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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:He decides to kill the abominable baby of Willard, since it would prevent the cult to sacrifice it and then prevents the end of the world. Willard stops him to do so, though.]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:He decides to kill the abominable baby of Willard, since it would prevent keep the cult from sacrificing it to sacrifice it and then prevents bring about the end of the world. Willard stops him to do from doing so, though.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Once Jonathan eventually rescues her, she initially refuses to leave the estate with him, crying she no longer deserve him because she was complicit with the cult's activities.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Once Jonathan eventually rescues her, she initially refuses to leave the estate with him, crying that she no longer deserve him because she was complicit with the cult's activities.]]
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* MalevolentMaskedMen: A cult of dangerous masked men worshipping an HumanoidAbomination and having orgies.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: They wear robes and masks, they do orgies, and their goal is merge Earth with another dimension which inhabitants are mindless drones entirely driven by sexual instincts.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: They wear robes and masks, they do orgies, and their goal is merge Earth with another dimension which inhabitants are mindless drones entirely driven by sexual instincts.
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* MalevolentMaskedMen: A cult of dangerous masked men worshipping worshiping an HumanoidAbomination and having orgies.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: They wear robes and masks, they do orgies, and their goal is to merge Earth with another dimensionwhich whose inhabitants are mindless drones entirely driven by sexual instincts.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: They wear robes and masks, they do orgies, and their goal is to merge Earth with another dimension
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* EvilOldFolks: His actual age isn't specified, but Doreen Austerlitz contributed to raise him (she died in 1960) and the game is set in 2017, so he's at least 60 (''at least'': a Side Story illustration shows a teeange version of him next to Doreen Austerlitz).
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* EvilOldFolks: His actual age isn't specified, but Doreen Austerlitz contributed to helped raise him (she died in 1960) and the game is set in 2017, so he's at least 60 (''at least'': a Side Story illustration shows a teeange teenage version of him next to Doreen Austerlitz).
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* HornedHumanoid: He sports a pair of antlers ingame.
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* HornedHumanoid: He sports a pair of antlers ingame.in-game.
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* PuzzleBoss: [[spoiler:He's eventually confonted in Lusst'ghaa dimension. The sequence consists in kiting him to make him cast spells in front of a sealed door, then flee once the door is broken. [[CutsceneBoss His actual demise happens later, without any player input]].]]
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* PuzzleBoss: [[spoiler:He's eventually confonted confronted in the Lusst'ghaa dimension. The sequence consists in of kiting him to make him cast spells in front of a sealed door, then flee fleeing once the door is broken. [[CutsceneBoss His actual demise happens later, without any player input]].]]
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* PredecessorVillain: The Cult of Ecstasy has been created after her discovery of alternate dimensions. She's also responsible for Willard become the sociopathic current leader of the cult.
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* PredecessorVillain: The Cult of Ecstasy has been created after her discovery of alternate dimensions. She's also responsible for Willard become becoming the sociopathic current leader of the cult.
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* DrivenToSuicide: He hung himself to escape the cult after learning that he was currently the only suitable victim the cult identified for the sacrifice (being the child of a Seeing).
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* DrivenToSuicide: He hung hanged himself to escape the cult after learning that he was currently was, at the time, the only suitable victim the cult identified for the sacrifice (being the child of a Seeing).
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: He founded the Cult of Ecstasy but distanced from it because he felt it became a club of "rich depraved". And that's before he killed himself to be sure to escape the cult.
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* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: He founded the Cult of Ecstasy but distanced himself from it because he felt it became a club of "rich depraved". And that's before he killed himself to be sure to escape the cult.
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* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:He looks like a very large human baby, with reptilian facial features and a tail.]]
* HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler:He has been bred especially to be sacrificed by the cult to call the Lusst'ghaa dimension. Being born from Willard and Amanda, he descends from a Seeing and thus is suitable for the sacrifice.]]
* HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler:He has been bred especially to be sacrificed by the cult to call the Lusst'ghaa dimension. Being born from Willard and Amanda, he descends from a Seeing and thus is suitable for the sacrifice.]]
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* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:He [[spoiler:It looks like a very large human baby, with reptilian facial features and a tail.]]
* HumanSacrifice:[[spoiler:He has been [[spoiler:It was bred especially to be sacrificed by the cult to call the Lusst'ghaa dimension. Being born from Willard and Amanda, he descends from a Seeing and thus is suitable for the sacrifice.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: Commited suicide shortly after the death of his wife Harriet.
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* DrivenToSuicide: Commited Committed suicide shortly after the death of his wife Harriet.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: The "God-King" of Lusst'ghaa and more or less the being actually worshipped by the Cult of Ecstasy.
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* GreaterScopeVillain: The "God-King" of Lusst'ghaa and more or less the being actually worshipped worshiped by the Cult of Ecstasy.
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The Man Behind The Man requires them to still be alive and directly behind the plot.
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* TheManBehindTheMan: The Cult of Ecstasy has been created after her discovery of alternate dimensions. She's also responsible for Willard become the sociopathic current leader of the cult.
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* PredecessorVillain: The Cult of Ecstasy has been created after her discovery of alternate dimensions. She's also responsible for Willard become the sociopathic current leader of the cult.
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* StockholmSyndrome: [[spoiler:Admits to Jonathan that she started to enjoy the things the cult did to her.]]
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* ChildByRape: [[spoiler:Although Amanda was pregnant with Ethan's baby when she was kidnapped, she was given a forced abortion and then raped and impregnated again by Willard. Just in case you were wondering how over-the-top evil this cult gets...]]
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* HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler:He has been bred especially to be sacrificated by the cult to call the Lusst'ghaa dimension. Being born from Willard and Amanda, he descends from a Seeing and thus is suitable for the sacrifice.]]
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* HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler:He has been bred especially to be sacrificated sacrificed by the cult to call the Lusst'ghaa dimension. Being born from Willard and Amanda, he descends from a Seeing and thus is suitable for the sacrifice.]]
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[[foldercontrol]]
[[folder:Jonathan Moon]]
* NonActionGuy: He's an architect, and must flee or sneak because he's unable to fight at all.
* PlayerCharacter
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:He decides to kill the abominable baby of Willard, since it would prevent the cult to sacrifice it and then prevents the end of the world. Willard stops him to do so, though.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Amanda Moon]]
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: You play as her in the first level.
* DamselInDistress: She mysteriously disappeared one year earlier, and Jonathan's goal is to rescue her.
* EveryoneIsRelated: [[spoiler:It turns out she descends from a bastard child of Harriet Yelverton, which makes her or her descendants suitable victims for the sacrifice planned by the Cult of Ecstasy.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Once Jonathan eventually rescues her, she initially refuses to leave the estate with him, crying she no longer deserve him because she was complicit with the cult's activities.]]
[[/folder]]
!The Cult of Ecstasy
[[folder:General]]
* MalevolentMaskedMen: A cult of dangerous masked men worshipping an HumanoidAbomination and having orgies.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: They wear robes and masks, they do orgies, and their goal is merge Earth with another dimension which inhabitants are mindless drones entirely driven by sexual instincts.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Willard Yelverton]]
* BigBad: He's the current leader of the cult.
* EnfantTerrible: Doreen Austerlitz raised him this way, to make him a suitable leader for the cult.
* EvilOldFolks: His actual age isn't specified, but Doreen Austerlitz contributed to raise him (she died in 1960) and the game is set in 2017, so he's at least 60 (''at least'': a Side Story illustration shows a teeange version of him next to Doreen Austerlitz).
* FullFrontalAssault: He's entirely nude in each of his encounters during the game.
* GroinAttack: He has no genitals and a vertical scar on his groin.
* HornedHumanoid: He sports a pair of antlers ingame.
* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler:He calls Jonathan out for intending to kill the baby. He conceived and raised the baby in order to have a victim for a human sacrifice ritual...]]
* {{Matricide}}: He's born from Benedict and a maid from Yelverton estate. He despised his mother and murdered her while he was a teenager.
* PuzzleBoss: [[spoiler:He's eventually confonted in Lusst'ghaa dimension. The sequence consists in kiting him to make him cast spells in front of a sealed door, then flee once the door is broken. [[CutsceneBoss His actual demise happens later, without any player input]].]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Doreen Austerlitz]]
* TheManBehindTheMan: The Cult of Ecstasy has been created after her discovery of alternate dimensions. She's also responsible for Willard become the sociopathic current leader of the cult.
* PosthumousCharacter: She died of disease in 1960, well before the events of the game happened.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Benedict Yelverton]]
* DisappearedDad: He killed himself before Willard's birth.
* DrivenToSuicide: He hung himself to escape the cult after learning that he was currently the only suitable victim the cult identified for the sacrifice (being the child of a Seeing).
* PosthumousCharacter: By the time the events of the game happen, he's long dead.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: He founded the Cult of Ecstasy but distanced from it because he felt it became a club of "rich depraved". And that's before he killed himself to be sure to escape the cult.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The baby]]
* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:He looks like a very large human baby, with reptilian facial features and a tail.]]
* HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler:He has been bred especially to be sacrificated by the cult to call the Lusst'ghaa dimension. Being born from Willard and Amanda, he descends from a Seeing and thus is suitable for the sacrifice.]]
* NoNameGiven: Its name and gender aren't revealed.
[[/folder]]
!Other human characters
[[folder:Milton Yelverton]]
* DrivenToSuicide: Commited suicide shortly after the death of his wife Harriet.
* PosthumousCharacter: Died in 1885.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Harriet Yelverton]]
* DeathByChildbirth: Died while giving birth to Benedict.
* PosthumousCharacter: Died in 1885.
[[/folder]]
!Lusst'ghaa
[[folder:Iauvr'abrarc]]
* GreaterScopeVillain: The "God-King" of Lusst'ghaa and more or less the being actually worshipped by the Cult of Ecstasy.
* TheUnfought: You never meet him.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Jonathan Moon]]
* NonActionGuy: He's an architect, and must flee or sneak because he's unable to fight at all.
* PlayerCharacter
* WouldHurtAChild: [[spoiler:He decides to kill the abominable baby of Willard, since it would prevent the cult to sacrifice it and then prevents the end of the world. Willard stops him to do so, though.]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Amanda Moon]]
* AndNowForSomeoneCompletelyDifferent: You play as her in the first level.
* DamselInDistress: She mysteriously disappeared one year earlier, and Jonathan's goal is to rescue her.
* EveryoneIsRelated: [[spoiler:It turns out she descends from a bastard child of Harriet Yelverton, which makes her or her descendants suitable victims for the sacrifice planned by the Cult of Ecstasy.]]
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: [[spoiler:Once Jonathan eventually rescues her, she initially refuses to leave the estate with him, crying she no longer deserve him because she was complicit with the cult's activities.]]
[[/folder]]
!The Cult of Ecstasy
[[folder:General]]
* MalevolentMaskedMen: A cult of dangerous masked men worshipping an HumanoidAbomination and having orgies.
* SecretCircleOfSecrets: They wear robes and masks, they do orgies, and their goal is merge Earth with another dimension which inhabitants are mindless drones entirely driven by sexual instincts.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Willard Yelverton]]
* BigBad: He's the current leader of the cult.
* EnfantTerrible: Doreen Austerlitz raised him this way, to make him a suitable leader for the cult.
* EvilOldFolks: His actual age isn't specified, but Doreen Austerlitz contributed to raise him (she died in 1960) and the game is set in 2017, so he's at least 60 (''at least'': a Side Story illustration shows a teeange version of him next to Doreen Austerlitz).
* FullFrontalAssault: He's entirely nude in each of his encounters during the game.
* GroinAttack: He has no genitals and a vertical scar on his groin.
* HornedHumanoid: He sports a pair of antlers ingame.
* {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler:He calls Jonathan out for intending to kill the baby. He conceived and raised the baby in order to have a victim for a human sacrifice ritual...]]
* {{Matricide}}: He's born from Benedict and a maid from Yelverton estate. He despised his mother and murdered her while he was a teenager.
* PuzzleBoss: [[spoiler:He's eventually confonted in Lusst'ghaa dimension. The sequence consists in kiting him to make him cast spells in front of a sealed door, then flee once the door is broken. [[CutsceneBoss His actual demise happens later, without any player input]].]]
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Doreen Austerlitz]]
* TheManBehindTheMan: The Cult of Ecstasy has been created after her discovery of alternate dimensions. She's also responsible for Willard become the sociopathic current leader of the cult.
* PosthumousCharacter: She died of disease in 1960, well before the events of the game happened.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Benedict Yelverton]]
* DisappearedDad: He killed himself before Willard's birth.
* DrivenToSuicide: He hung himself to escape the cult after learning that he was currently the only suitable victim the cult identified for the sacrifice (being the child of a Seeing).
* PosthumousCharacter: By the time the events of the game happen, he's long dead.
* ScrewThisImOuttaHere: He founded the Cult of Ecstasy but distanced from it because he felt it became a club of "rich depraved". And that's before he killed himself to be sure to escape the cult.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:The baby]]
* HumanoidAbomination: [[spoiler:He looks like a very large human baby, with reptilian facial features and a tail.]]
* HumanSacrifice: [[spoiler:He has been bred especially to be sacrificated by the cult to call the Lusst'ghaa dimension. Being born from Willard and Amanda, he descends from a Seeing and thus is suitable for the sacrifice.]]
* NoNameGiven: Its name and gender aren't revealed.
[[/folder]]
!Other human characters
[[folder:Milton Yelverton]]
* DrivenToSuicide: Commited suicide shortly after the death of his wife Harriet.
* PosthumousCharacter: Died in 1885.
[[/folder]]
[[folder:Harriet Yelverton]]
* DeathByChildbirth: Died while giving birth to Benedict.
* PosthumousCharacter: Died in 1885.
[[/folder]]
!Lusst'ghaa
[[folder:Iauvr'abrarc]]
* GreaterScopeVillain: The "God-King" of Lusst'ghaa and more or less the being actually worshipped by the Cult of Ecstasy.
* TheUnfought: You never meet him.
[[/folder]]
