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* ActionGirl: A prerequisite of being cavalier primary, even in a house like the Sixth.
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* ActionGirl: A prerequisite of being cavalier primary, even in a house like the Sixth.Sixth, but Camilla sticks out for being almost as skilled a MasterSwordswoman as Gideon and one of the very few people able to fight Lyctors without necromancy. All the more notable because the Sixth is a library house where cavaliers usually get more academic (or erotic poetry) training than sword training, making her skill and dedication all the more notable.
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* BerserkButton: hurting the people he cares about is a pretty big one. He shouts at Judith and publicly humiliates her after her plan gets Camilla injured in an unnecessary duel. Later on in the same book, he turns himself into a human bomb by detonating his thanergy reserves in an attempt to kill Cytherea, who murdered Dulcinea.
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* BerserkButton: hurting Hurting the people he cares about is a pretty big one. He shouts at Judith and publicly humiliates her after her plan gets Camilla injured in an unnecessary duel. Later on in the same book, he turns himself into a human bomb by detonating his thanergy reserves in an attempt to kill Cytherea, who murdered Dulcinea.
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* CourtlyLove: She's spent her whole life pining over Palamedes and performing heroic feats as part of her literally UndyingLoyalty to him, knowing full well he will never return her feelings. Their status as necromancer heir and his cavalier even echoes the archetypal LadyAndKnight.
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* PronounTrouble: As a new person born from a MergerOfSouls and a relatively short time to get used to it, Paul switches between "we" and "I".
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* {{Bishonen}}: Parodied. He's actually fairly handsome (particularly his eyes) but tends to wear a scowl more than a smile, and his thick glasses obscure it further.
-->"Up close, he was gaunt and ordinary looking, except for the eyes. His spectacles were set with lenses of spaceflight-grade thickness, and through these his eyes were a perfectly lambent grey: unflecked, unmurked, even and clear. He had the eyes of [[WhatBeautifulEyes a very beautiful person]], trapped in resting bitch face."
-->"Up close, he was gaunt and ordinary looking, except for the eyes. His spectacles were set with lenses of spaceflight-grade thickness, and through these his eyes were a perfectly lambent grey: unflecked, unmurked, even and clear. He had the eyes of [[WhatBeautifulEyes a very beautiful person]], trapped in resting bitch face."
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* WorthyOpponent: Gideon, having faced only the likes of [[NonActionGuy Magnus]] and [[WeakButSkilled Naberius]] by the time she meets Camilla in ''Gideon the Ninth'', comes to see her as one of these after their battle.
--> Holy shit. Here was a ''warrior'', not just a cavalier. Gideon was suddenly fighting for her life and exhilarated by it.
--> Holy shit. Here was a ''warrior'', not just a cavalier. Gideon was suddenly fighting for her life and exhilarated by it.
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Man On Fire isn't just "person on fire" it's for when someone on fire is Played For Horror or for laughs
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* ManOnFire: Camilla and Palamedes' Lyctoral fusion has Camilla's body spontaneously lighting on fire with bright white flames.
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