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* TheAce: After years in the time loop, Zorian has become exceptionally dependable to the point where he did what even Zach couldn’t. He's still lacking in raw power, but works around it by building advanced magical items with their own power sources.
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* TheAce: After years in the time loop, Zorian has become exceptionally dependable to skilled [[spoiler:to the point where he did what even Zach couldn’t.his contribution to the final battle is greter than Zach's]]. He's still lacking in raw power, but works around it by building advanced magical items with their own power sources.
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* StayInTheKitchen: Her parents refuse to let her take any risk.
* StrongButUnskilled: Taiven is a very skilled user of battle magic, but she lacks experience compared to Zorian and Zach. As a result, many of her attacks are straight forward and destructive.
* StrongButUnskilled: Taiven is a very skilled user of battle magic, but she lacks experience compared to Zorian and Zach. As a result, many of her attacks are straight forward and destructive.
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* StayInTheKitchen: Her parents refuse try to let stop her take from taking any risk.
risks.[[spoiler: Considering she'd die without Zorian's help, they're not wrong.]]
* StrongButUnskilled: Taiven is a veryskilled well trained user of battle magic, but she lacks experience compared to Zorian is still young and Zach. has limited experience. As a result, compared to mid to late story Zorian, many of her attacks are straight forward and destructive.
* StrongButUnskilled: Taiven is a very
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* PragmaticHero: Zorian is extremely driven in his goals and will resort to [[MindRape mind raping]] people if they have information related to the invasion. However, he still feels guilty about this, even if the target was irredeemable.
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* PragmaticHero: Zorian is extremely driven in his goals and will resort to [[MindRape mind raping]] people if they have information related to the invasion. However, he still feels guilty about this, even if the target was irredeemable. The angels specifically note that he would completely fail their ethical requirements for an agent because of this.
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* ProperlyParanoid: He ''never'' lets his psychic defenses drop, and generally has a huge number of contingencies planned. As we see, there are, in fact, numerous psychics (both relatively benign, like Zorian, and outright dangerous, like the cranium rats) that would exploit him in various ways if he didn't.
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* SuicideAttack: In one iteration he realises he was trapped in a time loop, and decide to blow his own soul up to kill Zorian and Zach. It only failed because Zorian interrupted the iteration just in time, but he managed to durably injured them.
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* SuicideAttack: In one iteration he realises he was trapped in a time loop, and decide to blow his own soul up to kill Zorian and Zach. It only failed because Zorian interrupted the iteration just in time, but he and it still managed to durably injured them.leave lasting injuries.
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* KarmaHoudini: While the invasion is thwarted and he loses his incredibly valuable crown, Quatach-Ichl gets off far lighter than the other two main villains and even gets part of what he wanted out of the attack (a war between Ulquaan Ibasa and Eldemar, which destroys his political opponents hopes for rapprochement.)
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* KarmaHoudini: While the invasion is thwarted and he loses his incredibly valuable crown, Quatach-Ichl gets off far lighter than the other two main villains and even gets part of what he wanted out of the attack (a war between Ulquaan Ibasa and Eldemar, which destroys his political opponents opponents' hopes for rapprochement.)
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* IGaveMyWord: As he said: ''"I'm an honorable lich, only ruthless to my enemies, and I pride myself on my fair and honest dealing with others"''. In the story he always keep his words, until someone try to betray him, and Zach and Zorian take advantage of it.
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* IGaveMyWord: As he said: ''"I'm an honorable lich, only ruthless to my enemies, and I pride myself on my fair and honest dealing with others"''. In the story he always keep keeps his words, until someone try to betray him, and words unless he's betrayed first, which Zach and Zorian take advantage of it.of.
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** He may be leading an invasion intended to kill tens or hundreds of thousands of people, but he has a clear foreign policy am in doing so; he doesn't approve of Red Robe's plans for mass slaughter and chaos.
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** He may be leading an invasion intended to kill tens or hundreds of thousands of people, but he has a clear foreign policy am aim in doing so; he doesn't approve of Red Robe's plans for mass slaughter and chaos.
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[[folder: Lance Spear of Resolve Striking Straight at the Heart of the Matter]]
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* OutnumberedSibling: The youngest child of her family and youngest and the only girl of her parents' children.
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* BookDumb: A skilled musician and charmer, but is failing school.
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* AffablyEvil: Jovial, charming, polite, reasonable, and a mass murderer.
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* AffablyEvil: Jovial, charming, polite, reasonable, and a war criminal and mass murderer.
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* BlingOfWar: His usual apparence, the one he use to intimidate peoples, is a black skeleton, wreathed in [[SicklyGreenGlow sickly green light]], and GlowingEyelightsOfUndeath. He wears a gold-decorated armor, a scepter and a crown full of purple gemstones.
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* BlingOfWar: His usual apparence, appearance, the one he use to intimidate peoples, is a black skeleton, wreathed in [[SicklyGreenGlow sickly green light]], and GlowingEyelightsOfUndeath. He wears a gold-decorated armor, a scepter and a crown full of purple gemstones.
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* KarmaHoudini: While the invasion is thwarted and he loses his incredibly valuable crown, Quatach-Ichl gets off far lighter than the other two main villains and even gets part of what he wanted out of the attack (a war between Ulquaan Ibasa and Eldemar.)
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* KarmaHoudini: While the invasion is thwarted and he loses his incredibly valuable crown, Quatach-Ichl gets off far lighter than the other two main villains and even gets part of what he wanted out of the attack (a war between Ulquaan Ibasa and Eldemar.Eldemar, which destroys his political opponents hopes for rapprochement.)
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* GoodParents: For her daughter Kana.
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* GoodParents: For her his daughter Kana.
* HeelFaceTurn: There is a lot of evidence that the species was considerably less moral in the past.
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* ThemeNaming: Araneas seem to choose their names according to their personalities. From Mind Like Fire:
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* ThemeNaming: Araneas seem to choose their names according to their personalities. NameThatUnfoldsLikeLotusBlossom: From Mind Like Fire:
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* ThemeNaming: Araneas seem to choose their names according to their personalities.
* MoralMyopia: Is, however, distinctly pragmatic when dealing with outsiders.
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* HonorBeforeReason: As he said: ''"I'm an honorable lich, only ruthless to my enemies, and I pride myself on my fair and honest dealing with others"''. In the story he [[IGaveMyWord always keep his words]], until someone try to betray him, and Zach and Zorian take advantage of it.
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* HonorBeforeReason: IGaveMyWord: As he said: ''"I'm an honorable lich, only ruthless to my enemies, and I pride myself on my fair and honest dealing with others"''. In the story he [[IGaveMyWord always keep his words]], words, until someone try to betray him, and Zach and Zorian take advantage of it.it.
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* ChallengeSeeker: He loves nothing less than fighting a strong opponent.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Since he was hiding his identity, his true name is Jornak Dokochin.
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* OnlyKnownByTheirNickname: Since he his identity was hiding his identity, his true name unknown for most of the story, Zorian simply calls him "Red Robe." His actual identity is Jornak Dokochin.[[spoiler:Jornak Dokochin]].
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* DealWithTheDevil: With Quatach-Ichl and the Primordial, to leave the time loop.
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* DealWithTheDevil: With Quatach-Ichl [[spoiler:Quatach-Ichl and the Primordial, to leave the time loop.]]
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* AmbitionIsEvil: He was a simple lawyer who had his birthright stolen, and now he wants to be King, no matter the means.
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* AmbitionIsEvil: He was a [[spoiler:a simple lawyer who had his birthright stolen, stolen]], and now he wants to be King, no matter the means.
* FromNobodyToNightmare: [[spoiler:Before the time loop, he was a completely insigificant lawyer from a fallen family. When Zorian reads his original self's mind, he finds absolutely nothing noteworthy there whatsoever.]]
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* SuccessionCrisis: Like Zach and Veyers his inheritance was stolen with the complicity of the authorities.
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* SuccessionCrisis: Like Zach and Veyers his Veyers, [[spoiler:his inheritance was stolen with the complicity of the authorities.authorities]].
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** He seems to genuinely believe in his long-term goals and ideology, as shown by his willingness to sacrifice his life for an alt-self; this is contrasted notably with Silverlake, who alternate selves inevitably betray each other when given the chance.
* {{Glamour}}: When he needs, he takes the appearence of an elegant man with expensive-looking suit.
* {{Glamour}}: When he needs, he takes the appearence of an elegant man with expensive-looking suit.
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** He seems to genuinely believe in his long-term goals and ideology, as shown by his willingness to sacrifice his life for an alt-self; this is contrasted notably with Silverlake, who whose alternate selves inevitably betray each other when given the chance.
* {{Glamour}}: When he needs, he takes theappearence appearance of an elegant man with expensive-looking suit.
* {{Glamour}}: When he needs, he takes the
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* PlayingBothSides: A subtle example; while he seems like part of the BigBadDuumvirate and TheHeavy for much of the story, he's always careful to stop ''just'' before doing anything that would irrevocably commit him to one course of action. He completely refuses to [[spoiler:make a DealWithTheDevil with a primordial, regardless of rewards]], and unlike Red Robe, he works to keep his grudge with Zorian from becoming too personal, even warning Zorian when Red Robe tries to target his family. This is a big part of the reason why he ends up as a KarmaHoudini.
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* PlayingBothSides: A subtle example; while he seems like part of the BigBadDuumvirate and TheHeavy for much of the story, he's always he avoids binding himself completely to any side and is careful to stop ''just'' before doing anything that would irrevocably commit him to one course of action.play potential future enemies off against each other. He completely refuses to [[spoiler:make a DealWithTheDevil with a primordial, regardless of rewards]], and unlike Red Robe, he works to keep his grudge with Zorian from becoming too personal, even warning Zorian when Red Robe tries to target his family. This is a big part of the reason why he ends up as a KarmaHoudini.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: He may be leading an invasion intended to kill tens or hundreds of thousands of people, but he has a clear foreign policy am in doing so; he doesn't approve of Red Robe's plans for mass slaughter and chaos.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: EvenEvilHasStandards:
** He may be leading an invasion intended to kill tens or hundreds of thousands of people, but he has a clear foreign policy am in doing so; he doesn't approve of Red Robe's plans for mass slaughter andchaos.chaos.
** He also warns Zorian when Red Robe is targeting his family, though he does have ulterior motives.
** He may be leading an invasion intended to kill tens or hundreds of thousands of people, but he has a clear foreign policy am in doing so; he doesn't approve of Red Robe's plans for mass slaughter and
** He also warns Zorian when Red Robe is targeting his family, though he does have ulterior motives.
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* PlayingBothSides: A subtle example; while he seems like part of the BigBadDuumvirate and TheHeavy for much of the story, he's always careful to stop ''just'' before doing anything that would irrevocably commit him to one course of action. He completely refuses to [[spoiler:make a DealWithTheDevil with a primordial, regardless of rewards]], and unlike Red Robe, he works to keep his grudge with Zorian from becoming too personal, even warning Zorian when Red Robe tries to target his family. This is a big part of the reason why he ends up as a KarmaHoudini.
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* CynicalMentor: Xvim's impossibly-high standards are an act... but not by much. He's also generally willing to at least suggest amoral solutions to Zorian's problems.
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* LaserGuidedKarma: [[spoiler:Invoked by Zorian in their last fight, who makes her fight the spider she sent him to kill so many times in the time loop. She ''also'' gets a taste of her own ChronicBackstabbingDisorder when she gets stabbed in the back by her alternate self, who knows herself well enough to realize there's no other option.]]
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* NiceGuy: Zach is a basically decent person in every respect.
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* [[spoiler: DangerousDeserter: Since the chances of escaping the time loop were too low, she choosed to accept the [[DealWithTheDevil deal with the Primordial]], and asked him to make her young again, and immortal.]]
* [[spoiler: EvilCounterpart: Her original and her fight because they couldn't trust each others.]]
* [[spoiler: EvilCounterpart: Her original and her fight because they couldn't trust each others.]]
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* [[spoiler: DangerousDeserter: [[spoiler: Since the chances of escaping the time loop were too low, she choosed to accept the [[DealWithTheDevil deal with the Primordial]], and asked him to make her young again, and immortal.]]
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* TheParanoiac: She doesn't trust anyone, except her raven maybe.
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* TheParanoiac: TokenEvilTeammate: [[spoiler:Even before she betrays everyone]], she's very clearly the most evil member of the heroes' team.
* TheUnfettered: Shedoesn't trust anyone, except her raven maybe.will do anything to live forever. ''Anything''.
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* TheUnfettered: Part of what makes him so dangerous is his willingness to do anything to achieve his goals; this also allowed him to master soul magic in the time loop, when both Zorian and Zach refused to do the evil things that would be necessary for it.
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* EvilVirtues: He checks a lot of them, if not all, except love maybe.
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* EvilVirtues: He checks a lot of them, if not all, except love maybe.
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** He's honorable almost to a fault and will keep any deals he makes unless he's betrayed or cheated first; near the end, he also warns Zorian that his family is in danger from Red Robe, though he admits he has [[PlayingBothSides ulterior motives]] for this.
** He displays considerable VillainousValor; while some of this is just the result of how hard he is to kill, when he realizes he's a duplicate inside the time loop he doesn't hesitate to detonate his soul in order to benefit his main self outside the loop
** He seems to genuinely believe in his long-term goals and ideology, as shown by his willingness to sacrifice his life for an alt-self; this is contrasted notably with Silverlake, who alternate selves inevitably betray each other when given the chance.
* {{Glamour}}: When he needs, he takes theapparence appearence of an elegant man with expensive-looking suit.suit.
* TheHeavy: He serves as the most visible and obvious lynchpin of the villains for most of the story, and is fought the most frequently due to his tendency to immediately attack anyone who interferes too much with the invasion at the end of the loop combined with the need to gain his crown in order to escape it.
** He's honorable almost to a fault and will keep any deals he makes unless he's betrayed or cheated first; near the end, he also warns Zorian that his family is in danger from Red Robe, though he admits he has [[PlayingBothSides ulterior motives]] for this.
** He displays considerable VillainousValor; while some of this is just the result of how hard he is to kill, when he realizes he's a duplicate inside the time loop he doesn't hesitate to detonate his soul in order to benefit his main self outside the loop
** He seems to genuinely believe in his long-term goals and ideology, as shown by his willingness to sacrifice his life for an alt-self; this is contrasted notably with Silverlake, who alternate selves inevitably betray each other when given the chance.
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* TheHeavy: He serves as the most visible and obvious lynchpin of the villains for most of the story, and is fought the most frequently due to his tendency to immediately attack anyone who interferes too much with the invasion at the end of the loop combined with the need to gain his crown in order to escape it.
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* KarmaHoudini: While the invasion is thwarted and he loses his incredibly valuable crown, Quatach-Ichl gets off far lighter than the other two main villains and even gets part of what he wanted out of the attack (a war between Ulquaan Ibasa and Eldemar.)
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* HiddenDepths: In one iteration where they manage to bargain for some training from him, Zorian notes that he's the best teacher he has ever had.
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* NobleDemon: From a certain point of view. He always keeps his word (unless he decides he's been betrayed or cheated first), and Zorian notes that he ''does'' actually have a code of honor. The problem is that his moral system is a thousand years old and from a far, far more brutal era, which makes him seem like a murderous psychopath to most people today. At one point Zorian says tells him that he is famed for his honorable behavior, his great magical skill, and for brutality in warfare; Quatach-Ichl takes all three as a complement.
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* NobleDemon: From a certain point of view. He always keeps his word (unless he decides he's been betrayed or cheated first), and Zorian notes that he ''does'' actually have a code of honor. The problem is that his moral system is a thousand years old and from a far, far more brutal era, which makes him seem like a murderous psychopath to most people today.
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* IKnowAGuy: Alanic has many relations, among Eldemar authorities, the SaintlyChurch, mercenaries...
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* ClonesArePeopleToo: Zorian is technically a clone of the real one, and he was forced to stole the body of his original because his own was destroyed during the process of escaping the Sovereign Gate.
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