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* BadDreams
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* [[spoiler:BreakTheCutie: The BreakTheCutie: [[spoiler:The universe seems out to correct Kade's notion that he can do the right thing and keep people from dying because of his actions.]]
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* [[spoiler:HeWhoFightsMonsters: Damn HeWhoFightsMonsters: [[spoiler:Damn near kills Holtzman once he finds out that Ilya died and Rangan was tortured. His Conscience (as Ilya's voice) calls him out on it. ]]
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* [[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture- The ColdBloodedTorture- [[spoiler:The ERD waterboards him to get the access code. They succeed in breaking him, but fortunately Kade has already changed the password by that point. Not that he knows that...]]
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* [[spoiler:TookALevelInKindness:Becomes TookALevelInKindness: [[spoiler:Becomes a lot less self centered after his time in prison. Mostly due to the OddFriendship mentioned above.]]
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* [[spoiler:SenselessSacrifice: Unfortunately, Kade had already changed the password to the back door before uploading it to the internet...]]
* [[spoiler:VoiceOfTheResistance: Arranges it so that after she's been captured , a message goes out on the internet explaining the conditions of her arrest and exhorting people to speak out against the government's draconian policies.]]
* [[spoiler:SenselessSacrifice: Unfortunately, Kade had already changed the password to the back door before uploading it to the internet...]]
* [[spoiler:VoiceOfTheResistance: Arranges it so that after she's been captured , a message goes out on the internet explaining the conditions of her arrest and exhorting people to speak out against the government's draconian policies.]]
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* [[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Knowing HeroicSacrifice: [[spoiler:Knowing that everyone breaks eventually under torture, she uses her Nexus program to stop her own heart rather than give the ERD the password to the Nexus 5 backdoor.]]
*[[spoiler:SenselessSacrifice: Unfortunately, SenselessSacrifice: [[spoiler:Unfortunately, Kade had already changed the password to the back door before uploading it to the internet...]]
*[[spoiler:VoiceOfTheResistance: Arranges VoiceOfTheResistance: [[spoiler:Arranges it so that after she's been captured , a message goes out on the internet explaining the conditions of her arrest and exhorting people to speak out against the government's draconian policies.]]
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* BadAss
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[[folder:Watson "Wats" Cole (Formerly Sergent Sergeant Cole)]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding- Arguably gets the best ending of anyone in Crux:[[Spoiler: He finally finds redemption for breaking under the ERD's torture by convincing Holtzmann to free the autistic Nexus children and later protects the underground railroad by destroying the Van used to rescue them, all in the middle of a Hurricane. And he survives.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: Once he realizes that Nexus 5 has already been released and that he just handed the ERD the backdoor password, he goes into a deep depression.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: Once he realizes that Nexus 5 has already been released and that he just handed the ERD the backdoor password, he goes into a deep depression.]]
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* EarnYourHappyEnding- Arguably gets the best ending of anyone in Crux:[[Spoiler: Crux:[[spoiler: He finally finds redemption for breaking under the ERD's torture by convincing Holtzmann to free the autistic Nexus children and later protects the underground railroad by destroying the Van used to rescue them, all in the middle of a Hurricane. And he survives.]]
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler: Once he realizes that Nexus 5 has already been released and that he just handed the ERD the backdoor password, he goes into a deep depression.]]
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* ShellShockedVeteran:[[spoiler: Done in a unique manner. When he was captured in Vietnam, his captors used [[BrainComputerInterface Nexus]] to make him [[AMindIsATerribleThingToRead live their memories]] of the abuse they had suffered at the hands of their government. This causes him to [[DefectorFromDecadence flip entirely]] and join their resistance, at least until his [[UnwantedRescue brothers in the Corps come to rescue him]], killing his new family in the process while he feels them die.]]
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* ShellShockedVeteran:[[spoiler: ShellShockedVeteran: [[spoiler: Done in a unique manner. When he was captured in Vietnam, his captors used [[BrainComputerInterface Nexus]] to make him [[AMindIsATerribleThingToRead live their memories]] of the abuse they had suffered at the hands of their government. This causes him to [[DefectorFromDecadence flip entirely]] and join their resistance, at least until his [[UnwantedRescue brothers in the Corps come to rescue him]], killing his new family in the process while he feels them die.]]
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* BadLiar
BadLiar: He literally has to hack his own brain to regulate his pulse so that people can't tell if he's lying. [[spoiler: This doesn't work as well if the person he's lying to can access his brain through their own connections.]]
*BerserkButton
BerserkButton: He ''really'' does not like the idea of people using his technology to commit rape and murder. [[spoiler: And god help you if he even ''thinks'' you killed and tortured his friends.]]
*[[spoiler:BreakTheCutie]][[spoiler:BreakTheCutie: The universe seems out to correct Kade's notion that he can do the right thing and keep people from dying because of his actions.]]
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* HeroicWillpower- Forces his badly broken body up a flight of stairs to confront Shiva, all while Shiva is broadcasting his will at Kade from every transmitter available to submit
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* HeroicWillpower- Forces HeroicWillpower: [[spoiler:Forces his badly broken body up a flight of stairs to confront Shiva, all while while Shiva is broadcasting his will at Kade from every transmitter available to submit submit.]]
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* TheIdealist - Tends to get mocked for this relentlessly.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding- Arguably gets the best ending of anyone in Crux- He finally finds redemption for himself in breaking under the ERD's torture by convincing Holtzmann to free the autistic Nexus children and later protects the underground railroad by destroying the Van used to rescue them, all in the middle of a Hurricane. And he survives.
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* EarnYourHappyEnding- Arguably gets the best ending of anyone in Crux- Crux:[[Spoiler: He finally finds finds redemption for himself in breaking under the ERD's torture by convincing Holtzmann to free the autistic Nexus children and later protects the underground railroad by destroying the Van used to rescue them, all in the middle of a Hurricane. And he survives. ]]
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* Playful Hacker
PlayfulHacker
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* BadAss
* BadDreams
* ShellShockedVeteran
*BadAss
*BadDreams
*HeartBrokenBadAss
*ShellShockedVeteran:[[spoiler: Done in a unique manner. When he was captured in Vietnam, his captors used [[BrainComputerInterface Nexus]] to make him [[AMindIsATerribleThingToRead live their memories]] of the abuse they had suffered at the hands of their government. This causes him to [[DefectorFromDecadence flip entirely]] and join their resistance, at least until his [[UnwantedRescue brothers in the Corps come to rescue him]], killing his new family in the process while he feels them die.]]
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The first four hackers who developed [[BrainComputerInterface Nexus 5]]:
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[[folder: Kaden "Kade" Lane]]
The main protagonist through the Nexus Series.
*BadLiar
*BerserkButton
*[[spoiler:BreakTheCutie]]
*TheChewToy- Kade get's his ass kicked more than anyone else in the series, most of the time when he tries using his "Bruce Lee" Software
*HeroicWillpower- Forces his badly broken body up a flight of stairs to confront Shiva, all while Shiva is broadcasting his will at Kade from every transmitter available to submit
*[[spoiler:HeWhoFightsMonsters: Damn near kills Holtzman once he finds out that Ilya died and Rangan was tortured. His Conscience (as Ilya's voice) calls him out on it. ]]
*TheIdealist - Tends to get mocked for this relentlessly.
*Playful Hacker
*ProHumanTranshuman
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[[folder:Rangan "Axon" Shankari]]
Kade's best friend and a notable Flux DJ.
*[[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture- The ERD waterboards him to get the access code. They succeed in breaking him, but fortunately Kade has already changed the password by that point. Not that he knows that...]]
*EarnYourHappyEnding- Arguably gets the best ending of anyone in Crux- He finally finds redemption for himself in breaking under the ERD's torture by convincing Holtzmann to free the autistic Nexus children and later protects the underground railroad by destroying the Van used to rescue them, all in the middle of a Hurricane. And he survives.
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: Once he realizes that Nexus 5 has already been released and that he just handed the ERD the backdoor password, he goes into a deep depression.]]
*OddFriendship: [[spoiler:The Indian playboy DJ Neuroscience Grad student becomes fast friends with Bobby and the rest of the Autistic Nexus children, with whom he communicates through a flaw in their cells shielding.]]
*Playful Hacker
*Pro-Human Transhuman
*[[spoiler:TookALevelInKindness:Becomes a lot less self centered after his time in prison. Mostly due to the OddFriendship mentioned above.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Watson "Wats" Cole (Formerly Sergent Cole)]]
*TheAtoner
*BadAss
*BadDreams
*ShellShockedVeteran
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Llyana "Llya" Alexander]]
*CantStopTheSignal: Invoked by name at the end of Nexus
*TheHeart: So much so that Kade hears her voice as his conscience
*[[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Knowing that everyone breaks eventually under torture, she uses her Nexus program to stop her own heart rather than give the ERD the password to the Nexus 5 backdoor.]]
*[[spoiler:SenselessSacrifice: Unfortunately, Kade had already changed the password to the back door before uploading it to the internet...]]
*[[spoiler:VoiceOfTheResistance: Arranges it so that after she's been captured , a message goes out on the internet explaining the conditions of her arrest and exhorting people to speak out against the government's draconian policies.]]
[[/folder]]
[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder: Kaden "Kade" Lane]]
The main protagonist through the Nexus Series.
*BadLiar
*BerserkButton
*[[spoiler:BreakTheCutie]]
*TheChewToy- Kade get's his ass kicked more than anyone else in the series, most of the time when he tries using his "Bruce Lee" Software
*HeroicWillpower- Forces his badly broken body up a flight of stairs to confront Shiva, all while Shiva is broadcasting his will at Kade from every transmitter available to submit
*[[spoiler:HeWhoFightsMonsters: Damn near kills Holtzman once he finds out that Ilya died and Rangan was tortured. His Conscience (as Ilya's voice) calls him out on it. ]]
*TheIdealist - Tends to get mocked for this relentlessly.
*Playful Hacker
*ProHumanTranshuman
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Rangan "Axon" Shankari]]
Kade's best friend and a notable Flux DJ.
*[[spoiler:ColdBloodedTorture- The ERD waterboards him to get the access code. They succeed in breaking him, but fortunately Kade has already changed the password by that point. Not that he knows that...]]
*EarnYourHappyEnding- Arguably gets the best ending of anyone in Crux- He finally finds redemption for himself in breaking under the ERD's torture by convincing Holtzmann to free the autistic Nexus children and later protects the underground railroad by destroying the Van used to rescue them, all in the middle of a Hurricane. And he survives.
*MyGodWhatHaveIDone:[[spoiler: Once he realizes that Nexus 5 has already been released and that he just handed the ERD the backdoor password, he goes into a deep depression.]]
*OddFriendship: [[spoiler:The Indian playboy DJ Neuroscience Grad student becomes fast friends with Bobby and the rest of the Autistic Nexus children, with whom he communicates through a flaw in their cells shielding.]]
*Playful Hacker
*Pro-Human Transhuman
*[[spoiler:TookALevelInKindness:Becomes a lot less self centered after his time in prison. Mostly due to the OddFriendship mentioned above.]]
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[[folder:Watson "Wats" Cole (Formerly Sergent Cole)]]
*TheAtoner
*BadAss
*BadDreams
*ShellShockedVeteran
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Llyana "Llya" Alexander]]
*CantStopTheSignal: Invoked by name at the end of Nexus
*TheHeart: So much so that Kade hears her voice as his conscience
*[[spoiler:HeroicSacrifice: Knowing that everyone breaks eventually under torture, she uses her Nexus program to stop her own heart rather than give the ERD the password to the Nexus 5 backdoor.]]
*[[spoiler:SenselessSacrifice: Unfortunately, Kade had already changed the password to the back door before uploading it to the internet...]]
*[[spoiler:VoiceOfTheResistance: Arranges it so that after she's been captured , a message goes out on the internet explaining the conditions of her arrest and exhorting people to speak out against the government's draconian policies.]]
[[/folder]]
