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* SurprisinglyGoodEnglish: As revealed in Chapter 18, she has been speaking English fluently since elementary school.
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* {{Megane}}: Called this by the author because of his glasses.
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* HugeSchoolgirl: At 174 centimeters tall (5'9"), Tomoyo fits this description perfectly.
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* HugeSchoolgirl: At 174 centimeters tall (5'9"), (almost 5'9"), Tomoyo fits this description perfectly.
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** A description of her on the author's DeviantART account reveals she can play at least seven different instruments including not only the saxophone, but also the clarinet, flute, violin, steel guitar and keyboards as well.
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** A description of her on the author's DeviantART Website/DeviantART account reveals she can play at least seven different instruments including not only the saxophone, but also the clarinet, flute, violin, steel guitar and keyboards as well.
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Introduced in Chapter 27. Nobuaki is Mikoto's boyfriend.
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Introduced in Chapter 27. Nobuaki is Mikoto's boyfriend.boyfriend.
!!Heather Johnson
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!!Rachel Anderson
!!Heather Johnson
!!Judith Thompson
!!Rachel Anderson
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* HugeSchoolgirl: At 174 centimeters tall, tall (5'9"), Tomoyo fits this description perfectly.
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** A description of her on the author's DeviantART account reveals she can play at least seven different instruments including not only the saxophone, but also the clarinet, flute, violin, steel guitar and keyboards.keyboards as well.
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sister. She is also the other lead singer for the Red Roses and Blue Violets, in which she is also a percussionist.
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** A description of her on the author's DeviantART account reveals she can play at least seven different instruments including the clarinet, violin, steel guitar and keyboards.
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Introduced at the start of Chapter 26, Mikoto is portrayed as the most normal of all the supporting characters. She is one of Yutaka and Minami's classmates at the Tokyo Institute of Technology.
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Introduced at the start of Chapter 26, Mikoto is portrayed as the most normal of all the supporting characters. She was born on March 17, 1993 and is one of Yutaka and Minami's classmates at the Tokyo Institute of Technology.
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* [[SheCleansUpNicely He Cleans Up Nicely]]: In Chapter 24, he wears a tuxedo and apparently looks quite good.
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* {{Megane}}HugeGuyTinyGirl: Subverted somewhat: He is not really ''that'' tall, but he does tower over his girlfriend by nearly a foot, as he stands 162 centimeters, or 5'4", and she is only 136 centimeters, a little under 4'6".
* {{Megane}}: Called this by the author because of his glasses.
* {{Megane}}: Called this by the author because of his glasses.
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boyfriend, and he along with Fumihiko were the first recurring male characters added to the story.
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times. ''Especially'' if you've already been harassing her friends.
* [[RidiculouslyAverageGuy Ridiculously Average Girl]]: Mikoto is portrayed as the most average of all the supporting characters.
* TearsOfRemorse: In Chapter 28, after revealing that she accidentally let it slip that Yutaka and Minami were engaged.
* [[RidiculouslyAverageGuy Ridiculously Average Girl]]: Mikoto is portrayed as the most average of all the supporting characters.
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*HugeSchoolgirl: At 174 centimeters tall, Tomoyo fits this description perfectly.
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*AnnoyingYoungerSibling: Hiroko can sometimes be this to her big sister Tomoyo, if Chapter 22 is any indication.
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!!Nobuaki Kawanami (川浪
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!Original Characters
!!Tomoyo Yoshida (吉田 知世)
!!Hiroko Yoshida (吉田 浩子)
!!Mikoto Furukawa (古川 美琴)
!!Tatsuya Nakagawa (中川 達也)
!!Noriyuki Fukushima (福島 典之)
!!Katsuhiko Takahashi (高橋 克彦)
!!Fumihiko Takemoto (竹本 文彦)
!!Kazuya Yamada (山田 和也)
!!Atsushi Ishidate (石立 篤志)
!!Nobuaki Kawanami (川浪 信明)
!Original Characters
!!Tomoyo Yoshida (吉田 知世)
!!Hiroko Yoshida (吉田 浩子)
!!Mikoto Furukawa (古川 美琴)
!!Tatsuya Nakagawa (中川 達也)
!!Noriyuki Fukushima (福島 典之)
!!Katsuhiko Takahashi (高橋 克彦)
!!Fumihiko Takemoto (竹本 文彦)
!!Kazuya Yamada (山田 和也)
!!Atsushi Ishidate (石立 篤志)
!!Nobuaki Kawanami (川浪 信明)
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