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* DumbButDiligent: Downplayed, since she's no {{Ditz}}, but Ellen archived her scholarship due to hard work and strict discipline, not because of an academic gift; she's of average Intelligence at best. She struggles to fulfill the high expectations she's facing as a [[ScholarshipStudent Scholarship Student.]]
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* DumbButDiligent: Downplayed, since she's no {{Ditz}}, [[TheDitz Ditz]], but Ellen archived her scholarship due to hard work and strict discipline, not because of an academic gift; she's of average Intelligence at best. She struggles to fulfill the high expectations she's facing as a [[ScholarshipStudent Scholarship Student.]]
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* SpoiledSweet: Has become this since her last appearance, where she was more of a RichBitch. She insists she's totally ordinary, but admits at one point that her family has plenty of money, and she always offers to help the other girls out with domestic or study-related chores.
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Her stepsister Annabel tells Bonnie that she enjoys causing trouble and framing Olive for it, and that no one ever suspects her.
* BerserkButton: Annabel in general, mainly because she keeps pushing it. It comes to the point that even girls who look like Annabel have the same effect.
* BerserkButton: Annabel in general, mainly because she keeps pushing it. It comes to the point that even girls who look like Annabel have the same effect.
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* AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Her younger stepsister Annabel tells Bonnie that she enjoys causing trouble and framing Olive for it, and that no one ever suspects her.
* BerserkButton: Annabel in general, mainly because she keeps pushing it. It comes to the point that even girls who look like Annabel have the same effect. She mentions that the first person at Malory Towers she met was Nora, and she was rude to her just because Nora reminded her of Annabel.
* BerserkButton: Annabel in general, mainly because she keeps pushing it. It comes to the point that even girls who look like Annabel have the same effect. She mentions that the first person at Malory Towers she met was Nora, and she was rude to her just because Nora reminded her of Annabel.
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* TheFashionista: Makes all her own clothes, and they are every bit as good as any designer outfit. Amy first comments that she has similar dresses that she got abroad. Bonnie also makes her a dress for her birthday and they even plan to open a dress shop together when they leave school. Bonnie also acts as wardrobe mistress for the play the form performs.
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* BirdsOfAFeather: The base of Betty's and her friendship is that they are both cheeky pranksters WHO enjoy playing practical tricks.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Starts off this way and never quite gets over it.
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* ShrinkingViolet: Starts off this way and never quite gets over it. Still, she goes as far as to successfully play the lead role in her form's pantomime of "Cinderella".
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite her bad attitude, she saves June from being expelled, when the reason she was being expelled was for writing Moira mean anonymous notes.
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* JerkWithAHeartOfGold: Despite her bad attitude, she isn't actually that bad a person - she just has no patience for anyone she dislikes and isn't afraid to say what she thinks - see NoSocialSkills below.
* NoSocialSkills: The reason she's not a complete success as head of the fifth form. She's got good organizational skills and an eye for detail, but the way she dictates things is so terrible that Alicia even resigns from the form's pantomime, only returning when Moira savesJune her cousin from being expelled, when the reason she was being expelled was for writing Moira mean anonymous notes. expelled.
* NoSocialSkills: The reason she's not a complete success as head of the fifth form. She's got good organizational skills and an eye for detail, but the way she dictates things is so terrible that Alicia even resigns from the form's pantomime, only returning when Moira saves
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* HairTriggerTemper: When she loses her temper, she ''really'' loses it. To be fair, it mainly comes to the fore when she thinks someone is being unfair or a bully, but she mentions that her father had the same problem, but has learned to control it and only loses it over things worth losing your temper for, which she intends to learn to do.
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* TheDeterminator: Won't give up on any skill or outcome. In the fifth book, it's state that despite being the hardest thing she's ever done because it requires more practice than brains and skill, she won't give up on her conjuring and juggling for the pantomime because she wants to do it perfectly.
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* LittleSisterHeroine: Becomes this in the Pamela Cox continuation, as she has taken over from Darrell.
* NiceGirl: Like her sister, a kind, reasonable girl. She also has a kind, sensible best friend.
* NiceGirl: Like her sister, a kind, reasonable girl. She also has a kind, sensible best friend.
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* AllGirlsLikePonies: Shares this with Bill. By the fifth book, they stick together and talk about nothing but horses, not paying attention to anyone or anything else.
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* MeaningfulName: Most likely intentional, but her name means "fair", and she has long fair hair.
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* IllGirl: Was seriously ill when she was younger and couldn't go to school.
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* IllGirl: In the first book, when she develops appendicitis, and must undergo surgery.
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A quiet girl with a [[IllGirl weak heart]]. Eventually opens up when she goes horseriding with Bill, and they become best friends and talk about nothing but horses.
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* IllGirl: The reason she only started at Malory Towers in the fourth form. She has a weak heart and isn't allowed to be too active, but she was only just well enough to start at boarding school.
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* NiceGirl: Despite being bossy and domineering, she never says anything mean and the things she boasts about are actually true - she really is a good, fair leader.
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* NiceGirl: Despite being bossy and domineering, she never says anything mean and the things she boasts about are actually true - she really is a good, fair leader. The girls even admit that even though they don't like her taking over, that it's hard to dislike her completely because she's actually a nice person.
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* ExactEavesdropping: On two occasions, this happens. Veronica never means to eavesdrop, but picks up some information every time she overhears. The first time, she hears enough to know that Amy is upper-class, and the second time, she overhears that Felicity was the one who told Bonnie to befriend Amy, and she did it partly because she wanted Bonnie to stop following her around.
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* Sleepwalking: Starts doing this due to practicing her orchestra solo and practising tennis for the interschool games. [[spoiler: She turns out to be the fifth-form thief, constantly taking random belongings of the girls and putting them in a cupboard downstairs]].
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* Sleepwalking: Starts doing this due to practicing her orchestra solo and practising tennis for the interschool games. [[spoiler: She turns out to be the fifth-form thief, constantly taking random belongings of the girls and putting them in a cupboard downstairs]].downstairs while sleeping]].
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* UndyingLoyalty: Much to everyone else's shock, when Bonnie is sent to Coventry for an (unproven) crime, Amy declares that she's not going to join in and she doesn't care if they send her to Coventry, too. After circumstances suggest that Bonnie is innocent, it is even pointed out that Amy was the wisest because she knew her best friend wouldn't betray the form.
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A self-absorbed girl with a dramatic personality. Very disliked by the other girls due to her vanity and emotional outbursts.
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* {{Rich Bitch}}: Gwen comes from a very wealthy family who have spoiled her (except her intelligent father) and as such is vain, shallow, idiotic, naive and cruel.
* {{Vanity is Feminine}}: As well as being extremely vain, Gwen is also very feminine. She shudders at not wearing a dress, is more concerned about her looks than her health, refuses to take part in sports as she deems it to unfeminine and expects to be waited on even at school hand foot and finger.
* {{Vanity is Feminine}}: As well as being extremely vain, Gwen is also very feminine. She shudders at not wearing a dress, is more concerned about her looks than her health, refuses to take part in sports as she deems it to unfeminine and expects to be waited on even at school hand foot and finger.
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* ArtReflectsPersonality: Belinda is rather unkind in her art, including drawing pictures of Catherine as a Saint, and of Mam'zelle Rougier as an assassin. Her favourite thing to do is collect people's frowns, telling them to "hold it" as soon as they scowl.
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* ArtReflectsPersonality: Belinda is Belinda's often very candid and, she's also rather unkind in her art, including drawing pictures of Catherine as a Saint, an angel to mock her several times, and of Mam'zelle Rougier as an assassin. Her favourite thing to do is collect people's frowns, telling them scowls - her first reaction on seeing any scowl is to tell the person to "hold it" as soon as they scowl.
so she can draw them.
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* EccentricArtist
* ArtReflectsPersonality: Belinda is rather unkind in her art, including drawing pictures of Catherine as a Saint, and of Mam'zelle Rougier as an assassin. Her favourite thing to do is collect people's frowns, telling them to "hold it" as soon as they scowl.
* ArtReflectsPersonality: Belinda is rather unkind in her art, including drawing pictures of Catherine as a Saint, and of Mam'zelle Rougier as an assassin. Her favourite thing to do is collect people's frowns, telling them to "hold it" as soon as they scowl.
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* InfantSiblingJealousy: Towards her baby sister at first. Darrell uses her own experience with her little sister to turn things around, and by the time of the second book, Sally is over her jealousy completely.
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* CareerEndingInjury: She injures her legs badly after swimming in the dangerous ocean, which will ensure that she could no longer compete in the Olympic Games.
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* It'sAllAboutMe: Her general mindset.
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* It'sAllAboutMe: ItsAllAboutMe: Her general mindset.
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* FatalFlaw: Her HairTriggerTemper, which tends to get her into trouble throughout the books. She's very aware that it's a problem, and she promises over and over not to lose it again, but it takes a while for her to be strong enough to keep that promise.
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* FalseFriend: To Mary-Lou in the first book. She befriends her, but plays tricks on her and tries to frame Darrell to get back at her for a conflict earlier on (which ironically happened because Darrell saw her bullying Mary-Lou).
* It'sAllAboutMe: Her general mindset.
* It'sAllAboutMe: Her general mindset.
* BadBadActing: Wants to be an actress, but has her dreams crushed when she acts Juliet in drama class and it's so bad that the teacher thinks she is fooling around. After being told Zerelda wanted to be an actress, she tells Zerelda she wouldn't have yelled at her in that way if she'd known she wanted to act professionally.
* GiveUpYourDreams: Miss Hibbert tells her very gently that she just doesn't have enough talent to be an actress and that she should just try being a proper schoolgirl like everyone else.
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* PassionateSportsGirl: Develops into this in the Pamela Cox books, even planning to become a games teacher after she leaves school. Has shades of this in the early books, even being pointed out by Amanda as the most promising sportswoman in the lower school and being disappointed when she's not chosen for a lacrosse match (mainly because she didn't have enough team spirit).
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* PetTheDog: The moment when she saves June from being expelled, admitting that she has been pretty awful and it's no wonder June hated her enough to write the notes. Her generous act defuses all the tension in the fifth form.
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> "It's lovely to have a sister. Mine looks up to me no end and thinks I'm wonderful."
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* CoolBigSis: To Felicity. She brings up their relationship when explaining to Sally why it's fun to have a younger sister.
> "It's lovely to have a sister. Mine looks up to me no end and thinks I'm wonderful."
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* IHaveBrothers: She's a tomboy to the extreme because she's been treated as OneOfTheBoys by her seven brothers.
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A down-to-earth Scottish girl. She was head-girl of the third form, but moved up to the form above later on.
A down-to-earth Scottish girl. She was head-girl of the third form, but moved up to the form above later on.
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A down-to-earth Scottish girl. Shewas becomes the head-girl of the third form, but is moved up to the form above later on.
A down-to-earth Scottish girl. She
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* DitzyGenius: Exceptional at maths and music, but forgetful and scatterbrained in normal life.
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* CatchPhrase: "Police?", meaning "please" when she doesn't understand something.
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* CatchPhrase: "Police?", meaning "please" when she doesn't understand (or pretends not to understand) something.
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* BerserkButton: Annabel in general, mainly because she keeps pushing it. It comes to the point that even girls who look like Annabel have the same effect.
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* SourOutsideSadInside: Her default character.
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* EvenEvilHasStandards: In the sixth book, Gwen keeps talking about a fight within her family when she made her father agree to send her to finishing school. Maureen, despite being a lot like Gwen herself, is just as disgusted as everyone else, because "she, at least, loved her parents".
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* BlindedByRage: Tends to happen when she really loses her temper. At one point she even has to resign as head girl of her form for losing it with June.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: So small that the third form assumed she was a first former the first time they saw her, when she was actually their age. Even as a sixth former, she still comes off as much younger than she really is.
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* ClassicalMusicIsCool: States at the start that she only knows how to play classical music, although she does teach her orchestra a composition she wrote herself.
* NoSocialSkills: Her orchestra gets cross because of the ruthless way she points out mistakes. By the end, she's had to replace a trumpet player, a cello player and a pianist because the original players resented her criticism. At one point, Bonnie, who was making pennants for the orchestra, threatens to stop making them because Millicent yelled at Delia and then seemed to think there was no reason for her to apologize.
* NoSocialSkills: Her orchestra gets cross because of the ruthless way she points out mistakes. By the end, she's had to replace a trumpet player, a cello player and a pianist because the original players resented her criticism. At one point, Bonnie, who was making pennants for the orchestra, threatens to stop making them because Millicent yelled at Delia and then seemed to think there was no reason for her to apologize.
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* SingerSongwriter: She not only sings for the orchestra, but puts words to Millicent's music, causing them to write them down in Millicent's notebook and then trying to find it before Millicent reads it so she can tear it out, assuming she'll be made fun of for it.
* UnlockingTheTalent: Gillian does this. However, Delia doubts it as her aunt and cousins have said her singing is like a parrot squawking in pain. When Gillian finally persuades her to sing for the orchestra, they are astonished at how lovely her singing is, even inspiring one of the violinists.
* UnlockingTheTalent: Gillian does this. However, Delia doubts it as her aunt and cousins have said her singing is like a parrot squawking in pain. When Gillian finally persuades her to sing for the orchestra, they are astonished at how lovely her singing is, even inspiring one of the violinists.
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* ElegantClassicalMusician: A brilliant violinist.
* Sleepwalking: Starts doing this due to practicing her orchestra solo and practising tennis for the interschool games. [[spoiler: She turns out to be the fifth-form thief, constantly taking random belongings of the girls and putting them in a cupboard downstairs]].
* TalkingInYourSleep: Also does this while sleepwalking. She later on theorizes that she was searching for her sense of fun, since all the fun of violin playing and tennis had disappeared when she started practising too hard.
--> "I've found it. I just hope I remember where it is tomorrow."
* Sleepwalking: Starts doing this due to practicing her orchestra solo and practising tennis for the interschool games. [[spoiler: She turns out to be the fifth-form thief, constantly taking random belongings of the girls and putting them in a cupboard downstairs]].
* TalkingInYourSleep: Also does this while sleepwalking. She later on theorizes that she was searching for her sense of fun, since all the fun of violin playing and tennis had disappeared when she started practising too hard.
--> "I've found it. I just hope I remember where it is tomorrow."
