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'''Beef''' - Beef isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer. In fact he's about as dull as they come. They only thing this Gobbler Really has going for him is his large size. Beef usually serves as Dr. Drain's dumb muscle.
'''Beans''' - Beans in the only girl of the main three Gobblers. She's a bit brighter than Beef, but not by much.
'''Beans''' - Beans in the only girl of the main three Gobblers. She's a bit brighter than Beef, but not by much.
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'''Beef''' - Beef isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer. In fact he's about as dull as they come. They only thing this Gobbler Really really has going for him is his large size. Beef usually serves as Dr. Drain's dumb muscle.
'''Beans''' - Beansin is the only girl of the main three Gobblers. She's a bit brighter than Beef, but not by much.
'''Beans''' - Beans
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'''Stanly Staine''' - Stanly doesn't care for dirt or germs. He'd like nothing more than to lead a slow, quiet, clean life. But then, one day he finds himself as the reluctant hero of a clan of mutant creatures living in the drains. Life is hard enough going to school and dealing with the local bullies. But then try making time to save the local drains from a deranged madman. Suddenly he finds himself with far more excitement in his life than he ever wanted. But at the end of the day Stanley rises to the occasion and never fails to help out what could be his only real friends.
'''Mary-Jane Staine''' - Stanley's little sister is his exact opposite. Where as Stanley is usually a quiet, cautious person, Mary-Jane is adventurous and more than a little headstrong. She willingly jumps at the chance to help out her new friends. Mary-Jane occasionally has to prod Stanley into adventures. But, at the same time, Stanley has to occasionally hold Mary-Jane back from getting in over her head.
'''Mary-Jane Staine''' - Stanley's little sister is his exact opposite. Where as Stanley is usually a quiet, cautious person, Mary-Jane is adventurous and more than a little headstrong. She willingly jumps at the chance to help out her new friends. Mary-Jane occasionally has to prod Stanley into adventures. But, at the same time, Stanley has to occasionally hold Mary-Jane back from getting in over her head.
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Stanly doesn't care for dirt or germs. He'd like nothing more than to lead a slow, quiet, clean life. But then, one day he finds himself as the reluctant hero of a clan of mutant creatures living in the drains. Life is hard enough going to school and dealing with the local bullies. But then try making time to save the local drains from a deranged madman. Suddenly he finds himself with far more excitement in his life than he ever wanted. But at the end of the day Stanley rises to the occasion and never fails to help out what could be his only real
'''Mary-Jane Staine''' -
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Stanley's little sister is his exact opposite. Where as Stanley is usually a quiet, cautious person, Mary-Jane is adventurous and more than a little headstrong. She willingly jumps at the chance to help out her new friends. Mary-Jane occasionally has to prod Stanley into adventures. But, at the same time, Stanley has to occasionally hold Mary-Jane back from getting in over her head.
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