Ragnarus abilities disabled; the stronger the order, the longer the duration of the price.
* DamselInDistress: What she is to Simon and Alin in the first book. They are both rather confused when they arrive to rescue her and find her in a much better state than expected.
* DamselInDistress: What she is to Simon and Alin in the first book. They are both rather confused when they arrive to rescue her and find her in a much better state than expected.
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* ScrewDestiny: Simon is told that he has no great destiny and that he should just leave everything to Alin. Despite this, Simon resolves to find power on his own and forge a new path.
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!!Main Characters
[[folder: Simon]]
The protagonist of Traveler’s Gate. Simon is a traveler of Valinhall, the House of Blades.
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* DeadpanSnarker: He can be pretty sardonic at times.
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Leah is from Simon’s village and is [[spoilers: heiress of Damascas.]] She is a traveler of Liriel.
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!!Main Characters
[[folder: Simon]]
The protagonist of Traveler’s Gate. Simon is a traveler of Valinhall, the House of Blades.
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* DeadpanSnarker: He can be pretty sardonic at times.
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[[folder: Alin]]
Alin is a member of Simon’s village. He is a traveler of Elysia, the City of Light.
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* TheChosenOne: Him being a traveler of Elysia makes him part of a prophecy.
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Leah is from Simon’s village and is [[spoilers: heiress of Damascas.]] She is a traveler of Liriel.
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