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-->“Ma'am,” he murmured, “it strikes me that your friend is brighter than she seems.”
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-->“Ma'am,” he murmured, “it strikes me that your friend is [[SmarterThanYouLook brighter than she seems.seems]].”
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** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce [[ActionGirl Taylor]] to go on a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce [[ActionGirl Taylor]] to go into going on a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor to go on a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor [[ActionGirl Taylor]] to go on a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor to go for a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor to go for on a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Absolutely subverted. Kinsey is Taylor's orderly, and he's utterly loyal to her. He's aware (and actively conceals the fact) that she's got an on-again off-again [[HideYourLesbians relationship]] with Andrea. There is strong indication that he's got more than professional feelings toward her ... BUT. He's still [[UndyingLoyalty absolutely loyal]] to her. (The fact that ''he's'' slept with Andrea on more than one occasion may go some way toward helping, here ...).
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Absolutely subverted. Kinsey is Taylor's orderly, and he's utterly loyal to her. He's aware (and actively conceals the fact) that she's got an on-again off-again [[HideYourLesbians relationship]] with Andrea. There is strong indication that he's got [[BodyguardCrush more than professional feelings feelings]] toward her ... BUT. He's still [[UndyingLoyalty absolutely loyal]] to her. (The fact that ''he's'' slept with Andrea on more than one occasion may go some way toward helping, here ...).
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* SergeantRock
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* SergeantRockSergeantRock.
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* EthicalSlut TurnedUpToEleven: Andrea enjoys sex, a lot. She also has [[NoNudityTaboo zero sense of shame]]. But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
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* EthicalSlut TurnedUpToEleven: Andrea enjoys sex, a lot. She also has [[NoNudityTaboo [[ShamelessFanserviceGirl zero sense of shame]]. But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
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* EthicalSlut TurnedUpToEleven: Andrea enjoys sex, a lot. She also has zero sense of shame. But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
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* EthicalSlut TurnedUpToEleven: Andrea enjoys sex, a lot. She also has [[NoNudityTaboo zero sense of shame.shame]]. But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
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* ButNotTooBi: She prefers women, but will flirt with guys. And sometimes more.
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* ButNotTooBi: She prefers women, but will flirt with guys. And sometimes more.do much more.
* CuddleBug: She's very physical.
* TheCutie: If anyone can pull off 'innocently sexy', it's her.
* CuddleBug: She's very physical.
* TheCutie: If anyone can pull off 'innocently sexy', it's her.
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* GenkiGirl: "Yay!"GenkiGirl
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-->"Moose!"
-->"Darn ''tootin'."''
-->"Yay!"
-->"Moose!"
-->"Darn ''tootin'."''
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* PluckyComicRelief: With an accent on 'comic relief'. She can pass for TheDitz or the {{Cloudcuckoolander}} with little difficulty; silly is her natural state of being. If she's actually being serious, you know the situation is dire.
--> Kinsey offered me the last piece of fish; I declined, so he ate it. Andrea stuffed her mouth with fries again, and bounced up to take the remains of our meal to the nearest garbage can. While she was doing this, Kinsey took the opportunity to lean in toward me.
-->“Ma'am,” he murmured, “it strikes me that your friend is brighter than she seems.”
-->“Oh, I know,” I replied, just as softly. “I've known for years. Don't ever assume she doesn't know something, just because you didn't tell her.”
-->“But why does she put on the bimbo act?” he asked, his eyebrows drawing together; mild frustration, I guessed. I got the impression that he'd wanted to add 'brainless' in there, but had left it out due to tact.
-->I grinned. “I don't think it's an act.”
--> Kinsey offered me the last piece of fish; I declined, so he ate it. Andrea stuffed her mouth with fries again, and bounced up to take the remains of our meal to the nearest garbage can. While she was doing this, Kinsey took the opportunity to lean in toward me.
-->“Ma'am,” he murmured, “it strikes me that your friend is brighter than she seems.”
-->“Oh, I know,” I replied, just as softly. “I've known for years. Don't ever assume she doesn't know something, just because you didn't tell her.”
-->“But why does she put on the bimbo act?” he asked, his eyebrows drawing together; mild frustration, I guessed. I got the impression that he'd wanted to add 'brainless' in there, but had left it out due to tact.
-->I grinned. “I don't think it's an act.”
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* EthicalSlut: Andrea enjoys sex. But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
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* BadassInDistress: in Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor to go for a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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* BadassInDistress: in BadassInDistress
** In Part 3-1, [[spoiler: he's under Nice Guy's influence, until she beats him up and kills Nice Guy]].
** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor to go for a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
** In Part 3-1, [[spoiler: he's under Nice Guy's influence, until she beats him up and kills Nice Guy]].
** In Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor to go for a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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* IOweYouMyLife: Literally, no. Professionally speaking, yes; he was facing discharge after a mind-control incident, and Taylor took him on as her orderly.
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* IOweYouMyLife: Literally, no. Professionally speaking, yes; he was facing discharge after a mind-control incident, [[spoiler: the Nice Guy incident]], and Taylor took him on as her orderly.
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* IOweYouMyLife: Literally, no. Professionally speaking, yes; he was facing discharge after a mind-control incident, and Taylor took him on as her orderly.
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* YouSavedMyLife: Literally, no. Professionally speaking, yes; he was facing discharge after a mind-control incident, and Taylor took him on as her orderly.
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* YouSavedMyLife: IOweYouMyLife: Literally, no. Professionally speaking, yes; he was facing discharge after a mind-control incident, and Taylor took him on as her orderly.
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Absolutely subverted. Kinsey is Taylor's orderly, and he's utterly loyal to her. He's aware (and actively conceals the fact) that she's got an on-again off-again [[HideYourLesbians relationship]] with Andrea. There is strong indication that he's got more than professional feelings toward her ... BUT. He's still absolutely loyal to her. (The fact that ''he's'' slept with Andrea on more than one occasion may go some way toward helping, here ...).
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Absolutely subverted. Kinsey is Taylor's orderly, and he's utterly loyal to her. He's aware (and actively conceals the fact) that she's got an on-again off-again [[HideYourLesbians relationship]] with Andrea. There is strong indication that he's got more than professional feelings toward her ... BUT. He's still [[UndyingLoyalty absolutely loyal loyal]] to her. (The fact that ''he's'' slept with Andrea on more than one occasion may go some way toward helping, here ...).
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Absolutely subverted. Kinsey is Taylor's orderly, and he's utterly loyal to her. He's aware (and actively conceals the fact) that she's got an on-again off-again [[HideYourGays relationship]] with Andrea. There is strong indication that he's got more than professional feelings toward her ... BUT. He's still absolutely loyal to her. (The fact that ''he's'' slept with Andrea on more than one occasion may go some way toward helping, here ...).
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Absolutely subverted. Kinsey is Taylor's orderly, and he's utterly loyal to her. He's aware (and actively conceals the fact) that she's got an on-again off-again [[HideYourGays [[HideYourLesbians relationship]] with Andrea. There is strong indication that he's got more than professional feelings toward her ... BUT. He's still absolutely loyal to her. (The fact that ''he's'' slept with Andrea on more than one occasion may go some way toward helping, here ...).
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* DumbMuscle: Averted. He's not stupid at all.
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* DumbMuscle: Averted. BrainsAndBrawn: The Taylor/Kinsey teamup. He's big and tough, and she's smart, although he's certainly not stupid at all. DumbMuscle.
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* EthicalSlut: Andrea enjoys sex (mainly, but not exclusively, with women). But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
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* BiTheWay:
ButNotTooBi: She prefers women, but will flirt with guys. And sometimes more.
* EthicalSlut: Andrea enjoyssex (mainly, but not exclusively, with women).sex. But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
* EthicalSlut: Andrea enjoys
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* IgnoredEnamoredUnderling: Absolutely subverted. Kinsey is Taylor's orderly, and he's utterly loyal to her. He's aware (and actively conceals the fact) that she's got an on-again off-again [[HideYourGays relationship]] with Andrea. There is strong indication that he's got more than professional feelings toward her ... BUT. He's still absolutely loyal to her. (The fact that ''he's'' slept with Andrea on more than one occasion may go some way toward helping, here ...).
* BiTheWay:
* GenkiGirl: "Yay!"
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* BaldOfAwesome - BadassInDistress: in Part 4-10, [[spoiler: he's abducted in order to coerce ActionGirl Taylor to go for a date with [[MagnificentBastard Marquis]]]]. It doesn't work out.
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*OneManArmy: He teaches hand to hand combat.DumbMuscle: Averted. He's not stupid at all.
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* EthicalSlut: Andrea enjoys sex (mainly, but not exclusively, with women). But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
* IfItsYouItsOkay
** Taylor is straight. Andrea is gay. Somehow, they make it work.
** Andrea is (mainly) girl-oriented. Kinsey is very male. She doesn't mind.
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: She has been this to Taylor, on occasion (it's part of why their relationship works).
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* EthicalSlut: Andrea enjoys sex (mainly, but not exclusively, with women). But she won't break up someone else's relationship.
* IfItsYouItsOkay
** Taylor is straight. Andrea is gay. Somehow, they make it work.
** Andrea is (mainly) girl-oriented. Kinsey is very male. She doesn't mind.
* LivingEmotionalCrutch: She has been this to Taylor, on occasion (it's part of why their relationship works).
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* OneManArmy: He beats up groups of thugs pretty daily.
* TheQuietOne
* TheStoic
* VigilanteMan: Being an ex-cop, Ryan now works alone.
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* AntiHero: As loyal as he is to his fellow MC brothers, he's still a crooked murderer. However, his goal was to avenge one of the them.
* {{Badass}}:
** BadassBoast: Delivers an awesome one after talking about his past.
** BadassBiker
** BadassBeard / BadassMustache
** BadassInCharge: He's a biker president.
* BeardOfEvil: Well, take a good look
* BigBad
* TheDreaded: Frankly. Everyone in town fears him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: He doesn't let ''anyone'' kill his fellow Circles members.
* NobleDemon: He's a cold murderer who doesn't hesitate to kill anyone who gets in his way, but he also posseses honor towards his biker club, and hurt anyone he cares about, you're dead.
* TragicVillain: The army messed him up.
* TheStoic
* TheSociopath
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* DamselInDistress
* TheChick
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* BadassArmy
* BadassBiker
* TattooedCrook
* NobleDemon: Despite being torturous criminals, they also posses loyalty as any other biker MC would.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's usually very laid-back and respectful, but doesn't hesitate to take down criminals. He would never let anyone hurt an innocent without taking up a fight.
* OneManArmy: He beats up groups of thugs pretty daily.
* TheQuietOne
* TheStoic
* VigilanteMan: Being an ex-cop, Ryan now works alone.
*
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[[folder:Drayke Saldago]]
* AntiHero: As loyal as he is to his fellow MC brothers, he's still a crooked murderer. However, his goal was to avenge one of the them.
* {{Badass}}:
** BadassBoast: Delivers an awesome one after talking about his past.
** BadassBiker
** BadassBeard / BadassMustache
** BadassInCharge: He's a biker president.
* BeardOfEvil: Well, take a good look
* BigBad
* TheDreaded: Frankly. Everyone in town fears him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: He doesn't let ''anyone'' kill his fellow Circles members.
* NobleDemon: He's a cold murderer who doesn't hesitate to kill anyone who gets in his way, but he also posseses honor towards his biker club, and hurt anyone he cares about, you're dead.
* TragicVillain: The army messed him up.
* TheStoic
* TheSociopath
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* DamselInDistress
* TheChick
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* BadassArmy
* BadassBiker
* TattooedCrook
* NobleDemon: Despite being torturous criminals, they also posses loyalty as any other biker MC would.
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* BaldOfAwesome
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* OneManArmy: Hebeats up groups of thugs pretty daily.
* TheQuietOne
* TheStoic
* VigilanteMan: Being an ex-cop, Ryan now works alone.
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* AntiHero: As loyal as he isteaches hand to his fellow MC brothers, he's still a crooked murderer. However, his goal was to avenge one of the them.
* {{Badass}}:
** BadassBoast: Delivers an awesome one after talking about his past.
** BadassBiker
** BadassBeard / BadassMustache
** BadassInCharge: He's a biker president.
* BeardOfEvil: Well, take a good look
* BigBad
* TheDreaded: Frankly. Everyone in town fears him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: He doesn't let ''anyone'' kill his fellow Circles members.
* NobleDemon: He's a cold murderer who doesn't hesitate to kill anyone who gets in his way, but he also posseses honor towards his biker club, and hurt anyone he cares about, you're dead.
* TragicVillain: The army messed him up.
* TheStoic
* TheSociopath
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* DamselInDistress
* TheChick
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[[folder:Other members of The Circle]]
* BadassArmy
* BadassBiker
* TattooedCrook
* NobleDemon: Despite being torturous criminals, they also posses loyalty as any other biker MC would.hand combat.
* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's usually
* OneManArmy: He
* TheQuietOne
* TheStoic
* VigilanteMan: Being an ex-cop, Ryan now works alone.
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[[folder:Drayke Saldago]]
* AntiHero: As loyal as he is
* {{Badass}}:
** BadassBoast: Delivers an awesome one after talking about his past.
** BadassBiker
** BadassBeard / BadassMustache
** BadassInCharge: He's a biker president.
* BeardOfEvil: Well, take a good look
* BigBad
* TheDreaded: Frankly. Everyone in town fears him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: He doesn't let ''anyone'' kill his fellow Circles members.
* NobleDemon: He's a cold murderer who doesn't hesitate to kill anyone who gets in his way, but he also posseses honor towards his biker club, and hurt anyone he cares about, you're dead.
* TragicVillain: The army messed him up.
* TheStoic
* TheSociopath
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[[folder:Darcy]]
* DamselInDistress
* TheChick
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* BadassArmy
* BadassBiker
* TattooedCrook
* NobleDemon: Despite being torturous criminals, they also posses loyalty as any other biker MC would.
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* BaldOfAwesome
* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's usually very laid-back and respectful, but doesn't hesitate to take down criminals. He would never let anyone hurt an innocent without taking up a fight.
* OneManArmy: He beats up groups of thugs pretty daily.
* VigilanteMan: Being an ex-cop, Ryan now works alone.
[[folder:Drayke Saldago]]
* AntiHero: As loyal as he is to his fellow MC brothers, he's still a crooked murderer. However, his goal was to avenge one of the them.
* {{Badass}}:
** BadassBoast: Delivers an awesome one after talking about his past.
** BadassBiker
** BadassBeard / BadassMustache
** BadassInCharge: He's a biker president.
** BigBad
* TheDreaded: Frankly. Everyone in town fears him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: He doesn't let ''anyone'' kill his fellow Circles members.
* NobleDemon: He's a cold murderer who doesn't hesitate to kill anyone who gets in his way, but he also posseses honor towards his biker club, and hurt anyone he cares about, you're dead.
* TragicVillain: The army messed him up.
* TheSociopath
*
[[folder:Darcy]]
* DamselInDistress
* TheChick
[[folder:Other members of The Circle]]
* BadassArmy
* BadassBiker
* TattooedCrook
* NobleDemon: Despite being torturous criminals, they also posses loyalty as any other biker MC would.
* {{Badass}}
* BaldOfAwesome
* BewareTheNiceOnes: He's usually very laid-back and respectful, but doesn't hesitate to take down criminals. He would never let anyone hurt an innocent without taking up a fight.
* OneManArmy: He beats up groups of thugs pretty daily.
* VigilanteMan: Being an ex-cop, Ryan now works alone.
[[folder:Drayke Saldago]]
* AntiHero: As loyal as he is to his fellow MC brothers, he's still a crooked murderer. However, his goal was to avenge one of the them.
* {{Badass}}:
** BadassBoast: Delivers an awesome one after talking about his past.
** BadassBiker
** BadassBeard / BadassMustache
** BadassInCharge: He's a biker president.
** BigBad
* TheDreaded: Frankly. Everyone in town fears him.
* EvenEvilHasStandards: He doesn't let ''anyone'' kill his fellow Circles members.
* NobleDemon: He's a cold murderer who doesn't hesitate to kill anyone who gets in his way, but he also posseses honor towards his biker club, and hurt anyone he cares about, you're dead.
* TragicVillain: The army messed him up.
* TheSociopath
*
[[folder:Darcy]]
* DamselInDistress
* TheChick
[[folder:Other members of The Circle]]
* BadassArmy
* BadassBiker
* TattooedCrook
* NobleDemon: Despite being torturous criminals, they also posses loyalty as any other biker MC would.