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* CharacterDevelopment: He starts off as a DoggedNiceGuy [[spoiler: but after getting together with Andrew, he becomes more comfortable with his own sexuality and eventually stands up to his sister about, about it, and by the end of ''War'' is finally confident to go out into the world as a proud gay man.]]
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* [[spoiler: HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: She first joins the deatheaters to help in their scheme to kidnap Calliope in return for freeing Januarius, which backfires when Mark [[TakeMeInstead offers himself in Calliope's place]] and she is not only arrested but disowned by Hector for what she did. Later during the 2nd War she [[TheAtoner atoners]] for her betrayal by.by rescuing Calliope when she is taken prisoner by the deatheaters and [[HeroicSacrifice aids]] Caliiope in her escape.]]
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* [[spoiler: HeelFaceRevolvingDoor: She first joins the deatheaters to help in their scheme to kidnap Calliope in return for freeing Januarius, which backfires when Mark [[TakeMeInstead offers himself in Calliope's place]] and she is not only arrested but disowned by Hector for what she did. Later during the 2nd she [[TheAtoner atoners]] for her betrayal by.]]
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* {NeverFoundtheBody}:All NeverFoundtheBody: All that was ever found of her after she was kidnapped by the deatheaters was her right hand holding her wand. [[spoiler: It isn't until chapter 32 of ''War'' when her body is [[FinallyFoundTheBody finally found]].]]
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* {NeverFindtheBody}:All {NeverFoundtheBody}:All that was ever found of her after she was kidnapped by the deatheaters was her right hand holding her wand. [[spoiler: It isn't until chapter 32 of ''War'' when her body is [[FinallyFoundTheBody finally found]].]]
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* AFatherToHisMen: Regarded as a great Obliviator among those who work for him [[spoiler: not so much to Linus and Amity after they discover he's a deatheaters.deatheater.]]
* CharacterDevelopment: He starts off as a DoggedNiceGuy [[spoiler: but after getting together with Andrew, he becomes more comfortable with his own sexuality and eventually stands up to his sister about, and by the end of ''War'' is finally confident to go out into the world as a proud gay man.]]
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* BrutalHonesty: She will oftern give her own opinion about things without even the littlest concern of who she's speaking to, a lot of the time making her look like a BitchInSheep'sClothing and dropping several DramaBombs.
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* [[spoiler: LeftForDead: It's revealed in chapter 23 of ''War'' when Calliope, Mark, Hector, Andrew, Guadalupe and Julietta apparat into the woods south of Hollywyck and encounter a group of centaurs who most refuse to help them, Calliope is [[MakesSenseInContext taken over by the Benedicte's ghost]] and reveals that a girl (who in chapter 32 realise was Benedicte) apparated in the woods and was found by one of the centaurs, Fortinbras, while bleeding to death and refused to help her. This convinces Fortinbras help them.]]
* [[{NeverFindtheBody} Never Find Her Body]]: All that was ever found of her after she was kidnapped by the deatheaters was her right hand holding her wand. [[spoiler: It isn't until chapter 32 of ''War'' when her body is [[FinallyFoundTheBody finally found]].]]
* [[{NeverFindtheBody} Never Find Her Body]]: All that was ever found of her after she was kidnapped by the deatheaters was her right hand holding her wand. [[spoiler: It isn't until chapter 32 of ''War'' when her body is [[FinallyFoundTheBody finally found]].]]
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* [[spoiler: LeftForDead: It's revealed in chapter 23 of ''War'' when Calliope, Mark, Hector, Andrew, Guadalupe and Julietta apparat into the woods south of Hollywyck and encounter a group of centaurs who most of refuse to help them, Calliope is [[MakesSenseInContext taken over by the Benedicte's ghost]] and reveals that a girl (who in chapter 32 they realise was Benedicte) apparated in the woods and was found by one of the centaurs, Fortinbras, while bleeding to death and refused to help her. This convinces Fortinbras Fortiesbras to help them.]]
*[[{NeverFindtheBody} [[NeverFindtheBody Never Find Her Body]]: All that was ever found of her after she was kidnapped by the deatheaters was her right hand holding her wand. [[spoiler: It isn't until chapter 32 of ''War'' when her body is [[FinallyFoundTheBody finally found]].]]
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* [[{NeverFindtheBody} Never Find Her Body]]: All that was ever found of her after she was kidnapped by the deatheaters was her right hand holding her wand. [[spoiler: It isn't until chapter 32 of ''War''that when her body is [[FinallyFoundTheBody finally find]].found]].]]
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* AFatherToHisMen: Regarded as a great Obliviator among those who work for him [[spoiler: not so much to Linus and Amity after they discover he's a deatheaters.]]
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* AFatherToHisMen: Regarded as a great Obliviator among those who work for him [[spoiler: not so much to Linus and Amity after they discover he's a deatheaters.]]
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* AgentPeacock: [[spoiler: He works for a secret division of the Pentagram, American wizardinggovernment government, which use uses time turners and admits to loving to make dramatic entrance.]]
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* DumbBlonde: Averted, she's the first one to notice the pattern of attacks on people's memories.
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!Benedicte Ollivander
The older sister of Linus and Calliope who was kidnapped and killed by the deatheaters about twenty years ago.
* CoolBigSis: She was very much one to Linus.
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* CoolBigSis: She was very much one to Linus.
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* CuteBruisher
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* [[TrueCompanions True Companion]]: Mentions in her time in the Sycorax that while in Fenrir Greyback pack, she was bestfriends with an Arab girl called Noemie, who despite being a drug addict, was a ''damn good woman''.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Justified, because her father may have been [[AbusiveParents abusive]], but Subverted since she goes to places with her brother like the Sycorax '''PRISON''' of all places and has no trouble with talking to the prisoners and becomes friends the werewolf Guadalupe,[[spoiler: Double Subverted however, when her brother tries to kill himself and she becomes terrified that she'll be sent back to live with her father.]]
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* OutdoorsyGal: Well, she has spent most of her life with fellow werewolfs.
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* [[TrueCompanions True Companion]]: Mentions in her time in the Sycorax that while in Fenrir Greyback pack, she was bestfriends with an Arab girl called Noemie, who despite being a drug addict, was a 'damn ''damn good woman's.woman''.
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* PassionateSportsGirl: Is shown playing football (or soccer for Americans) a couple of times.
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