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'''Alacryans''': [[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndVritraClan Vritra Clan]]\\Clan]] ([[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndAgronaVritra Agrona Vritra]])\\
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** [[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndAgronaVritra Agrona Vritra]]
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* ChildSoldiers: The Just Plain Tragic Type. [[spoiler:When Agrona gives out the order to begin his final assault, he conscripts ''every'' single Alacryan. Naturally despite not being an adult, Enola is forcibly conscripted on the pain of death]].
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* ChildSoldiers: The Just Plain Tragic Type. [[spoiler:When Agrona gives out the order to begin his final assault, he conscripts ''every'' single Alacryan. Naturally despite not being an adult, Enola is forcibly conscripted on the pain of death]].death. If that was not enough, she ends up dying a senseless death being forced to fight people who were supposed to be her allies]].
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* [[spoiler:DroppedABridgeOnHer]]: [[spoiler:Gets suddenly killed during the second Siege of Vildorial. It happens in the spur of a moment and Seth barely has the time to register her death]].
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* [[spoiler:KillTheCutie]]: Despite her kindhearted personality, [[spoiler:she is the first of Arthur's students to die after Agrona gives out his final order, as she is unceremoniously killed during the second Siege of Vildorial]].
* [[spoiler:NeckSnap]]: [[spoiler:In the second Siege of Vildorial, her head gets snapped sideways from a hammer blow]].
* [[spoiler:NeckSnap]]: [[spoiler:In the second Siege of Vildorial, her head gets snapped sideways from a hammer blow]].
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* {{Ambadassador}}: Following [[spoiler:Seris's retreat to Dicathen, Caera stays not with her mentor but rather the war council that Arthur has formed as Seris's personal envoy (even if the dragons cannot stand her that much). On top of that, she ends up getting stronger during that interval by acquiring a regalia]].
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* UndyingLoyalty: To Seris, who she views as her mentor figure. Also to Arthur himself as in spite of him having to be CruelToBeKind to her to fulfill his plan to [[spoiler:acquire the final keystone]], her loyalty to his remains unshaken.
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* UndyingLoyalty: To Seris, who she views as her mentor figure. Also to Arthur himself as in spite of him lying to her about his past and later having to be CruelToBeKind to her to fulfill his plan to [[spoiler:acquire the final keystone]], her loyalty to his him remains unshaken.
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* BystanderActionHorrorDissonance: It is from Seth's perspective that [[spoiler:Agrona's VillainOverride over Seris and her rebellion is witnessed. Seth is helpless to watch as Agrona makes examples of people he knows such as Lauden and Sulla and forces Seris and her supporters back to his side for the final assault, himself included. After being reunited with Mayla, the two of them are sent to the frontlines in Vildorial where they are compelled to fight on the pain of meeting the same fate, in the process being embroiled by the senseless carnage Agrona has thrown them into]].
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* MoralityPet: [[spoiler:Despite his prior animosity to Highblood Milview, Arthur comes to realize that Seth is experiencing the exact same hatred towards the Dicathians that he has exhibited towards the Alacryans. As such, his mentorship of him not only changes Seth's view on the Dicathians, but his own view on the Alacryans]].
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* MoralityPet: [[spoiler:Despite his prior animosity to Highblood Milview, Arthur comes to realize that Seth not only had nothing to do with their actions, but is experiencing the exact same hatred towards the Dicathians that he has exhibited towards the Alacryans. As such, his mentorship of him not only changes Seth's view on the Dicathians, but his own view on the Alacryans]].
* WhiteSheep: [[spoiler:His parents and sister were supporters of the Vritra, but thanks to Arthur's influence Seth ends up opposing them, especially as he views them as the ones responsible for their fates]].
* BreakTheHaughty: [[spoiler:His arrogant personality gets broken when Agrona strips his blood of their status as punishment and sends them all to the frontlines in Vildorial]].
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* BigSisterInstinct: Everything she has done is to support her little brother Seth.
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* BigSisterInstinct: Everything she has done is to support her little brother Seth.Seth and her family.
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: So [[spoiler:Agrona, the GodEmperor of Alacrya himself, has suddenly taken control of Seris and her associates and threatened them back into his service. What does Sulla do? He has the temerity to remain defiant of Agrona and dismiss his threats in spite of what he just witnessed. Naturally, Agrona makes sure he does not live long enough to regret his choice of words]].
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: DoNotTauntCthulhu: So [[spoiler:Agrona, the GodEmperor of Alacrya himself, has suddenly taken control of Seris and her associates and threatened them back into his service. What does Sulla do? He has the temerity to remain defiant of Agrona and dismiss his threats in spite of what he just witnessed. Naturally, Agrona makes sure he does not live long enough to regret his choice of words]].
* IWillPunishYourFriendForYourFailure: A big example of this. He may not have been aware of Arthur's true identity, but his act of hiring him and giving him support during his stay in Alacrya is enough for [[spoiler:Agrona to punish all of Highblood Ramseyer once Arthur's identity is revealed. That, and also his granddaughter Augustine's failure to hold Xyrus against Arthur, earns the director a one-way trip to the frontlines once Agrona gives his final order despite being an eighty-year old man far past his prime]].
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Like his teacher, Seth hated the Dicathians as the people whom his sister Circe had died fighting against as she had [[spoiler:died to successfully complete her mission to map out the enchanted elven forest, enabling the Alacryan invasion of Elenoir]]. However, thanks to Arthur's influence, Seth comes to the same realization as him that the other side [[spoiler:are as much victims of the DivineConflict as his own side]].
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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Like his teacher, Seth hated the Dicathians as the people whom his sister Circe had died fighting against as she had [[spoiler:died to successfully complete her mission to map out the enchanted elven forest, enabling the Alacryan invasion of Elenoir]]. However, thanks to Arthur's influence, influence and guidance, Seth comes to the same realization as him that the other side [[spoiler:are as much victims of the DivineConflict as his own side]].
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* ChildSoldiers: The Just Plain Tragic Type. [[spoiler:When Agrona gives out the order to begin his final assault, he conscripts ''every'' single Alacryan. Naturally despite not being an adult, Seth is forcibly conscripted on the pain of death]].
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* MoralityPet: [[spoiler:Despite his prior animosity to Highblood Milview, Arthur comes to realize that Seth is experiencing the exact same hatred towards the Dicathians that he has exhibited towards the Alacryans. As such, his mentorship of him not only changes Seth's view on the Dicathians, but his own view on the Alacryans]].
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* ChildSoldiers: The Just Plain Tragic Type. [[spoiler:When Agrona gives out the order to begin his final assault, he conscripts ''every'' single Alacryan. Naturally despite not being an adult, Mayla is forcibly conscripted on the pain of death]].
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* ChildSoldiers: The Just Plain Tragic Type. [[spoiler:When Agrona gives out the order to begin his final assault, he conscripts ''every'' single Alacryan. Naturally despite not being an adult, Enola is forcibly conscripted on the pain of death]].
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* ChildSoldiers: The Just Plain Tragic Type. [[spoiler:When Agrona gives out the order to begin his final assault, he conscripts ''every'' single Alacryan. Naturally despite not being an adult, Valen is forcibly conscripted on the pain of death]].
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* AbandonedWarChild: An unorthodox example in that he is a child made neglected by the war rather than being a byproduct of it. Seth had been raised by his sister Circe since their parents died, and when she was called away to join their invasion force in Dicathen Seth was left completely alone in his studies at Central Academy. Then Circe ends up being getting killed when [[spoiler:she gets caught up in the destruction of Elenoir when Aldir uses the World Eater technique on the kingdom]], leaving Seth completely alone in the world.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Like his teacher, Seth hated the Dicathians as the people whom his sister Circe, whom had been his guardian since their parents died, had died fighting against as she had been caught up in [[spoiler:the destruction of Elenoir]]. However, thanks to Arthur's influence, Seth comes to the same realization as him that the other side [[spoiler:are as much victims of the DivineConflict as his own side]].
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Like his teacher, Seth hated the Dicathians as the people whom his sister Circe, whom had been his guardian since their parents died, had died fighting against as she had been caught up in [[spoiler:the destruction of Elenoir]]. However, thanks to Arthur's influence, Seth comes to the same realization as him that the other side [[spoiler:are as much victims of the DivineConflict as his own side]].
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* AbandonedWarChild: An unorthodox example in that he is a child made neglected by the war rather than being a byproduct of it. Seth had been raised by his Seth's sister Circe since their parents died, and when she was called away to join their invasion force in Dicathen Dicathen. Following her death in completing her mission, both of his parents moved to Elenoir as newly-elevated Highbloods to govern the Alacryan colony. Seth was left completely alone in his studies at Central Academy. Then Circe ends his parents end up being getting killed when [[spoiler:she gets [[spoiler:they get caught up in the destruction of Elenoir when Aldir uses the World Eater technique on the kingdom]], leaving Seth completely alone in the world.
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Like his teacher, Seth hated the Dicathians as the people whom his sisterCirce, whom had been his guardian since their parents died, Circe had died fighting against as she had been caught up in [[spoiler:the destruction [[spoiler:died to successfully complete her mission to map out the enchanted elven forest, enabling the Alacryan invasion of Elenoir]]. However, thanks to Arthur's influence, Seth comes to the same realization as him that the other side [[spoiler:are as much victims of the DivineConflict as his own side]].
* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Like his teacher, Seth hated the Dicathians as the people whom his sister
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* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Congratulations, Seth! Thanks to your sister's actions during the war, your family name has been promoted to highblood status. How unfortunate that just shortly after getting that promotion, [[spoiler:your sister got caught up in the destruction of the kingdom she helped to conquer, leaving you alone to fend for yourself in Central Academy with your newfound status meaning absolutely nothing, especially to the bullies who have picked on you for so long]].
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* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Congratulations, Seth! Thanks to your sister's actions during the war, your family name has been promoted to highblood status. How unfortunate that just shortly after getting that promotion, [[spoiler:your sister parents got caught up in the destruction of the kingdom she your late sister helped to conquer, leaving you alone to fend for yourself in Central Academy with your newfound status meaning absolutely nothing, especially to the bullies who have picked on you for so long]].
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* SoleSurvivor: His parents died when he was young, and his sister Circe was killed when [[spoiler:Aldir destroyed Elenoir]].
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* SoleSurvivor: His parents died when he was young, and his sister Circe was [[spoiler:died of her wounds and mana overuse upon completing her mission to build and broadcast a map of the enchanted, unnavigable Elshire Forest of Elenoir for the Alacryan army's invasion]], and his parents were killed when [[spoiler:Aldir destroyed Elenoir]].
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* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Thanks to her actions during the war in [[spoiler:spearheading the conquest of Elenoir]], Circe and her brother Seth have their family promoted to highblood status. Unfortunately for her, [[spoiler:she ends up being one of the many, many casualties from Aldir destroying Elenoir]].
* PromotionToParent: After the death of their parents, Circe became Seth's caretaker.
* PromotionToParent: After the death of their parents, Circe became Seth's caretaker.
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* AFoolAndHisNewMoneyAreSoonParted: Thanks to her actions and [[spoiler:sacrificial death]] during the war in [[spoiler:spearheading the conquest of Elenoir]], Circe and her brother Seth have their Circe's family is promoted to highblood status. Unfortunately for her, [[spoiler:she ends up being one of the many, many casualties from Unfortunately, [[spoiler:her sacrifice is in vain as Aldir destroying Elenoir]].
* PromotionToParent: Aftercompletely destroys the death entirety of their parents, Circe became Seth's caretaker.Elenoir shortly afterward]].
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'''Alacryans''': [[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndVritraClan Vritra Clan]] ([[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndAgronaVritra Agrona Vritra]])\\
''[[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndAsuras Asuras]]'' ([[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndKezessIndrath Kezess Indrath]])]]]]-]
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'''Alacryans''': [[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndVritraClan VritraClan]] ([[Characters/TheBeginningAfterTheEndAgronaVritra Agrona Vritra]])\\
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* TheSpymaster: After [[spoiler:being enlisted by Caera to aid in Seris's rebellion, he acts as one by setting up a network of informants. It does not last long as his ring gets purged by Agrona]].Agrona, though he continues to relay information to Arthur after Seris's rebellion flees to Dicathen]].
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* BullyingADragon: Suffice to say, [[spoiler:dismissing the threats of his former overlord leads to Sulla being killed in a rather horrific fashion]].
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* MrExposition: Arthur learns from interrogating him the basics of the Alacryan bestowal system.
* SmallNameBigEgo: Despite proclaiming himself the scion of a powerful and influential blood, Arthur finds out from interrogating him that his boasts have little substance behind him and his family is far less prominent than he claims.
* SmallNameBigEgo: Despite proclaiming himself the scion of a powerful and influential blood, Arthur finds out from interrogating him that his boasts have little substance behind him and his family is far less prominent than he claims.
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* BullyingADragon: Suffice to say, [[spoiler:dismissing the threats of his former overlord leads to Sulla being killed in a rather horrific fashion]].
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