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* ByronicHero: Not really in Act I, but definitely in Act II. In Act I, Andreas is a RenaissanceMan and BunnyEarsLawyer who has great passion and talent while also suffering from odd and vivid lucid dreams, and feels comfortable discussing theological and philosophical debates with others. However, his decisions when attempting to solve the Baron's murder and the pressure of it left him with bitter feelings about Tassing that he pretty much cuts off all contact with his friends from there. During the TimeSkip he gets married, but he quickly becomes unhappy and often looks for reasons to avoid going home [[spoiler:as a result of his son's death from the plague]], while also losing any passion for his work or anything that once made him happy. When he finally returns to Tassing after seven years, he's grown a BeardOfSorrow to reflect his more bitter and lonely outlook, all the passion he once had for life faded and prone to being more cynical and depressed about his life. He's also more introspective and prone to self-loathing, especially when being reminded of his previous visit to Tassing and Caspar's future career as an artist. [[spoiler:In Act III, Caspar's death and the Abbey being destroyed has left him with even more guilt and self-loathing, reducing him into being a lonely hermit who has become consumed with finding the Thread-Puller and suffers from vivid hallucinations.]]
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: [[spoiler:By Act III, 17 years of living alone in the ruins of the Abbey has knocked a few of his screws loose. He's visibly more timid, struggles to speak with Claus and Magdelene, and experiences vivid hallucinations of those who died in Act I and II. He gets better once he manages to overcome his trauma]].
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* GoMadFromTheIsolation: [[spoiler:By Act III, 17 18 years of living alone in the ruins of the Abbey has knocked a few of his screws loose. He's visibly more timid, struggles to speak with Claus and Magdelene, and experiences vivid hallucinations of those who died in Act I and II. He gets better once he manages to overcome his trauma]].
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* ImportantHaircut: [[spoiler:When he reappears in Act III, after spending 18 years of self-imposed isolation depressed and full of guilt, his hair and beard have grown long and unkempt. Months later, during the ending, both have been trimmed and cleaned up considerably, representing his return to society and a happier life.]]
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* NeverLearnedToRead: As she was illiterate, she had to get someone--especially Father Thomas--who needs to write down her vision. [[spoiler: Subverted as she was a former scribe and was the one who write down notes with an elaborate font for Father Thomas.]]
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* NeverLearnedToRead: As she was illiterate, she had to get someone--especially Father Thomas--who needs to write down her vision. [[spoiler: Subverted as she was a former scribe and was the one who write wrote down notes with an elaborate font for Father Thomas.]]
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* VillainousGlutton: A downplayed example. In chapter 2, most of the people in Tassing Andreas can eat with have only simple food to offer, in many cases worse than what they ate in chapter 1 because of the taxes and restrictions from the Abbey. When the Abbot invites Andreas to a meal to try and get him to side with him over the town, the table is set with delicious, rare and sofisticated food more fit for a noble. One of the brothers who works in the kitchen even notes as early as chapter 1 that Gernot was asking for more lavish meals. All this while the abbey is going through hard times financially, the abbot was unwilling to tighten his own belt and instead raised taxes on the town.
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* VillainousGlutton: A downplayed example. In chapter 2, most of the people in Tassing Andreas can eat with have only simple food to offer, in many cases worse than what they ate in chapter 1 because of the taxes and restrictions from the Abbey. When the Abbot invites Andreas to a meal to try and get him to side with him over the town, the table is set with delicious, rare and sofisticated sophisticated food more fit for a noble. One of the brothers who works in the kitchen even notes as early as chapter 1 that Gernot was asking for more lavish meals. All this while the abbey is going through hard times financially, the abbot was unwilling to tighten his own belt and instead raised taxes on the town.
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* HiddenDepths: In Act II, he is well-informed about the plight of Jewish people to the point of showing relief for refugees in more tolerant countries, like Poland, and sorrow for those who were expelled from countries with anti-semitic policie, like Spain, England and [[MyCountryTisOfTheeThatISting even his own home country of France]], if Andreas was asked about countries he traveled after he became a Master Artist.
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* HiddenDepths: In Act II, he is well-informed about the plight of Jewish people to the point of showing relief for refugees in more tolerant countries, like Poland, and sorrow for those who were expelled from countries with anti-semitic policie, policies, like Spain, England and [[MyCountryTisOfTheeThatISting even his own home country of France]], if when Andreas was is asked about countries he traveled after he became a Master Artist.
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England expelled its Jews in 1290, and the expulsion remained in force during the time Pentiment takes place.
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* HiddenDepths: In Act II, he is well-informed about the plight of Jewish people to the point of showing relief for refugees in more tolerant countries (England and Poland) countries, like Poland, and sorrow for those who were expelled from countries with anti-semitic policies (Spain, policie, like Spain, England and [[MyCountryTisOfTheeThatISting even his own home country of France]]) France]], if Andreas was asked about countries he traveled after he became a Master Artist.
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A widow of Ranning Kemperyn, who live in a dilapidated cottage next to Bauer family farm.
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