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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Ruby's naivety has been toned down a bit, which makes her easier on the pick-up when it comes to things. For example, she's suspicious of Cinder and her teammates when she bumps into them in the hall.
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* AdaptationalIntelligence: Ruby's naivety has been toned down a bit, which makes allows her easier on the pick-up when it comes to things. For more easily pick up things that seem off to her (for example, she's suspicious of Cinder and her teammates when she bumps into them in the hall.hall).
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* ChocolateBaby: Ruby is a mini clone of her mother with none of her father Taiyang. This is because [[spoiler:Tai is her step-father who has been raising her since she was a baby. The black haired Qrow is her biological father]].
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* ChocolateBaby: Ruby is a mini clone of her mother with none of no resemblances to her father Taiyang. This is because [[spoiler:Tai is her step-father who has been raising raised her since she was a baby. The black haired Qrow is her biological father]].
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* SweetTooth: Ruby likes her coffee ultra sweet. Her first meal at Beacon consisted of nothing but cookies, strawberries with cream, and cake.
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* SweetTooth: Much like her canon counterpart, Ruby likes her coffee ultra sweet. Her first meal at Beacon consisted of nothing but cookies, strawberries with cream, and cake.
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* EyesAreUnbreakable: Downplayed. Her eye wasn't permanently damaged due to her injury, but it did receive some damage. She did have to wear an eye-patch while recovering. Even several years afterwards, Weiss still suffers from slight vision issues.
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* EyesAreUnbreakable: Downplayed. Her eye wasn't permanently damaged due to her injury, but it did receive some damage. She did have damage that necessitated Weiss to wear an eye-patch while recovering. Even several years afterwards, Weiss still suffers from slight vision issues.
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* SelfHarm: She always wears long sleeves because her arms are covered in self-injury scars. She also [[spoiler:stabbed herself in the eye, which is how she got her a scar]].
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* SelfHarm: She always wears long sleeves because her arms are covered in self-injury scars. She also [[spoiler:stabbed herself in the eye, which is how she got explains her a eye scar]].
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* HasTwoMommies: She grew up with her father and uncle for all of her life, though their Huntsmen missions and personal traumas kept them from being 100% constants.
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* PromotionToParent: After Summer died, Taiyang fell into a depression for several years. Yang had to take care of her sister despite only being ten herself. This is how she got into FightClubbing as a way to make money.
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* PromotionToParent: After Summer died, Taiyang fell into a depression for several years. years, forcing Yang had to take care of her sister despite only being ten herself. This is how she She then got into FightClubbing as a way to make money.
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* StepfordSmiler: She hides her abandonment issues by seeming jovial.
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* StepfordSmiler: She hides her abandonment issues and volatile temper by seeming jovial.
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** Pyrrha receives a massive angst upgrade after [[spoiler:the fall of Beacon]]. Her character does a 180 after all the trauma she received. There's no equivalent in canon because [[spoiler:she died in Volume 3]].
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** Pyrrha receives a massive angst upgrade after [[spoiler:the fall of Beacon]]. Her character does a 180 after Beacon]], becoming much more withdrawn and sullen from all the trauma she received. There's no equivalent in canon because [[spoiler:she died in Volume 3]].
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: She survives [[spoiler:Volume 3]], but she ends up mentally and physically scared.
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* SparedByTheAdaptation: She survives [[spoiler:Volume 3]], but she ends up mentally and physically scared.scarred.
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* AlcoholicParent: She's been an alcoholic for at least thirty years (and her oldest is only in her late-twenties). She drinks to numb the pain of her abusive home life as well as [[spoiler:deal with her {{hallucinations}}]]. However, she [[spoiler:decides to quit after Weiss' InterruptedSuicide shows her the greater effects of her alcoholism]].
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* AlcoholicParent: She's been an alcoholic for at least thirty years (and her oldest is only in her late-twenties). She drinks late-twenties) in order to numb the pain of her abusive home life as well as and [[spoiler:deal with her {{hallucinations}}]]. However, she [[spoiler:decides to quit after Weiss' InterruptedSuicide shows her the greater effects of her alcoholism]].
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* DoAndroidsDream: Penny's humanity is called into questions more than once. She has a soul, acts like a human, and dreams (of sheep), so is she essentiallly human? This is added onto after it's revealed [[spoiler:Penny contains the soul of a human girl]].
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* PromotedToLoveInterest: Penny begins dating Ruby halfway through.through Volume 1.
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* RoboSpeak: Penny has a stilted way of talking.
* RobotGirl: Penny is a robotic teenage girl.
* RobotGirl: Penny is a robotic teenage girl.
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* MeaningfulRename: Cinder's name was originally [[spoiler:Chujo-hime]] and renamed herself after unlocking her semblance.
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* MeaningfulRename: Cinder's name was originally [[spoiler:Chujo-hime]] [[spoiler:Chujo]] and renamed herself after unlocking her semblance.
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* HasTwoMommies: She grew up with her father and uncle ([[spoiler:who is her biological father]]). This is lampshaded by her aunt Ivory when she mentions Ruby had two dads.
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* BiTheWay: She's casually bisexual.
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* BiTheWay: She's casually described as bisexual.
* HasTwoMommies: She grew up with her father and uncle
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* HollywoodAtheist: Due to her childhood as a sickly orphan whose village was destroyed, Nora stopped believing in gods years ago.
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* HollywoodAtheist: Due to her childhood as a sickly hungry orphan whose village was destroyed, Nora stopped believing in gods years ago.
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* DoesntKnowTheirOwnChild: She has trouble remembering basic facts about her kids because she spends so little time with them.
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* DoesntKnowTheirOwnChild: She has trouble remembering basic facts about her kids kids, such as Weiss' ComfortFood, because she spends so little time with them.
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's implied she used to be a SexSlave.
* MeaningfulRename: Cinder's name was originally [[spoiler:Chujo-hime]].
* MeaningfulRename: Cinder's name was originally [[spoiler:Chujo-hime]].
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's implied She had a WickedStepmother growing up. As a young teen, [[spoiler:her village was massacred by bandits and the survivors sold into slavery]]. Cinder was then [[spoiler:forced to live as a SexSlave for several years]], until her semblance unlocked and she used to be a SexSlave.
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* ImportantHaircut: Cinder cut her long hair after [[spoiler:escaping slavery]].
* MeaningfulRename: Cinder's name was originally[[spoiler:Chujo-hime]].[[spoiler:Chujo-hime]] and renamed herself after unlocking her semblance.
* ImportantHaircut: Cinder cut her long hair after [[spoiler:escaping slavery]].
* MeaningfulRename: Cinder's name was originally
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* PreciousPhoto: He carries around two cherished photos: one of a newborn Neo and another of his old team at Beacon's.
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* PreciousPhoto: He carries around two cherished photos: one of a newborn Neo and another of his old team at Beacon's.Beacon.
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** He was once a bright-eyed hunter-in-training like Ruby, but after he was unjustly kicked out of Beacon and arrested for a crime he didn't commit, he lost his way. While in jail, he was asked to be involved in a crime and that's how he got involved with th illegal dust trade.
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** He was once a bright-eyed hunter-in-training like Ruby, but after he was unjustly kicked out of Beacon and arrested for a crime he didn't commit, he lost his way. While in jail, he was asked to be involved in a crime and that's how he got involved with th the illegal dust trade.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The name "Willow" is semi-canon as it's appeared on an internal document for the series, but when ''Scars'' began Weiss' mother was unnamed in canon.
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* NamedByTheAdaptation: The name "Willow" is semi-canon as it's appeared on an internal document for the series, but when series before being fully canonized in volume 7. When ''Scars'' began Weiss' mother was still unnamed in canon.
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* DiseaseByAnyOtherName: He's clinical, manipulative, and violent for his age. According to WordOfGod, he has anti-social personality disorder.
* TheSociopath: According to WordOfGod, he has an undiagnosed case of anti-social personality disorder.
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* PsychopathicManChild: She monologues in a childish tone despite being at minimum a teenager. She's also brutally violent when she wants to be.
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* AmbiguousyRelated: Downplayed with Kali. They're sisters but look very different. It's possible that they're either half-siblings or adopted siblings, but they could also be full sisters.
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* MissingMom: His mother was killed by Adam [[spoiler:and Blake]] prior to the story.
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* {{Foil}}: To Ruby and Yang. They're sisters where one feels the need to protect the other.
* PromotedToLoveInterest: Militia has feelings for [[spoiler:Yang]].
* PromotedToLoveInterest: Militia has feelings for [[spoiler:Yang]].
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* ButToMeItWasTuesday: Raven claims not to remember [[spoiler:slaughtering Cinder's village and selling her into slavery]] because she's done that more than once.
* CainAndAbel: Raven hates her twin brother Qrow [[spoiler:because Summer loved him instead of her]]. She goes as far as to [[spoiler:plot to kill Qrow and his daughter Ruby]].
* GreenEyedMonster: Part of her disdain towards Qrow and Ruby comes from Summer loving tbem more than she loved Raven.
* CainAndAbel: Raven hates her twin brother Qrow [[spoiler:because Summer loved him instead of her]]. She goes as far as to [[spoiler:plot to kill Qrow and his daughter Ruby]].
* GreenEyedMonster: Part of her disdain towards Qrow and Ruby comes from Summer loving tbem more than she loved Raven.
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* MeaningfulRename: Cinder's name was originally [[spoiler:Chujo-hime]].
* ParentalAbandonment: She grew up with an EvilStepmother named Murasaki.
* ParentalAbandonment: She grew up with an EvilStepmother named Murasaki.
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* BigBrotherWorship: Weiss adores her older sister Winter in heavy part because Winter was the most affectionate member of her family growing up.
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* BigBrotherWorship: Weiss adores her older sister Winter Winter, in heavy part because Winter was the most affectionate member of her family growing up.up.
* BigotWithACrush: Downplayed. Weiss was raised to hate Faunus, but her love Blake is a Faunus. However, Weiss' crush develops ''after'' she learns Blake is a Faunus and after she's already started to become a FormerBigot.
* BigotWithACrush: Downplayed. Weiss was raised to hate Faunus, but her love Blake is a Faunus. However, Weiss' crush develops ''after'' she learns Blake is a Faunus and after she's already started to become a FormerBigot.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: Instead of being human, he's a fox Faunus.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: AdaptationSpeciesChange: Instead of being human, he's a fox Faunus.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: In canon, she's [[spoiler:a human (or at least, she was born one)]]. In ''Scars'', she's [[spoiler:the last remaining member of a humanoid precursor to Grimm]].
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: AdaptationSpeciesChange: In canon, she's [[spoiler:a human (or at least, she was born one)]]. In ''Scars'', she's [[spoiler:the last remaining member of a humanoid precursor to Grimm]].
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: She's a human-passing reptile Faunus (implied to be a chameleon Faunus), rather than a human.
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* AdaptationalSpeciesChange: AdaptationSpeciesChange: She's a human-passing reptile Faunus (implied to be a chameleon Faunus), rather than a human.
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* AscendedExtra: She's given more screentime and there's an entire chapter dedicated to her and Roman's backstory.
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* AscendedExtra: She's given more screentime and there's screentime. There's an entire chapter dedicated to her and Roman's backstory.
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* DaddysLittleVillain: She's Roman's precious daughter and they work together alongside Cinder.
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* DaddysLittleVillain: She's Roman's precious daughter and they work together together, alongside Cinder.
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* {{Foil}}: To Summer. They're both huntress' who died on a mission. However, Eon feared her daughter and looked down upon her while Summer was very affectionate towards her.
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* {{Foil}}: To Summer. They're both huntress' who died on a mission. However, Eon feared her daughter and looked down upon her her, while Summer was very affectionate towards her.her daughters.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Canon implies that she has naturally dark red/red-and-black hair. In ''Scars'', her hair is black and highlighted red.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Canon implies that she Ruby has naturally dark red/red-and-black red hair. In ''Scars'', her hair is black and highlighted red.
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* CoveredWithScars: Ruby's hands and arms are covered with scars because she doesn't always use Crescent Rose correctly.
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* MulticoloredHair: Red-and-black hair is a trait of Rose's.
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* GradeSkipper: Ruby began Beacon two years earlier than the normal.
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* GradeSkipper: Ruby began Beacon two years earlier than the normal.norm.
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* MulticoloredHair: Ruby naturally has black hair with red tints, which she inherited from her mother.
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* HalfIdenticalTwina: He looks like a male version of his twin Raven.
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* HalfIdenticalTwina: HalfIdenticalTwins: He looks like a male version of his twin Raven.
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* ReligiousBruiser: She's devoutly Dustist. After her depression worsens in Volume 4, she becomes even more religious and begins wearing a jewel (akin to a rosary).
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* ReligiousBruiser: She's devoutly Dustist. After her depression worsens in Volume 4, she becomes even more religious and begins wearing a jewel (akin to a rosary).crucifix).
* HonoraryUncle: She's not biologically related to Yang, but Yang sees her as her aunt anyway.
* PenName: She writes erotic novels under the name "Patty Berdioler".
* HalfIdenticalTwina: He looks like a male version of his twin Raven.
* HonoraryUncle: He's Yang's biological uncle but unrelated to his other niece Ruby ([[spoiler:or so she thinks]]).
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* DarkAndTroubledPast: It's implied she used to be a SexSlave.
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* AdaptationNameChange: It's implied her name is either "Neopolitan Torchwick" or "Neo Torchwick", instead of "Neo Politan"/"Neopolitan", but she's only refered to by her first name "Neo".
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* AdaptationNameChange: It's implied her name is either "Neopolitan Torchwick" or "Neo Torchwick", instead of "Neo Politan"/"Neopolitan", "Neopolitan"/"Neo Politan", but she's only refered to by her first name "Neo".
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* LittleBitBeastly: He's a bull Faunus with horns.
* LittleBitBeastly: She's a tiger Faunus who has tiger ears.
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* LittleBitBeastly: She's a human-passing Chameleon Faunus. Her Faunus traits look like normal blemishes or freckles.
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* AscendedExtra: She appears past Volume 3 when she decided to visit Taiyang and Yang to see how Yang's doing.
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* AscendedExtra: She appears past Volume 3 when she decided decides to visit Taiyang and Yang to see how Yang's doing.
* LittleBitBeastly: She's a human-passing Faunus
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* TheBully: He bullies Jaune, but his bullying is less "comedic cartoony bullying" and more "realistic JerkJock bullying". He also attempts to bully Velvet, but Coco attacks him for hurting her girlfriend.
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* TheBully: He bullies Jaune, but his bullying is less "comedic cartoony bullying" and more "realistic JerkJock bullying". He also attempts to bully Velvet, but however Coco attacks him for hurting her girlfriend.
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* TransTribulations: Ruby worries about people, including her father and friends when she came out, reacting negatively to her being trans, but everyone is fine with it. She has, however, been bullied in the past for being trans. She has been misgendered by at least two different characters.
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* TransTribulations: Ruby worries about people, including her father and friends when she came out, reacting negatively to her being trans, but everyone is fine with it. She has, however, been bullied in the past for being trans. She has also been misgendered by at least two different characters.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: Weiss had an ambiguous disorder until the writer clarified in comments that she has schizoaffective disorder (most likely the depressive type). Weiss' symptoms include poor self-esteem, occasional self-starvation, depression, SelfHarm (namely, cutting her arms), auditory and visual {{hallucinations}}, anhedonia (feeling empty), and [[DrivenToSuicide suicidal ideation]]. Weiss' illness has yet to be diagnosed in-universe due to Weiss not receiving psychiatric help.
* DiseaseByAnyOtherName: Weiss had an AmbiguousDisorder until the writer clarified in comments that she has schizoaffective disorder (most likely the depressive type). Weiss' symptoms include poor self-esteem, occasional self-starvation, depression, SelfHarm (namely, cutting her arms), auditory and visual {{hallucinations}}, anhedonia (feeling empty), and [[DrivenToSuicide suicidal ideation]]. Weiss' illness has yet to be diagnosed in-universe due to Weiss not receiving psychiatric help.
* LittleBitBeastly: Blake is a cat Faunus with cat ears.
* AgeLift: Winter is 28 instead of 23.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He isn't as ''obviously'' cruel and manipulative as his canonical version. While he is aloof, it is shown that he cares for Weiss and every sketchy-seeming thing he does is actually for her own good. This includes [[spoiler:inadvertently coaxing Jacques into naming him heir, because he realizes Weiss would be better off elsewhere]]. On the other hand, he behaves in an ambiguous manner towards people ''besides'' Weiss.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Downplayed. He isn't as ''obviously'' cruel and manipulative as his canonical version. While he is aloof, it is shown that he cares for Weiss and every sketchy-seeming thing he does is actually for her own good. This includes [[spoiler:inadvertently coaxing Jacques into naming him heir, because he realizes Weiss would be better off elsewhere]]. On the other hand, he behaves in an ambiguous manner towards people ''besides'' Weiss.
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* AdaptationNameChange: His surname is "[[spoiler:Hozuki]]", not "Belladonna".
* LittleBitBeastly: He's a cat Faunus with retractable cat claws.
* LittleBitBeastly: He's a cat Faunus with retractable cat claws.
* AdaptationNameChange: Her surname is "[[spoiler:Hozuki]]", not "Belladonna".
* LittleBitBeastly: She's a cat Faunus with cat ears.
* LittleBitBeastly: She's a cat Faunus with cat ears.
* LittleBitBeastly: She's a rabbit Faunus with rabbit ears.
* LittleBitBeastly: He's a monkey Faunus with a monkey's tail.
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* LittleBitBeastly: She's a scorpion Faunus with a scorpion tail.
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* LittleBitBeastly: She's a reptile Faunus. Her Faunus trait is her forked tongue.
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* CanonForeigner: It's implied that Roman divorced a wife in canon, but she's never described. Eon is instead an original character created for ''Scars''.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Violet is a dog Faunus who has dog ears.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He isn't as obviously cruel and manipulate as his canonical version. While he is aloof, it is shown that he cares for Weiss and every sketchy-seeming thing he does is actually for her own good. This includes [[spoiler:inadvertently coaxing Jacques into naming him heir, because he realizes Weiss would be better off elsewhere]]. On the other hand, he behaves in an ambiguous manner towards people ''besides'' Weiss.
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* AdaptationalNiceGuy: He isn't as obviously ''obviously'' cruel and manipulate manipulative as his canonical version. While he is aloof, it is shown that he cares for Weiss and every sketchy-seeming thing he does is actually for her own good. This includes [[spoiler:inadvertently coaxing Jacques into naming him heir, because he realizes Weiss would be better off elsewhere]]. On the other hand, he behaves in an ambiguous manner towards people ''besides'' Weiss.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: He [[spoiler:killed his father after he was deemed heir]] and is a side villain. His intentions, however, are vague because he acts in an ambiguous manner towards most people,
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Whitley is written as someone who has anti-social personality disorder.
* DisabledInTheAdaptation: Whitley is written as someone who has anti-social personality disorder.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Yang originally slapped Weiss for being the reason Blake ran off after accidentally revealing her Faunus heritage. The writer regrettes writing that scene as is because it contradicted later revelations, so they retconned it. In the revised scene, Yang nearly attacks Weiss but is stopped by Ruby before she can get too rough.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Yang originally slapped Weiss for being the reason Blake ran off after accidentally revealing her Faunus heritage. The writer regrettes regrets writing that scene as is because it contradicted later revelations, so they retconned it. In the revised scene, Yang nearly attacks Weiss but is stopped by Ruby before she can get too rough.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Yang originally slaps Weiss for being the reason Blake ran off after accidentally revealing her Faunus heritage. The writer regrets writing that scene as is, but it couldn't be removed because it was mentioned again elsewhere in the story.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Yang originally slaps slapped Weiss for being the reason Blake ran off after accidentally revealing her Faunus heritage. The writer regrets regrettes writing that scene as is, but it couldn't be removed is because it was mentioned again elsewhere in contradicted later revelations, so they retconned it. In the story.revised scene, Yang nearly attacks Weiss but is stopped by Ruby before she can get too rough.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Yang slaps Weiss for being the reason Blake ran off after accidentally revealing her Faunus heritage. The writer regrets writing that scene as is, but it couldn't be removed because it was mentioned again elsewhere in the story.
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* OutOfCharacterMoment: Yang originally slaps Weiss for being the reason Blake ran off after accidentally revealing her Faunus heritage. The writer regrets writing that scene as is, but it couldn't be removed because it was mentioned again elsewhere in the story.
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* AdaptationalHeroism: He isn't as cruel and manipulate as his canonical version. While he is aloof, it is shown that he cares for Weiss and every sketchy-seeming thing he does is actually for her own good. This includes [[spoiler:inadvertently coaxing Jacques into naming him heir, because he realizes Weiss would be better off elsewhere]].
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* AdaptationalHeroism: AdaptationalNiceGuy: He isn't as obviously cruel and manipulate as his canonical version. While he is aloof, it is shown that he cares for Weiss and every sketchy-seeming thing he does is actually for her own good. This includes [[spoiler:inadvertently coaxing Jacques into naming him heir, because he realizes Weiss would be better off elsewhere]]. On the other hand, he behaves in an ambiguous manner towards people ''besides'' Weiss.
* MoralityPet: Whitley is closest to his twin sister Weiss. He's morally ambiguous and stoic towards everyone but her. He even admits to his mother that [[spoiler:he'd likely kill her if it wasn't that Weiss would be saddened by her death]].
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* AdaptationNameChange: It's implied her name is either "Neopolitan Torchwick" or "Neo Torchwick", instead of "Neo Politan", but she's only refered to by her first name "Neo".
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* AdaptationNameChange: It's implied her name is either "Neopolitan Torchwick" or "Neo Torchwick", instead of "Neo Politan", Politan"/"Neopolitan", but she's only refered to by her first name "Neo".
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* AscendedExtra: In canon, they don't appear outside the "Yellow" trailer aside from a cameo in a Volume 2 episode. In ''Scars'', Yang comes across them when she goes to Junior's to drink in Volume 4.
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* AscendedExtra: In canon, they don't appear outside the "Yellow" trailer aside from a cameo in a Volume 2 episode. In ''Scars'', Yang comes across them when she goes to Junior's to drink in Volume 4. They later become more important later on.
* BigSisterInstinct: It's never mentioned who was born first, and being twins it doesn't matter, but Militia has this personality. Melanie took the brunt of their dad's abuse. Since then, Militia has told herself she wouldn't let anyone hurt her sister.
* DivergentCharacterEvolution: Militia is protective of Melanie and is the more serious of the two. Melanie is more soft and sentimental.
* BigSisterInstinct: It's never mentioned who was born first, and being twins it doesn't matter, but Militia has this personality. Melanie took the brunt of their dad's abuse. Since then, Militia has told herself she wouldn't let anyone hurt her sister.
* DivergentCharacterEvolution: Militia is protective of Melanie and is the more serious of the two. Melanie is more soft and sentimental.
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* HollywoodAtheist: It's implied that she She stopped believing in gods after Summer died.
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* HollywoodAtheist: Due to her childhood as a sickly orphan whose village was destroyed, Nora stopped believing in gods years ago.
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* AdaptationDyeJob: Canon implies that she has naturally dark red/red-and-black hair. In ''Scars'', her hair is black and highlighted red.
* ChocolateBaby: Ruby is a mini clone of her mother with none of her father Taiyang. This is because [[spoiler:Tai is her step-father who has been raising her since she was a baby. The black haired Qrow is her biological father]].
* StepfordSmiler: She keeps her troubles internalized.
* CodeName: Her old code name in the White Fang was "the Belladonna".
* RelatedInTheAdaptation: Sienna Khan, the White Fang's leader, is her maternal aunt.
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* ParentalTitleCharacterization: She usually refers to her step-mom Summer as "Mom" and her deadbeat biological mother Raven [[CallingParentsByTheirName by name]]. When she calls Raven by a title, it's almost always "Mother".
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* ParentalTitleCharacterization: She usually refers to her step-mom Summer as "Mom" and her deadbeat biological mother Raven [[CallingParentsByTheirName by name]]. When she calls Raven by a title, it's almost always "Mother"."Mother" (with "Mom" being used rarely).
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* AdaptationalAngstUpgrade: He holds more obvious childhood trauma than in canon.
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* RomanticAsexual: Yang mentions that Ruby is ace. Ruby's exact romantic orientation isn't mentioned, but she is attracted to Penny.
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* EvilFoil: To Ruby. They're both young women whose huntress mothers died when they were younger and they both have overprotective dads. Both Rubg and Neo also look near-identical to their mothers.
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* EvilFoil: EvilCounterpart: To Ruby. They're both young women whose huntress mothers mother's died when they were younger and they both have overprotective dads. Both Rubg and Neo also look near-identical to their mothers.
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* ParentalNeglectful: It's implied that she wasn't the kindest towards Neo. She didn't like Neo's CreepyChild behavior.
* PosthumousParent: She died on a mission prior to the story.
* PosthumousParent: She died on a mission prior to the story.
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* ParentalNeglectful: ParentalNeglect: It's implied that she wasn't the kindest towards Neo. She didn't like Neo's CreepyChild behavior.
*PosthumousParent: PosthumousCharacter: She died on a mission prior to the story.
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* AscendedExtra: In canon, they don't appear outside the "Yellow" trailer aside from a cameo in a Volume 2 episode. In ''Scars'', Yang comes across them when she goes to Junior's to drink im Volume 4.
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* AscendedExtra: In canon, they don't appear outside the "Yellow" trailer aside from a cameo in a Volume 2 episode. In ''Scars'', Yang comes across them when she goes to Junior's to drink im in Volume 4.
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* AmbiguousDisorder: She's been violent since childhood but it isn't clear if it's a reaction to anti-Faunus racism, a disorder, or just how she is.
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* CreepyChild: Her own mother called her a monster because she was violent as a kid.
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* EvilFoil: To Ruby. They're both young women whose huntress mothers died when they were younger and they both have overprotective dads. Both Rubg and Neo also look near-identical to their mothers.
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* MulticoloredHair: Her hair is naturally pink and brown.
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* {{Foil}}: To Summer. They're both huntress' who died on a mission. However, Eon feared her daughter and looked down upon her while Summer was very affectionate towards her.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Downplayed. She was on a team with Roman but they went their separate ways after Roman was kicked out of Beacon. They met again years later and got together.
* ParentalNeglectful: It's implied that she wasn't the kindest towards Neo. She didn't like Neo's CreepyChild behavior.
* PosthumousParent: She died on a mission prior to the story.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Her daughter Neo is described as looking identical to her.
* {{Foil}}: To Summer. They're both huntress' who died on a mission. However, Eon feared her daughter and looked down upon her while Summer was very affectionate towards her.
* HighSchoolSweethearts: Downplayed. She was on a team with Roman but they went their separate ways after Roman was kicked out of Beacon. They met again years later and got together.
* ParentalNeglectful: It's implied that she wasn't the kindest towards Neo. She didn't like Neo's CreepyChild behavior.
* PosthumousParent: She died on a mission prior to the story.
* StrongFamilyResemblance: Her daughter Neo is described as looking identical to her.
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* AdaptationNameChange: It's implied her name is either "Neopolitan Torchwick" or "Neo Torchwick", but she's only refered to by her first name "Neo".
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* AdaptationNameChange: It's implied her name is either "Neopolitan Torchwick" or "Neo Torchwick", instead of "Neo Politan", but she's only refered to by her first name "Neo".
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* BabyOfTheBunch: Ruby is only fifteen at the start, making her two years younger than the rest of the first-years. She's also the most childish out of her team.
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* TransTribulations: Ruby worries about people, including her father and friends when she came out, reacting negatively to her being trans but everyone is fine with it. She has, however, been bullied in the past for being trans and has been misgendered at least once.
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* TransTribulations: Ruby worries about people, including her father and friends when she came out, reacting negatively to her being trans trans, but everyone is fine with it. She has, however, been bullied in the past for being trans and trans. She has been misgendered by at least once.two different characters.
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* AcademicAlphaBitch:
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* AcademicAlphaBitch: Weiss is haughty and snappy but takes her schoolwork very seriously.
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* DefrostingTheIceQueen:DefrostingTheIceQueen: Going to Beacon defrosts her. Her relationship with her teammates, especially Blake and Yang, helps Weiss to become more open over time.
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* EyesAreUmbreakable: Downplayed. Her eye wasn't permanently damaged due to her injury, but it did receive some damage. She did have to wear an eye-patch while recovering. Even several years afterwards, Weiss still suffers from slight vision issues.
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* EyesAreUmbreakable: EyesAreUnbreakable: Downplayed. Her eye wasn't permanently damaged due to her injury, but it did receive some damage. She did have to wear an eye-patch while recovering. Even several years afterwards, Weiss still suffers from slight vision issues.
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* TookALevelInCheerfulness: Zig-zagged. Weiss does come out of her shell and become more open, but she also frequently goes through periods of depression due to her untreated mental illness.
* TookALevelInNiceness: Weiss starts off standoffish and aloof but becomes more friendly and less bigoted as time goes on.
* TookALevelInCheerfulness: Zig-zagged. Weiss does come out of her shell and become more open, but she also frequently goes through periods of depression due to her untreated mental illness.
* TookALevelInNiceness: Weiss starts off standoffish and aloof but becomes more friendly and less bigoted as time goes on.
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* SpoiledBrat:
SpoiledBrat: Subverted. People think she's a spoiled rich kid, but she's actually not due to her childhood. Weiss sometimes internalizes this feeling towards herself.
*TookALevelInCheerfulness: TookALevelInCheerfulness: Zig-zagged. Weiss does come out of her shell and become more open, but she also frequently goes through periods of depression due to her untreated mental illness.
*TookALevelInNiceness: TookALevelInKindness: Weiss starts off standoffish and aloof but becomes more friendly and less bigoted as time goes on.
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