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* FalseUtopia: Life on Hermea seems idyllic at the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. But all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" being ruthlessly cast out. [[spoiler:And then it turns out all of its inhabitants were intended as HumanSacrifices.]]
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* FalseUtopia: Life on Hermea seems idyllic at the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. But all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" being ruthlessly cast out. [[spoiler:And then it turns out all of its inhabitants were intended as HumanSacrifices.{{Human Sacrifice}}s.]]
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Blood Mistress Jakalyn leads the the Red Mantis Assassins and has done so since the Death of Aroden. Simultaneously the High Priestess of Achaekek, she strictly observes her god's tenents.
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Blood Mistress Jakalyn leads the the Red Mantis Assassins and has done so since the Death of Aroden. Simultaneously the High Priestess of Achaekek, she strictly observes her god's tenents.
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** Halamendi Orrus: The first man to buy a gun from Alkenstar's Gunworks. He never made it out of the city and his SuperPrototype-Gun never reappeared.
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** Halamendi Orrus: The first man to buy a gun from Alkenstar's Gunworks. He never made it out of the city city, and his SuperPrototype-Gun never reappeared.
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* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was approached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict policy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original task is to kill [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definitely applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce a desicion on the matter. This was only worsend when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
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* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was approached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict policy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original task is to kill [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definitely applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce announce a desicion on the matter. This was only worsend worsened when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
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* FalseUtopia: Life on Hermea seems idyllic at the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. But all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" being ruthelessly ruthlessly cast out. [[spoiler:And then it turns out all of its inhabitants were inteded intended as HumanSacrifices.]]
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* FalseUtopia: Life on Hermea seems idyllic at the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. But all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" are ruthelessly cast out. [[spoiler:And then it turns out all of its inhabitants were inteded as HumanSacrifices.]]
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* FalseUtopia: Life on Hermea seems idyllic at the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. But all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" are being ruthelessly cast out. [[spoiler:And then it turns out all of its inhabitants were inteded as HumanSacrifices.]]
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* FalseUtopia: while life Life on Hermea seems idyllic at the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. Yet But all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" are ruthelessly cast out. [[spoiler:And then it turns out all of its inhabitants were inteded as HumanSacrifices.]]
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* SuperBreedingProgram: "The Glorious Endeavor", Hermea's founding cause, is an attempt to "perfect" the human race. Other races are sometimes invited, if they possesses skills that are deemed helpful or needed.
* SuperBreedingProgram: "The Glorious Endeavor", Hermea's founding cause, is an attempt to "perfect" the human race. Other races are sometimes invited, if they possesses skills that are deemed helpful or needed.
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* FalseUtopia: while life on Hermea seems idyllic on at the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. Yet all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" are ruthelessly cast out. [[spoiler:An [[spoiler:And then it turns out all of its inhabitants were inteded as HumanSacrifices.]]
* SuperBreedingProgram: "The Glorious Endeavor", Hermea's founding cause, is an attempt to"perfect" “perfect” the human race. Other races are sometimes invited, if they possesses possess skills that are deemed helpful or needed.
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Kerdak Bonefist's successor as leader of the Free Captains, Tessa is popular with ordinary pirates, yet worries some of the other captains with her recklessness.
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Kerdak Bonefist's successor as leader of the Free Captains, Tessa is popular with ordinary pirates, yet worries some of the other captains with her recklessness.
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* PirateGirl: She is still fairly young, and became a captian at the age of ''fifteen''.
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* PirateGirl: She is still fairly young, and became a captian captain at the age of ''fifteen''.
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Blood Mistress Jakalyn leads the the Red Mantis Assassins and has done so since the Death of Aroden. Simultainously the High Priestress of Achaekek, she strictly observes her god's tenents.
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Blood Mistress Jakalyn leads the the Red Mantis Assassins and has done so since the Death of Aroden. Simultainously Simultaneously the High Priestress Priestess of Achaekek, she strictly observes her god's tenents.
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** Halamendi Orrus: The first man to buy a gun form Alkenstar's Gunworks. He never made it out of the city and his SuperPrototype-Gun never reappeared.
** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artist, whoose death was a flashpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artist, whoose death was a flashpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
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** Halamendi Orrus: The first man to buy a gun form from Alkenstar's Gunworks. He never made it out of the city and his SuperPrototype-Gun never reappeared.
** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artist,whoose whose death was a flashpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artist,
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* TheDreaded: With the Red Mantis Assassins being this in general, one can only imagine the infamy of their leader. [[note]]Some even claim she was behind the death of Aroden![[/note]] Her announcement that she was hired by Queen Abrogail II to (extralegally) target some prominent Hellknights was enough to keep Order of the Scourge from further investigating the Queen.
* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was apporached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict policy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original purpose was to kill [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definetly applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce a desicion on the matter. this was only worsend when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was apporached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict policy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original purpose was to kill [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definetly applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce a desicion on the matter. this was only worsend when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
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* TheDreaded: With the Red Mantis Assassins being this in general, one can only imagine the infamy of their leader. [[note]]Some even claim she was behind the death of Aroden![[/note]] Her announcement that she was hired by Queen Abrogail II to (extralegally) target some prominent Hellknights was enough to keep Order of the Scourge from further investigating the Queen.
* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She wasapporached approached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict policy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original purpose was task is to kill [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definetly definitely applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce a desicion on the matter. this This was only worsend when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was
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* RedRightHand: She has a Red Streak in her otherwise black hair, remebering both the blood of her victims and showing her devotion Achaekek.
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* RedRightHand: She has a Red Streak in her otherwise black hair, remebering remembering both the blood of her victims and showing her devotion Achaekek.
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* CoolMask: The spiresword habitually wear strage-looking masks.
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* CoolMask: The spiresword spiresworn habitually wear strage-looking masks.
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* OurElvesAreDifferent: The Spiresword wear masks, all of them are HearingVoices, they speak a virtually dead language and view themselves as the rightful inheritors of a fallen, human empire.
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* OurElvesAreDifferent: The Spiresword Spiresworn wear masks, all of them are HearingVoices, they speak a virtually dead language and view themselves as the rightful inheritors of a fallen, human empire.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: She has admitted to personally have carried out at least three significant assassinations:
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* PerpetualStorm: The "Eye of Abendego" is a giant, permanent hurricane. It destroyed what is now known as the Sodden Lands. The Free Captains hold an annual reggat among its outskirts, wth the winner being granted a seat on the council.
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* PerpetualStorm: The "Eye of Abendego" is a giant, permanent hurricane. It destroyed what is now known as the Sodden Lands. The Free Captains hold an annual reggat reggata among its outskirts, wth the winner being granted a seat on the council.
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* PerpetualStorm: The "Eye of Abendego" is a giant, permanent hurricane. It destroyed what is now known as the Sodden Lands. The Free Captains hold an annual reggat among its outskirts, wth the winner being granted a seat on the council.
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Formelry an elven obervatory, Earthfall changed this island when the corpse of Acavna, Azlanti goddess of the moon, crashed into it after her failed attempt to stop Earthfall. From her courpse arose a twisted spire. After returning from their exile, the elves found this spire and claimed it for themselves. Influenced by strange visions and the dead goddesses' voice, the elves soon began to view themselves as Azlant's rightful inheritors, calling theselves the spiresworn.
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* MurderInc: The Red Mantis Assassins are a combination between this and a ReligionOfEvil. The followers of Achaekek,the god of assassins, who offer their services to the highest bidder.
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* MurderInc: The Red Mantis Assassins are a combination somewhere in between this and a ReligionOfEvil. The followers of Achaekek,the god of assassins, who offer their services to the highest bidder.
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Blood Mistress Jakalyn leads the the Red Mantis Assassins and has done so since the Death of Aroden. Simultainously the High Priestress of Achaekek, she strictly oberserves her god's tenents.
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Blood Mistress Jakalyn leads the the Red Mantis Assassins and has done so since the Death of Aroden. Simultainously the High Priestress of Achaekek, she strictly oberserves observes her god's tenents.
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** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artists, whoose death was a flashpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
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** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artists, artist, whoose death was a flashpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
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* TheDreaded: With the Red Mantis Assassins being this in general, one can only imagine the infamy of their leader. [[note]]Some even claim she was behind the death of Aroden![[/note]] Her anouncement that she was hired by Queen Abrogail II to (extralegally) target some prominent Hellknights was enough to keep Order of the Scourge from further investigating the Queen.
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* TheDreaded: With the Red Mantis Assassins being this in general, one can only imagine the infamy of their leader. [[note]]Some even claim she was behind the death of Aroden![[/note]] Her anouncement announcement that she was hired by Queen Abrogail II to (extralegally) target some prominent Hellknights was enough to keep Order of the Scourge from further investigating the Queen.
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Formelry an elven obervatory, earthfall changed this island when the corpse of Acavna, azlanti goddess of the moon, fell into it after her failed attempt to stop Earthfall. from her courpse, a twsieted spire arose. After returning from their exile, the elves found this spire and claimed it for themselves. Influenced by strange visions and the dead goddesses' voice, the elves soon began to view themselves as Azlant's rightful inheritors, calling theselves the spiresworn.
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Formelry an elven obervatory, earthfall Earthfall changed this island when the corpse of Acavna, azlanti Azlanti goddess of the moon, fell crashed into it after her failed attempt to stop Earthfall. from From her courpse, courpse arose a twsieted spire arose.twisted spire. After returning from their exile, the elves found this spire and claimed it for themselves. Influenced by strange visions and the dead goddesses' voice, the elves soon began to view themselves as Azlant's rightful inheritors, calling theselves the spiresworn.
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* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was apporached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict polcy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original purpose was to kill [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definetly applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce a desicion on the matter. this was only worsend when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
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* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was apporached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict polcy policy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original purpose was to kill [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definetly applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce a desicion on the matter. this was only worsend when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
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* EvilVersusEvil: Possibly. She was apporached with a contract to kill [[EvilOverlord the Whispering Tyrant]]. While the Red Mantisses have a strict polcy of not targeting rightful rulers (which arguably applies to Tar-Baphon), Achakek's original purpose was to kill GodhoodSeekers [[GodhoodSeeker Godhood Seekers]] (which definetly applies to Tar-Baphon). Jakalyn has yet to annouce a desicion on the matter. this was only worsend when her investigation linked the client to [[GodGuise Razmir]], who, in her eyes, is just as bad.
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** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artists, whoose death was a flshpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
** Chondru Marka: A professor from Magaambya, who claimed to have recovered lost OldMagic from the Shory empire, but died shortly before its demonstration.
** Chondru Marka: A professor from Magaambya, who claimed to have recovered lost OldMagic from the Shory empire, but died shortly before its demonstration.
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** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artists, whoose death was a flshpoint flashpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
** Chondru Marka: A professor from Magaambya, who claimed to have recovered lost OldMagic from the Shoryempire, Empire, but died shortly before its his first demonstration.
** Chondru Marka: A professor from Magaambya, who claimed to have recovered lost OldMagic from the Shory
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Blood Mistress Jakalyn leads the the Red Mantis Assassins and has done so since the Death of Aroden. Simultainously the High Priestress of Achaekek, she strictly oberserves her god's tenents.
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* BeenThereShapedHistory: She has admitted to personally have carried out at least three significant assassinations:
** Halamendi Orrus: The first man to buy a gun form Alkenstar's Gunworks. He never made it out of the city and his SuperPrototype-Gun never reappeared.
** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artists, whoose death was a flshpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
** Chondru Marka: A professor from Magaambya, who claimed to have recovered lost OldMagic from the Shory empire, but died shortly before its demonstration.
* TheDreaded: With the Red Mantis Assassins being this in general, one can only imagine the infamy of their leader. [[note]]Some even claim she was behind the death of Aroden![[/note]] Her anouncement that she was hired by Queen Abrogail II to (extralegally) target some prominent Hellknights was enough to keep Order of the Scourge from further investigating the Queen.
** Halamendi Orrus: The first man to buy a gun form Alkenstar's Gunworks. He never made it out of the city and his SuperPrototype-Gun never reappeared.
** Irlyna Vosh: A prominent Galtan artists, whoose death was a flshpoint for the [[TheRevolutionWillNotBeCivilized Red Revolution]].
** Chondru Marka: A professor from Magaambya, who claimed to have recovered lost OldMagic from the Shory empire, but died shortly before its demonstration.
* TheDreaded: With the Red Mantis Assassins being this in general, one can only imagine the infamy of their leader. [[note]]Some even claim she was behind the death of Aroden![[/note]] Her anouncement that she was hired by Queen Abrogail II to (extralegally) target some prominent Hellknights was enough to keep Order of the Scourge from further investigating the Queen.
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An island nation ruled by the gold dragon Mengkare, who seeks to perfect the human race, something he calls "The Glorious Endeavor". While orininally composed of volunteers, immigration to Hermea know works based on only on invitations of humans who are deemed suitable for the Endeavor, while those who fail to keep up with the standards of Mangkare are cast out.
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An island nation ruled by the gold dragon Mengkare, who seeks to perfect the human race, something he calls "The Glorious Endeavor". While orininally originally composed of volunteers, immigration to Hermea know now works based on only on invitations of humans who are deemed suitable for the Endeavor, while those who fail to keep up with the standards of Mangkare are cast out.
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* WeDoTheImpossible: She made a name for herself by succeding at raids that seemed almost impossible.
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* WeDoTheImpossible: She made a name for herself by succeding succeeding at raids that seemed almost impossible.
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->'''Race:''' human (possilbly Tian-Taldan-Nidalase)
->'''Class:''' cleric/Red Mantis Assassin/Trickster
->'''Class:''' cleric/Red Mantis Assassin/Trickster
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->'''Race:''' human Human (possilbly Tian-Taldan-Nidalase)
->'''Class:'''cleric/Red Cleric/Red Mantis Assassin/Trickster
->'''Class:'''
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->'''Race:''' human (possilbly Tian-Taldan-Nidalase)
->'''Class:''' cleric/Red Mantis Assassin/Trickster
->'''Alignment:''' LawfulEvil
->'''Class:''' cleric/Red Mantis Assassin/Trickster
->'''Alignment:''' LawfulEvil
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* RedRightHand: She has a Red Streak in her otherwise black hair, possibly siginifing her close bond with Achaekek. That, [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane or she just uses red dye...]]
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* RedRightHand: She has a Red Streak in her otherwise black hair, possibly siginifing remebering both the blood of her close bond with Achaekek. That, [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane or she just uses red dye...]]victims and showing her devotion Achaekek.
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* RedRightHand: She has a Red Streak in her otherwise black hair, possibly siginifing her close bond with Achaekek. That, [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane or she just uses red dye...]]
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* AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: She already controlled a massive fleet and Quent, the Shackles' second-largest port, when Kerdak was toppled.
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* AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: AsskickingLeadsToLeadership: She already controlled a massive fleet and Quent, the Shackles' second-largest port, when Kerdak was toppled.
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!!Moxix, the Drinker of Human Hopes
An ancient demon summoned long ago by an empire of cyclopes, Moxix was trapped atop an island known as Yoha's Graveyard when they were destroyed by their rivals.
An ancient demon summoned long ago by an empire of cyclopes, Moxix was trapped atop an island known as Yoha's Graveyard when they were destroyed by their rivals.
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->'''Race:''' half-elf
->'''Class:''' bard/duelist
->'''Alignment:''' ChaoticNeutral
Kerdak Bonefist's successor as leader of the
An ancient demon summoned long ago by an empire of cyclopes, Moxix was trapped atop an island known as Yoha's Graveyard when they were destroyed by their rivals.
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* AsskickingLeadsToAuthority: She already controlled a massive fleet and Quent, the Shackles' second-largest port, when Kerdak was toppled.
* FriendlyPirate: Downplayed: She is only ChaoticNeutral, an improvement compared to her NeutralEvil predecessor.
* PirateGirl: She is still fairly young, and became a captian at the age of ''fifteen''.
* SonOfAWhore: She was born the daughter of a human merchant sailor and an elven [[HighClassCallGirl sacred prostitute of Calistria]].
* WeDoTheImpossible: She made a name for herself by succeding at raids that seemed almost impossible.
!!Moxix, the Drinker of Human Hopes
An ancient demon summoned long ago by an empire of cyclopes, Moxix was trapped atop an island known as Yoha's Graveyard when they were destroyed by their rivals.
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* FriendlyPirate: Downplayed: She is only ChaoticNeutral, an improvement compared to her NeutralEvil predecessor.
* PirateGirl: She is still fairly young, and became a captian at the age of ''fifteen''.
* SonOfAWhore: She was born the daughter of a human merchant sailor and an elven [[HighClassCallGirl sacred prostitute of Calistria]].
* WeDoTheImpossible: She made a name for herself by succeding at raids that seemed almost impossible.
!!Moxix, the Drinker of Human Hopes
An ancient demon summoned long ago by an empire of cyclopes, Moxix was trapped atop an island known as Yoha's Graveyard when they were destroyed by their rivals.
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* MurderInc: The Red Mantis Assassins are a combination between this and a ReligionOfEvil, the followers of the god Achaekek, who offer their services to the highest bigger.
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* MurderInc: The Red Mantis Assassins are a combination between this and a ReligionOfEvil, the ReligionOfEvil. The followers of the of Achaekek,the god Achaekek, of assassins, who offer their services to the highest bigger.
bidder.
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* ProfessionalKiller: The Red Mantis Assassins are a combination between this and a ReligionOfEvil, the followers of the god Achaekek, who offer their services to the highest bigger.
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* ProfessionalKiller: MurderInc: The Red Mantis Assassins are a combination between this and a ReligionOfEvil, the followers of the god Achaekek, who offer their services to the highest bigger.
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-> '''Ruler''': The Amaranthine Council
Formelry an elven obervatory, earthfall changed this island when the corpse of Acavna, azlanti goddess of the moon, fell into it after her failed attempt to stop Earthfall. from her courpse, a twsieted spire arose. After returning from their exile, the elves found this spire and claimed it for themselves. Influenced by strange visions and the dead goddesses' voice, the elves soon began to view themselves as Azlant's rightful inheritors, calling theselves the spiresworn.
-> '''Ruler''': The Amaranthine Council
Formelry an elven obervatory, earthfall changed this island when the corpse of Acavna, azlanti goddess of the moon, fell into it after her failed attempt to stop Earthfall. from her courpse, a twsieted spire arose. After returning from their exile, the elves found this spire and claimed it for themselves. Influenced by strange visions and the dead goddesses' voice, the elves soon began to view themselves as Azlant's rightful inheritors, calling theselves the spiresworn.
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* CoolMask: The spiresword habitually wear strage-looking masks.
* HalfBreedDiscrimination: Interestingly inverted: "Spireborn" half-elves hold valued posts as diplomats and spies for the Amaranthine Council.
* HalfBreedDiscrimination: Interestingly inverted: "Spireborn" half-elves hold valued posts as diplomats and spies for the Amaranthine Council.
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* FalseUtopia: while life on Hermea seems idyllic on the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. Yet all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" are ruthelessly cast out.
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* FalseUtopia: while life on Hermea seems idyllic on the first glance, with a peaceful, progressive and communal life, as well as merit-based advancement. Yet all of this is in service of a SuperBreedingProgram, with those that are deemed "insufficent" are ruthelessly cast out. [[spoiler:An then it turns out all of its inhabitants were inteded as HumanSacrifices.]]
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* WretchedHive: Naturally, most towns and cities in this area are run-down slums full of crime and poverty, and of course every last one of them is a nest of pirates.
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* WretchedHive: Naturally, most towns and cities in this area are run-down slums full of crime and poverty, and of course every last one of them is [[NotSoSafeHarbor a nest of pirates.
pirates]].
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-> '''Ruler''': Hurricane King Kerdak Bonefist (formerly), Hurricane Queen Tessa Fairwind
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-> '''Ruler''': [[Characters/PathfinderAdventurePathSkullAndShackles Hurricane King Kerdak Bonefist Bonefist]] (formerly), Hurricane Queen Tessa Fairwind
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-> '''Ruler''':Mengkare, '''Ruler''': Mengkare, Shepard of Light
-> '''Capital''': none
-> '''Ruler''': Blood Mistress Jakalyn
A jungle-covered island inhabited by savage goblin tribes, as well as the infamous Red Mantis Assassins.
-> '''Ruler''': Blood Mistress Jakalyn
A jungle-covered island inhabited by savage goblin tribes, as well as the infamous Red Mantis Assassins.
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* ProfessionalKiller: The Red Mantis Assassins are a combination between this and a ReligionOfEvil, the followers of the god Achaekek, who offer their services to the highest bigger.
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-> '''Capital''': Port Peril
-> '''Ruler''': Hurricane King Kerdak Bonefist (formerly), Hurricane Queen Tessa Fairwind
A loose conferation of Pirate Lords operating in the archipelago off of western Garund, ruled by the council of Free Captains.
-> '''Ruler''': Hurricane King Kerdak Bonefist (formerly), Hurricane Queen Tessa Fairwind
A loose conferation of Pirate Lords operating in the archipelago off of western Garund, ruled by the council of Free Captains.
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* SlaveryIsASpecialKindOfEvil: The Free Captains are divided between those who engage in the slave trade, and those who vehemtly oppose it, such as Free Capatin Stella Fane.
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* SuperBreedingProgram: "The Glorious Endeavor", Hermea's founding cause, is an attempt to "perfect" the human race. Other races are sometimes invited, if they possesses skills that are deemed helpful or needed.
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-> '''Ruler''':Mengkare, Shepard of Light
An island nation ruled by the gold dragon Mengkare, who seeks to perfect the human race, something he calls "The Glorious Endeavor". While orininally composed of volunteers, immigration to Hermea know works based on only on invitations of humans who are deemed suitable for the Endeavor, while those who fail to keep up with the standards of Mangkare are cast out.
-> '''Ruler''':Mengkare, Shepard of Light
An island nation ruled by the gold dragon Mengkare, who seeks to perfect the human race, something he calls "The Glorious Endeavor". While orininally composed of volunteers, immigration to Hermea know works based on only on invitations of humans who are deemed suitable for the Endeavor, while those who fail to keep up with the standards of Mangkare are cast out.
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[[folder:Hermea]]
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!!Mengkare
[[quoteright:350:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/mengkare.png]]
->'''LawfulNeutral male great wyrm gold dragon'''
An ancient gold dragon who rules over the reclusive island-nation of Hermea, guiding it and its citizens towards a mysterious purpose.
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* FaceHeelTurn: His obsession with his mission has led him to losing sight of true goodness, and becoming one of the two gold dragons in history to tarnish. In the default setting he's slipped into neutrality, but by the time the party gets to him in Age of Ashes he's become fully LawfulEvil.%%In-universe alignment.
* HeelFaceTurn: While by the climax of Age of Ashes he's become a LawfulEvil KnightTemplar, it's possible for the players to make him realize the harm that he's causing, changing his alignment back to LawfulNeutral and setting him back on the path to goodness.%%In-universe alignment.
* KnightTemplar: Mengkare has been rearing an entire island's worth of humanoids as [[spoiler:sacrifical victims for a summoning ritual]], justifying his heinous actions by reasoning that he's doing it for the -- in and of itself noble -- goal of [[spoiler:killing Dahak]].
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[[folder:Mediogalti Island]]
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!!Jakalyn
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* MysteriousPast: Records of Jakalyn's life before she became the blood mistress, as well as records of the one she replaced, have proven all but impossible to track down, and those who have made it their mission to do so have invariably become the targets of assassinations themselves.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Despite her appearance as a young woman, Blood Mistress Jakalyn has ruled the Vernai for well over a century. The source of her apparent youth is an enigma.
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[[folder:Mordant Spire]]
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* HiddenElfVillage: The elves of the Mordant Spire have become secretive and xenophobic, strange even to their former brethren. Outsiders are likely to interact with the elves only if they break the Mordant Spire's rules against exploring Azlanti ruins.
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[[folder:The Shackles]]
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Of UsefulNotes/TheGoldenAgeOfPiracy in the Carribbean.
* WretchedHive: Naturally, most towns and cities in this area are run-down slums full of crime and poverty, and of course every last one of them is a nest of pirates.
!!Moxix, the Drinker of Human Hopes
An ancient demon summoned long ago by an empire of cyclopes, Moxix was trapped atop an island known as Yoha's Graveyard when they were destroyed by their rivals.
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* BreathWeapon: He can breath a cone of acidic fog laced with disease.
* BroughtDownToBadass: He was once a demon lord, but so long without worship has caused much of his power to slip away from them. He's still a CR 20 creature, capable of decimating all but the highest level players.
* DrivenToMadness: Failing a save against its ''eyebite'' spell invokes a second save as Moxix tries to unravel the target's mind.
* HopeCrusher: He's not called the Drinker of Human Hopes for nothing.
* HornsOfVillainy: He has a twisted mess of horns.
* MultiarmedAndDangerous: Moxix has four arms and is an extremely dangerous demon.
* RockMonster: He looks more like a statue than a flesh-and-blood creature, and, tellingly has DamageReduction that requires adamantine weapons to penetrate (which, typically only creatures made of stone or metal such as golems have)
* SealedEvilInACan: He's trapped in a ziggurat.
!!Aashaq the Annihilator
->'''ChaoticEvil female great wyrm red dragon cleric of Dahak 7'''
A red dragon who rules a cult on the island of Dahak's Fang.
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* BadassInDistress: She's been captured twice in her life, once as a wyrmling and once 200 years later. She's had over five centuries of growth since then and now nurses a pathological hatred towards any who would try and capture her again.
* {{Cult}}: A small one started around her as an aspect of Dahak's will.
* {{Kaiju}}: She's the largest size category in the game and her illustration shows her to be about three stories tall at the shoulder.
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[[folder:Hermea]]
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!!Mengkare
[[quoteright:350:https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/mengkare.png]]
->'''LawfulNeutral male great wyrm gold dragon'''
An ancient gold dragon who rules over the reclusive island-nation of Hermea, guiding it and its citizens towards a mysterious purpose.
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* FaceHeelTurn: His obsession with his mission has led him to losing sight of true goodness, and becoming one of the two gold dragons in history to tarnish. In the default setting he's slipped into neutrality, but by the time the party gets to him in Age of Ashes he's become fully LawfulEvil.%%In-universe alignment.
* HeelFaceTurn: While by the climax of Age of Ashes he's become a LawfulEvil KnightTemplar, it's possible for the players to make him realize the harm that he's causing, changing his alignment back to LawfulNeutral and setting him back on the path to goodness.%%In-universe alignment.
* KnightTemplar: Mengkare has been rearing an entire island's worth of humanoids as [[spoiler:sacrifical victims for a summoning ritual]], justifying his heinous actions by reasoning that he's doing it for the -- in and of itself noble -- goal of [[spoiler:killing Dahak]].
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[[folder:Mediogalti Island]]
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!!Jakalyn
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* MysteriousPast: Records of Jakalyn's life before she became the blood mistress, as well as records of the one she replaced, have proven all but impossible to track down, and those who have made it their mission to do so have invariably become the targets of assassinations themselves.
* OlderThanTheyLook: Despite her appearance as a young woman, Blood Mistress Jakalyn has ruled the Vernai for well over a century. The source of her apparent youth is an enigma.
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* HiddenElfVillage: The elves of the Mordant Spire have become secretive and xenophobic, strange even to their former brethren. Outsiders are likely to interact with the elves only if they break the Mordant Spire's rules against exploring Azlanti ruins.
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[[folder:The Shackles]]
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* FantasyCounterpartCulture: Of UsefulNotes/TheGoldenAgeOfPiracy in the Carribbean.
* WretchedHive: Naturally, most towns and cities in this area are run-down slums full of crime and poverty, and of course every last one of them is a nest of pirates.
!!Moxix, the Drinker of Human Hopes
An ancient demon summoned long ago by an empire of cyclopes, Moxix was trapped atop an island known as Yoha's Graveyard when they were destroyed by their rivals.
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* BreathWeapon: He can breath a cone of acidic fog laced with disease.
* BroughtDownToBadass: He was once a demon lord, but so long without worship has caused much of his power to slip away from them. He's still a CR 20 creature, capable of decimating all but the highest level players.
* DrivenToMadness: Failing a save against its ''eyebite'' spell invokes a second save as Moxix tries to unravel the target's mind.
* HopeCrusher: He's not called the Drinker of Human Hopes for nothing.
* HornsOfVillainy: He has a twisted mess of horns.
* MultiarmedAndDangerous: Moxix has four arms and is an extremely dangerous demon.
* RockMonster: He looks more like a statue than a flesh-and-blood creature, and, tellingly has DamageReduction that requires adamantine weapons to penetrate (which, typically only creatures made of stone or metal such as golems have)
* SealedEvilInACan: He's trapped in a ziggurat.
!!Aashaq the Annihilator
->'''ChaoticEvil female great wyrm red dragon cleric of Dahak 7'''
A red dragon who rules a cult on the island of Dahak's Fang.
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* BadassInDistress: She's been captured twice in her life, once as a wyrmling and once 200 years later. She's had over five centuries of growth since then and now nurses a pathological hatred towards any who would try and capture her again.
* {{Cult}}: A small one started around her as an aspect of Dahak's will.
* {{Kaiju}}: She's the largest size category in the game and her illustration shows her to be about three stories tall at the shoulder.
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