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Darth Skotia is a Cyborg Sith Lord who works in the Sphere of Ancient Knowledge under Darth Thanaton. He seems to have made it his personal goal in life to shut Lord Zash down at any opportunity.
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->''"Well, well, slave, it appears you didn’t die in Marka Ragnos’ tomb. How unfortunate. Tell me, did you get the holocron, or are we expecting a little light show today?"''
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Khem Val, also known as Shadow Killer and the Devourer was the Dashade servant of the late great Dark Lord of the Sith, Tulak Hord. Hord had locked Khem in a stasis machine for an unknown reason, but due to the Dark Lords death, Khem was forever trapped inside. Thousands of years later,
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'''Khem Val:''' ''I consume them and spit out their bones.''\\
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Khem Val, also known as Shadow Killer and the Devourer was the Dashade servant of the late great Dark Lord of the Sith, Tulak Hord. Hord had locked Khem in a stasis machine for an unknown reason, but due to the Dark Lords death, Khem was forever trapped inside. Thousands of years later,
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The main character of the story. She begins as a second-year student at the Tristain Academy of Magic, but after a mishap during the Springtime Familiar Summoning, she is ripped from her world and flung into a galaxy far, far away, briefly becoming a slave before becoming an Apprentice of Lord Zash in the Sith Empire. Louise's hobbies include knitting and horseback riding; later, she develops a love for learning as the galaxy opened to her is an interesting place and because she cannot knit nor ride horseback.
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