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History lesson on battleship theme naming in the US.
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A list of the battleships appearing in ''Pacific''. Compared to their IJN counterparts, most of the USN battleships with later hull numbers were more advanced by being constructed a bit before or during WWII - most of the Japanese battleships were laid down decades earlier and didn't had as good construction processes or good steel alloys. [[labelnote:Historical note]]Yamato and Musashi were the "youngest" battleships of the IJN fleet, while the ''Kongou''-class were the oldest. For a comparison, USS ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Wyoming_(BB-32) Wyoming]]'' and ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Arkansas_(BB-33) Arkansas]]'' of the ''Wyoming''-class were the oldest, with the ''Iowa''-class being the youngest.[[/labelnote]] That meant better armor, weaponry, better fire control, anti-air, more efficient engines, as well the advantage of radar with the radar rangefinder.
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A list of the battleships appearing in ''Pacific''. Compared to their IJN counterparts, most of the USN battleships with later hull numbers were more advanced by being constructed a bit before or during WWII - most of the Japanese battleships were laid down decades earlier and didn't had as good construction processes or good steel alloys. [[labelnote:Historical note]]Yamato and Musashi were the "youngest" battleships of the IJN fleet, while the ''Kongou''-class were the oldest. For a comparison, USS ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Wyoming_(BB-32) Wyoming]]'' and ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Arkansas_(BB-33) Arkansas]]'' of the ''Wyoming''-class were the oldest, with the ''Iowa''-class being the youngest.[[/labelnote]] That meant better armor, weaponry, better fire control, anti-air, more efficient engines, as well the advantage of radar with the radar rangefinder.
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* ThemeNaming: In this case, each and every one of them is named after a US state.
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* ThemeNaming: In this case, each and every one of them is named after a US state.
state.[[labelnote:Historical note]]Hawaii and Alaska were US territories until 1959, thus their historical ships were heavy cruisers, not battleships. The only exception to the theme was USS ''Kearsarge'' (BB-5).[[/labelnote]]
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* CustomUniform: Their outfits are very different. Even Missouri and Wisconsin, who have the most similar ones, have enough differences that it's almost impossible to get them confused.
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Perhaps I'm being anal, but Wisky wasn't the last Iowa-class commissioned - Wisky was laid down a few weeks after Mo and beat her to launch and commission by about eight weeks respectively.
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The fourth of the Iowa sisters, and representing the last ''Iowa''-class battleship commissioned, USS ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Wisconsin_(BB-64) Wisconsin]]''. Depicted as a meek young woman with blonde hair wielding a saber.
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The fourth of the Iowa sisters, and representing the last ''Iowa''-class battleship commissioned, USS ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Wisconsin_(BB-64) Wisconsin]]''.Wisconsin]]'', is technically the third ''Iowa''-class battleship to be launched and commissioned, narrowly beating out ''Missouri'' by a scarce two months. Depicted as a meek young woman with blonde hair wielding a saber.
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* GoingCommando: As noted in Vapor Wear, she pretty obviously is wearing nothing under that dress, most certainly not in her battle damage portrait.
* GoingCommando: As noted in Vapor Wear, she pretty obviously is wearing nothing under that dress, most certainly not in her battle damage portrait.
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* VaporWear: If one looks closely enough, it's clear that she's not wearing any panties 'or' a bra.
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* VaporWear: If one looks closely enough, it's clear that she's not wearing any panties 'or' ''or'' a bra.
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: Looks quite different from her sisters for reasons that remain unknown as of this writing. Instead of the stereotypically Caucasian blonde hair and blue/purple eyes of her sisters, she has brown eyes and long straight black hair that resembles a HimeCut. Combined with the outfit, accessories and colour scheme, it looks like the art team was trying to play the Iowa vs Yamato "rivalry" to the hilt and make her out-Yamato Yamato, a design choice absent from the others.
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: Looks quite different from her sisters for reasons that remain unknown as of this writing. Instead of the stereotypically Caucasian shades of blonde hair and blue/purple eyes of her sisters, she has brown eyes and long straight black hair that resembles a HimeCut. Combined with the outfit, accessories and colour scheme, it looks like the art team was trying to play the Iowa vs Yamato "rivalry" to the hilt and make her out-Yamato Yamato, a design choice absent from the others.
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** Also to Fusou. Both are depicted as RavenHairIvorySkin classical beauties of their respective nations, but Fusou is the unlucky grand old lady from World War I, whereas Iowa is the lucky newcomer commissioned DuringTheWar. Both of their art even stand in the same crossed legs stance and do the same outstretched hand with fingers pointing down thing, [[http://kancolle.wikia.com/wiki/File:BB_Fusou_026_Full.png albeit on opposite arms.]]
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** Also to Fusou. Both are depicted as RavenHairIvorySkin classical beauties of their respective nations, but Fusou is the unlucky grand old lady from World War I, whereas Iowa is the lucky newcomer commissioned DuringTheWar. Both of In their art art, both of them even stand in the same crossed legs stance and do the same outstretched hand with fingers pointing down thing, [[http://kancolle.wikia.com/wiki/File:BB_Fusou_026_Full.png albeit on opposite arms.]]
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* RedHeadedHero: Played straight.
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** Also to Fusou. Both are depicted as classical beauties of their respective nations, but Fusou is the unlucky old hand from World War I, whereas Iowa is the lucky newcomer commissioned DuringTheWar. Both of their art even do the same outstretched hand with fingers pointing down thing, [[http://kancolle.wikia.com/wiki/File:BB_Fusou_026_Full.png albeit on opposite arms.]]
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** Also to Fusou. Both are depicted as RavenHairIvorySkin classical beauties of their respective nations, but Fusou is the unlucky grand old hand lady from World War I, whereas Iowa is the lucky newcomer commissioned DuringTheWar. Both of their art even stand in the same crossed legs stance and do the same outstretched hand with fingers pointing down thing, [[http://kancolle.wikia.com/wiki/File:BB_Fusou_026_Full.png albeit on opposite arms.]]
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* {{Foil}}: To Yamato. Compared to the former, she looks more mature (and acts more mature), carries a similar albeit larger ParasolOfPrettiness which is blue as opposed to the former's red, and are the lead ships of their respective navies' largest and most powerful battleship class. And there's also the fact that they were more or less like hotels in comparison to the rest of their respective navies (''Iowa'' has a bathtub and elevator thanks to being the ship used to bring President UsefulNotes/FranklinDRoosevelt to Tehran, while Yamato was in fact often nicknamed "Hotel Yamato" thanks to her crew having better living conditions than on the other IJN ships.)
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** To Yamato. Compared to the former, she looks more mature (and acts more mature), carries a similar albeit larger ParasolOfPrettiness which is blue as opposed to the former's red, and are the lead ships of their respective navies' largest and most powerful battleship class. And there's also the fact that they were more or less like hotels in comparison to the rest of their respective navies (''Iowa'' has a bathtub and elevator thanks to being the ship used to bring President UsefulNotes/FranklinDRoosevelt to Tehran, while Yamato was in fact often nicknamed "Hotel Yamato" thanks to her crew having better living conditions than on the other IJN ships.))
** Also to Fusou. Both are depicted as classical beauties of their respective nations, but Fusou is the unlucky old hand from World War I, whereas Iowa is the lucky newcomer commissioned DuringTheWar. Both of their art even do the same outstretched hand with fingers pointing down thing, [[http://kancolle.wikia.com/wiki/File:BB_Fusou_026_Full.png albeit on opposite arms.]]
** To Yamato. Compared to the former, she looks more mature (and acts more mature), carries a similar albeit larger ParasolOfPrettiness which is blue as opposed to the former's red, and are the lead ships of their respective navies' largest and most powerful battleship class. And there's also the fact that they were more or less like hotels in comparison to the rest of their respective navies (''Iowa'' has a bathtub and elevator thanks to being the ship used to bring President UsefulNotes/FranklinDRoosevelt to Tehran, while Yamato was in fact often nicknamed "Hotel Yamato" thanks to her crew having better living conditions than on the other IJN ships.
** Also to Fusou. Both are depicted as classical beauties of their respective nations, but Fusou is the unlucky old hand from World War I, whereas Iowa is the lucky newcomer commissioned DuringTheWar. Both of their art even do the same outstretched hand with fingers pointing down thing, [[http://kancolle.wikia.com/wiki/File:BB_Fusou_026_Full.png albeit on opposite arms.]]
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* '''{{Cowgirl}}''': A given, considering that she's based on city in Texas.
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* '''{{Cowgirl}}''': {{Cowgirl}}: A given, considering that she's based on city in Texas.
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* UsefulNotes/{{Chicago}}: [[CaptainObvious Of course]].
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* UsefulNotes/{{Houston}}: [[CaptainObvious Eyup]].
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* UsefulNotes/{{San Francisco}}: [[CaptainObvious Duh]].
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* FieryRedhead / HeroicRedhead: It even extends to her fighting style.
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* FieryRedhead / HeroicRedhead: FieryRedhead: It even extends to her fighting style.
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* PhenotypeStereotype: Blonde hair and blue eyes. Yup, definitely American.
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-->"I'm the lead ship of the Northhampton-class of heavy cruisers. As it is my intention to protect you, I'll never retreat!"
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-->"I'm the lead ship of the Northhampton-class ''Northhampton''-class of heavy cruisers. As it is my intention to protect you, I'll never retreat!"
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* TheAce: Surprisingly, given that she earned the most awards out of the five of Northampton-class cruisers.
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* TheAce: Surprisingly, given that she earned the most awards out of the five of Northampton-class ''Northampton''-class cruisers.
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Named after [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chicago city]] of Chicago itself, she represents the fourth Northampton-class, USS ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Chicago_(CA-29) Chicago]]''. She's depicted as a young woman clad in a 1940s-era police outfit, complete with an M1928 Thompson SMG (aka "The Chicago Typewriter").
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Named after [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chicago city]] of Chicago itself, she represents the fourth Northampton-class, ''Northampton''-class, USS ''[[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Chicago_(CA-29) Chicago]]''. She's depicted as a young woman clad in a 1940s-era police outfit, complete with an M1928 Thompson SMG (aka "The Chicago Typewriter").
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Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], USS [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Des_Moines_(CA-134) Des Moines]] is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy. Unlike most of the other ships featured in this fic, Des Moines is an immediate post-war design.
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Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], USS [[https://en.''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Des_Moines_(CA-134) Des Moines]] Moines]]'' is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy. Unlike most of the other ships featured in this fic, Des Moines is an immediate post-war design.
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* NonstandardCharacterDesign: The only USN Heavy Cruiser not have have SailorFuku-esque clothes. Instead, she gets what resembles an aviator jacket, shorts, and stockings complete with boots.It probably helps that she's not a prewar "Treaty" Cruiser like the others.
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* NonstandardCharacterDesign: The only USN Heavy Cruiser not have have SailorFuku-esque clothes. Instead, she gets what resembles an aviator jacket, shorts, and stockings complete with boots.It probably helps that she's not a prewar pre-war "Treaty" Cruiser like the others.
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The shipgirl incarnation of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Florida_(BB-30) USS Florida]].
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The shipgirl incarnation of [[https://en.USS ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Florida_(BB-30) USS Florida]].
Florida]]''.
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The personification of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_New_York_(BB-34) USS New York]]. Depicted as a young woman in a business suit.
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The personification of [[https://en.USS ''[[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_New_York_(BB-34) USS New York]].York]]''. Depicted as a young woman in a business suit.
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The shipgirl incarnation of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Florida_(BB-30) USS Florida]].
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!!! Florida (BB-30)
The shipgirl incarnation of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Florida_(BB-30) USS Florida]].
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Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], USS [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Des_Moines_(CA-134) Des Moines]] is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy.
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Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], USS [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Des_Moines_(CA-134) Des Moines]] is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy. Unlike most of the other ships featured in this fic, Des Moines is an immediate post-war design.
Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], USS [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Des_Moines_(CA-134) Des Moines]] is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy. Unlike most of the other ships featured in this fic, Des Moines is an immediate post-war design.
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* ZettaiRyouiki: Type A with black knee socks.
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* ZettaiRyouiki: Type A with black knee socks.
socks ''and'' stockings.
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others.
* WhoWearsShortShorts: She does.
* ZettaiRyouiki: Type A with black knee socks.
* WhoWearsShortShorts: She does.
* ZettaiRyouiki: Type A with black knee socks.
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Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], USS [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/USS_Des_Moines_(CA-134) Des Moines Moines]] is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy.
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* SailorFuku: All of their costumes are styled in a way that resembles a typical school uniform. The one exception here is Houston's costume, as detailed below.
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* SailorFuku: All of their the Treaty Cruisers' costumes are styled in a way that resembles a typical school uniform. The one exception here is Houston's costume, as detailed below.
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!!! Des Moines (CA-134)
Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], Des Moines is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy.
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!!! Des Moines (CA-134)
Named after the city of [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Des_Moines,_Iowa Des Moines, Iowa]], Des Moines is the lead ship of one of the last all-gun type cruisers in the US Navy.
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* PhenotypeStereotype: Blonde hair and blue eyes, natch.
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* TokenWholesome: While an actual antebellum belle would never be caught dead with such a high hemline, the rest of her outfit is far more restrained than "neckline and side slit go to ''where''?" Jersey, "I see England, I see France" Missouri or "there's nothing under here" Wisconsin.
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* AbsoluteCleavage: Her dress' neckline plunges, to say the least.
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* JoustingLance: Her [[SignatureMove trademark weapon]]. Jousting is, in fact, the state sport of Maryland.
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* JoustingLance: Her [[SignatureMove trademark weapon]].WeaponOfChoice. Jousting is, in fact, the state sport of Maryland.
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* SexyBacklessOutfit: Though not very obvious in the regular art, concept art shows that her dress leaves her back bare from collar to waist.
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* HighGlassGloves: With the exception of Iowa, they wear fancy opera gloves, with New Jersey getting blue ones and Wisconsin and Missouri getting white ones.
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* HighGlassGloves: HighClassGloves: With the exception of Iowa, they wear fancy opera gloves, with New Jersey getting blue ones and Wisconsin and Missouri getting white ones.
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* OperaGloves: With the exception of Iowa, they have these, with New Jersey getting blue ones and Wisconsin and Missouri getting white ones.
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* OperaGloves: HighGlassGloves: With the exception of Iowa, they have these, wear fancy opera gloves, with New Jersey getting blue ones and Wisconsin and Missouri getting white ones.
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* PhenotypeStereotype: One of the few characters to actually fall under this trope. She's blonde, has blue eyes, and has an impressive...displacement, to boot.